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百日打卡--作文5
中考真题
1.（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：rain heavily, umbrella, be thankful to…
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily. He walked slowly in the rain with his umbrella. Suddenly, he saw an old man with a walking stick. He didn’t have an umbrella. Tom came up to him as quickly as possible and shared his umbrella with him. Tom took the old man to his home safely. The old man was thankful to Tom. After saying goodbye to the old man, he went home happily.
What a good boy Tom is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片和提示词，把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序和内容描述Tom帮助老人的全过程；
第二步，对Tom进行赞扬。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
②as quickly as possible尽快
③be thankful to感激
[高分句型]
①Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②What a good boy Tom is!(感叹句)
（2023·山东烟台·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括：
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢；
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果；
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求：
1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果；
第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步；
第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和某人交流
②full of充满
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句)
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百日打卡--作文5
中考真题
1.（2023·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：rain heavily, umbrella, be thankful to…
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80—100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily. He walked slowly in the rain with his umbrella. Suddenly, he saw an old man with a walking stick. He didn’t have an umbrella. Tom came up to him as quickly as possible and shared his umbrella with him. Tom took the old man to his home safely. The old man was thankful to Tom. After saying goodbye to the old man, he went home happily.
What a good boy Tom is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据图片和提示词，把图中所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片顺序和内容描述Tom帮助老人的全过程；
第二步，对Tom进行赞扬。
[亮点词汇]
①on one’s way home在某人回家的路上
②as quickly as possible尽快
③be thankful to感激
[高分句型]
①Last Friday afternoon, when Tom was on his way home after school, it rained heavily.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②What a good boy Tom is!(感叹句)
（2023·山东烟台·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Brown的指导下，你在学校组织的英语戏剧大赛（English Opera Competition）中获得了一等奖。请给Mr. Brown写一封感谢信，主要内容包括：
l. 对Mr. Brown表示感谢；
2. Mr. Brown的帮助、你取得的进步及比赛的结果；
3. 邀请Mr. Brown到家里做客。
要求：
1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 信中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。
Dear Mr. Brown,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am very excited to tell you something about the English Opera Competition I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination. When I heard the final result, I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English. Before the contest, whenever you had free time, you would help me practise my spoken English. Besides, you communicated with me as much as possible, and corrected my pronunciation and intonation. What’s more, you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence. Without your help, I wouldn’t have achieved such a good result. Also, I have benefited a lot from this competition. All in all, I really appreciated your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help. I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示向外教表示感谢，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，告知他这个好消息以及比赛的结果；
第二步，详细介绍他对你的帮助以及你取得的进步；
第三步，再次表示感谢并邀请他到家里做客。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和某人交流
②full of充满
③all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①I got First Prize out of 40 competitors, which was totally beyond my imagination.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②It’s because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(强调句)
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