(共55张PPT)
高考写作
一、高考英语作文评分
第五档(21~25分)
①覆盖所有内容要点
②应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
③语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力
④有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
二、满分作文的要求
1.覆盖全部要点——审题
2.结构合理,详略得当,过渡自然——行文
3.高级词汇,复杂句式,语法正确——积累
4.合理想象——加分
三、高分写作秘诀
卷面整洁 ——好印象
明确分段 ——好形式
要点全面 ——好给分
虎头凤尾 ——好内容
巧用连接 ——好逻辑
好词好句 ——好语言
明确分段——好形式
“TEEC”结构:
topic sentence
explanation
example
concluding sentence
【例1】(2012年全国卷)
假如你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营。欢
迎各国学生参加。请写封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括 :
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)
2.参加意图(介绍中国,了解其他国家)
3.希望获准 100个字左右作文题目!
Topic sentence:
I am ... who is from ... .
I was informed by an announcement from Internet that there will be a summer camp in Singapore this vocation. Therefore, I am very eager to write to you to apply to this camp.
Explanation:
As for the reasons, for one thing… For another…
What’s more…
Example:
From my perspective, it will be a great opportunity for me to…,
which will also improve.... Besides, I can also… . All of this
sound so wonderful.
Concluding sentence:
It will be my great honor if I can …, looking forward to your
good news.
虎头——好内容
1. It is universally acknowledged that…
2. As a proverb says, “Everything has two sides”. On the one hand, …; On the other hand, …
3. With the development of economy, in recent decades, individuals in increasing number are immersed in doing …
凤尾——好内容
1. It is of great value for me to be in possession of the opportunity to do sth., and my sincere expectation is that I will bear it in my mind all the time.
2. With the development of society, … So it’s urgent and necessary to… If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.
巧用连接——好逻辑
时间顺序: at the same time, all of a sudden, afterwards
递进: besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)
转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反),after all(毕竟)
总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)
强调: indeed(确实) certainly(一定) surely(确定) above all(尤其)
对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the
other hand
好词好句——好语言
高级词汇
复杂句式
高考十大必用句型
1. 我认为... ...
I think.../In my opinion, ...
From my point of view,...
As far as I'm concerned, ...
On a personal level,...
高考十大必用句型
2. 感谢你...
Thank you for ...
I want to give my sincere thanks and gratitude to sb.
并列结构表达法:
worthy and wealthy
pleasant and precious
safe and sound
memorable and meaningful
horable and respectable
colorful and wonderful
高考十大必用句型
3. 越来越多的…
more and more
Sth. is in increasing number.
a growing number of sth. is …
例:现在,有越来越多的人使用互联网。
In recent decades, a growing number of people are using Internet.
高考十大必用句型
4. 有机会…
have a chance to do sth.
own/possess an opportunity to do sth
be in possession of the opportunity to do sth./that…
例:很高兴有机会给您写信。
I appreciate being in possession of the opportunity to write to you.
.
高考十大必用句型
5. 我们将尽最大努力…
We will try our best to…
We will make every effort to…
We will spare no effort to…
例:我们将尽最大努力来保护环境。
We will spare no effort to protect the environment.
高考十大必用句型
6. 做…是很重要的
Doing sth. is important./It is important for sb. to do sth.
It is of great importance/neccessity/difficulty for sb. to do sth.
可替换的形容词:
necessary(必要的); difficult(困难的); vital(极重要的); useful(有用的);
helpful(有帮助的); essential(基本的); valuable(有价值的);
indispensable(非常必要的); challenging(有挑战的); beneficial(有益的);
convenient(方便的)
高考十大必用句型
7. 我希望所有人…
I hope all the people…
My sincere expectation is that individuals…
高考十大必用句型
8. 如果…
If…
Provided that… (过去分词做状语)
Assuming that…
Given that… (考虑到...)
On condition that…(如果)
高考英语王牌句型
1. There is no denying/doubt that… 不可否认…
2. We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
3. It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
高考英语王牌句型
4. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
Under no circumstance ... / Neither can we...... 绝不能
5. When it comes to playing computer games, he will be very excited. 当一谈到…时,…就…
6. Given/Concerned her qualifications, I think she is suited to the job. 考虑到…
高考英语王牌句型
7. to be frank; to be honest; to tell the truth; to be safe; to be short; to make things worse; to start with
8. That is the reason why I don’t like you. 那就是...的原因
The reason is that...
9. It is through reading that we get our knowledge. 强调句型
高考英语王牌句型
10. A good idea suddenly occurred/struke to me that I could use my
pocket money to buy a present for my mother.
It occurred/struke to me that… 某人突然想到…
11. No sooner had I arrived home then I started to read.
Hardly…when… 一…就…
书信体点睛
虎头———猪肚———凤尾
问候 包含要点1 客套
自我介绍 包含要点2 格式
背景 包含要点3
目的
开头段落
1. 问候:
2. 自我介绍(同位语+定从/分词)
I am LiHua, a 17-year-old boy currently studying in Xinhua high school. Born in a family of writers, I’m keen on reading novels and writing poems.
开头段落
3. 故事背景(我之所以写信,是因为…)
I was informed by…that…
I was kept up to date on…
I learned in your micro-blog that…
4. 目的(我想申请 /邀请/道歉/求助……)
I’m writing this letter to…
书信体作文
建议信
申请信
感谢信
道歉信
邀请信
求助信
咨询信
告知信
书信体作文
1. 建议信
I am writing these letters to offer you some suggestions.
