Marking ladders
Unit 6 I am going to study computer science.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic. (1 point)
Para_____:I have written the kinds of resolutions,the reasons and how you are going to do (3 points)
Para.____:I show my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use tense correctly. For example: I am going to take up a new sport. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
Marking ladders
Unit 6 I am going to study computer science.
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic. (1 point)
Para_____:I have written the kinds of resolutions,the reasons and how you are going to do (3 points)
Para.____:I show my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use tense correctly. For example: I am going to take up a new sport. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time Unit 6 I am going to study computer science. Name
Writing
I. Analyse the writing topic.
Writing Topic
2024 is coming, it a good time to make resolutions.What are your resolutions What kinds of resolutions are they Why do you make these resolutions And How are you going to do that Please write your New Year’s resolutions.
II. Write your resolutions.
My second resolution is about physical health.
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My third resolution is about doing better at school.
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My fourth resolution is about improving relationship with family and friends.
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Write down your ending.
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III. Finish the first draft.
IV. Finish the second draft.(共13张PPT)
I’m going to study computer science
Writing
Pre-writing.
Writing Topic
2024 is coming,it is a good time to make resolutions.What are your resolutions What kinds of resolutions are they
Why do you make these resolutions And How are you going to do that Please write your New Year’s resolutions.
写作要求：1.字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
2.词数80词左右.
Pre-writing.
What kinds of resolutions do we always make
physical health
personal improvement
doing better at school
relationship with family and friends
Pre-writing.
Read the passage and fill the blanks.
Resolutions _________ promises to yourself. They may _________ to make you a better person and to make your life easier. I am going to __________ four resolutions.
The first resolution has to do with my own personal improvement. Next year, or maybe sooner, I am going to ____________ up a new hobby. I think singing ___________ a great activity so I am going to ___________ to sing. I think this will also make my family happy because they love to ___________ to music and sing together.
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Pre-writing.
Write your resolutions about physical health.
2.How are you going to do that
1.Why do you make resolutions about physical health
My second resolution is about physical health.________________
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One of the main reasons is that health is the most important thing for me. I am going to run 3 times a week to make my body healthy. Also, I am going to take up a new sport like ping pong and I am going to play it two or three times a week.
Pre-writing.
Write your resolutions about doing better at school.
My third resolution is about doing better at school.________________
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2.How are you going to do that
Because as a student, the most important thing for me is to study. I am going to work hard at my subjects such as English ,Chinese and so on. Also,I am going to listen carefully in class.
1.Why do you make resolutions about doing better at school
Pre-writing.
Write your resolution about improving relationship with family and friends.
1.How are you going to do
2.Why are you going to do like that
My fourth resolution is about improving relationship with family and friends.
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I am going to spend more time with my family.Because it can improve my relationships with my family . I am going to communicate with my family more and I am going to help my son with homework.Spending more time with my family will show them that I care about them.
Pre-writing:
Can you think of a good ending
1.As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I am sure my resolutions can come true if I try my best.
2.Although resolutions are difficult to keep, I am going to try my best to keep them. I am sure I am going to do better in 2024.
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person
The simple future tense
Sum up:
A passage
1.write a passage(what/kinds/why/how)
2.80 words
Structure
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Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Pre-writing:
kinds
reasons
how
1.My resolution is about/has to do with...
1.The main reaon is that...
2.The reason why ...is that...
3.I am going to...because...
1.l am going to...
feelings
1.As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” I am sure my resolutions can come true if I try my best.
lead to the topic
2.Although resolutions are difficult to keep, I am going to try my best to keep them. I am sure I am going to do better in 2024.
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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While-writing：
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing：
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing：
