满分练(十一) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川内江三模)
Last summer,I went to Djerba,Tunisia.It was true one of the most attractive destination I had ever visited.I must admit that I have never seen such a beautiful coastline before.I spent most of my days walking on the beach but enjoying the sun and the peaceful sound of the waves.On my four day there,I took a tour and visited some local attractions,included the El Ghriba Synagogue.And that was unforgettable experience.Overall,I felt so lucky to be there because of everything was good than I could ever imagine.I’m looking forward to explore more of this beautiful country next time.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川自贡二诊)
假定你校英文报正在以“养成好习惯,促进我健康”为主题开展征文活动。请写一篇短文,向报社投
稿,内容包括:
1.介绍一项你的好习惯;
2.该习惯对健康的影响;
3.呼吁养成健康习惯。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
GoodHabits,GoodHealth
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答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要描述了作者去杰尔巴岛旅行的经历。
1.第二句:true→truly 考查副词。分析句子结构可知,此处要用副词truly作状语,修饰be动词was。故将true改为truly。
2.第二句:destination→destinations 考查名词的数。根据“oneofthemostattractive”可知,后面加名词复数,表示“最……的之一”。故将destination改为destinations。
3.第三句:have→had 考查动词的时态。根据句意可知,“承认”是过去的动作,“看见”这一动作发生在“承认”之前,故用过去完成时。故将have改为had。
4.第四句:but→and 考查连词。分析句意可知,“walkingonthebeach”和“enjoyingthesunandthepeacefulsoundofthewaves”是并列关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
5.第五句:four→fourth 考查数词。根据句意可知,“在第四天,参观了一些景点”,用序数词表示。故将four改为fourth。
6.第五句:included→including 考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词“took”和“visited”,因此include应用非谓语形式,“localattractions”和“include”之间是主动关系,故用现在分词。故将included改为including。
7.第六句:unforgettable前面加an 考查冠词。泛指“一次经历”,要用不定冠词修饰名词,unforgettable以元音音素开头,需用不定冠词an。故在unforgettable前面加an。
8.第七句:because后的of删掉 考查连词。根据句意可知,because引导了原因状语从句,becauseof后只能跟名词、短语等作宾语,不能接从句。故将because后的of删掉。
9.第七句:good→better 考查形容词比较级。根据“thanIcouldeverimagine”可知,要用形容词比较级。故将good改为better。
10.第八句:explore→exploring 考查非谓语动词。lookforwardtodoingsth.表示“期待做某事”,用动词-ing形式作宾语。故将explore改为exploring。
Ⅱ.
GoodHabits,GoodHealth
Now I’ve formed a good habit to improve my health.That is,I play basketball with my friends on the playground for 40 minutes every day after school.
However,a year ago,because of the heavy learning tasks,I always stayed in the classroom,not participating in after-school activities to relax myself.As a result,I found I couldn’t concentrate on my school work and always felt tired.I realized I had to adjust my lifestyle.Then,I began playing basketball since I like this sport.Now,I feel energetic,and my learning efficiency is satisfactory.
A strong nation is based on its strong youths.As senior three students,we should develop healthy habits and have a healthy body.
1.词汇积累
养成:form→develop
任务:task→assignment
因此:as a result→as a consequence
集中:concentrate on→focus on
2.高分句型
(1)I realized I had to adjust my lifestyle.(省略that的宾语从句)
(2)Then,I began playing basketball since I like this sport.(since引导原因状语从句)满分练(十二) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023陕西榆林三模)
Dad and I go to my grandparents’ home last weekend.Besides visited my grandparents,we wanted to help them to have the broadband network fixing.Dad asked the communication company to do it in the advance.A technician came on time and finished his work rapid.Then it was my turn.I just taught my grandparents what to use their smartphones step by step.Soon we learned to read news,shop online or do something else.They showed much interest in video chat,which they thought was the most useful functions.Now,I usually chat my grandparents online.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川绵阳二诊)
假设你是李华,上周末去学校周边某社区参加了志愿者活动。请给你校官网英文专栏写一篇短文介绍你们的活动情况,要点包括:
1.活动概况;
2.感悟与收获。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Manyhandsmakelightwork
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答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲的是作者和爸爸在上周末去帮助爷爷奶奶修理宽带和教爷爷奶奶使用智能手机的事情。
1.第一句:go→went 考查动词的时态。由“lastweekend”可知,句子描述过去的事情,时态用一般过去时,故将go改为went。
2.第二句:visited→visiting 考查非谓语动词。Besides是介词,其后跟动词-ing形式作宾语,故将visited改为visiting。
3.第二句:fixing→fixed 考查非谓语动词。network和fix之间为逻辑上的被动关系,应用过去分词作宾补。故将fixing改为fixed。
4.第三句:去掉第二个the 考查固定短语。inadvance是固定短语,意为“提前”,故去掉the。
5.第四句:rapid→rapidly 考查副词。修饰动词finished要用副词rapidly,意为“快速地”,故将rapid改为rapidly。
6.第六句:what→how 考查特殊疑问词。根据语境可知,表示“如何”用副词how,“如何使用”是howtouse,为“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语,故将what改为how。
7.第七句:we→they 考查代词。根据语境可知,此处表示“他们学会了阅读新闻、网上购物和做其他事情”,“他们”作主语,用they,故将we改为they。
8.第七句:or→and 考查连词。readnews,shoponline和dosomethingelse是并列动作,用and连接,故将or改为and。
9.第八句:functions→function 考查名词的数。此处表示他们认为视频聊天是最有用的功能,指一个功能,function要用单数,故将functions改为function。
10.第九句:在chat后加with 考查介词。chatwithsb.是固定短语,意为“和某人聊天”,故在chat后加with。
Ⅱ.
