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建议信
首段:问候+写信背景+写信目的(点题,引出下文)
主体(中间段):2到3个建议 (写明建议的内容、原因、预期效果)(建议使用总分结构)
末段:希望建议有效,祝愿对方顺利解决问题以及期待回信
写作结构:(三段式!!!!)
1.问候(自我介绍)+写信背景+写信目的(点题)
Learning/Knowing/Hearing that you are now having trouble/difficulty/ problems doing..., I am more than sorry. 了解到/听说你。。。有困难,我深表同情/抱歉。
I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 读过你的来信后我了解到你在...有困难
After reading your letter, I am sorry to know that … 读过你的来信后,很抱歉了解到。。。
问候:
How are you doing?/ How is everything going?/Is everything going well with you?
写信背景:
1.问候(自我介绍)+写信背景+写信目的(给予建议)
I am writing to provide/offer a series of suggestions on...
I can’t wait to provide/offer a series of suggestions on...
写信目的:
Learning/Knowing/Hearing that you are now having trouble/ difficulty/ problems doing..., I am writing to give /offer you some constructive advice. 了解到/听说你…有困难,我写信来给你一些建设性建议。
写信背景目的相结合
2.有逻辑列举合理性建议+建议的理由/可预见的效果(细节展开)
【引出建议】
Here are a few tips/suggestions/advice to help you. 这有一些会帮助到你的建议
Here are several useful and practical suggestions for you. 这有一些有帮助并且实际的建议
Some suggestions can be listed as follows. 建议如下
In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来,采取以下行动很明智
【说明具体建议】
If I were you, I would… 我要是你的话,我会。。。
I think it would be more beneficial if you could 我觉得如果你做。会更有益
It would be a wise choice if you... , through which you will ... 如果你..是明智之举,这样你会。。。
It would be a good idea if... 如果。。。是个好主意
Only when you……can you….. 只有。。。你才会。。。
It is highly recommended that 强烈建议的
It is +adj +for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说是........
There is no doubt that.... 毫无疑问的是........
Doing sth is good way/choice for sb to do sth.做...对某人来说是一个好方式/选择。
2.有逻辑列举合理性建议+建议的理由/可预见的效果(细节展开)
3. 期待对方接受建议,表示祝愿以及期待回信
I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you. If there is anything else I can do, please do let me know. Wish you a happy holiday.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful. Look forward to your early reply.
建议信常用常用关联词
正文衔接词
First,....
What’s more..../Moreover,....
In addition,....
Last but not least,....
第一段:背景+目的
1. 得知你最近因为发现自己在发胖而感到苦恼,我乐意给你一些关于减肥的建议。
Knowing that you are anxious about your weight, I am writing to offer you some constructive advice on losing weight.
第二段 建议+理由
1健康饮食很重要;多吃蔬菜和水果, 少吃肉。注意饮食合理,营养均衡;
2经常锻炼,保证睡眠充足;
3调整心态
1。健康饮食很重要;多吃蔬菜和水果, 少吃肉。注意饮食合理,营养均衡;
短语
keep a balanced diet 保持均衡的饮食习惯
have a healthy diet 有一个健康的饮食习惯
句型
It is important for sb. to do sth.
You are supposed to do sth.
It is strongly recommended that...
Doing sth is good way/choice for sb to do sth.
you should do sth. ... instead of doing
1。健康饮食很重要;多吃蔬菜和水果, 少吃肉。注意饮食合理,营养均衡; 避免吃含糖量和脂肪量多得食物。
It is important for you to have a healthy diet. It is strongly recommended that you should eat more vegetable and fruit instead of more meat.
You are supposed to keep a balanced diet. I recommend that you eat more vegetable and fruit and avoid eating the food with a lot sugger or fat.
A balanced diet is good way/choice for you to lose weight.
You should stop eatting junk food. Instead, you should add some healthy food to your meal, such as vegetable and fruit.
In this way, you will be more happier and healthier.
2经常锻炼,保证睡眠充足; 多锻炼是有帮助的;
短语:
锻炼 take exercise/ do some sports/work out
做有规律的锻炼
take regular exercise/ work out on a regular basis
强身健体 build up your body
减压 make you relaxed\release you from stress
句型:
Why not do sth.
doing sth can not only help you do sth, but also do sth.
It is helpful to do sth.
the more... the more
为什么不做一些有规律的运动,如慢跑、游泳和打羽毛球等?运动不仅能帮助你减肥,还能让你放松/释放压力。
Why not do some regular sports such as jogging, swimming and playing badminton,etc Working out on a regular basis can not only help you lose weight but also make you relaxed/release you from stress.
多运动是有帮助的。你锻炼得越多,你就越苗条。
It is helpful to take more exercise. The more exercise you take, the slimmer you are.
你最好多做一些运动,如跑步和游泳。锻炼是减肥和保持健康的最好方法。
You had better do more sports such as running and swimming. Working out is the best way to lose weight and keep bealthy.
3调整心态
You need being positive.Health is far more important than wealth and wisdom.
你需要保持积极的心态。健康远比财富和智慧重要。
第三段:期待对方接受建议,表示祝愿以及期待回信
I do hope that you’ll find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Knowing that you are anxious about your weight, I am writing to offer you some constructive advice on losing weight.
Some suggestions can be listed as follows. First, it is important for you to have a healthy diet. It is strongly recommended that you should eat more vegetable and fruit instead of more meat.In this way, you will be more happier and healthier.What’s more, why not do some regular sports such as jogging, swimming and playing badminton,etc Working out on a regular basis can not only help you lose weight but also release you from stress.Last but not least, you need being positive. Health is far more important than wealth and wisdom.
I do hope that you’ll find my suggestions helpful. Looking forward to hearing good news from you.
第二步:构思---建议信结构及内容要点
三段式:
第一段: 点明主题:表明写作意图,
(有时要简单介绍自己)。
第二段: 陈述事实,提出建议,给出理由
(是什么,为什么,怎么样)
第三段: 总结全文,表明希望
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