【期末复习】牛津深圳版（深圳·广州）七年级上学期英语-U1-4写作（含写作分析 范文）
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八年级上学期各单元作文
Unit 1 Encyclopeadias 介绍说明
【精选例题】
假设你对梵高很感兴趣，并通过阅读百科全书了解了他的事迹。请你根据所给的提示，以“Van Gogh”为题，同你的同学们介绍有关信息。要求：80-100 词左右。
Van Gogh 梵高：一个伟大的画家，艺术家（artist） 出生日期和地点：1853 年 3 月 30 日，荷兰Holland 人物生平： (1)年幼时，他对画画很感兴趣也显示出巨大的天赋 (2)1869 年，在伦敦工作了 4 年。 (3)1877 年，他搬去巴黎，开始画画。 (4)1888 年，他搬去法国南部的一个小镇，在乡下生活。梵高一直都过着清贫的生活（live a poor life），他一生作了若干幅画，例如《向日葵》（Sunflowers）。他 37 岁时死在法国。
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【词汇短语】
年幼时
对...感兴趣
显示出...天赋
搬去
过着清贫的生活
若干
例如
当他长大后
从小小时候
后来
然后
并且
甚至
更糟糕的是
【分析+答案】
【作文背景】同学们，我在百科全书读了关于梵高的事迹。现在让我来给你们介绍一下他。 【开头】从背景信息进行改编
Van Gogh 梵高：一个伟大的画家，艺术家（artist） 出生日期和地点：1853 年 3 月 30 日，荷兰Holland 人物生平： (1)年幼时，他对画画很感兴趣也显示出巨大的天赋 (2)1869 年，在伦敦工作了 4 年。 (3)1877 年，他搬去巴黎，开始画画。 (4)1888 年，他搬去法国南部的一个小镇，在乡下生活。梵高一直都过着清贫的生活（live a poor life），他一生作了若干幅画，例如《向日葵》（Sunflowers）。 【正文】
他 37 岁时死在法国。 【结尾】
【词汇短语】
年幼时 from an early ageWhen he was a child/young
对...感兴趣 be interested inshow great interest in
显示出...天赋 show talent for...
搬去 move to
过着清贫的生活 live a poor life
若干 a number of
例如 such as
逻辑词：
当他长大后 As he grew older
从小小时候 From an early ageWhen he was young
后来 later
然后 then
并且 and
甚至 even
更糟糕的是 what’s worse
【参考范文】
A Great Painter—Van Gogh
I read about Van Gogh in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Van Gogh was a famous Dutch painter as well as an artist. He was born on March 30th, 1853. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy and showed great intelligence in drawing. In 1869, he worked in London for 4 years. Later he moved to Paris and began to draw in 1877. While in 1888, he moved to a small town in the south of France and lived in the country.
Van Gogh had lived a poor life. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life, such as Sunflowers. Finally, he died in France at the age of 37.
Unit 2 Numbers 数据类图表作文
【精选例题】
最近，某报社做了一个关于”中国中学生怎样过周末“的调查。调查发现我国中学生过周末的方式有很大差异。请你根据以下表格要点，写一篇硬与短文。并说说你周末想做的事情是哪些，以及原因。
注意：
词数 80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
短文应包括所有要点。
不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, we made a survey on...weekends”. ———————————————
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【分析+答案】
一、数据表达：百分比、分数、数字
50% percent
half of; a quarter of; three quarters of; one fifth;
二、词汇表达：prefer to do, choose to do, tend to do, want to do
三、框架句式
（一）开头：
1、背景：Recently, we made / did a survey on...（调查主题）
2、过渡句（引出主题）
We found that there were differences between them. Here come the results.
Here is the result of the survey about ... (how middle school students spend their weekends).
（二）正文（描述图表数据）
According to the survey, 50％of the students are willing to...
It can be seen (from the table/chart) that most of the students choose to...
However, / While 20% of the students are likely to ...
In addition, 19 students prefer to...
What’s more, for one tenth of them, doing ... is their first choice.
The rest of them would like to...
（三）结尾：表达个人观点
在我看来
From my point of view / As for me / In my opinion
原因：because / for / since +句子
Because of that, / For this reason, 句子
【参考范文】
Recently, we made a survey on...weekends”.We found that there were differences between them. Here come the results.【过渡句：引出调查结果】
According to the survey, in China, 50％of the students（half of the respondents） spend their weekends doing their homework at home while 22％ of the them are likely to stay at home to watch TV, play computer games on the Internet and so on. In addition, 13％of students prefer to do some outdoor activities. What’s more, for one tenth of them, reading or studying in the library is their first choice. The rest of them would like to enjoy the weekends by doing voluntary work.