2. 申请信
I am writing to apply for the job/position/chance/opporunity.
3. 感谢信
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude/appreciation to you.
书信体作文
4. 道歉信
I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
5. 邀请信
I am writing to invite you to join/participate in the...
6.求助信
I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
建议信
开头段:I am writing these letters to offer you some suggestions.
中间段:
Here are several suggestions for you.
(1) You should/ought to do sth.
(2) You are supposed to do sth.
(3) Why not do sth.
(4) If I were you, I would do sth.
(5) It is high time that you did sth.
建议信
结尾段:
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is anything
else I can do for you, please let me know.
建议信
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为
学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100--120词的信,
推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
建议信
Dear Mr Wang,
_____________________________________________
_______________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Yue
建议信
Dear Mr. Wang,
(故事背景+写信目的)
Informed that our library is going to buy books, I am writing this letter
to offer some suggestions.
建议信
提建议:
1. What we need most are popular science books. Owing to…( Because…)
2. In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration.
3. That is why I recommend another category of books:literary books. As for the reasons,…
建议信
结尾段:
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. If there is
anything else I can do for you, please let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
申请信
开头段:
I am writing to apply for the job/position/ chance/opportunity.
中间段:
I have the confidence that I can handle the job well.
As for the reasons, for one thing, … for another, …
结尾段:
Hopefully, the chance would be offered to me. If so, I would devote all
my effort and wisdom to your company/this activity.
申请信
申请项目:志愿者、支教老师、夏令营、记者
申请理由:
(1) 经验类:
① Living in Ottawa/Seattle for half a year as an exchange studen, I do well in English speaking and writing.
② In 2008, I served as a volunteer in the Beijing Olympic Games, therefore, I was equipped with adequate relevant experience and social skills.
申请信
(2) 知识类:
① Once I won the second prize in the CCTV national English speaking contest.
② In my spare time, I used to communicate with my foreign friends through the Internet, exchanging ideas on cultural difference and current affairs.
申请信
(3) 性格类:
① I’m also the vice monitor of my class, which has equipped me with a strong body and the ability of leadership.
② Being the team leader of our school basketball team, I get along well with my teammates, enjoy many outstanding awards and a harmonious interpersonal relationship in my team.
邀请信
开头段:
I am writing to invite you to join the....
中间段:
Here are several relevant details about this activity.
The activity will be in…(地点) on the afternoon of … (时间)
The theme of the activity is XXX which is undoubtedly both meaningful and entertaining.
Not only will we do 1, but we will also do 2 and 3.
邀请信
结尾段:
If you need any further information, please send an email to XXX or call me at XXX. And I am looking forward to your presence.
邀请信
范文赏析(2017全国III卷)
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1. 球队活动;
2. 报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going The table-tennis team of our school is admitting new players. I’m
sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports. Therefore, I’d like to
invite you to join the team. Now the information in detail.
The team will hold a range of activities, including some training and matches. And some
world-famous players will be invited to give lessons. If you are interested in it, you may
either send an email to 123456@ or sign up in person. The deadline is June 25th,
2017.
I sincerely hope you could join us. Don’t hesitate to ask me if you have any questions.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
告知信
开头段:
I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
中间段:罗列具体要点
结尾段:
If you need any further information, please send an email to XXX or call me at XXX.
告知信
范文赏析(2019全国II卷)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛
内容包括:
1. 比赛信息;
2. 赛前准备;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.
The match will take place in our school gym on the morning of July 8th. We will play against
a team from Lingnan High School. For good performance in the match, we must get fully
prepared and practice hard. So starting tomorrow, we all need to train for two hours after
school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training and have a
healthy diet to keep fit.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we have every hope of beating Lingnan.
Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
书信体作文
书信体作文:应用为主,传情为辅
开门见 山,直奔主题
不简单罗列要点,用好高级连接词
分词分词、倒装倒装、强调、从句等语法点依然可以灵活运用。
好词好句是“换”出来的
1.给 give offer
2.想 think emphasize
3.想要 want be eager to/long for
4.感谢 thanks appreciate/gratitude
5.希望 hope expect
6.应该 should be supposed to
7.真是的 ture the case
好词好句是“换”出来的
8.好的 good remarkable/outstanding/splendid/fabulous
9.开心的 happy cheerful
10.重要的 important vital
11.困难的 difficult challenging
12.必要的 necessary indispensable
13.有用的 useful contribute to/beneficial
14.基本的 basic essencial
好词好句是“换”出来的
15.现在 nowadays in recent decades
16.机会 chance opportunity
17.人们 people/persons individuals
18.一…就 as soon as on doing/hardly when/…
19.想出 think of come up with
20.节约 save set aside
21.提到 mention refer to
好词好句是“换”出来的
22. 非常 very more than
23.一点 a little/bit a handful of
24.有时 sometimes occasionally
25.如果 if on condition that/assuming that
26.不得不做 have to do can’t help but
好词好句是“换”出来的
27.对…感兴趣 be interested in be absorbed in/be caught up in
28.忙于做某事 be busy doing be rushed off one’s feet
29.在…期间 during in the course of
30.大多数 most of the majority
31 只要 as long as as long as
32.例如 for example for instance
33.事实上 in fact as a matter of fact