Manyhandsmakelightwork
Last weekend we went to a community near our school to do some volunteer work.When we got there in the morning,we were warmly welcomed by everybody.Soon we got down to work.Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores.They were glad to see so many young faces around them.The others joined the locals to clean up the neighborhood.We helped sweep the streets and collect rubbish.Soon the whole area took on a new look.
The activity did not last long,but we learned a lot.By joining our hands we can accomplish big things and make the world a better place.
1.词汇积累
到达:get→arrive
高兴:glad→delighted
参加:join→participate
收集:collect→gather
2.高分句型
(1)When we got there in the morning,we were warmly welcomed by everybody.(when引导时间状语从句)
(2)Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores.(不定式作目的状语)满分练(十三) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川宜宾三诊)
I am applying a volunteer position for the games.Personally,I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects.Firstly,as a sports fan,my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position.Secondly,my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others,and thus offer timely help.Thirdly,my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit,but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.
I keep passion for sports,but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event.I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity.I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川成都、绵阳五校高三适应性考试)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom很喜欢中国文化,最近他在学习汉语,但他发现记忆汉字很困难,因
此发邮件向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.培养语感;
2.广泛阅读;
3.反复书写;
4.熟练运用。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇应用文。文章主要讲述了作者正在申请奥运会志愿者的职位。作者从以下三个方面认为自己是一个合格的候选人。
1.第一句:在applying后加for 考查动词短语。根据句意可知,此处为动词短语applyfor“申请”,满足句意要求。故在applying后加for。
2.第二句:me→myself 考查代词。根据句意以及主语I可知,此处为对应主语的反身代词myself“我自己”,满足句意要求。故将me改为myself。
3.第二句:follow→following 考查形容词。由threeaspects为名词短语可知,此处为形容词形式修饰该名词短语。故将follow改为following。
4.第三句:删除to 考查动词不定式。分析句子可知,此处为letsb.dosth.,为使役动词的用法,后需接省略to的动词不定式。故将to删除。
5.第四句:fluently→fluent 考查形容词。由English为名词可知,此处应为形容词形式修饰该名词。故将fluently改为fluent。
6.第四句:well→better 考查副词比较级。由该句中的than可知,此处为副词well的比较级better修饰动词understand。故将well改为better。
7.第五句:equip→equipped 考查非谓语动词。由notonly连接的strengthened为现在完成时的过去分词可知,此处butalso后也应为过去分词形式,与其保持一致。故将equip改为equipped。
8.第五句:knowledges→knowledge 考查名词。该句中的knowledge表示“知识”,为不可数名词,所以此处应为单数形式。故将knowledges改为knowledge。
9.第六句:but→so/and 考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词so/and表示“所以或接下来”,满足句子逻辑关系。故将but改为so/and。
10.第七句:when→if 考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词if表示“如果”,引导条件状语从句,满足句意要求。故将when改为if。
Ⅱ.
Dear Tom,
I’m more than glad to receive your email,which tells me you have trouble remembering Chinese words.I have some advice on how to improve your vocabulary.
Firstly,you should read aloud as often as possible,for it can develop your language sense.Secondly,you must read more.Reading can certainly enlarge your vocabulary and you can easily find plenty of reading materials that interest you.Thirdly,every time you meet a new word,it’s not enough to just write it down.The more you repeat it,the better you’ll remember it.Finally,you need to put your words into practice.Only in this way can you use them skillfully.
I hope the above advice can give you some help.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
有困难:have trouble(in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.
