2015年中考英语写作辅导课件

课件71张PPT。2015中考作文辅导 basic rules
(写作考试规则) search（审）
list（列）
add(加: 开头和结尾)
connect(连)
beautiful(美：谚语/例子) 如何度假
调查报告
倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel审(search)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 A lot of people travel.
Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents.
A few people work.
Enjoy your vacation.列(list)How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning）
A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连(connect)Writing skills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用词汇
甚至善用高级词汇Which is better? 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach.
B They enjoyed the music on the beach.Which is better? 我希望你能帮助我。A I wish you can help me.
B I’m looking forward to your help.Which is better? 他们很早就到了。A They arrived early.
B They arrived as early as they could.Which is better? 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.
B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.A I think learning English is interesting.
B I find it really fun to learn English . 我认为学英语很有趣。 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.
B It’s our duty to protect the environment.方法二:活用多种句型Writing skills（“写”的技巧） 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。A She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C She is so young that she can’t carry the …
D She is not old enough to carry the… 方法三:妙用关联词Writing skills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more
not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short关联词(connection words)Let’s try_____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.
He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______.
We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking.
_____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled.
ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt lastHow do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连(connect)美(beautify) We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report.
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to
get away from the busy world during the holidays.
Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV
or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.
However, a few people have to work.

As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes
Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People
who relax well work well.美(beautify) And to
visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（谚语）/saying加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise…
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoy some proverbs
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Think twice before you do.
4.Do as the Romans do.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,
there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs
7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
9.All roads lead to Rome.
10.Never too old to learn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）Writing skills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
结尾：提出倡议或号召Let’s …
Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!
As students, we should start from ourselves. Don’t wait. Join us now!
Start to join us now!
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!
How amazing! I can’t wait!
Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!
Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!
Dear Mary,
I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you.
Yours
… ________________, I think reading English every day and listening
to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______,
you can join the English club to practice English. You know,
“Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you
to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your
listening skill._________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope
what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenYour turn to go for it!（check）Who is the most important in our life?（一）内容要点：
1．Jack的想法(3分)
2．个人的想法（至少三个想法）。(3分)
（二）各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档（很好）：（15~13分）完全完成试题规定的任务。
①信息全。②语言可读性强，试题结构基本正确，有少量错误。
第四档（好）：（12~10分）完全完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言基本正确，有一些错误。
第三档（还好）：（9~7分）基本完成试题规定的任务。
①有主要信息。②语言尚可读，有一些错误，但尚能达意。
第二档（较差）：（6~4分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务。
①信息不全。②只有个别句子可读，语言错误较多，且不能达意。
第一档（差）：（3~1分）未能完成试题规定的任务。
能表达有关信息。②只有几个有关单词，语言错误很多，不能达意。
问题1. 时态
2. people/person
3. 三单
4. 连词：but，because，for
5. 中文式的表达：give me life, I can’t leave my mother, My mother cooks breakfast and dinner everyday.
6. 介词：about Jacl
7. can takes
8. It’s help me a lot
9. face the difficult
10. 正能量 girlfriend?
11. My classmate Jack, his ideas: ……
12. 代词；介词 took he to parks on he free times, him takes Jack to parks and play chess together
13. That’s make Jack happy.
14. Sometimes in difficult. His grandfather teachs he to make his own …
15. 词性。When I after school
16. 结尾画蛇添足：We have own people who is the most important and we love them forever.
That’s all
That’s why he thinks that.
17. But I think my father is the most important for me. Although my grandfather is kind for me.
18. Finally, he can play many thinks with me. So I very love he.
19. It is no doubt that mom give birth to me.
20. When I am success and happy
21. that的用法：His grandfather loves Jack very much that often takes Jack to parks..
She always cheers me up and encourages that helped me learn and get over difficulties.
22. May be most people will think of their parents, but our Jack’s idea is his grandfather
23. I know he only wants me the best.
24. I hope he can alive until 100-year-old.Who is the most important in our life?Recently we have a discussion about who is the most important in our life. Jack thinks his grandfather is the most important in his life. His grandfather takes him to the park on weekends. He thinks it is good for the kid to be close to the nature. Playing chess is Jack’s favorite sport. His grandfather always plays chess with him. When Jack is not sure what to do next, his grandfather would tell him to do what he thinks is right. His grandfather teaches him to make decisions for himself. It helps Jack a lot in his life.
In my opinion, my father is the most important in my life. My father doesn’t tell me what I should do and what I shouldn’t do. He just does what he thinks he should do. From him, I know I should be on time. It’s better to get somewhere earlier and not to let others wait for you. Secondly, be kind to others, think for others and don’t bother others. What’s more, I’d better do things seriously and carefully. What my father does influences me a lot. I really thank him.
