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2023年中考英语写作半开放式命题
---应用文
Learning Objectives
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By the end of the class, students will be able to
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grasp the key information about practical writing materials.
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know how to list key elements of the outline and useful expressions.
write excellent compositions with CLEAR standards.
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2023年英语写作命题规律与趋势
2022版新课标对写作的要求
半开放命题---应用文提分策略CLEAR原则
2023英语应用文写作专题
主要内容
一 (2022版)新课标对五级英语写作的要求
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能根据写作要求,收集、准备素材。
能独立起草短文、短信等,并在教师的指导下进行修改。
能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
能简单描述人物或事件。
能根据图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。
二 2023年英语写作命题规律与趋势
1.命题形式
2.命题内容
3.分值比例
以应用文、图表作文和提示性作文为主
更加注重教育性和时代性
写作分值会更科学、更合理
考卷 体裁特点 题型材料
命题形式
北京卷 说明文 (1)介绍中国礼仪。如初次见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等。(2)结合自身经历谈一谈如何提升学习效率 半开放
中文提示
天津卷 应用文 书信 假如你是李华,请给你的美国笔友David写一封信。记录你同学王红在回家路上的一件好事,并谈谈感受。 半开放
要点提示
重庆B卷 应用文 发言稿 你校将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿,解决问题的小故事,并分享你的感想。 半开放
要点提示
河南卷 应用文 投稿 阅读是英语学习的重要途径。请结合图示,以How reading imorove my English 为题写一篇文章。向校刊投稿 半开放
图表提示
安徽卷 应用文 推荐信 假定你是李辉,你的英国朋友Mike想读中国名著,请你写一封邮件。推荐中国经典名著《西游记》给英国朋友Mike 半开放
要点提示
2022年全国中考英语(半开放)作文---应用文汇总
考卷 体裁特点 题型材料
命题形式
陕西卷 应用文 演讲稿 学校是个大家庭,这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校将举办以“School Is a Big Family”的演讲比赛。请根据结构图的三个方面,写一篇演讲稿。 半开放
表格提示
湖北随州卷 应用文 (投稿) “双减”后,为了引导学生们合理利用周末时间,最近你校开展了以“如何让周末生活更有意义”的征文活动,请从体育运动、家务劳动和社会活动三个方面写一篇文章投稿,提出你的建议及看法。 半开放
要点提示
湖南岳阳卷 应用文 (投稿) 某英语网站以“How to improve myself”的征稿活动,倡导同学提升自我、努力成为“终生运动者、责任担当者、问题解决者、优雅生活者”请根据图示内容积极投稿。 半开放
图表提示
山东枣庄卷 应用文 (书信) 假如你是李华,你的笔友Mark 要来你家做客,向你询问如何在中国举止得当。请根据提示,给Mike写一封回信。 半开放
要点提示
湖北武汉 应用文 邮件 假如你是李欣,你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行,请给Bob 叔叔写一封英文电子邮件,告知你的旅行安排. 半开放
要点提示
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Semi-open
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key points tips
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Practical writing
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What are the similarities of the propositional forms(命题形式)
Mary and her students are talking about practical writing.
How to write an excellent composition
Free talk
What is the standard of an excellent composition
中考英语作文评分标准
档次 要求
第5档(Best) 包含所有要点,应用了非常丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。
第4档(Better) 基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误。
第3档(Good) 内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。
第2档(Bad) 只包含了少数要点,语言不规范,句子无条理,行文不连贯,语言错误严重,影响理解。
第1档(Worse) 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多。
Complete
全
Accurate
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Enjoyable 美
Logical
顺
Rich
富
三 半开放命题作文提分策略:CLEAR原则
How to make your article complete
1. 全 Complete
审题
符合题目要求,
要点齐全
立意
观点正确
积极正向
符合新时代中学生身份
2. 顺 Logical
语意连贯,具有逻辑性。
Linking words
How to make your article logical
First of all, To begin with, Firstly, At first,
In the second place, What’s more, In addition, Next
Finally, At last, Last but not least, ...
On one hand, ... On the other hand, ...
not only..., but also...
3. 美 Enjoyable
How to make your article enjoyable
书写美观
整齐、无涂改
4. 准 Accurate
How to make your article accurate
语言准确
语法错误:
拼写、时态、名词单复数、固定搭配、
主谓一致等。
5. 富 Rich
句式多样,词汇丰富
单词——短语——句型
How to make your article rich
句子类型 引导词
定语从句 关系代词: who, which, that
关系副词: when, where, why
非限定性定语从句: which
状语从句 时间: when, while, as
原因: because, since
条件: if, unless
目的: so that, in order that
结果: so...that...
让步: although, even if/even though
其他句型 Only...can we...It’s adj. for sb. to do sth./There be...
四 中考半开放作文专题
What do you think of your school
Pre-writing
真题再现(2022陕西中考)
学校是个大家庭,这里充满了欢声笑语、爱与温暖。你们学校即将举办以“School Is a Big Family”为题的演讲比赛。请根据下列要求,从结构图的三个方面写一篇演讲稿。
要求:
1. 可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整;
3. 文中不能出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名);4.词数:不少于70词;
参考词汇:be patient with, care about, encourage,share, help,undrestand,love, have fun...
