专题13 写作提分法精讲+单元话题写作精练(含范文)--2023-2024学年六年级英语上册期末专项复习（译林三起）

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期末专题13 写作提分法精讲+单元话题写作精练 (含答案)
第一部分：写作提分法
第一招 “三步三要素法”写假期旅游类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头(引出话题)、具体描述、写结束语三个思维步骤写作，“三要素”指在具体描述时从人物去了哪里、怎么去的、做了什么活动三个方面描写。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头（引出话题) → 表达整体感受I/人名 had a ... holiday
→去了哪里 I/He/She/We went to ...
具体描述 →乘坐哪种交通工具 I/He/She/We went there by bus/train ...
→做了什么事情I/He/She/We visited the Great Wall ...
结束语 → 描述旅游后的心情I/He/She/We had a good/ lovely time in ...
Ⅲ. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型
介绍地点 Beijing, the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the London Eye ... went to ... with
介绍交通工具 bus, bike, plane, train ... went there by ...
具体活动 take photos, go shopping / swimming, climb the mountain, have a picnic, fly the kite ... took photos of ...
表达感受 happy ... had a good time in ...
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
Mary had a happy holiday last summer. She went to Beijing with her parents. They went there
开头 去了哪里 怎么去的
by train. She visited the Great Wall in the morning. They ate Beijing Roast Duck. Her father said it
做了什么事情
was delicious. Then in the afternoon, she went to the Summer Palace. She saw a beautiful lake. There
were some boats on the lake. She had a good time in Beijing.
结尾
提分练1：
请以“My favourite holiday”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
My favourite holiday
第二招 “三步两要素法”写介绍节日类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“三步”指按照开头(引出话题)、具体描述、写结束语三个思维步骤写作，“两要素”指在具体描述时写出节日时间、节日活动。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头（引出话题) → ... is my favourite festival.
→节日时间 It’s usually in ...
具体描述
→节日活动 We / I + 动词（短语）...
结束语 → We / I have a good time on that day.
Ⅲ. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型
介绍喜欢的节日 favourite, festival, the Spring Festival, Thanksgiving Day... My favourite festival is ...... is my favourite festival.
节日时间 January, February, March... It’s usually in ...
节日活动 meal, special, eat, moon cakes, delicious, say thank you, go to see the dragon boat race, do dragon dances, hang lanterns, sing songs We have a special meal.We eat moon cakes.We go to see the dragon boat race.We sing and dance.
抒发对节日的感情 happy, love I love ... We have a good time ...
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It’s usually in January or February. It’s the most
开头 节日时间
important festival in China. It’s Chinese New Year. On New Year’s Eve, we usually have a big
节日活动
family dinner and watch TV together. We eat dumplings. In the morning, I wear my new clothes and
visit relatives and friends. I get lucky money from my parents and grandparents. I love the Spring
Festival. I have a good time at the Spring Festival.
结束语
提分练2：
请以“Plans for Chinese New Year”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
Plans for Chinese New Year
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第三招 “两类法”写规章制度类作文
Ⅰ. 方法指导
“两类法”即抓住关键词：规章制度，用祈使句写应该做什么或禁止做什么。
Ⅱ. 写作思路
开头 → There are lots of rules in ...
→ 应该做的事 以动词原形开头
中间
→ 不应该做的事 以don’t加动词原形开头
结尾 → I want to be a good student. I will follow the rules.
Ⅲ. 经典词句
必备单词、短语 必备句型
开头 rules There are lots of rules in ...
规章制度 keep, quiet, eat, drink, clean, run, talk 肯定祈使句，以动词原形开头否定祈使句，以don’t加动词原形开头
结尾 good student, follow the rules I want to be a good student. I will follow the rules.
Ⅳ. 范文赏析
Computer Room Rules
There are lots of rules in the computer room. Let’s look at some rules.
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开头
1. Keep quiet.
应该做的事 2. Listen carefully in class.
3. Keep it clean.
4. Don’t eat or drink in the computer room.
5. Don’t talk or run in the computer room.
不应该做的事 6. Take good care of the computers.
7. Turn off the computers when you leave.
I want to be a good student. I will follow the rules.
