2015年中考二轮专题复习 书面表达专题复习课件

课件46张PPT。大义镇一中2015年英语中考写作部分专题复习 2015年5月6日第四部分 写作第一节 根据句义，用括号中所给词的适当形式填空。
（注意时态和语态） 一、考试要求
1、考察英语名词、动词、形容词的综合运用能力。
2、考查内容：名词、动词、代词、形容词、副词、
和数词在特定语言环境中的具体运用。二、近几年中考题回顾
——命题规律及答题技巧：1.名词：
①词形变化，根据句意变化成指人或物的名词；名词加
后缀变成形容词；形容词转化成名词；动词转为名词等。
②名词单数变复数。1. I have met many kind teachers in the past
three years. I think I am a ______ girl. (luck)
2.My school life interesting and _____ . (color)
3．Yunnan is beautiful．Many _______
come for holidays every year．(visit)
4. The little boy wants to be an _______
when he grows up. (act)
5.In my hometown, lots of trees are full of green
_______ all year yound. ( leaf ) (2014年)
6. knife, bus, wishluckyvisitors actor leavescolorful第一节 词语释义2.动词：
①考察做谓语（时态、语态）
和非谓语（to do/do/doing/done）。
②非谓语主要考察常用句型、固定搭配。1. Don't be afraid of _______ mistakes
because nobody will be right all the time. ( make )
2．Another new year，another beautiful ________ ．
May my best wishes bring you a successful year．
(begin)
3. He wants ________a car, but he can’t
afford it. (have)makingbeginningto have3.代词:
①主格和宾格（“某某”） 、形容词性物主代词和名词性
物主代词 （“某某的”）、反身代词（强调“某某自己”）。
②方法：根据句意确定考点，利用语法分析确定答案。1. The washing machine is easy to use. You just
start it and then it can stop by ______ . ( it )
2．A teacher，like bright sunshine，lights up
the morning of life；like a river，takes ______
to the sea of knowledge．(we)
3. Today we are proud of our school, and
tomorrow our school will be proud of _____. (we)
itselfusus4. 形容词、副词：
（1）比较等级。
（2）形容词用法：
①主语 + 连系动词 + 形容词
②形容词 + 名词
③make/get/keep/find.. + sb./sth. + 形容词
（3）副词用法：
①副词修饰动词或动词短语，且放在后面。
②副词置于句首修饰句子。
(3)词形转化：名变形变副1. He is a kind-hearted man, so we can get along with
him _______ . ( easy )
2．A good hobby gives you an ________ rest from
your everyday work．(enjoy)，
3. Life is like a piece of white paper, on which we may
draw the _______ and finest pictures. ( new )
4. It’s raining. You should drive the car _______ .(care)
5. Take the time and listen, and you’ll hear the
__________sound of nature. (wonder)
6_______ , she hurt badly in the car accident. ( luck )
7.Linda is a top student, she is ______
hard-working. (real)easilyenjoyable newestcarefullyUnlukilyreallyreallywonderful5.数词：常考序数词表顺序，注意次数。
（注意序数词的拼写）
1. I got a beautiful MP4 from my father on my _______
birthday. (twelve)
2．Mr Potter has been in China for over ten years．
He regards China as his ________ home．(two) secondtwelfth第二节 将下列句子中的汉语部分译成英语，注意所
给词的形式。 （共5小题，每小题1分，满分5分）
一、考试要求
主要考察英语短语和词组在句子中的活用能力二、近几年中考题回顾
——命题规律及答题技巧：1.动词短语 ：动介短语和动副短语 (注意动词的变化形式)
1. Parents often tell their children to stay away from
computer games. ( 远离 )
2.China is becoming stronger and stronger. We are
proud of / take pride in our country. (为…而自豪)
3. Don’t laugh at disable people. Instead, we
should help them as much as possible.(嘲笑)2.动词词组：动宾短语
eg. make friends
make money
take notes , make mistakes,
take photos放弃，与…相处融洽，短缺，砍到，整理床铺3.名词词组: 注意名词的数
①形容词 + 名词 eg. sweet milk, healthy food
②名词 + 名词
注意：① paper bags ，②women/men doctors1. Listening to pop songs will make you relaxed,
and singing along will make you happy. ( 流行歌曲 )
2. Spring is walking to us quietly. We can see blue sky ,
white clouds, green grass and beautiful flowers here
and there. ( 蓝天 )
3.There are green trees and fresh air in the country．
We can enjoy the nature there．(新鲜空气)
4.Swimming in rivers is one of my favorite outdoor sports．
It makes me happy and healthy．(户外活动)5.West or east，home is best．Parents like to spend
time with their children at home together and share
the happiness of family life．(家庭生活)
6.Animals are our friends. I like to keep a pet dog
in my house.(宠物狗)
7.We should obey the traffic rules and learn to protect
ourselves.(交通规则)
8. In order to save the trees on the earth, we’d better
use fewer paper bags . (纸袋) 9. He will go to Paris to study for a month.