As far as I am concerned, I hope there won’t be too much homework to do at weekend so that I can have more free time to do things I like. (As a student, study must come first. So I am willing to spend most of my time studying. Besides, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Outdoor activities is my second choice because they are good for my health.
Unit 3 Computer 利弊型图表作文
【精选例题】
你即将在科学课上作报告，简要介绍"手机"这种发明的相关情况，请你根据下面表格内的信息，完成报告。
手机的历史 20世纪70年代，出现了第一部无线电话机；之后，电话变得……
现在的功能 人们可以随时随地远距离聊天；可以……
存在的问题 1.看手机的时间太长，对健康不好；2.请补充一个问题；
你的建议 1.多进行户外活动；2.请补充一条建议。
注意：
1.提示词：无线电话机：cordless telephone
2.词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
Hello，everyone.Today I'm going to introduce one of the greatest inventions in history --- phones._____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
That's all about phones.Thanks for your listening.
【分析+答案】
利弊型作文框架
首段：
背景
We had a discussion about whether XX is/are good or not.
高配版Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that主题.
表达各人有不同的观点
Different people have different opinions.
高配版But we all know that the opinion about this topic is different from person to person.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
第二段：赞成+2个理由；反对+2个理由
40% the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
However, the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
高配版A majority of people think that 观点一. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一. Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.（过渡句）Some people hold the idea that 观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一. On the other hand, 原因二.
第三段：表达观点
在我看来
As far as I am concerned / From my point of view / As for me / In my opinion,
原因
because / for / since +句子
Because of that, / For this reason, 句子
高配版As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二. It is not only because 原因一, but also because 原因二.
【范文】
Hello, everyone.Today I'm going to introduce one of the greatest inventions in history﹣﹣phones.（引出话题）The history of mobile phones is not very long.In the 1970s，the first wireless telephone appeared.After that，the telephone became more and more popular.（手机的历史）
Mobile phones have many functions. Mobile phones have a profound impact on our lives. Everyone has mobile phones. People can chat remotely anytime，anywhere.People can listen to music，watch TV，navigate and consult learning materials.（现在的功能）
But now there are many problems. 【高分句型一】Mobile phones also bring harm to us.Every new invention has its disadvantages. First，it takes too long to watch mobile phones，which is bad for health.Second，students are addicted to using mobile phones to play games，which affects their learning.（存在的问题）
So I have some suggestions.We should do more outdoor activities. 【高分句型二】We often communicate with our parents，teachers and friends. （我的建议）
That's all about phones.Thanks for your listening.
Unit 4 Inventions介绍发明
【精选例题】
假如你是李华，你发明的“兔形机器人”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请根据下面的思维导图用英文介绍你的发明。
Robot Rabbit 外形特点 长长的耳朵，像一只兔子
移动迅速，使用太阳能
用途 可拍照
能对话
帮助人们探索月球
改进计划？ 改进1？
改进2？
参考词汇：太阳能 solar energy，探索 explore
注意：1. 词数：80 词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! It’s my great pleasure to be here to introduce my invention. _____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all about my invention. I hope you will like it.
【分析+答案】
外观（形状、）
轮子 wheel
翅膀 wing
扬声器 speaker
圆脑袋 a round head
长腿长臂long legs and long arms
和...一样重 as heavy as ...
防水材料 water-proof material
用途：
We can use it to run on the ground and fly in the sky.
It can be used to take photos and we can talk to others with it.
特点：
有：It has... / there be句型
使用声音控制速度：The speed can be controlled by the sound / volume.
能够聊天：talk with/ to, chat with, communicate with
比...快 动词+much faster than...；以...速度 at a high speed （of）；
移动迅速 move at a fast speed; move fast
使用太阳能use solar power（被太阳能驱动）be driven by solar power
环保的green, environmental-friendly
便利的convenient（建议搭配it’s adj. to do )
【答案】范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! It’s my great pleasure to be here to introduce my invention.
It has long ears, like a rabbit. It can move quickly because it is driven by solar energy. It can be used to take photos and people can talk with it. What’s more, it can help explore the moon. This is my robot snake, which is made by myself alone in my spare time. If it is used in our life, I will have two improvements. I will suggest the engineer use light irons of high quality to make the frame. In addition, I will improve the framework to make him more flexible.
That’s all about my invention. I hope you like it.
