35分写作规范练(二)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·大庆市大庆中学二模]I'm very glad that I spent the meaningful winter holiday pleasant. I finished my homework first. Furthermore, I read some books and develop new interests to enrich my lives. In an addition, I travelled to Thailand to learn more about the world. It expanded my knowledges and enriched my experiences. What's most, I assisted my parents the housework. My parents have contributed so much to you, so I should do that I can to help them. What a meaningful holiday it was!
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·全国乙卷]
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1．简要描述；
2．体验和感受。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目已为你写好。
Learning a New Skill
35分写作规范练（二）
写作
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参考范文：
Learning a New Skill
It is important for us to master some basic living skills to prepare us for our future life. That is why I learned how to cook during the May Day holiday.
Since my mother is skilled at cooking, I decided to learn from her. Early in the morning we bought some ingredients, including some vegetables, meat and a fish in the local market. Once we got back home, I began to wash and cut them carefully. Under the guidance of my mother, I turned on the gas cooker. I first stir fried two vegetables. Then I cooked meat with potatoes. The most difficult task to do was cook fish with tomatoes. However, I finally did it.
The moment I put the dishes on the table, my parents gave me a thumbs up. I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents, which also showed I had grown up.35分写作规范练(六)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·皖江名校高三摸底考试]Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, or most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late thirty, I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10 year old daughter Amy whispers: “Mum, I love that lady's suit！”“Why not telling her about it？” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.
“Excuse me. Madam. You look amazed today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with excite: “Oh thank you, you've made my day.”
Saying something nice can change the direction of someone's day, what costs us nothing but means a lot of to them. Children don't just automatic become kind adults—we need to teach and show them how.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·内蒙古包头市高三上学期开学调研]
即将毕业的你应校刊英语园地栏目的邀请为高一学生写一封倡议书，主题是“如何更好地度过高中的学习生活”，请你用英语书写该稿件，内容包括：
1．身体方面；
2．心理方面；
3．学习方面。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．题目已写好，不计入总词数。
Live a better life here
35分写作规范练（六）
写作
第一节
第二节
参考范文：
Live a better life here
As is known to us all, senior school life is significant, meaningful and unforgettable. How can we live a better senior high school life The following are several aspects which may help you out and serve you well.
Initially, keep it in mind that physical health is the foundation to study. Working out regularly is an efficient approach to building up a strong body. Additionally, mental health contributes to our study and growth. Whenever faced with obstacles in school life, do keep a positive and optimistic attitude. Never hesitate to turn to your teachers or parents for help. More importantly, you may as well set a long term goal. Learning to study effectively and getting involved in class actively will benefit you a lot.35分写作规范练(三)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·安徽省蚌埠市第一次教学质量检查]Going to works by train on a daily basis is never pleasant in the city. But today was different. In the morning I got up a little early than usual to catch the first train. I almost have an opportunity to sit down when the elderly lady got on the train. But I directed her to the seat I had my eye on and she thanked for me. A few stops later as I was about leave the train, she gently stopped me. And a moved act took place—she gave me a smile card! Which seems rather small or unimportant in life really matter!
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·安徽省阜阳市高三质量统测]
假定你是李华，你的美国网友Mike的父母希望他加入学校篮球队，但他不喜欢团队运动。他来信寻求你的建议。请用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1．你对团队运动的看法；
2．你的建议。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to hear from you and I'd like to give you my opinion about team sports.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
35分写作规范练（三）
写作
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参考范文：
DearMike，
I'mgladtohearfromyouandI'dliketogiveyoumyopinionaboutteamsports.
Team sports are sports that offer many great benefits. Firstly, they can improve your leadership abilities. It is essential for every player in any team sport to be aware of their roles in the leadership. Secondly, they can promote responsibility because every player should be responsible for the whole team. Thirdly, they can hugely enhance a child's social life since he or she is going to make many new friends. Team sports also boost self esteem and therefore increase happiness. There is a Chinese saying, “The person who does not listen to an elder's advice gets his or her leg broken.” So I think you should do as your parents wish.
Bestwishes.
