2023中考英语试题研究《英语人物介绍类书面表达》课件（41张PPT，内嵌音频）

(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作------人物介绍
分析命题 ，明确标准
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命题分析——全国真题
年份 真题
2022年眉山，2021年上海等 介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好和能力等
2022年江西，2021年湘潭，2021年连云港等 介绍人物的优秀品质
2022年黄冈，2022年湘潭，2022年无锡等 介绍你想感激的人以及基于什么事情你想感激他/ 她
命题分析——河南真题
年份 真题
2019年 “我”想与某位名人共进午餐
2014年 对“我”来说有特殊意义的亲人/ 朋友/ 老师/ 同学等
2013年 “我”的特殊之处及受他人喜爱的原因
“人物介绍”类书面表达是近年来考查频率比较高的写作话题，命题角度通常从人物的基本信息、外貌、性格、兴趣爱好到行为品质及人格魅力。
1、文章结构完整，段落层次清楚，语言简练；
2、要点齐全，短文要覆盖题目所提的所有内容；
3、无语法错误、单词拼写或标点符号运用错误；
4、短语和句型运用灵活，表达方式多样化。简单句和复合句运用得当。
5、卷面书写规范、清晰。
满分书面表达的条件和要求
河南省英语中招考试书面表达评分标准
解析例文，初探写作
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My father knows me best
I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father is always ready to give me a big surprise. He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t . Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father will read my mind immediately and show me ways to do things as well as tell me to face it.
My father has helped me get through those hard times and I’m sure he will lead me to a more colorful future.
Read the article and answer the following questions:
1.Who knows the writer best in his or her heart
2.Why does the writer think his or her father know him or her best
3.What influence does the writer get
4. In which tense does the writer use Why
Pre-writing: Read and answer
The writer’s father.
1) give the writer surprises on special days
2) know about the writer
3) encourage and guide the writer when meeting difficulties
1) be positive to the future
2) be stronger towards the hard times
The writer use the simple present tense to introduce the facts about his or her father.
My father knows me best
I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father is always ready to give me a big surprise. He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t . Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father will read my mind immediately and show me ways to do things as well as tell me to face it.
My father has helped me get through those hard times and I’m sure he will lead me to a more colorful future.
Do you think this is a model writing
What can you learn from this writing
Can you find some good writing skills or some beautiful sentences
Pre-writing: Read and analyze
My father knows me best
I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father is always ready to give me a big surprise. He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t . Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father will read my mind immediately and show me ways to do things as well as tell me to face it.
My father has helped me get through those hard times and I’m sure he will lead me to a more colorful future.
开篇点题+结构合理
My father is the person who knows me best
要点清晰+擅用从句+精挑短语
(the reasons why my father knows me best)
结尾升华（feeling & influence）
Pre-writing: Read and analyze
My father knows me best
I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father is always ready to give me a big surprise. He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t . Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father will read my mind immediately and show me ways to do things as well as tell me to face it.
My father has helped me get through those hard times and I’m sure he will lead me to a more colorful future.
Can you infer
the requirements
of the writing according to the writing
Pre-writing: Think and infer
Let’s check
成长过程中有个懂你的人非常重要。请以 “__________ knows me best” 为题，并根据以下要点和要求写一篇短文。
1. 要点: 1）最懂你的人是谁；
2）为什么说他（她）最懂你；
3）他（她）在你成长过程中所起的作用。
2.要求: 1）请补全标题，如My father, My mother, My teacher或My friend Tom等；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右。
Who
feeling & influence
Why
2018年河南中考B卷真题
Pre-writing: Think and infer
Have you got it
真题示范，深入学习
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Pre-writing: learn and think
一审
二构
三列
四连
五美
主题 要点 人称 时态 文体 。
根据文章主题，构思文章结构，一般为“三个段落”。
列举要点、每个段落所需要的短语和句型。
连词成句，添加过渡的单词或短语。连接成含有逻辑关系的句子和有逻辑顺序的段落。
美化句子，替换重复的单词、短语和句型。注意表达方式的多样化。
书面表达“五步法”
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求: 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
2019年河南中考真题
书面表达“五步法”
审题
时态
人称
文体
要点
主题
1
Have lunch with a famous person
1）名人是谁；
2）为什么和他或她共进午餐；
3）你想和他或她谈什么。
一般现在时
第一人称
说明文
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求: 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
构
思
文
章
结
构
Para2 The reasons why I’d like to have lunch with... & What to talk
Para1 Who I’d like to have lunch with；(开门见山，直入主题）。
Para3 The feelings &influence
书面表达“五步法”
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I’d like to have
lunch with____
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:1)这个名人是谁;
2)你为什么想和他或她共进午餐;
3)你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求: 1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
列
出要点
Para2 The reasons why I’d like to have lunch with... & What to talk
1.a great man—— make Huawei a high-tech giant
2.want to know about his life story
3.hope to get some advice
Para1 Who I’d like to have lunch with；(开门见山，直入主题）
I’d like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei——the founder of Huawei
Para3 The feelings &influence
encourage me to be more active and I will work much harder
书面表达“五步法”
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连词成句，连句成篇，添加过渡的单词或短语。
I'd like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man. Under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. I will ask him what is important to make it happen. I'll also ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I'm expecting this lunch already! I’m sure, I will be more active and work much harder in my study.
书面表达“五步法”
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Who
Why
What
feeling&influence
I'd like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a
high-tech giant(添加地点状语) . Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I'm expecting this lunch already! I’m sure, after having lunch with him, I will be more active and work much hard in my study.
书面表达“五步法”
美化句子，纠正错误，替换重复的单词、短语和句型。注意表达方式的多样化。
who always has everything mapped out ahead 定语从句
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all over the world/ throughout the world
If time permits条件状语从句
I'd like to have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the founder of the well-known Chinese tech company Huawei.
