Unit 7 Will people have robots Name
Writing
I. complete the chart about your life in 20 years from now.
My life in 20 years
Age
New looks/ personalities
Jobs/ hobbies
Places to live and work
Transportation
Family/ friends/ pets
Free time activities
Environment around you
...
II.Analyze the topic.
Writing Topic
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike给你写了一封电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。
To：Li Hua
From：Mike
Hello Li Hua,
How is everything going？We talked about our life in 20 years in today’s class. Different people have different ideas. Many students want to be a CEO in companies.Some students have no ideas about it.What do you want to be？Can you tell me your future life in 20 years？
Mike
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
III. Make an outline
Structure：
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IV. Finish the first draft.
V. Finish the second draft.Marking ladders
Unit 7 Will people have robots
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic. (1 point)
Para_____:I have written my future life in 20 years from different aspects. (3 points)
Para.____:I show my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use tense correctly. For example: I will take the rocket to work.. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共14张PPT)
Unit 7 Will people have robots
Writing
Pre-writing: What is the video about
Pre-writing:
What will Jill’s life be like in 20 years
In 20 years, I think I’ll be a newspaper reporter. I’ll _____ in Shanghai, because there will be ______ jobs in that city. As a reporter, I think I will _____ lots of interesting people, so I’ll have more friends. I’ll have _____ pets, though, because I’ll have _____ free time. And my apartment will be no good for pets because it’ll be too small. So I’ll probably just ____ a bird. During the week, I’ll _____ smart clothes. On the weekend, I’ll _____ less smart but I’ll be more comfortable. In the future, people will _____ more so they’ll probably have fewer vacations, but I think I’ll _____ a holiday in Hong Kong when possible. One day I’ll even go to Australia.
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In 20 years,I think I'll be a newspaper reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because there will be more jobs in that city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people,soI 'll have more friends.I'll have fewer pets,though,because I'll have less free time.And my apartment will be no good for pets because it'll be too small.So I'll probably just keep a bird.During the week,I'll wear smart clothes.On the weekend,I'll look less smart but I'll be more comfortable.In the future,people will work more so they'll probably have fewer vacations,but I think I'll take a holiday in Hong Kong when possible.One day I'll even go to Australia.
Pre-writing:
What aspects(方面) are mentioned in the passage
Jill’s life in 20 years
Jobs
Places to live/work
family
Free time activities
pets
friends
looks
transportation
Pre-writing:
What other things can we talk about our future life
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In 20 years,I think I'll be a newspaper reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because there will be more jobs in that city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people,so I 'll have more friends.I'll have fewer pets,though,because I'll have less free time.And my apartment will be no good for pets because it'll be too small.So I'll probably just keep a bird.During the week,I'll wear smart clothes.On the weekend,I'll look less smart but I'll be more comfortable.In the future,people will work more so they'll probably have fewer vacations,but I think I'll take a holiday in Hong Kong when possible.One day I'll even go to Australia.
Pre-writing:
How does Jill make the passage logical and clear
He use some linking words and phrases.
In 20 years,I think I'll be a newspaper reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because there will be more jobs in that city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people,soI 'll have more friends.I'll have fewer pets,though,because I'll have less free time.And my apartment will be no good for pets because it'll be too small.So I'll probably just keep a bird.During the week,I'll wear smart clothes.On the weekend,I'll look less smart but I'll be more comfortable.In the future,people will work more so they'll probably have fewer vacations,but I think I'll take a holiday in Hong Kong when possible.One day I'll even go to Australia.
Pre-writing:
Body
Can you add a beginning and an ending
Beginning
Ending
My life in 20 years will be quite different from now. I'd like to share my predictions with you.
Everyone wonders what their future life will be like. I also have some predictions about my future life. I'd like to share them with you.
My life in the futrue will be busy but interesting.
Although no one knows what will happen in the future, we can try our best to make our future better.
I believe that if I study hard from now on,my dream will come ture.
Pre-writing:How about your life in 20 years
My life in 20 years Age
New looks/personalities
Jobs/hobbies
Places to live and work
Transportations
Family/friends/pets
Free time activities
Environment around you
…
Pre-writing:
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike给你写了一封电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容给他回一封电子邮件。
To：Li Hua
From：Mike
Hello Li Hua，
How is everything going？We talked about our life in 20 years in today’s class.Different people have different ideas.Many students want to be a CEO in companies.Some students have no ideas about it.What do you want to be？Can you tell me your future life in 20 years？
Mike
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person
The simple future tense
An e-mail
1.write an e-mail(my life in 20 years)
2.80 words
Pre-writing:Analyze the topic
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Pre-writing:
show the feelings
lead to the topic
some linking words and phrases
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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已开始计时
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While-writing:
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing：
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing：
