(共26张PPT)
Reading for Writing (P44-45)
UNIT 4 JOURNEY ACROSS A VAST LAND
Learning objectives
1. to read about a rail journey across Canada
and master the structure of a travel journey
2. to write an email to introduce your travel
experience in Yunfu
2. Journey reviewing
1) Where did Li Daiyu
and her cousin pay a
visit to
2) What impressed them
most
Activity 1 Lead in
→
1. What’ s their next stop
Next, Li Daiyu and Liu Qian were going to visit ____________ and _____________.
Toronto
Montreal
Using Language
2. What kind of text type is this text
Travel journal.
Activity 2 Predicting
Their experience in _________
Their experience in _________
Their time spent on the train
towards _________
Toronto
Montreal
Halifax
Part 1(Para._____)
Part 2(Para._____)
Part 3(Para._____)
1-4
5-9
10
Conclusion 1: The travel journal is developed in the order of ___________.
place/ time
Activity 3 Read for structure
Divide the passage into 3 parts and
sum up the main idea for each part.
Activity 4 Read for content
Where did they go
What did they see
What did they do
How did they feel
Pair work
Toronto
Montreal
What did the girls experience in Toronto
What did the girls experience in Montreal
Experience in Toronto
it is the __________________city
in Canada;
went up the _________;
saw_______ clouds ________ from
the Niagara Falls;
felt ____________
saw skyscrapers _______________
and______________ cars;
met ____________ in Chinatown
Niagara Falls.
What did the girls experience in Toronto
largest and wealthiest
CN Tower
misty
rising
astonished
of glass and steel
old-fashioned
Lin Fei
skyscrapers
What did the girls experience in Montreal
Experience in Montreal
heard people speak English
_______________;
saw signs and ads in__________ ;
felt ____________;
visited ____________;
visited_________ in their
workplaces along St Paul Street;
Montreal is a city with ____________________________ and has ________ Quebec culture and traditions.
with an accent
French
surprised
lovely shops
artists
wonderful sights and sounds
unique
Conclusion 2:When writing a travel journal , we can write something about where we went, what we saw, what we did and how we felt.
Activity 5 Read for language
1. 站在远处,她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾而起的水
雾,惊叹不已。
2. 两个女孩看到很多玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼,还有老式汽
车从身边驶过。
3. 她们惊奇地发现所有的标示牌和广告都是用法文写的,而且很
多人说英语都有口音。
4. 整个下午,她们穿梭于一家家可爱的小店,拜访圣保罗街边
工作坊里的艺术家们。
5. 总的来说,蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市。
Find out the English sentences in the text and underline them in your book.
Group work
1.站在远处,她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾而起的水
雾,惊叹不已。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of
the lake.
2.两个女孩看到很多玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼,还有老式汽
车从身边驶过。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The girls saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel , and
old-fashioned cars rolling by.
3.她们惊奇地发现所有的标示牌和广告都是用法文写的,而且很多人说英语都有口音。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and many people spoke English with an accent.
4.整个下午,她们穿梭于一家家可爱的小店,拜访圣保罗街
边工作坊里的艺术家们。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street.
5.总的来说,蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市。
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Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds.
仿写:
1.站在山顶上,我看到云烟从山谷(valley)升腾而起,惊叹不已。
2.我们看到了青翠的树木和花簇拥盛(flowers in full bloom),还
有很多小鸟在周边唱歌。
3.我惊奇地发现雾气氤氲的(misty)温泉和很多外来游客,而且
他们都讲着不同的方言(dialect)。
4.整个下午,我们穿梭于一家家令人惊叹的商店,欣赏着一件件
精美石雕作品(stone carving works)。
5.总的来说,云浮是一座有着丰富的自然风光和独特文化的
美丽城市。
Imitative writing
Group work
1.站在远处,她们看到湖南边的尼亚加拉大瀑布升腾
而起的水雾,惊叹不已。
————————————————————————
————————————————————————
___________________________________________________________
Standing in the distance, they were astonished
to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.
Windmill Mountains
仿写:站在山顶上,我看到云烟从山谷升腾而起,
惊叹不已。
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Standing on the top of the mountain,I was astonished to see misty clouds rising from the valley.
Imitative writing
2.两个女孩看到很多玻璃和钢筋建造的摩天大楼,还有老
式汽车从身边驶过。
———————————————————————————
__________________________________________________________________
The girls saw hundreds of skyscrapers of glass and steel , and old-fashioned cars rolling by.
仿写:我们看到了青翠的树木和花簇拥盛,还有很多小鸟在周边唱歌。
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We saw many green trees and flowers in
full bloom and many birds singing around.