Unit 1 Encyclopeadias 介绍说明
【精选例题】
假设你对梵高很感兴趣，并通过阅读百科全书了解了他的事迹。请你根据所给的提示，以“Van Gogh”为题，同你的同学们介绍有关信息。要求：80-100 词左右。
Van Gogh 梵高：一个伟大的画家，艺术家（artist） 出生日期和地点：1853 年 3 月 30 日，荷兰Holland 人物生平： (1)年幼时，他对画画很感兴趣也显示出巨大的天赋 (2)1869 年，在伦敦工作了 4 年。 (3)1877 年，他搬去巴黎，开始画画。 (4)1888 年，他搬去法国南部的一个小镇，在乡下生活。梵高一直都过着清贫的生活（live a poor life），他一生作了若干幅画，例如《向日葵》（Sunflowers）。他 37 岁时死在法国。
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—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
【词汇短语】
年幼时
对...感兴趣
显示出...天赋
搬去
过着清贫的生活
若干
例如
当他长大后
从小小时候
后来
然后
并且
甚至
更糟糕的是
【分析+答案】
【作文背景】同学们，我在百科全书读了关于梵高的事迹。现在让我来给你们介绍一下他。 【开头】从背景信息进行改编
Van Gogh 梵高：一个伟大的画家，艺术家（artist） 出生日期和地点：1853 年 3 月 30 日，荷兰Holland 人物生平： (1)年幼时，他对画画很感兴趣也显示出巨大的天赋 (2)1869 年，在伦敦工作了 4 年。 (3)1877 年，他搬去巴黎，开始画画。 (4)1888 年，他搬去法国南部的一个小镇，在乡下生活。梵高一直都过着清贫的生活（live a poor life），他一生作了若干幅画，例如《向日葵》（Sunflowers）。 【正文】
他 37 岁时死在法国。 【结尾】
【词汇短语】
年幼时 from an early ageWhen he was a child/young
对...感兴趣 be interested inshow great interest in
显示出...天赋 show talent for...
搬去 move to
过着清贫的生活 live a poor life
若干 a number of
例如 such as
逻辑词：
当他长大后 As he grew older
从小小时候 From an early ageWhen he was young
后来 later
然后 then
并且 and
甚至 even
更糟糕的是 what’s worse
【参考范文】
A Great Painter—Van Gogh
I read about Van Gogh in an encyclopedia yesterday. Now let me tell you something about him.
Van Gogh was a famous Dutch painter as well as an artist. He was born on March 30th, 1853. He was very interested in drawing when he was a little boy and showed great intelligence in drawing. In 1869, he worked in London for 4 years. Later he moved to Paris and began to draw in 1877. While in 1888, he moved to a small town in the south of France and lived in the country.
Van Gogh had lived a poor life. He created lots of wonderful works of art in his life, such as Sunflowers. Finally, he died in France at the age of 37.
Unit 2 Numbers 数据类图表作文
【精选例题】
最近，某报社做了一个关于”中国中学生怎样过周末“的调查。调查发现我国中学生过周末的方式有很大差异。请你根据以下表格要点，写一篇硬与短文。并说说你周末想做的事情是哪些，以及原因。
注意：
词数 80 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
短文应包括所有要点。
不得透露学校，姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, we made a survey on...weekends”. ———————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
—————————————————————————————————————
【分析+答案】
一、数据表达：百分比、分数、数字
50% percent
half of; a quarter of; three quarters of; one fifth;
二、词汇表达：prefer to do, choose to do, tend to do, want to do
三、框架句式
（一）开头：
1、背景：Recently, we made / did a survey on...（调查主题）
2、过渡句（引出主题）
We found that there were differences between them. Here come the results.
Here is the result of the survey about ... (how middle school students spend their weekends).
（二）正文（描述图表数据）
According to the survey, 50％of the students are willing to...
It can be seen (from the table/chart) that most of the students choose to...
However, / While 20% of the students are likely to ...
In addition, 19 students prefer to...
What’s more, for one tenth of them, doing ... is their first choice.
The rest of them would like to...
（三）结尾：表达个人观点
在我看来
From my point of view / As for me / In my opinion
原因：because / for / since +句子
Because of that, / For this reason, 句子
【参考范文】
Recently, we made a survey on...weekends”.We found that there were differences between them. Here come the results.【过渡句：引出调查结果】
According to the survey, in China, 50％of the students（half of the respondents） spend their weekends doing their homework at home while 22％ of the them are likely to stay at home to watch TV, play computer games on the Internet and so on. In addition, 13％of students prefer to do some outdoor activities. What’s more, for one tenth of them, reading or studying in the library is their first choice. The rest of them would like to enjoy the weekends by doing voluntary work.