it’s a good chance for him. (好机会)
10. Langlang’s piano music always leads me to
a colorful world. (钢琴曲)
11. Young mothers usually choose plastic bowls
for their babies. But…they are unhealthy. (塑料碗)
4.介词词组：(无变化，书写时注意准确性)eg. A lot of people like eating French Fries. In fact ,
it’s bad for our health. ( 实际上 )
5.其它：1．“One World，One Dream”expresses the common
wishes of people all over the world ．(全世界)
2.—How often do you help your mother with housework?
— once a week . （一周一次）
3. So far, I have learnt five English songs.
(到目前为止)第三节、书面表达。一、考试要求
要求学生围绕所给的文字信息、大意要求，用
自己掌握的语言进行表达，所写内容要切中题意、
文理通顺、语言流畅、结构完整、层次分明、段落
清晰、体裁正确、格式规范、书写工整、拼写和语
法正确，大小写和标点无误，字数符合要求。
二、 近几年的中考书面表达的特点：

纵观近几年中考英语试卷，书面表达常采用命题作文方式，并给出提示，要求能通过记叙某一件事表达真实情感、感悟人生的哲理.3.用词基本恰当，句子结构完整，语法正确， 语言通顺，语句连贯，层次清楚，意思正确；
4. 会使用适当的过渡词，和一定比例的复合句提高作文的档次；
5.书写规范，字迹工整（字体稍大一些），格式符合要求。1.能在所学词汇、句型、语法范围内书写正确的句子，要求不得少于60词；
2.要求能通过记叙某一件事表达真实情感、感悟人生的哲理；三、答题要求1、认真审题、细读提示、把握体裁2、明确要点、组织信息、构思文路第一步：书面表达“四步法”3、斟酌词句、连句成文、动笔书写4、核对修改、查缺补漏、
规范誊写、卷面整洁四、书面表达答题思路与技巧第一段（首段）：“凤头”
（文章开头应给人以美感）第二段（正文）：“猪肚”
（文章内容要充实）第三段（尾段）：“豹尾”
（文章结尾要圆滑有力）第二步、书面表达“三段式”用一两个句子点题或概括中心题意，表明写作方向1、围绕中心叙事，对事件表述清楚、完整、详略得当；2、围绕中心陈述或表达三个左右方面的内容。用一两句话围绕中心评价或表达启发；再点中心，前后呼应第三步、书面表达常用的“写作模式”“1﹒1﹒1”模式和“1﹒3﹒1”模式 写作模式范文分析:　　提示：生活中有许多美好的瞬间：当你经过努
力取得成功的时候；当你帮助别人或得到别人帮
助的时候；当你看到别人做好事的时候……请以
The Best Moment in My Memory 为题，写一件
发生在你我身边的事，留下你记忆中最美的瞬间。第一篇：“1﹒1﹒1”模式（2） 主要时态一般过去时态词句子1.审题（1）体裁记叙文2.列要点3.连句成文4.修改誊写段用“四步法、三段式”完成写作（3）写作模式“1﹒1﹒1”模式 (4)害羞: 害怕当众说话；但在老师的
鼓励与帮助下，战胜了自己，在比赛中
获得了第一名。得奖那一刻是最好的。
In our memory, there must be many good Moments. Every time we think of them, we always feel happy and warm, we always think
our life is full of sunlight . I‘ve ever experienced the good moment. 主题句,表明写作方向The Best Moment in My Memory首段 I used to be a shy girl. I was even afraid of speaking in front of others. Once my English teacher asked me to take part in a speech contest. At first , I wanted to give up the chance, but my mother encouraged me . She said :”Dear, you are always the best. Believe in yourself” With my mother’s encouragement, I decided to have a try. Before the contest, I practiced again and again , To my surprise , I won the first prize . All my teachers and friends came up to me and said “ Congratulations ”. At that moment, I smiled with tears in my eyes! I think It was the best moment in my memory.正文