How to keep school safer?内容要点：
１．有关安全课堂、体育课安全常和教室内安全的描述：①老师用简单易懂的方式传授安全知识；学生要认真学习逃生知识；②体育课上要先热身，后饮水；③教室内不要做淘气的事，以免引起麻烦和危险；和同学相处融洽。（１０分）
２．自己的建议和理由（５分）
How to keep school safer?How to keep school safer? There are many activities that we can do. In safety classes, teachers can teach safety in an easy way and students should learn carefully to stay away form danger, such as fire, earthquake etc.
When we have PE classes, we should always do warming-up activities before sports and drink some water after playing sports. And we aren’t supposed to do anything naughty to get yourself into trouble. It’s important to get well with each other.
I think schools should provide us with more emergency practice . Maybe someday we can use the skills that we learn to save our lives.
内容要点：
1、Tina去北京，参观长城和其他的风景，感觉怎样？
2、Jim在紧张的学习过后，感觉很累，想呆在家里，做些什么事情？
3、自己在假期的安排，决定去干什么，原因是什么？
4、注意自己的观点不能与提示的重复。
Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result: Tina is going to Beijing with her friends. She thinks it’s the capital of China. She wants to see the Great Wall and she often it’s very wonderful. She also wants to visit many beautiful sights, like the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. She thinks they will have fun in Beijing. Jim plans to stay at home. After a period of nervous study, it is really tired for him. He plans to have a good rest and help his parents with the housework.. He thinks it makes them happy. In my opinions, I plans to make my holiday happy and meaningful. First of all, I am going to read a lot of books and make a good balance between study and rest. Secondly, it is necessary to visit my grandparents during my holiday. Besides, I am willing to do some volunteer work in the Old People’s house. I can’t wait now. 英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均8~12个单词计算，用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为：十句作文法

第二段
（正文）——主题句——扩展句（要视内容而决定扩
展句 的多少）——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句——扩展句第三段（结尾）第一段（开头）——主题句——扩展句—— 结尾句 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的
开头已给出，但不算在词数内。
　　　２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
　　　 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称，
否则答案作废。Notice
Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news.
We are planning an outing. __________ Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (扩展句) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (扩展句) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m.. (扩展句) Please get ready for the outing. (扩展句)
Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句) 你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。邮件的要点如下：
1．对英语学习班很感兴趣。
2．希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。
3．问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。
注意：
1．邮件要通顺、连贯。
2．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。
3．不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。 Dear John,
Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句) It sounds very interesting to me. (扩展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (扩展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it begin and how much does it cost? (扩展句) Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (扩展句)
I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. (结尾句)
Yours
Joe句式1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
?There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
?2. 现在，…，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.
?3. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。
?Nowadays，it is common to _____. Many people like _____ because ______. Besides，______. ?4. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
?Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
5. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
?People’s opinions about _____ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
6. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…。很显然…，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that() while. Obviously，()，but why?
7. 过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。
People used to ......however , things are quite different today .
8.一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到......
Some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ......　　重点句型1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说…
2). … so … that … 如此… 以至于…
　　… too … to do 太… 而不能…
　　such … that … 如此… 以至于…
3). not…until… 直到…才…
4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
5). That is why + 句子??? 那是…的原因
6). That is because + 句子?? 那是因为…
7). It is said that + 句子??? 据说…
　It is reported that + 句子? 据报道…
8). There is no doubt that + 句子??? 毫无疑问…
9). It goes without saying that + 句子??? 不言而喻，毫无疑问
10). There is no need to do没必要做…
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义
表示喜欢和感兴趣　　like / love doing
　　enjoy doing
　　be fond of doing 喜欢做…
　　be keen on n/doing 喜欢做…
　　prefer to do A rather than do B 宁愿做A也不愿做B
　　be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n / doing??? 感兴趣
努力做…　　try to do努力做…
　　strive to do 努力做…
　　try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭尽全力做…
　　make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做…
　　do what sb can (do ) to do 尽力做…
　　spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…
　　do what / everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做…
打算做… / 计划做…　　intend / plan to do 打算做…
　　be going to do 打算/计划做…
　　decide to do 决定做…
　　determine to do决定做…
　　be determined to do决定做…
　　make up one’s mind to do下定决心做…
表示想/希望　　want to do = would like to do 想做…
　　hope to do? 希望做…
　　expect to do 期待着做…
　　wish to do? 希望做…
　　consider doing 考虑做…
就我的看法……；我认为……　　In my opinion, …
　　= To my mind, ….
　　= As far as I am concerned, …
　　= I am of the opinion that ….
重要性…是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that …
　　…… 是重要的 It is important/essential (for sb.) to do / that …
　　…… 是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that …
　　……是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …
只加doing 作宾语的动词　　finish 完成/ practice 练习 / suggest建议 / consider 考虑 / mind 介意 / enjoy 喜欢doing
　　look forward to doing 盼望做…
　　keep on doing 坚持做…
　　dream of doing 梦想做…
　　can’t help doing 情不自禁地做…
　　keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…
　　be busy (in ) doing??? be busy with + 名词??? 忙于做…
　　spend time / money (in )doing?? spend time / money on + 名词??? 花费时间做…
　　have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心
　　have trouble / have problem / have difficulty (in) doing?? 或 with + 名词?? 做…有困难　
Should parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity?Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some don’t. They think it can strengthen what is learnt in class. And they believe it can help them learn more, which is good for their future. After all, knowledge is life.
