人教版英语八年级上册 Unit 1- Unit 2 写作指导+范文+常用表达素材积累

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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？
一、审题：人称：第一人称
话题：假期旅行
文体：记叙文/日记
时态：一般过去时
要点：和谁去了哪里、天气状况、活动安排、饮食、喜好、旅行感受等
二、写作框架：
开头：引出话题---旅行
旅行的意义：开阔视野，带来乐趣（broaden our horizon, bring pleasure）和谁去了那里旅行 （take a trip to sp. with sb.）
正文：具体介绍旅行活动
天气状况 （sunny, cloudy, windy ...）
交通方式 (by plane/train/high-speed railway)
活动安排 (enjoy the scenery, climb the mountain, try local food, buy sth. for sb....)
结尾：进行总结，表达感受
旅行感受 （enjoyable, unforgettable, wonderful ...）
希望再次去旅游 (hope to do sth., travel to sp. again, look forward to doing sth.)
三、段落分解：
P1：引出话题（旅行的意义＋和谁去旅行）
旅行不仅能开阔我们的视野，而且能给我们带来很多乐趣。
去年暑假我和家人去了杭州旅行，在那里我们度过了一段相当快乐的时光。
P2：具体介绍旅行活动（交通方式＋活动安排）
我们乘飞机去的杭州，花了一周时间游览著名的景点，欣赏美丽的风景。
众所周知，杭州以西湖闻名，所以我们一到那里就坐长途汽车去了西湖。
当我看到蓝色的湖面和绿色的树木时，就被它那令人叹为观止的景色深深地吸引了。
此外，我们还品尝了美味的杭州菜，买了一些杭州丝绸，这都深深地吸引了我们。
P3：总结升华（旅行感受+希望再去）
上有天堂，下有苏杭。杭州之行比我预想的要精彩很多。
我期待下次再去那里。
四、【优秀范文】
Traveling can not only broaden our horizon but also bring us lots of pleasure. I took a trip to Hangzhou with my family last summer vacation and had quite a good time there.
We went there by plane and spent one week visiting some famous places and enjoying beautiful sights. It's known to all that Hangzhou is famous for the West Lake, so as soon as we got there, we took a tour to the West Lake by coach. When I saw the blue lake and green trees, I was deeply attracted by its breathtaking views. Besides, we also tried delicious Hangzhou Cuisine and bought some Hangzhou silk, both of which attracted us deeply.
Paradise above, Suzhou and Hangzhou below. The trip to Hangzhou was much more amazing than I had expected. I am looking forward to visiting there next time.
五、【优秀表达】
1.not only ...but also... 不但...而且..
2. broaden one's horizon 开阔某人的视野 broaden v. 变宽，增长（经验、知识等）horizon n. 地平线：（欲望、知识或兴趣的）范围，眼界
3. bring sb. pleasure 给某人带来乐趣
4. have quite a good time 玩得相当愉快
5.spend +时间/金钱 doing sth. spend +时间/金钱 on sth. 在某物上花费......时间/金钱
6. sight n. 视力/视野/风景 beautiful sights 美景
7. It's known to all that . =As we all know 众所周知
8. be famous for ...= be known for... = be well-known for...
拓展表达：be famous as =be known as =be well-known as 作为 而出名
9. as soon as …一 就 …
e.g. I will call you as soon as I arrive there.
10.be attracted 被吸引（be+动词过去分词，表被动，“被 ”）
be（deeply）attracted by被...（深深地）吸引 breathtaking adj.令人叹为观止的
view n. 看法/观看/风景 同义词：scenery n. 风景/景色
11.besides adv. 此外
替换表达：what's more, in addition, furthermore, moreover
12. cuisine n. 菜肴
13. both of which …此处为非限定性定语从句
14.attract v. 吸引 attract sb.deeply 深深地吸引某人
15. Paradise above, Suzhou and Hangzhou below. 上有天堂，下有苏杭。
16.look forward to（doing）sth. 期待/盼望（做）某事
17.so ...that...如此...以至于...
e.g. We were all so tired that we went to the beach to relax, where we watched an amazing dolphin show.