围绕中心叙事：内容切题、层次清楚、事件表述 清楚、完整、详略得当。
尾段结尾点题,首尾呼应 Maybe sometimes we have sad moment
in our memory, but we should believe strongly:
Life is beautiful! The good moment will be around
us forever.叙事性作文相关话题关于爱、帮助、感激、自强的话题：
1.Moved person / Something in my heart
2.Love around me/
Love for …/ Love from…
Love for the people in trouble /
When someone in trouble,
what should I do ?
3.The person I want to thank most4. Learn to smile
5. To be strong
6. Happiness
7. Confidence and success
8.Helping others makes me happy
Everyone needs help
9.Understang
10.Belief yourselves, and you’ll win.
第二篇：“1﹒3﹒1”模式关于“节约用水，从我做起”的作文，可以用
“1﹒3﹒1”模式来构思。1.审题（1）体裁记叙文（2） 主要一般现在时态（3）写作模式“1﹒3﹒1”模式2.列要点3.连句成文4.修改誊写词句子段（4）中心：水是重要的，要克服各种浪费现象
实现节约Act Now to Save Water首段 Water is very important to us. Without
water, people can’t live. It’s our duty to save
water.主题句,表明写作方向正文 First, we should always turn off the tap when
we are not using it. Second, we should always
turn off the shower when we are washing our hair,
and don’t take long showers. Third, don’t throw
away plastic bottles when there is still water
inside. At last , we can wash our clothes twice a week instead of every day. And we’d better clean the toilets with used water.围绕中心表达四个左右方面的内容。尾段 In a word, Water is very important to us.
If we continue wasting water, the last drop of
water will be our tears. So save water and
take actions from now.最后用一、两个句子来概括中心或寄语良好的愿望第三篇：“1﹒3﹒1”模式“1﹒3﹒1”模式不仅可以用来说明事也可以
用来从几方面描述同一个人。A Interesting/Interested_________
提示：有趣的人让人轻松快乐，有趣的事让
人开怀大笑，意味深长…...在你的生活中一
定不乏有趣的人和事。请用英语写一篇短文，
讲述你身边有趣的人或有趣的事。请补全所
给题目，如，An Interesting (Interested)
Teacher/Day/Book......词数不少于60.An Interested Teacher
In our life, we have ever met many
interested people and interesting things.
They can make us happy and relaxed. I’ve
met an person that makes me interested.
I have an interested teacher called Mary. She has a round face with two bright eyes. There is often a big smile on her face. She not only keeps doing sports every day but also plays it very well. She is also good
at singing, dancing and drawing. Her class
is interesting and lively. In class, she acts as
an actress, an artist, an instructor and so on.
After class, she talks with us like friends. We
all love her. Mary is my first English teacher.
Before I touched English. I was worried about
it. Mary helps me a lot. She often says.