结尾
提分练3：
请以“Public signs”为题，写一篇英文小短文，不少于50个单词。
Public signs
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提分练1：参考范文：
My favourite holiday
My favourite holiday is Children’s Day. It’s on the first of June. On this day, we often have a party at school in the morning. We sing and dance. In the afternoon, my friends and I often go to the park, We can play football and fly kites there. We often have a good time on Children’s Day. Besides, on Children’s Day, my parents often buy some gifts for me. Can you tell me about your favourite holiday
提分练2：参考范文：
Plans for Chinese New Year
Today is 26th January. It’s going to be Chinese New Year. Tomorrow I’m going to clean my house. And I’m going to buy some new clothes and food the day after tomorrow. In the evenng, I will help my mum make some tangyuan and jiaozi. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, I’m going to have a big dinner with my family at home. Then, I will go to shops to buy some flowers. On Chinese New Year’s Day, I am going to visit my friends and we’re going to watch a lion dance in the evening. On the second day of Chinese New Year, I’m going to visit my grandparents. They will give me a big red packet.
I’m going to have a lot of fun at Chinese New Year.
提分练3：参考范文：
Public signs
Today is Sunday. Li Ping is in the library. She is reading a book about signs. It is very interesting. Now she knows that we shouldn’t shout but keep quiet in the library. We also can’t eat or drink in the library. In public places, we can’t litter. And we shouldn’t pick flowers in the garden. If we see a sign of “Danger”, we should be very careful and stay away from it. Now Li Ping can’t wait to let her classmates know more about signs.
第二部分：单元话题写作
Unit 1 话题写作 “童话故事”
【话题分析】
本单元我们学习了如何用一般过去时来描述发生在过去的事情。现在，让我们根据以下提示并发挥想象，也编写一则英文小故事吧。不少于50词。
提示：1.Long long ago,there were/was. 2.He/She liked. 3.He/She could.
【思路点拔】
写作时，首先要介绍故事发生的时间、地，点、人物、起因；然后，按照时间顺序或情节发展顺序详细描述故事的经过，可适当增加人物的心理描写，使故事更生动；最后，写清楚故事的结局。
注意：故事的写作一般采用一般过去时态进行描述，所以句中的谓语动词要用过去式。
【写作练习】
【参考范文】
A magic brush
Long long ago,there was a boy in a small town.He liked drawing very much.He could draw beautiful pictures.One day,he met an old man.The old man was hungry.The boy gave his bread to the old man.The old man gave the boy a brush.The boy could draw real things with it."What a magic brush!"he said.Then he helped many people.How happy he was!
Unit 2 话题写作
【话题分析】
本单元主要涉及的是英文日记的写作和相关内容，英文日记的写作有特定的格式，如下：
星期和日期写在左上角，天气写在右上角；
日期格式为：日月年（英式）或月日年（美式）都可以，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。
如要写星期，星期需紧挨日期，它既可以放在日期前面，也可以放在日期后面，星期也可以省略不写。
天气情况的描述：天气一般用一个形容词如：Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy等表示。
【小试身手】
根据提示，补全下面的日记，介绍某个周末你和你的家人或朋友做了什么。
要求：语言规范，信息内容完整，不少于5句话。
短语提示：cloudy and windy, do my homework, watch a film, do the housework, go to the park by bike, have a picnic, fly a kite, a lot of fun......
Monday, 13th September Last weekend, it . I was very busy. On Saturday, I . . . On Sunday, I . . . I .
【参考范文】
Monday, 13th September Last weekend, it cloudy and windy . I was very busy. On Saturday, I finished my homework first. Then I watched a film with my parents in the Xinghuo cinema. On Sunday, I went to the park by bike with my friends in the morning. Then, I had a picnic there. We flew a kite together. I had a lot of fun.
Unit 3 话题写作
【话题分析】
去年的国庆节假期你是怎样度过的？请以“Last National Day holiday”为题，写一篇英文短文和大家分享一下吧！不少于5句话。
【思路点拨】
【小试身手】
【参考范文】
Last National Day holiday, I went to Shanghai by plane with my parents. It was sunny and cool there. We visited the Bund and the Shanghai Museum. We also went to Disneyland. There were a lot of people. We took many photos there. I ate much delicious food in Shanghai. I like pan-fried pork buns very much. I had a good time during the holiday.
Unit 4 话题写作
【题目要求】
请你根据以下图片提示，以“过去和现在”为主题，写一篇英语小短文对比布朗太太(Mrs Brown)过去和现在在生活方式上的变化。不少于50词。
【小试身手】
【思路点拨】
这是一篇根据图片提示，描写布朗太太过去和现在在生活方式上变化的英语小短文。同学们在写作前，可以先仔细观察所给图片。因为是将过去和现在进行对比，所以在写作时需要注意一般过去时和一般现在时这两种时态的使用，同时还要注意文章是否连贯、完整等。
【参考范文】
Hi, everyone! I am Mike. Five years ago, my mother liked buying new clothes for me. She always bought them from shops. But now she can buy things on the Internet, so she begins to buy clothes for me on the Internet at home. In the past, she used the telephone at home and in the office to call people. Now she uses her mobile phone to call people anywhere.
