Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show Name
Writing
I.Analyse the writing topic.
Writing Topic
The English weekly newspaper is going to have a column(专栏) on "movie reviews" and is asking all students to take part in. Please write an English movie review of about 80 words to introduce your favorite film .
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；2. 词数80词左右。
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
II. Make an outline
Structure：
Cartoons :The Lion King(狮子王)；Chang An(长安三万里)；Jiang Ziya（姜子牙）；Kung Fu Panda（功夫熊猫）；Zootopia（疯狂动物城）；Ne Zha（哪吒）…
Comedies: Song Of Youth（老师，好！）My People My Homeland（我和我的家乡）…
Science Fiction Movies: The Wandering Earth（流浪地球）Star Wars（星球大战）…
Action Movies：Ip Man（叶问）War Wolves（战狼）…
War Movies： The Eight Hundred（八佰）The Sacrifice（金刚川）…
Scary Movies：The Ring（午夜凶铃）Saw（电锯惊魂）…
Drama Films：Duo Guan（夺冠）The Shawshank Redemption（肖山克的救赎）…
Documentaries： The Bite of China（舌尖上的中国）Aerial China（航拍中国）…
Romance：Titanic（泰坦尼克）；Roman Holiday（罗马假日）…
IV. Finish the first draft
V. Finish the second draft(共18张PPT)
Unit 5
Do you want to watch a game show
Writing
Pre-writing:What is the video about？
Pre-writing
What do you know about this movie
kind
plot(情节)
music
actor/actress
What do you think of this movie
the actors
Pre-writing
Fill in the blanks in the movie review. Use the words in the box to help you.
Mulan is an _________ ________ movie.
It ____________ an old Chinese story. The movie is ________ a village girl, Mulan. She dresses up like a boy and takes her father’s place to fight in the army. I think the actress ________ Mulan’s role well. The other actors are also _______ and they did a good job in the movie. I _______ Mulan very much. The movie _______ her love for her family, friends and country.
If you _________ to watch a movie this weekend and you _______ to see something enjoyable, choose Mulan!
fantastic shows action want comes from played about like exciting plan
exciting action
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Pre-writing:Analyze the movie review
What is the structure of the movie review
Mulan is an exciting action movie.
It comes from an old Chinese story.The movie is about a village girl,Mulan.She dresses up like a boy and takes her father's place to fight in the army.I think the actress played Mulan's role well.The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie.I like Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family friends and country.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable,choose Mulan!
Beginning
Body:
Ending:
Pre-writing:
Mulan is an exciting action movie.
It comes from an old Chinese story.The movie is about a village girl,Mulan.She dresses up like a boy and takes her father's place to fight in the army.I think the actress played Mulan's role well.The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie.I like Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family friends and country.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable,choose Mulan!
What tense is the movie review
Analyze the movie review
the simple present tense
the simple past tense
Pre-writing:
Mulan is an exciting action movie.
It comes from an old Chinese story.The movie is about a village girl,Mulan.She dresses up like a boy and takes her father's place to fight in the army.I think the actress played Mulan's role well.The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie.I like Mulan very much. The movie shows her love for her family friends and country.
If you plan to watch a movie this weekend and you want to see something enjoyable,choose Mulan!
What should a movie review include(包括)
the name and the kind
what is the movie about/main plot
what the writer thinks of the stars/opinions/comments
what the writer suggests(建议)/suggestions
Analyze the movie review
Pre-writing:
Analyze the movie review
What sentence patterns can you think of
Writing topic
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
2. 词数80词左右.
Pre-writing
The English weekly newspaper is going to have a column(专栏) on "movie reviews" and is asking all students to take part in. Please write an English movie review of about 80 words to introduce your favorite film .
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person and the third person
The simple present/past tense
Pre-writing:Analyze the topic(审题)
a movie review
1.Write a review(name/kind/main plot/opinions/suggestions)
2.80 words
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Pre-writing:
The name and the kind
1.The name ofthe movie is…/2.It is a(an)…movie./3.It is produced by…
Main Plots
actors
opinions
1.The movie is about…
2.It tells us a story about…
1.The actor played one's role very well
2.The actor did a great job…
1.l like/love…The movie is pretty…
2.When I watch the movie,I feel…
suggestions
1.If you would like/want/hope/expect to…Why not choose…
2.If you would like/want/hope/expect to…is the best chioce.
3.Come and watch…when you are free.
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While-writing：
Pre-writing:
1.The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie.
2.I like Mulan very much.The movie shows her love for her family friends and country.
The other actors are ____ fantastic _____ they did a good job in the movie.
The other actors are so excellent that they had a good performance in the movie.
so
that
Use some good and beautiful sentences.
Mulan is my favorite actress because the movie shows her love for her family, friends and country.
_______________I like Mulan very much is that it shows her love for her family friends and country.
The reason why
Writing Tips(写作小技巧)
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing：
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing：
Show Time
Post-writing：
Polish your first draft and finish the second draft.
Homework
Post-writing：
A movie review
A TV program review
A book review
A kind of music review
Post-writing：Marking ladders
Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show .
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole movie review into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic.I have written the name and the kind of the movie. (1 point)
Para_____:I have written main plot of the movie. I have written my opinions about the movie or actors. (3 points)
Para.____:I show my suggestions. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use tense correctly. For example: I think the actress played Mulan's role well. The other actors are also fantastic and they did a good job in the movie. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