Yours，
LiHua35分写作规范练(四)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·安徽省第一次教学质量检测]There is a extremely annoying phenomenon that many students litter in our school. Not only it bad for our health but it also makes our school more and less beautiful. Therefore, our school is going to hold an activity themed “Stop Littering in Our School”. The activity will surely leave an unforgettably impression on those who take part on it. In the activity, we will first to walk around the school to see however serious the littering problem is. After that, we will be divided into groups to pick up rubbishes. Through this activity, we are expected to realize the importance of protect the living environment in our school but stop littering in our school.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·安徽省蚌埠市高三三模英语试题]
假定你是李华， 参加了你校英语俱乐部组织的英语名著诵读分享(Reading and Sharing English Classics)活动， 收获颇多。请你在学校英语俱乐部公众号上发文， 对组织者表示感谢。内容包括：
1．活动经历；2.感想收获；3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右， 开头结尾已给出， 不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
35分写作规范练（四）
写作
第一节
第二节
DearSir/Madam,
I am very grateful to you for your unselfish work in organizing the activity Reading and Sharing English Classics. I have taken part in the activity and benefited a lot from it.
I have read some English classics and shared my views with other club members, from which I have a better understanding of western culture. In addition, I have a good command of more English knowledge, thus improving my reading and communicative competence. In the meanwhile, I have made many new friends.
In my opinion, it is interesting and meaningful. Hope for more activities of this kind. Thanks again!
Yourssincerely,
LiHua35分写作规范练(五)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·哈尔滨市高三大联考]
A recent survey has shown that are the hobbies of the 1，500 students in our school.
The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments because they can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. To our surprise, a number of the students paying much attention to reading is small. It only takes up for 12%, if reading is the best way to gain knowledge.
Therefore, more students are strongly advised take up reading. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·皖江名校高三摸底考试]
假定你是李华。志愿者们最近对你校学生的周末时间分配进行了调查。请你结合下表内容，给校报英语专栏编辑Mr. Johnson写封信，反映这次调查的结果。内容要求：
1．描述图表内容；
2．分析所反映的问题；
3．提出你的看法。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Johnson，
Recently volunteers have conducted a survey about how the students spend their weekends.
Yours，
Li Hua
35分写作规范练（五）
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参考范文：
DearMr. Johnson，
Recentlyvolunteershaveconductedasurveyabouthowthestudentsspendtheirweekends.
As can be seen from the pie, among the surveyed students, about 51% of their time is spent on homework while online activities account for nearly 35%. Meanwhile, doing physical exercise takes up about 7% of their time, sharing the same percentage with reading books.
The survey certainly leaves me deep in thought. Too much homework leaves the students no time for physical exercise or reading, affecting their health and further development. Even worse, many of the surveyed waste much time online, some even addicted to computer games.
So more attention should be given to this case. Students should have more freedom to something more meaningful, rather than just doing boring repetitive exercises. Otherwise, it may have a negative effect on our future.
Yours，
LiHua35分写作规范练(一)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
[2023·全国乙卷]Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color wouldn't wash out.
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
[2023·河南省洛阳市高三二模]
你校正在组织英文作文比赛， 请以“How to be an outstanding student”为题， 写一篇短文参赛， 内容包括：
1．你心中优秀学生的标准；2.如何成为优秀的学生。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．题目和首句已为你写好。
How to be an outstanding student
Every student wants to be outstanding.
35分写作规范练（一）
写作
第一节
第二节
参考范文：
How to be an outstanding student
Everystudentwantstobeoutstanding. We students are the builders and masters of the country. It is important for us to know how to be an outstanding student. An outstanding student, I think, should be diligent in his studies. The harder he studies, the more he will increase his knowledge. Without enough knowledge, we cannot make great contributions to the modernization of our country. To take care of one's own body is another important thing for outstanding students to do. Anyone, who hasn't got a strong body, can do nothing for his country, even if he has much knowledge. Lastly, to cultivate one's own virtue is most important. Virtue is the essence of a noble and good character. When learned people go astray, they do more harm than good to society. We should draw lessons from this. I believe you will be excellent students.
