人教版英语八年级上册 Unit 9- Unit 10 写作步骤讲解+范文+常用表达

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Unit 9 Can you come to my party？
一、审题：人称：邀请---第二人称；回复—-第一人称
话题：活动邀请函/回复同伴的邀请
文体：应用文（书信）
时态：一般将来时
要点：聚会的类型；聚会的时间、地点；客人是否需要携带礼物；是否应回复邀请函；应什么时候以及如何回复（注意：若拒绝邀请，回复时需先表歉意，再说明原因）
二、写作框架：
开头：邀请对方参加某活动
邀请你参加...(invite sb.to do sth.)
正文：介绍具体活动安排
时间、地点(in/on/at+时间，in/at+地点)
亲自体验做某事 (experience how to do sth.)
享受免费的甜点等(enjoy/taste... for free)
关于...的讨论 (have a discussion on....)
活动收获：快乐，学习生活技能 (happiness, basic life skills)
结尾：再次发出邀请
如果你决定来，请在...前回复 (decide to do sth.， reply to ...)
三、段落详解
P1：邀请对方参加告别会
听闻你将在六月回英国，我们想要为你举办一场告别会，特邀你参加。
P2：介绍具体活动安排
告别会将于下周一举行，持续四个小时。
2. 你可以提前半小时到达，也可以准备一些卡片或小礼物给你想送的人。
并且，我们将准备一些美味的食物和饮料以供享用。
4.互相写一些温暖又鼓励的话语是派对中的一项活动，帮助我们更好地表达我们的爱与关心。
5.此外，在告别会上，我们还可以欣赏同学们的表演。
P3：表达活动意图+期待回复
总之，这个告别会不仅是为了给你送别，也是为了纪念我们的友谊。
我确信你将会在聚会上玩得很开心。请于本周五前用电话回复。
【优秀范文】--邀请函之告别会
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you are going back to Britain in June, we would like to invite you to a farewell held for you（过去分词做后置定语）.
The farewell will be held on next Monday and it will last for four hours. You can arrive there half an hour earlier and bring some cards or small gifts to ones you want to give. Besides, we will prepare some delicious food and drinks to enjoy. Writing some warm and encouraging words to each other（动名词短语做主语）is one of the activities at the party，which helps us better show our love and care. What's more, we can enjoy the performance shown by our classmates during the farewell （过去分词做后置定语）.
In a word, the party is held not only to see you off but also to memorize our friendship.I'm sure that you'll have a great time at the party. Please reply in calling by this Friday.
Yours, Mike
【范文二】--礼貌拒绝邀请
Dear Xue,
Thanks so much for inviting me to the birthday party of Li Hua. I'd love to go to the party, but I'm not available because I need to pay a visit to my grandparents on Sunday.
We all know that it's of great importance to spend time in doing interesting things with our family especially the old. However, l am willing to help out with any of the preparations for the party. For example, I can prepare all kinds of candies. What's more, my mother taught me to make cakes and cookies before and I'm able to make delicious cakes and cookies now. So I can prepare a beautiful birthday cake for Li Hua.
Let me know if there is something I can do. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Jing
五、【优秀表达】
1. farewell n. 告别
a farewell party 欢送会
2.活动+will be held+介词+时间 某项活动在...举行
3. last v. 持续
4. besides = what's more = in addition = furthermore = moreover
5.encouraging words 鼓励的话语
6. in a word 总之 = all in all = in short = in brief
7. see sb.off 某人送别
8.memorize v. 记忆/记住
9.reply v. 回应/回答/答复
Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time！
一、审题：人称：第二人称
话题：针对朋友出现的问题提出建议
文体：应用文（书信/邮件）
时态：一般现在时
要点：朋友的问题是什么；具体建议；朋友若采取建议，将会达到的效果
二、写作框架：
开头：朋友遇到的问题是什么很难过听到... (be sorry to hear that ...)
将给你关于...的建议 （give sb.some advice on）
正文：给朋友实际可行的建议
学习疲惫：好好休息 （have a good rest）
开心地生活、学习 (learn and live more happily)
考试失败：勇敢面对 （face ...bravely）
向老师寻求帮助 （ask sb. for help）
从失败中学习（learn from failure）
结尾：表达期望
采纳建议，情况好转 （try to follow the suggestions, get better）
三、段落详解
P1：朋友遇到的问题是什么（数学考试没及格，带来很多苦恼）
听到你上次数学考试没及格，最近给你带来了很多苦恼，我很抱歉。
P2：给朋友实际可行的建议（勇敢面对＋从失败中学习＋向老师寻求帮助）
首先，你最好对你的父母诚实，并勇敢地面对你的缺点，因为失败是成功之母。
重要的是从失败中学有所获。
另外，我还建议你寻求你的老师的帮助。
在我看来，如果你能从老师那里得到建议并竭尽全力学习，之后你会取得很大的进步。
P3：表达期望（采纳建议，情况好转）
俗话说，与人分享问题好比把问题分成了两半。所以你已经解决了一半问题。
我希望我以上的建议能对你有所帮助，并且我相信你下次会做得很好。
四、【优秀范文】
Dear Amy,
I'm sorry to hear that you failed in the last math test, which brought you many problems recently.
Firstly, you'd better be honest with your parents and face your shortcomings bravely, because failure is the mother of success. What matters is learning something from your failure.
Besides, I also advise you to turn to your teachers for help. In my opinion, if you can get suggestions from teachers and try your best to study, you will make much progress later.
As the saying goes, sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. So you are halfway to solving the problem. I hope my advice above can help you, and I believe you will do well next time.
Yours sincerely,
【范文二】---帮助朋友和好
Dear Alice,
I am sorry about what happened between you and your friend. I'm willing to help you out and my advice is as follows .
In the first place, communicating with each other is of great importance , so tell her that you feel sorry for being absent and let her know she means a lot to you.Only in this way will you create a chance （Only+状语位于句首，后+部分倒装，即be/助动词/情态动词提前） to apologize to her and solve your problems. Secondly, you should spare no effort to help her whenever she needs help. Just as the saying goes,“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Last but not least,it is also a good choice to invite her to do some attractive activities with you.
In short , try to build the bridge between you and her by the above ways, and I believe you will make up quickly.
Yours, Li Hua
五、【优秀表达】
1.had better do sth. 最好做某事
2.be honest with sb. 对某人坦诚
3.shortcoming n. 缺点/短处
face your shortcomings bravely 勇敢面对自己的缺点
4. Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母
5. What matters is ......重要的是......
6. learn sth. from your failure 从你的失败中学习
7. besides此外 = what's more = in addition = furthermore = moreover
8.turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
9. in my opinion 在我看来= as far as I'm concerned = from my point of view
10.make progress 取得进步
11. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.与人分享问题好比把问题分成了两半。
12. halfway adv. 在中途/到一半
halfway to doing sth. 部分地做/达到......
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