However, I don’t think so. On the one hand, we students need organized activities. On the other hand, we are under too much pressure, so we need time and freedom to relax ourselves. Also, we need time to do things by ourselves.
So, I think parents should give us a bit more time to ourselves
Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some don’t. Parents consider after-school classes as good ways to improve exam scores for kids. First of all, they think activities can strength what is learnt in class.　Students can have a better understanding of knowledge through that way. What’s more, activities are good for children’s future. Besides, activities have an influence on our study. We can learn a lot from that. It makes us have more chances and opportunity to learn more knowledge.
However, I have ideas different from parents’. In my opinion, going to activities also have a side-effect. First of all, it costs a lot of money and time. It takes up most of our spare time. Activities also make me feel stressed out. We already have big pressure from school, It’s harmful for us to have more classes. The most important side-effect s that I have less time do things I like. We should relax ourselves so that we can have more energy for better studying. We’re supposed to take up our own hobbies and have fun from it. I think a happy childhood is more important that scores.
Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some don’t.
Most of the parents think it’s important for children to strength what is learnt in class. Others think it’s good for their future, because if you enter a good university, then you will find a good job. Learning a lot can help children, as well. The more you learn, the more knowledgable you will be.
In my opinion, being free is the one of the important things for children, and they shouldn’t be pushed too much pressure. We are supposed to make our own decisions, we’re not children any more. As the saying goes, hobby is the best teacher. Let the children do the everything they want to do may be a right thing.Nowadays some parents stop pushing their children from activity to activity, but some don’t. They think it can help children strength what is learnt in class. Also children listen in class unclearly, the after-school class will help them learn what they lost. Parents think activity to activity can help their kids learn a lot, and it is good for their kids’ future.Here is my opinions. Students don’t have to have after-school class to strength what their learned. If they can take notes in class or liten more clearly in class, they can also learn well. Haveing after-school class is wasting their time. but after-school class can let students learn a lot new knowledge.
After-school class doesn’t have too much text. and students can learn fun in there.Writing for Model Test 11We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
At home we can help parents do housework, let our parents have a rest. And we should talk with them more， such as sharing happy things or problem. It helps us be closer with our parents.
In the society, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. It makes environment beautiful. And also we can say “hi” when we meet people. It makes people have good feeling. We should help people that is in need. It can warm people’s hearts, let them to be hot-heart. If each of us doing something good for our family and society, the society will be more harmonious.We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
At home, we can help parents do housework to let them have a rest. If we unhappy, we can talk with parents more, so parents will know us more and we will be happy again.
In society, we should don’t throw rubbish everywhere, it makes environment beautiful. We all want to a beautiful and clean environment. Obviously, don’t talk loudly in public when some people need quiet is very important. When I was angry, I want to a quiet space to think and think. I think it is a good person should to do.
If each of us all do its, our family and society will be better.We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
We can do many kinds of things, such as help parents do housework so that let our parents have a rest after they worked all day. And another magic action is that talk with your parents more. Because that when you do that, you can feel that you can’t stop opening your mind to your parent, your relationship will be better and better.
In the society, we are not supposed to throw rubbish everywhere, It not only makes environment beautiful but also show your bad side to people. I think, if we stop this bad habbits, the environment will be beautiful. When you take the bus, wheather or not you had meet someone who needs a seat and you shared your seat or you hadn’t. Do it now! it’s not too late. when you share your love to the people who around you. You will find that the whole society is changing because of you.
All in all, if each of us do our best. The harmonious society is not far from us.We have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
At home, I think we should help parents do housework to let them have a rest. Also, we are supposed to talk with parents more. Nowadays, more and more students don’t like talking to their parents and always argue with them. In my opinion, talking with parents more is a good way to be closer to them.
And in the society, we shouldn’t thrown rubbish everywhere because make environment beautiful is our duty. Wasting food is a serious problem, too. To save the food, people are not expected to order too much food when you are in the restaurant.．You also can use the shopping bags instead of plastic bags when you in the market, it can make less pollution.
Maybe people think that our society harmonious should do big things, however, many forget that doing some small thing also can help. If each of us do some small things that are good, our society will be better.
Doing Our PartWe have grown up and it’s time for us to do something for our family and society.
At home, we should help our parents do the housework. They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day’s work. We do the housework in order to let them have a rest. We should also talk with them more; it can help us understand each other better.
In society, do not throw rubbish everywhere, we should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Don’t use plastic bags when going shopping; we’d better use shopping baskets. If we sue them too often, it will become white pollution.
In a word, if each of us does our part from now on, our world will become a harmonious society.