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高中英语写作之推荐信
Letter of Recommendation
Introduction to a tourist attraction
推荐旅游景点
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which places you want to go
tropical island
in the mountains
in a jungle
out in the grasslands
Q:Why you want to go there and make notes.
1. 地理位置在哪
2. 景点特色有哪些
3. 景点气候好不好
4.景点交通通达不通达
防城景点
美食
美食
特产
海鸭蛋
红姑娘
金华茶
公交
旅游推荐信
假如你是李华,你的朋友Tom给你写信说要来防城港旅游,他想请你推荐一些旅游景点和当地特色美食,请你给他回信并推荐旅游景点给他。
写作要点:
1.地点,交通
2.活动:旅游景点和美食
3.表达期望和祝愿
第一步:审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 样题分析
第几人称?(person)
文章的题材是什么?
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的?(时态) (when)
第一人称
推荐信
推荐信
一般现在时
第二步:有用相关词组或句型
首段:
(1) I'm glad to know that you're going to ... I'd like to give you a brief introduction to it.
(2) I am more than happy to have the opportunity to recommend +(旅游景点) to you.
(3)What a pleasant surprise to hear that...... It is my pleasure to give my recommendation to you to visit the city.
(4)I am happy to hear from your letter, Knowing that..., I would like to recommend...
正文
过渡词:
first of all, firstly , secondly, In addition , additionally , what's more , moreover , most importantly, apart from...
First day, Second day, The last day...
结尾
(1) if you consider my recommendation/ideas, you will
be happy from your holiday.
(2) I suppose you will never regret coming to...
(3) Why not give it a try I am looking forward to your
coming.
What a pleasant surprise to hear that......
It is my pleasure to give my recommendation to
you to visit......
On the First day, Why not...... And the second day,How about...... Besides, you can...... The last day, you will find it worthwhile to visit .......
I suppose you’ll never regret coming to ......
参照模板
Start your writing
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Knowing that you are going to visit my city, I'd like to share something about Fang Cheng Port to you. _______________________________________________________________
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If you need more information, please let me know. I think your visit will be wonderful and rewarding.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
范文
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your e-mail. Knowing that you are going to visit my city, I'd like to share something about Fang Cheng Port to you.
On the First day, Why not take a bus to the Bailang beach.It has a beautiful beach in which you can take a bath. And the second day,How about going to the golden beach where you can enjoy the wonderful sunrise and sunset togerther. Besides, It is a good way to understand the Jing culture in Wan Wei. And the last day, you will find it worthwhile to visit the Yuan Bo Yuan in Gang Kou.
Visiting it, you will find that many special local architectures will be introduced in Guang Xi province ,such as Yu lin, He chi, Liu zhou and so on. The more you understand it, the more you like our Guang Xi.
If you need more information, please let me know. I think your visit will be wonderful and rewarding.
Yours sincerely, Li hua
亲爱的汤姆,
很高兴收到你的邮件。得知你们要来我的城市,我想和你们分享一下防城港的情况。
第一天,为什么不乘公共汽车去白浪滩呢 它有一个美丽的海滩,你可以在那里日光浴。第二天,我们去金滩,在那里你们可以一起享受美妙的日出和日落。此外,这也是一个很好的方式去了解万尾的京族文化。最后一天,你会发现很值得去参观港口的园博园。参观它,你会发现许多特别的地方建筑将介绍在广西省,如玉林,河池,柳州等。你越了解它,你就越喜欢我们的广西。
如果你需要更多的信息,请让我知道。我认为您的访问将是愉快和有益的。
你的真诚 , 李华
Homework
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