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[2023·高三名校联考信息优化卷] People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big trees covering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty!
[2023·郑州市高三质量预测] I have always wanted to be cheerleader. The other day, I had a chance to try out for my school's cheerleading team. It was a real hard try out. Firstly, we had to dancing up and down around the basketball court for 20 minutes. The coach showed us how to move, and then we try very hard. Secondly, we practised singing a shorter fight song about the school basketball's team. Finally, some of the stronger girls had to lift their partner. The other girls jumped very high and cheered so loudly. I think I did quite well in the try out, though many of the other girls were even better. I'm not so sure that I will make the cheerleading team or not this year. But anyhow, I will not lose my heart even if I am not accepted.
[2023·成都市高三第一次诊断性检测]As a volunteer, I get the pleasure of spending my free time do something I love. I share my passion for the natural world with anyone would like to listen. It can be as simply as pointing out the direction of a café. It can also be about using our knowledge to inspire people to think more about a natural world around them. Over the years, I've seen thousand of children and young people visiting to the zoo. I knew that I have a role in helping them learn about protecting the world they live in. It reminds me of what I have been inspired by them to become a conservationist. Knowing that in my own way I can make a difference have always been my inspiration.
[2023·安徽省高三第二次质量检测] In your e mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What's more, children or parents both benefit from having some day to day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.
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[2023·甘肃省第一次高考诊断考试]I am a 18 year old middle school student. I seldom helped my parents for the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I began to think about what to do to help. Last Sunday, parents went out shopping. I suddenly got an idea: why not to give the rooms a thoroughly clean Firstly, I collected all the books and other things and put it in place. Then I wiped the dusty off all the furniture. Before that, I sweep and mopped the floors. At that very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tiring as I was, I felt very happy then.
[2023·成都市高三诊断性检测]On previous birthdays, my family would give me gifts but invite me to eat outside. I thought there would be no different this year. I went home after school as usual. But when I stepped into the house, I was heard “Surprise! Happy Birthday！” All of my family and friends were there. My mom brought a birthday cake making by herself. I wouldn't forget that moments. I was extremely happily and almost cried. My father promised to take care the street cat I had mentioned. It is the best birthday gift we have ever had. My father's birthday was coming. I'm planning to hold the wonderful birthday party for him.
[2023·长春市高三质量监测] With the final examination approached, we Senior 3 students suffer from great mental pressure. Therefore, our school will hold an event, the theme of it is about mental health.
As scheduled, the event will be held in the lecture hall on next Sunday afternoon. There will be various activity. First of all, a lecture on what to deal with pressure will be given by a psychology professor. Beside, a debate on whether pressure is good or not will expected among the students. At last, we will enjoy a play performing by the students of the psychology club, showing how to strike a balance between pressure and motivation.
I firm believe mental health is of great importance to everyone, especially to we Senior 3 students.
[2023·高三名校联考信息优化卷] When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, say that I was so young to take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didn't give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Following my parents' direction, I've learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days where we accompanied each other.
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[2023·贵阳市高三监测考试] If you ask me what was the great challenge for me in 2021, I would put physics on the top of the list. Before the new term begin, I thought learn physics would be a piece of cake. Therefore, when the course began, keeping up the teacher in class became difficult for me. Seeing the other classmate doing quite well in the class, I felt really worried. Gradually I lost my interest in it.
My teacher felt my worries. He often came to talk to me after class, asking that I had any questions with the course. With your help, I began to make a progress, little by little.
I learned a lot from this experience. That is, face my weaknesses bravely, and never gave up.
[2023·洛阳市高三统一考试] I love sports. My friends and I often play football in my out of class activities. Today I finish my PE test. As a boy I was joined in two parts, the long jump and the 1000 meter race. I was better at the 1000 meter race, where took me 5 minutes and 20 seconds. But I didn't do well at the long jump. I only jumped 4.5 meter. I love sports very much because they can not only make my body stronger, and also let me keep optimistic all the time. While exercised, I can get a strong sense of successful. I can get excited and confident. In word, sports are my favorites.
[2023·太原市高三统一考试] When I was nine, I learn to swim from my father, who worked as a swimming instructor. At first I was afraid of entering the water and could hard breathe. I was about to give up when my father let myself calm down. He told me with patient that swimming would be easy if I put my heart into it and that I should try my best to doing it. Finally, with help of my father, I practiced again and again. For my joy, my father's word worked and I could swim by myself. From now on, I realized that practice makes it perfect. As time goes by, I have become a professional swimmer.
[2023·南充市高考适应性考试] Nowadays, we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere. They can't stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
Actually, phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in the class. On the other hand, using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up. Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us. Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable, can you realize the happiness of life.
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[2023·全国甲卷]I used to afraid of insects, but last Friday's biology class make a big change in me. In that class, Miss Zhao, our biology teacher, showed we insects on stamps. The bees, butterfly and many other insects looked lovely and beautifully on the stamps. Miss Zhao told us the names of the insects or described their living habits. She even played some recordings of their singing, what was fun. Now, I've come to love those of small living things. In the evening, when I take the walk in the school garden, the singing of insects become more meaningful to me.
[2023·东北三省高三高考模拟试卷] My aunt was a biology professor. When I was young, she was used to take me to the biology lab. There I saw mouse, cats and other animals. My aunt also gave me lessons in the wild places. She often takes me for a walk in the backyard that we would catch frogs and snakes, and find fireflies in the sky. She seemed know everything about wildlife. In these days, think about my aunt and her influence on her life, I feel very lucky. I am gratefully that I've got the chance to learn for her. She helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and death around me.
[2023·云南省高三复习统一检测] I was jogging in a park yesterday while I caught sight of a handbag on a bench. Obviously, someone had left it there careless. I opened the handbag to see what was inside. I found a wallet, some keys and a notebook in it. Luckily, there was a telephone number in notebook. I immediately dial the number and a lady answered the call. On hearing that I said, she told me she would come back at once. Ten minute later, she arrived by taxi. Having been confirmed she was the owner, I gave the handbag back for her. The owner expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly. I felt very delighting.
[2023·成都市高三第三次诊断性检测]
Dear Ricky，
How's it going I've been busy planned for the Sports Day with my friends, who took place last Friday. Our team was training the final of the 4×400 relay race. The big day came，and I was a bit anxious. So are my friends. I, captain of our team, had to mask our worries while relieving theirs. The meeting started punctual at 8 am. When it was our turn, I was silently prayed and prepared to run. I was the last runner. Jerry, our second lap runner, lowered the stick and missed a few second. Still, believe it or not, I poured all I had into the final lap, but we won! What a exciting day !
Yours，
Ryan
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