School is a big family
teachers to me (老师对我)
classmates to me(同学对我)
me to others(我对他人)
CLEAR 原则的应用
审题清析
要点齐全
表达准确
①定文体:应用文(演讲稿)
②定话题:School is a big family
③定人称:第一&第三人称
④定时态:一般现在&过去时
①teachers to me (老师对我)
②classmates to me(同学对我)
③me to others(我对他人)
①内容充实、自然、适当增加细节
②注意语言的准确性和多样性
Step1 审题要素
Outline
Beginning
Main body
Ending
Topic
Details
Hope
Step2 文章框架
School is a big family
teachers
classmates
friends
love
care about
help each other
be patient with
Brainstorming
Step3
Step4 范文欣赏
Good afternoon, everyone! I'm glad to be here to give you a speech. My topic is“School Is a Big Family”.
Firstly, my math teacher is patient with me. She helps me to study math better. Secondly, my classmates helped me a lot. I'm not good at sports. My friend Linda helped me with running and I can run faster .
What’s more, I care about my teachers and classmates. One day, my English teacher had a cold and I told her to drink more hot water. She felt warm and sagged me
I believe if we understand and help each other, our school will be a better place .
Thank you for your time.
Beginning
格式正确,
开门见山
Body
主体信息全面、逻辑合理、表达准确、句型多样
Ending
结尾体现核心素养,表达美好愿望
How reading improves my English?
Reading plays an important role in my English learning . 1________
Firstly, my spoken English was not good but I took Miss Liu's advice to do my English reading. 2________However, my English writing has greatly improved, because I have enlarged my vocabulary as well as got familiar with the ways of changing my life through English reading. 3________ And my interest in English has been arouse.
Therefore , reading has done much to help me with my English learning. 4_________
A.Secondly, I was poor at english writing at first.
B. What’s more, my thinking ability in English has also developed.
C. I think I will do more English reading to learn English better.
D. That's true and I will approve it with my experience here.
2022年河南中考 写作(半开放命题)真题改编
用方框中的句子填空,使文章语意通顺、内容完整。
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A
B
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CLEAR原则
灵活运用。
全-顺-美-准-富
2023年 中考英语写作(半开放命题)预测
每天坚持做一件事情,成就更好的自己,请以One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day为主题,根据下列要点和要求,用英语写一篇发言稿,参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
写作要点:
1. 你每天坚持做什么; 2. 你坚持这么做的理由; 3.它给你带来怎样的影响或改变。
要求: 词数100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
One Thing I Keep Doing Every Day
Dear students,
I’m very glad to be here to make a speech here today.
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your time.
Pre- writing
CLEAR 原则的应用
审题清析
要点齐全
表达准确
①定文体:应用文(演讲稿)
②定话题:One thing I keep doing every day
③定人称:第一&第三人称
④定时态:一般现在时
① What你每天坚持做什么
② Why你坚持这么做的理由
③How它给你带来怎样的影响改变
①内容丰富、条理清晰、语言流畅、可适当增加细节
②注意语言的准确性和多样性
Step1 审清题目
Outline
Beginning
Main body
Ending
Topic
Details
Hope
Step2 文章框架
What
Why
How
Reading
increase knowledge
improve writing skills
broaden one’s horizen
self-cultivation
....
bring positive attitude
make sb. relaxed
Brainstorming
Step3
While-writing
启动计时器
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限时写作: 20 minutes
记得使用CLEAR原则噢
Post -writing
Self-checklist
Was my composition is complete Yes/No
Did I make my composition logical Yes/No
Did I make my composition enjoyable Yes/No
Did I use proper words to make the composition accurate Yes/No
Did I express my ideas in diffrent expressions Yes/No
Did I write a rich composition as possible as I can Yes/No
Peer-evaluating checklist
I knew that his/her composition is complete. Yes/No
I knew the importance of keeping doing one thing every day. Yes/No
I was able to learn somet logical words from his/her composition. Yes/No
I knew the writer how to make his composition enjoyable . Yes/No
I found it possible for us to use accurate words to express ideas. Yes/No
I was deeply influenced by his/her rich knowledge. Yes/No
范文欣赏
One thing I keep doing every day
Dear students,
I'm glad to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day. Speaking of the things I do everyday reading is my priority. The reasons are as following.
First of all, reading makes me relax everytime I feel stressed I will put myself in reading. After reading, all the pressure will be gone. In addition, reading brings me positive attitude towards life.I usually suffer from a lot of difficulties at school but reading helps me face the problems in life positively as well as bravely. Last but not least, reading can not only bring me knowledge but also make my life colorful. I hope reading can make my life better in the future.
That's all. Thank you.
Beginning:开门见山,回答What
Body:详细陈述,回答why& how
Ending:
礼貌收尾,
逻辑严谨
灵活运用CLEAR原则
陕西省中考英语作文评分标准
档次 要求
第5档(13-15分) 包含所有要点,应用了非常丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的语言运用能力。
第4档(10-12分) 基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误。
第3档(7-9分) 内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。
第2档(4-6分) 只包含了少数要点,语言不规范,句子无条理,行文不连贯,语言错误严重,影响理解。
第1档(0-3分) 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多。
Summary
半开放命题---应用文提分策略CLEAR原则
2022版新课标对五级写作的要求
2023英语应用文写作专题
2023年英语写作命题规律与趋势
Optional Homework
Polish your composition
Predict the composition of 2023
Write an excellent
speech with CLEAR
Level A: easy
Level B: medium
Level C:difficult