“When there is a will, there’s a way.”
That’s Mary--- an interested, excellent
teacher. I love her forever.1.Do something for our environment
2. Saving water is our duty
3.Changs in my school/hometown
4.Our beautiful life in the future
5.介绍My teacher/mother/friend...
My school...
Something I’d like to say my teacher.
6.A Pleasant Weekend
(从几方面来写）相关话题五、书面表达句子写作要求（一）掌握五种简单句的基本句型①主语 ＋ 谓语：Li Ming works very hard.②主语＋系动词＋表语
(1)be/become+形/名/代/介词短语作表语
(2)feel/look/smell/taste/sound/get/
turn/ keep/seem +形容词作表语
eg.He looked worried just now.③主语＋ 谓语 ＋ 宾语
宾语通常由名词、代词、动词不定式、动名词或从句等来充当。
1) He always helps me when I have difficulties.
2) I want to buy a gift for my mother.
3)I like Playing basketball.
4) I don’t know what I should do next. ④主语＋谓语＋ 间接宾语(sb.)＋直接宾语(sth.)
能带双宾语的常见动词有：buy, pass, lend, give, tell, teach, show, bring, send等。eg.1) Her father bought her a pen as a birthday present.
=Her father bought a pen for her as a birthday present.
2)She always told me some interesting stories.
= She always told some interesting stories to me.⑤主语＋谓语＋宾语＋补语
宾语补足语的主要作用是用来补充、说明宾语的特点、身份等；也可用来表示让宾语去完成的动作等。作宾补的词常常是名词、形容词、副词、介词短语、分词、动词不定式等。如：1）You should keep our classroom clean and tidy.
2) We call him Tom.
3) His father told him not to play in the street.
4)I saw a little boy crying at a street corner.
I heard her sing in the next room all the time last night.
5)We should be allowed to get our ears pierced.（二）给作文加分的句子1、“有”：There +be+ sb/sth. + 某地
Sb. + have/has + sth.
There are many interesting things in my life.
I have many friends.
2.感叹句(可用来表达心情、情感）
What +（a/an)+形+名词+陈述语序！
How +形/副+陈述语序！
eg. I am very happy. 改为： How happy I am!
I had a good time. 改为：
What a good time I had!3.It’s + adj. + (for/of sb.) + to do sth.
It’s important for us to help others.
4.注意doing sth.做主语的用法：eg
Walking is good for your health.
I think studying hard is important.
5.not only ...but also..
I am good at English and I am good at math too.
I am good at not only English but also mats.
6. so/such...that... , too...to..., ...enough...to do
The story is very interesting. Everyone likes it.
The story is so interesting that everyone likes it.
7.连词的使用:and,(al)though, but, because, so
8.简单从句的使用：when, if,宾从，定从
9.表达观点和愿望：
I think/believe strongly...
I hope...
If we...we will...
10.表示感谢：
Dear...,thank you very much.
Dear...,thank you for...
11.描述一件事开头：last year, once, one day,
three years ago, It was a fine day yesterday
12.承上启下过渡词：First, then, after that...
13.结论：in a word，in short, as a result14.注意时态：
1、描写人或事物常用一般现在时
（动词原形、三单）
2、记叙发生的事情常用一般过去时
（动词使用过去式）
3、表达想法和愿望常用一般将来时
（will+动原）（三）复习建议
1.多背范文，培养语感，只作为借鉴，但不提倡
照搬范文，千篇一律。鼓励自己构思，写出新
颖的内容。
2.多积累好词好句、名言警句、谚语等，恰当使
用，以增添文章的色彩。
3.叙事性文章应有表达情感的句子的存在，从而
使文章有血有肉，而不单一是记流水账。
5.作文的训练内容范围应该丰富，不要孤注一掷。
6.熟练掌握简单句的五种基本类型，多用简单句来
描述事物，适当使用复合句。
Thank you!