Great King Mountain National Forest Park
大王山国家森林公园
flowers in full bloom
3.她们惊奇地发现所有的标示牌和广告都是用法文写的,而且很多人说英语都有口音。
———————————————————————————
_________________________________________________________________
They were surprised to see that all the signs and advertisements were in French and many people spoke English with an accent.
仿写:我惊奇地发现雾气氤氲的温泉和很多外来游客,而且他们都讲着不同的方言。
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
I was surprised to see that there
was misty hot spring and many foreign tourists who spoke different dialects.
Xinxing Hot Spring
温泉
misty
4. 整个下午,她们穿梭于一家家可爱的小店,拜访圣保罗街边工作坊
里的艺术家们。
———————————————————————————
_________________________________________________________________
They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visiting artists in their workplaces along St Paul Street.
仿写:整个下午,我们穿梭于一家家
令人惊叹的商店,欣赏着一件件精美
石雕作品。
—————————————————
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
The City of Stone
We spent the afternoon in breathtaking
shops and enjoying the delicate stone carving works.
stone carving works
5. 总的来说,蒙特利尔是一座声色俱佳的城市。
———————————————————————————
Overall, Montreal is a city with wonderful sights and sounds.
仿写:总的来说,云浮是一座有着丰富的
自然风光和独特文化的美丽城市。
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Overall, Yunfu is a beautiful place with
rich natural scenery and unique culture.
Activity 6 Summary
Travel Journal
Introduction:
Body
Ending:
What we saw
what we did
How we felt:
final thoughts
A Clear Goal
stops / attractions
(features of each place)
Personal emotions and thoughts
Impressive activities
In the order of time/place
Descriptive language
假如你是李华,你刚刚从云浮旅游回来。你的英国笔友Linda在网上看了最近在云浮举办的主题为 “你好,云浮” 的演讲比赛,因此想来云浮旅行。请你给她写一封邮件,介绍你的云浮旅游经历。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.谈谈你在云浮的旅游经历;
3.期待她的到来。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Activity 7 Writing
a possible route
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda在网上看了最近在云浮举办的主题为 “你好,云浮” 的演讲比赛,因此想来云浮旅行。请你给她写一封邮件,介绍你的云浮旅游经历。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎; 2.谈谈你在云浮的旅游经历; 3.期待她的到来。
Windmill Mountains
Great King Mountain National Forest Park
大王山国家森林公园
The City of Stone
Xinxing Hot Spring
温泉
Dear Linda,
Absolutely thrilled to know that you would like to pay a visit to Yunfu city, I am more than glad to share my travel experience in Yunfu with you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Overall, Yunfu is a beautiful place with rich natural scenery and unique culture. It’s really worth your visit.
Yours,
Li hua
Checklist Self-assessment Peer -assessment
All information needed is provided and organised in a good order. Yes( ) No ( ) Yes( ) No ( )
Give impressive details and use linking words Yes( ) No ( ) Yes( ) No ( )
Use some useful words and expressions of this passage. Yes( ) No ( ) Yes( ) No ( )
Use appropriate greeting and closing expressions Yes( ) No ( ) Yes( ) No ( )
Use neat handwriting Yes( ) No ( ) Yes( ) No ( )
1. Exchange your draft with a partner.
2. Make an assessment according to the checklist.
Show time
Dear Linda,
Absolutely thrilled to know that you would like to visit Yunfu city, I am more than glad to share my amazing travel experience in Yunfu with you.
Last Saturday afternoon we arrived in Yunfu, our first stop was Luoding Windmill Mountains, where we camped and enjoyed the spectacular windmills. I was surprised to see the misty clouds rising from the valley. The next morning, we explored the Yunan Great King Mountain National Forest Park, which was full of green trees, colorful bloomy flowers and birds singing sweetly around. At noon, visiting the City of Stone was very impressive. We spent the afternoon in breathtaking shops and enjoying the delicate stone carving works. In the evening, we enjoyed some local cuisines, like rice rolls.Before returning home, we decided to have a thorough relaxation at Xinxing hot spring. This was my highlight because misty hot spring gave me a sense of peace, making me feel extremely awesome.
Overall, Yunfu is a hidden gem with rich natural scenery, unique culture and delicious food. It’s really worth your visit. If you decide to visit, don't hesitate to reach out to me for any travel tips.
Yours,
Li hua
Possible Version
Homework
Linda从云浮旅游回到英国后,深感云浮是一个值得一游的城市。于是她决定推荐她在中国留学的朋友Amy去云浮旅游。请你帮Linda 写一封邮件给Amy,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 推荐的理由;
3. 表达祝福。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
No matter how far you fly, never forget where you come from.
Love Yunfu and be proud of Yunfu!