As far as I am concerned, I hope there won’t be too much homework to do at weekend so that I can have more free time to do things I like. (As a student, study must come first. So I am willing to spend most of my time studying. Besides, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Outdoor activities is my second choice because they are good for my health.
Unit 3 Computer 利弊型图表作文
【精选例题】
你即将在科学课上作报告，简要介绍"手机"这种发明的相关情况，请你根据下面表格内的信息，完成报告。
手机的历史 20世纪70年代，出现了第一部无线电话机；之后，电话变得……
现在的功能 人们可以随时随地远距离聊天；可以……
存在的问题 1.看手机的时间太长，对健康不好；2.请补充一个问题；
你的建议 1.多进行户外活动；2.请补充一条建议。
注意：
1.提示词：无线电话机：cordless telephone
2.词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
Hello，everyone.Today I'm going to introduce one of the greatest inventions in history --- phones._____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
That's all about phones.Thanks for your listening.
【分析+答案】
利弊型作文框架
首段：
背景
We had a discussion about whether XX is/are good or not.
高配版Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that主题.
表达各人有不同的观点
Different people have different opinions.
高配版But we all know that the opinion about this topic is different from person to person.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.
第二段：赞成+2个理由；反对+2个理由
40% the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
However, the others are strongly against it.（反方观点）Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
高配版A majority of people think that 观点一. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一. Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.（过渡句）Some people hold the idea that 观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一. On the other hand, 原因二.
第三段：表达观点
在我看来
As far as I am concerned / From my point of view / As for me / In my opinion,
原因
because / for / since +句子
Because of that, / For this reason, 句子
高配版As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二. It is not only because 原因一, but also because 原因二.
【范文】
Hello, everyone.Today I'm going to introduce one of the greatest inventions in history﹣﹣phones.（引出话题）The history of mobile phones is not very long.In the 1970s，the first wireless telephone appeared.After that，the telephone became more and more popular.（手机的历史）
Mobile phones have many functions. Mobile phones have a profound impact on our lives. Everyone has mobile phones. People can chat remotely anytime，anywhere.People can listen to music，watch TV，navigate and consult learning materials.（现在的功能）
But now there are many problems. 【高分句型一】Mobile phones also bring harm to us.Every new invention has its disadvantages. First，it takes too long to watch mobile phones，which is bad for health.Second，students are addicted to using mobile phones to play games，which affects their learning.（存在的问题）
So I have some suggestions.We should do more outdoor activities. 【高分句型二】We often communicate with our parents，teachers and friends. （我的建议）
That's all about phones.Thanks for your listening.
Unit 4 Inventions介绍发明
【精选例题】
假如你是李华，你发明的“兔形机器人”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请根据下面的思维导图用英文介绍你的发明。
Robot Rabbit 外形特点 长长的耳朵，像一只兔子
移动迅速，使用太阳能
用途 可拍照
能对话
帮助人们探索月球
改进计划？ 改进1？
改进2？
参考词汇：太阳能 solar energy，探索 explore
注意：1. 词数：80 词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
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Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! It’s my great pleasure to be here to introduce my invention. _____________________________________________________________________
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That’s all about my invention. I hope you will like it.
【分析+答案】
外观（形状、）
轮子 wheel
翅膀 wing
扬声器 speaker
圆脑袋 a round head
长腿长臂long legs and long arms
和...一样重 as heavy as ...
防水材料 water-proof material
用途：
We can use it to run on the ground and fly in the sky.
It can be used to take photos and we can talk to others with it.
特点：
有：It has... / there be句型
使用声音控制速度：The speed can be controlled by the sound / volume.
能够聊天：talk with/ to, chat with, communicate with
比...快 动词+much faster than...；以...速度 at a high speed （of）；
移动迅速 move at a fast speed; move fast
使用太阳能use solar power（被太阳能驱动）be driven by solar power
环保的green, environmental-friendly
便利的convenient（建议搭配it’s adj. to do )
【答案】范文：
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! It’s my great pleasure to be here to introduce my invention.
It has long ears, like a rabbit. It can move quickly because it is driven by solar energy. It can be used to take photos and people can talk with it. What’s more, it can help explore the moon. This is my robot snake, which is made by myself alone in my spare time. If it is used in our life, I will have two improvements. I will suggest the engineer use light irons of high quality to make the frame. In addition, I will improve the framework to make him more flexible.
That’s all about my invention. I hope you like it.
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