Mr. Ren is considered as a great man who always has everything mapped out ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has become a high-tech giant worldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen to his success story. Then I will ask him what is important to make it happen. If time permits, I'll ask for his advice for us teenagers today.
I'm expecting this lunch already! I’m sure, after having lunch with him, I will be more active and work much harder in my study.
范文
借助学案，导学促学
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While-writing: read and learn
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank"的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友……），请根据自己的经历写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数100左右，演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life,many people have helped me.
While-writing
书面表达“五步法”
审题
时态
人称
文体
要点
主题
1
___________________________
1）__________________
2）__________________
3）__________________
____________
____________
____________
____________
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank"的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友……），请根据自己的经历写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
While-writing
P1:
P2:
P3:
P1: Who is the person you want to thank （人物）
I’d like to introduce a person that I want to thank.
I’d like to tell you my own experience about the person that I want to thank.
叙述类作文都可以用下面的句式开头:
I want to tell you a story about...
I ‘d like to share you a story about... with you
I always remember the person...
第一句: One day I met a difficult problem.
第二句: He or she tried many ways to work it out.
第三句: When I was about to give up，he or she explained it to me clearly until I understood it completely.
第四句: I made great progress ，so felt thankful/ grateful.
尝试失败
帮助解决
进步感谢
遇见困难
P2: 时间, 经过, 原因
When was it
What did the person say or do
Why did it make you want to thank him or her
万能帮助别人/被别人帮助的模板。
补充素材...
以学习上遇到困难为例
I had difficulty in learning...
It was difficult for me to learn...
I worked very hard to learn...
But I didn’t learn it well.
So I was always unhappy.
他或她怎么做让我感激: 鼓励+帮助
He/ She always told him not to give up.
He/ She helped him to learn ... after school every day.
I was very happy when his ... become better and better.
以学习上遇到困难为例
One week ago, I had difficulty in learning math. I worked very hard, but I didn’t learn it well. Alex helped me to learn math after school every day . As time went by. I found it easy to learn math and my math became better and better.
P3: How did you feel at that moment
I was extremely happy to make great progress. Not only did feel more confident about myself, but also I learned a lot from this experience, such as facing the problem bravely, trying to help others and so on. So I really want to say thank you to him and I hope he will enjoy a happy and wonderful life!
①家庭背景
live in...居住在....
be born in..出生......
spent one' s childhood in... ...过童年
live a happy busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活
外貌特征
slim苗条的 thin瘦的
overweight超重的 fat胖的
ugly丑的 beard胡须
handsome帅气的 strong强壮的
round face圆脸 broad face宽脸
straight hair直发 curly hair卷发
long nose高鼻梁
big/bright eyes明亮的眼睛
good-looking好看的
ordinary-looking长相普通的
wear glasses戴眼镜
品质个性
kind和蔼的 determined坚决的
open-minded思想开明的 humorous幽默的
gentle温柔的 considerate体贴的
active/optimistic积极的 easy-going随和的
attractive有魅力的 charming有魅力的
patient耐心的 hard-working努力的
friendly友好的 warm-hearted热心的
generous慷慨的 responsible有责任心的
sensible明智的 sociable好交际的
strict严厉的 honest诚实的
Words & phrases about persons
评价
knowledgeable知识渊博的 famous著名的
well-known知名的
think highly of... .对....评价很高
be remembered as...被后人誉.为....
be regarded as..被当......
be respected by..受....尊微
devote one's life time to.倾注毕生精力
兴趣爱好
be good at... 擅....
do well in...擅长.
be fond of...喜欢.....
enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事
be crazy about.. .对....着谜
have a git for. ....天赋
be interested in... .对....感兴趣
be in the lead处于领先地位
Words & phrases about persons
Christine’s hair is the biggest thing about her.
To get to know John, all you had to do was look at his hands. They never stopped moving.
She was the tallest woman I’d ever seen.
The person I admire most is my mother. She is of average height and has a pretty face. She has chin-length dark brown hair. Her eyes are like the color of honey in the sunlight. She often wears pretty floral dresses in the summer. Her smile shines like the sun, and her laughter fills the room.
“My mother has been up since 5:30 a.m., but there isn’t a hair out of place. That’s a typical morning. It’s my favorite part of the day. I love watching her put on her lipstick, wishing I could do the same, before she hurries out the door to leave for work. She throws me a bright smile and waves as I watch out the window.”
Wonderful descriptions of persons
实战演练，应用巩固
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While-writing& post-writing practice and apply
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life,many people have helped me.___________________________________
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While-writing
限时15分钟
Post-writing
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life,_________________________
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Check in pairs
检
查
内
容
要点是否齐全
主谓是否一致
时态是否正确
单词拼写错误
标点符号错误
固定搭配错误
有没亮点句子
Checklist(同伴互评表)
Yes！！ Not yet
Overall (整体) I explain the topic clearly
Organization (组织) I group my information into beginning, middle and ending parts.
Transitions (连接词) I use words to show sequence (顺序)such as at first, after that…
Spelling (拼写) Whether there are spelling mistakes in my writing
Words I use different words and detailed expressions
Advice
范文：
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life,many people have helped me.I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble,she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it.
I'm very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me,and I've decided to be a teacher like her in the future.
课外延伸，迁移内化
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“We don’t meet people by accident. They are meant to cross our path for a reason.”
“It’s a beautiful thing to meet someone who makes you change for the better.”
Assignments
1. Polish and rewrite your own passage.
2.Write a person you want to introduce to us
(you could choose one of the following or have your own)
● the greatest person in your heart
● a special friend
● a person who gives you warmth
● a guide in your life
● ……