英语中考二轮专题复习课件 书面表达指导

课件51张PPT。English writing初中英语新课程标准 五级写作目标：
能根据写作要求，收集，准备素材
能独立起草短文，短信等，并在教师指导下进行修改
能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系
能简单描述人物或事件
能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明 7-9年级分别完成三、四、五级目标
中考英语作文8个常考话题一、介绍人和事件
（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）
二、介绍地点（旅游等）
三、校园生活（春游、校规、科目、学习困难等）
四、课外生活（家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等）
五、假期安排（计划、过去经历等）
六、节假日活动（志愿者活动、过去经历）
七、环境、健康（环保、疾病、食品健康等）
八、个人观点建议（提建议、劝告等）
Dear Dr. Know，
I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you
some problems we meet in English study.
First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think
studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.
What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do.
Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most
difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and
sentences.
Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please
give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
Mary
(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）basic structure(基本结构安排) basic steps(基本写作步骤) search（审）
list（列）
add(加: 开头和结尾)
connect(连)
beautify(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 A lot of people travel.
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.列(list)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）
A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连(connect)Writing skills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇
甚至善用高级词汇Which is better? 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach.
B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better? 我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.
B I’m looking forward to your help.Which is better? 他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.
B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better? 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.
B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesting.
B I find it really fun to learn English . 我认为学英语很有趣。 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.
B It’s our duty to protect the environment.方法二:活用多种句型Writing skills（“写”的技巧） 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C She is so young that she can’t carry the …
D She is not old enough to carry the… 方法三:妙用关联词Writing skills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more
not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short关联词(connection words)Let’s try_____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______.
We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled.
ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连(connect)美(beautify) We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to
get away from the busy world during the holidays.
Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV
or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.
However, a few people have to work.

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes
Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People
who relax well work well.美(beautify) And to
visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（谚语）/saying加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise…
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoy some proverbs
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Think twice before you do.
4.Do as the Romans do.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,
there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs
7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
9.All roads lead to Rome.
10.Never too old to learn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）Writing skills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
结尾：提出倡议或号召Let’s …
Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!
As students, we should start from ourselves. Don’t wait. Join us now!
Start to join us now!
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!
How amazing! I can’t wait!
Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!
Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!
书面表达写作技巧审列加连美知己知彼，学范文
First，some of us aren’t interested in English.
We think studying English is such a boring thing.
And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all
the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have
enough confidence to keep up English study. And
we are always afraid to join the group discussion.
What’s more, there are so many new words we
haven’t met before in the passage. I don’t know
what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the
main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions
about them. But the most difficult thing is to write.
We often use wrong words and sentences.
Let’s go for it! Dear Mary,
I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you.
Yours
… ________________, I think reading English every day and listening
to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______,
you can join the English club to practice English. You know,
“Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you
to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your
listening skill.
_________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have
said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（试填一填） Dear Mary,
I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you.
Yours
… ________________, I think reading English every day and listening
to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______,
you can join the English club to practice English. You know,
“Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you
to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your
listening skill._________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope
what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!（check）
The Life as a Grade 9 Student
How time flies! Now I’m in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! !
There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.
Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.
I’ll spend the rest time efficiently. As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!
It’s your turn! （ 请分析以下的文章）Your turn to go for it! Good words:Good sentences:Connection words: 随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。
请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
要求：
1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；
2.提示的内容要全部用上。It’s your turn! (练练笔) Let’s Help Our Friends
With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forests into farmland. I feel pity for the animals.
More and more new cities and roads are built on animals’ habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly behavior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Don’t you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So it’s our duty to protect them instead of hurting or killing them.
Don’t put it off！Let’s try our best to help our friends today!Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:模板作文开头公式一：名人名言
1. A proberb says/As an old saying goes,“ You are only young once.”
2. As everyone knows/As is known to us, no one can deny that…
开头公式二：数字统计
1. According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
2. A recent statistics shows that … 附 结尾公式一：结论
1. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
2. to sum up/ in conclusion/ in brief/ on account of this/ thus…
结尾公式二：建议
1. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
2. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 写作的“五项基本原则” 一、 长短句原则
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
二、 主题句原则
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly. 三、 一二三原则
1）first, second, third, last
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally
3）the first, the second, the third, the last
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third
place, lastly
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand
10）for one thing, for another thing四、 短语优先原则
I cannot bear/stand it.
I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
I am looking forward to it. 五、多变句式原则
I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
hen, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that …
This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.
THANK YOU!