培养:develop→cultivate
最后:finally→at last
2.高分句型
(1)I’m more than glad to receive your email,which tells me you have trouble remembering Chinese words.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)Only in this way can you use them skillfully.(部分倒装)满分练(十四) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川广安二诊)
I like keeping a diary.I think keeping diaries are a good habit.It interests people of all age.Older people want to look back on the past and see which they’ve done and like.They also hope to leave something usefully for their grandchildren.Middle-aged people explore their lives by keep diaries.Why do young people enjoy keeping diaries With my opinion,they wish to find out who they are,and where they’re going.If you want to remember your past life,and you need to keep a personal diary throughout their life.That’s because it is impossible for you remember everything you’ve experienced.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023陕西西安一模)
假如你是李华,是全国机器人大赛获奖者,育才中学王校长邀请你去给机器人爱好者培训,请你回复邀请函,内容如下:
1.表态接受邀请;
2.介绍培训计划。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Principal Wang,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案：
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[语篇解读]本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍人们都喜欢写日记的原因和写日记的好处。
1.第二句:are→is 考查主谓一致。主语是动词-ing形式短语keepingdiaries,谓语要用单数形式。故将are改为is。
2.第三句:age→ages 考查名词的数。可数名词age前面有all,名词要用复数形式。故将age改为ages。
3.第四句:which→what 考查连词。see后是宾语从句,从句中缺少动词done和like的宾语,意为“什么”,用连接代词what引导。故将which改为what。
4.第四句:like→liked 考查谓语动词。分析句子结构和意思可知,这里like和前面havedone是并列的谓语动词,都用现在完成时,因此like用过去分词。故将like改为liked。
5.第五句:usefully→useful 考查形容词。修饰前面的不定代词something,应用形容词。故将usefully改为useful。
6.第六句:keep→keeping 考查非谓语动词。介词by的宾语应用keep的动词-ing形式。故将keep改为keeping。
7.第八句:With→In 考查介词短语。这里考查介词短语inmyopinion,意为“在我看来”。故将With改为In。
8.第九句:删除and 考查连词。这句话是if引导的条件状语从句,后面的连词and多余。故将and删除。
9.第九句:their→your 考查代词。从句提到的人称代词是you,所以用you的形容词性物主代词。故将their改为your。
10.第十句:在remember前面加to 考查非谓语动词。此处为固定句型:itbe+adj.+forsb.todosth.,it作形式主语,后面用动词不定式作真正的主语。故在remember前面加to。
Ⅱ.
Dear Principal Wang,
It’s such a great privilege for me to be invited to share my experience with the robot lovers in your school.With the deepest gratitude,I’m so pleased to accept your invitation.
As is scheduled,the training course will be divided into 3 parts.The most advanced technology and application will be delivered in the first place.To enhance their further motivation,an interactive part will be provided,through which they can share their perspectives on the given sample robot enthusiastically as well as be inspired mutually.In the end,a practical robot designing on their own will be required.
I’m looking forward to meeting with you next week and I do hope the course can be of great benefit to you all.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
荣幸:privilege→honour
高兴的:pleased→delighted
观点:perspective→opinion
有益的:be of benefit→be beneficial
2.高分句型
(1)As is scheduled,the training course will be divided into 3 parts.(as引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)To enhance their further motivation,an interactive part will be provided,through which they can share their perspectives on the given sample robot enthusiastically as well as be inspired mutually.(动词不定式作目的状语以及“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)满分练(十五) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川成都一诊)
Looking back at my senior school life,I have so many things to share them with all of you.I still remember that I step into my high school with high expectations.Therefore,I felt so frustrated after the first month test.I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student.With the helps of friendly classmates,teachers and parents,I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to study,thus do well in some academic performances.Besides,I took active part in colorful after-school activities such as basketball matches,singing competitions and English debates,on which I benefit a lot.In a word,I am really satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023陕西榆林一模)
假定你是李华,你的英国交换生同学William今年要在他的寄宿家庭过春节。请你给他发一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1.给他送上新年祝福;
2.邀请他到你家做客。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。作者回顾了自己的高中生活。
1.第一句:将them去掉 考查代词。分析句子结构,toshare作manythings的后置定语,them是多余的。故将them去掉。
2.第二句:step→stepped 考查动词的时态。此处陈述过去发生的事情,使用一般过去时。故将step改为stepped。
3.第三句:Therefore→However 考查副词。上文提到“我怀着很高的期望进入高中”,下文提到“我感到非常沮丧”,上下文之间形成转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。
4.第三句:month→monthly 考查形容词。修饰名词test需用形容词monthly作定语。故将month改为monthly。
5.第四句:that→whether/if 考查连词。此处引导宾语从句,从句不缺成分,连接词表示“是否”的含义,需用连接词whether/if。故将that改为whether/if。
6.第五句:helps→help 考查名词的数。help为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将helps改为help。
7.第五句:do→doing 考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,已有谓语动词pickedup和regained,此处为非谓语动词作状语,I和do为逻辑上的主谓关系,需用现在分词形式。故将do改为doing。
8.第六句:在active前面加an 考查冠词。takeanactivepartin为固定搭配,意为“积极参加”。故在active前面加an。
9.第六句:on→from/through/by 考查介词。benefitfrom...为固定搭配,意为“从……中受益”,可以将on改为from;或者考虑前面句子和定语从句的关系,表示“通过这些课外活动,我受益良多”,需用介词through/by。故将on改为from/through/by。
10.第七句:are→is 考查主谓一致。which指代schoollife,不可数,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。故将are改为is。
Ⅱ.
Dear William,
On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China,I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
As far as I know,it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year,which will impress you greatly.As a custom of the Spring Festival,I will send you my best blessings to you.I wish you a happy New Year,all the best,happiness and health.Besides,I sincerely invite you to my home and share the happiness of Chinese New Year with my family.
I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
兴奋:delight→excitement
我认为:as far as I know→in my point of view
祝福:blessing→wish
开心的:glad→delighted
2.高分句型
(1)As far as I know,it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year,which will impress you greatly.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.(if引导条件状语从句和被动语态结构)