Unit 5 话题写作 “标识”
【话题分析】
请你根据以下中文提示，写一篇英语小短文，不少于50词。
提示：海伦星期日去图书馆查找有关标识的图书，她从中学到了很多。例如，她知道不同标识表示不同的意思。她还了解了在图书馆里应该保持安静，不能饮食，不能吸烟，也不能乱扔垃圾等。
【思路点拨】
这是一篇根据中文提示写有关标识的英语小短文。同学们在写作时可以先对所给的中文提示进行翻译，然后适当加上一些语句作为补充，使短文更加完整、连贯。由于“海伦”是第三人称单数，因此在写作时需要注意动词的第三人称单数形式的使用，还要注意情态动词后面接动词原形。
【写作练习】
【参考范文】
Today is Sunday. It is sunny in the morning. Helen is in the library now. She wants to know something about signs. Look! She is reading books about signs. She learns a lot from these books. She knows different signs mean different things. She also knows we should keep quiet in the library, we can't eat or drink in it, we can't smoke here and we can't litter either.
Unit 6 话题写作 “保护环境”
同学们，为了保持我们的城市干净，你们将会怎么行动呢 下列图片中的行为你们将会做哪些以及不会做哪些呢 请根据下列图片提示，以短文的形式谈谈你们的计划，可适当发挥想象。
要求：语句通顺，表达正确，不少于50词。
【参考范文】
Our city is so dirty now. To keep our city clean, we shouldn't pour rubbish into the rivers or throw it on the streets. We should put rubbish in the bin. We shouldn't use too many plastic bags either. We should use paper bags or cloth bags. We should plant more trees to keep the air clean. We can also walk or ride bikes to school or to work.
Unit 7 话题写作 “保护地球”
【话题分析】
请你根据以下图片提示,以“How to protect the Earth”为题,用句型“We should/shouldn't ...”写一篇有关保护地球的英语小短文。不少于50词。
How to protect the Earth
【思路点拨】
这是一篇要求根据图片以及参考句型写有关保护地球的英语小短文。同学们在写作时要先弄清楚每幅图片所表达的意思，并运用所提供的句型，适当加上一些语句作为补充，让文章更加完整、通顺。另外，写作时还需要注意可数名词与不可数名词的正确使用。
【写作练习】
【参考范文】
How to protect the Earth
To protect the Earth, we should save and reuse water. We should save energy. We should plant more trees and save wood. We should use paper bags and glass bottles.
To protect the Earth, we should not waste water. We should not drive so much because cars use a lot of energy. We should not cut down too many trees because trees help keep the air clean. We should not use too much plastic.
Unit 8 话题写作 “新年计划”
【话题分析】
春节就要到了，你有哪些计划呢 请你以“我的春节计划”为主题，写一篇英语小短文，不少于50词。
【思路点拨】
这是一篇要求写春节计划的英语小短文。同学们可以先计划好自己在春节期间要做的事，写作时结合春节的特点，并适当补充一些活动以及自己在春节期间的感受，使文章更加完整、通顺。因为这篇文章写的是春节的计划，所以在写作时注意时态需要用一般将来时。
【写作练习】
【参考范文】
Chinese New Year is coming soon. It's the most important festival in China. I'm very excited,because I can do a lot of things. I am going to buy some flowers, new clothes and food before Chinese New Year. I'm going to have a big dinner with my family on Chinese New Year's Eve. My parents are going to give me some red packets. I am going to watch fireworks with my friends. I am going to visit my grandparents on Chinese New Year's Day. I think I will have a good time.
Sunday, 20th September, 2022 sunny
参考词汇：
ShanghaiBund外滩Shanghai Museum上海博物馆Shanghai Oriental Pearl TV Tower上海东方明珠塔pan-fried pork buns(生煎包) Beijingthe Great Wall长城the Summer Palace颐和园the Palace Museum故宫博物院the Bird’s Nest鸟巢the Forbidden City紫禁城 NanjingXuanwu Lake Park玄武湖公园Jiming Temple鸡鸣寺Qinhuaihe River秦淮河The Confucius Temple夫子庙Presidential Palace总统府
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