Unit 2 How often do you exercise？
一、审题 ：人称：第一人称
话题：介绍日常习惯
文体：说明文
时态：一般现在时
要点：好习惯：早睡早起，多锻炼；不良习惯：吃垃圾食品，熬夜；自己看法
二、写作框架：
开头：引出话题—-习惯
好习惯让我们受益终生 （Good habits will benefit us the whole life.）
分享我的好习惯 （share sth. with sb.）
正文：具体介绍习惯并发表看法
好习惯：健康饮食 （have healthy eating habits）
睡眠充足，放松身心 （get enough sleep, get ... relaxed）经常锻炼，强身健体 （take exercise often, build a strong body）
坚持阅读（keep on reading）
不良习惯：看电视（watch TV）
吃汉堡 （eat hamburgers）
结尾：总结全文
保持好习惯，终身受益 （keep on good habits, be in good health）
健康的习惯非常重要 （be of great importance）
三、段落详解
P1：引出话题（好习惯受益终生＋分享我的好习惯）
众所周知，好习惯让我们受益终生，没有健康的身体将很难有所作为。
现在我想和大家分享一下我的好习惯。
P2：具体介绍习惯并发表看法（好习惯：健康饮食，早睡早起，定期锻炼）
首先，养成健康的饮食习惯对我们来说很重要。
我每天都吃富含维生素的新鲜水果和蔬菜。
其次，俗话说，“早睡早起，使人健康、富有和聪明。”
因此，我每天都保证充足的睡眠以帮助我放松身心。
最后但同样重要的是，我定期锻炼身体，因为做运动可以帮助我头脑清晰，强身健体。
P3：总结升华（重要性＋保持好习惯，身心受益）
总之，这些健康的习惯非常重要。
如果我们坚持好习惯，我们将会身体健康，学习状态更佳。
四、【优秀范文】
As we all know, good habits will benefit us the whole life and nothing can be achieved without a healthy body. Now I'd like to share my good habits with you.
Firstly, it's important for us to have healthy eating habits. And I eat fresh fruit and vegetables which are rich in vitamins every day. Secondly, just as the saying goes, "Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise." So I get enough sleep every day to make sure that I can get my body and mind relaxed. Last but not least, I take exercise regularly because doing exercise helps me have a clear mind and build a strong body.
All in all, these healthy habits are of great importance. If we keep on our good habits, we will be in good health and study in a better state.
五、【优秀表达】
1.benefit v. 使受益 n. 优势/益处 benefit sb. 对某人有用/使某人受益
2. nothing can be achieved 某有什么能被实现achieve v. 完成/达到
be achieved 被达到/被完成
3.it is +adj. for sb.to do sth. 做某事对某人来说是......的
4.be rich in 富含......的 vitamin n. 维生素/维他命
which are rich in vitamins 为定语从句，先行词为 fruit and vegetables,which 为关系代词，在从句中做主语。
5. 谚语积累： Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.
wealthy adj. 富有的wise adj. 智慧的
6. get my body and mind relaxed 使我身心放松 get sth.done 使某事被做
7. last but not least 最后但不是不重要/最后但同样重要的是
8.regularly adv. 规律地/经常regular adj. 有规律的/经常做的
9.doing exercise helps me...中 doing exercise 为动名词短语作主语
10. have a clear mind 拥有清晰的头脑
11. build a strong body 强身健体
12.all in all 总之 替换表达: in a word, in short
13. be of great importance 极其重要 be of+ n. =be +adj.
e.g. be of importance = be important
14. keep on (doing)sth. 继续（做）某事
15. be in good health 身体健康
16.in a better state 以一种更好的状态 state n. 状态
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