Marking ladders
Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic (1 point)
Para_____:I introduce the places of school,recommend 2 to 3 favorite places and write the reasons. (3 points)
Para.____:I show my conclusion. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use comparative forms correctly. For example:. Of all the places,I think Science Lab is the best. It has the most comfortable seat and the biggest screen. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共15张PPT)
Writing
Pre-writing
1.What’s the highest mountain in the world
2.What’s the biggest country in the world
3.What’s the longest river in China
4.What’s the fifth biggest province(省) in China
5.What’s the second biggest city in Sichuan
6.What’s the best middle school in Mianyang
Qomolangma
Russia
Yangtze
Mianyang
No.2 Middle School
Sichuan
Pre-writing
What places does she introduce(介绍)
Playground
dining hall
science lab
outdoor study
meeting room
classroom
Pre-writing
What do you think of these places
the biggest place
the happiest place
the most beautiful place
the most popular place
the most crowded place
the softest ground
the freshest air
play most happily there.
jump highest there.
...
It is
It has
Playground
I can
Pre-writing
dining hall
Talk about these places with superlative
outdoor study
meeting room
classroom
science lab
clean
nice service
noisy
delicious food
fresh vegetables
short waiting time
healthy food
...
relaxing
meaningful
quiet
good
enjoyable
...
crowded
clean
bright(明亮的)
happy
important
...
cool
intersting
new
attractive(吸引人的）
famous
modern
...
big
best sound
comfortable seats
big screen
...
Pre-writing:Pair work
Of all the places,which place do you like best, and why
A:Which place do you like best in our school
B:I like...best.
A:Why do you like it best
B:I like...best because it is.../it has...
A:What can you do there
B:I can...
Writing topic
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
2. 词数70词左右.
Pre-writing
Next week,there will be a show about “the most beautiful school” in Mianyang.Please write a passage about our school to join this activity.
内容包括 1. 总体介绍学校。
2. 推荐2-3 个学校里你最喜欢的地方，并说明理由。
Pre-writing：
Analyze the topic(审题)
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person and the third person
The simple present tense
a passage
1.Introduce the places in the school , recommend(推荐) 2-3 my favorite places and write the reasons
2.70 words
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Introduce the places of school,recommend 2 to 3 favorite places and write the reasons.
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
lead to the topic
conclusion
Hi,every one ...I am happy to introduce my beautiful school to you.
There are many beautiful places in my school such as...
All in all,I think my school is the most beautiful and I study the most happily there.Welcom to my school.
Pre-writing
Of all these place,I think...is the best because it is/has/I can...
Also,...is also my favorite. because...
Writing Tips(写作小技巧)
2.make some modifier to make the composition more vivid.
用一些修饰词（ 形容词/副词），让描述更加生动。
1.Use some linking words(连接词):
and/but/so/because/However...
First of all,then,also,what’s more...
3.make some additions to make the description more specific.
做一些补充和扩充，让描述更加具体。
4.Use some good sentences.使用一些好句。
Of all the places,I think ...is the best.
Pre-writing:
Play ground is my favorite place.
Play ground is my favorite place because it is the biggest and it has the freshest air there .
Play ground is my favorite place because it is the biggest and it has the freshest air there .I can play the most happily there with my clssmates and enjoy our free time.
It has the most comfortable seat and the biggest screen.
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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While-writing：
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing：
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing：
Show Time
Post-writing：
Polish your first draft and finish the second draft.
Homework
Post-writing：Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater Name
Writing
I.Analyse the writing topic.
Writing Topic
Next week,there will be a show about “the most beautiful school” in Mianyang.Please write a passage about our school to join this activity.
内容包括 1. 总体介绍学校。
2. 推荐2-3 个学校里你最喜欢的地方，并说明理由。
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；2. 词数70词左右。
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
II. Make an outline
Structure：
IV. Finish the first draft
V. Finish the second draft
