中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
百日打卡--作文1
中考真题
（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）
2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
According to the law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestions for parents.
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（2023·湖南岳阳·统考中考真题）
为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以“Our Labor Clubs”(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下的三个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。
1. Paper cutting 2. Cooking 3. Flower growing
Materials and tools *scissors *red paper … *a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients (调料) … *flower seeds (花种子) *earth (泥土) *flowerpots (花盆) …
Activities *cut... with… *put... on… … *cook delicious dishes for… *make a healthy menu about... … *grow flowers… *do a research about… …
Goals of joining *understand the beauty of… *decorate (装饰)… … *learn cooking skills *become confident … *get close to…. *relax from… …
★★★★★ Your favorite club ________ Reasons ________
要求：1.词数80~100；
2.介绍表格中的三个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
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百日打卡--作文1
中考真题
（2023·四川乐山·统考中考真题）
2022年1月生效的《家庭教育促进法》规定：未成年人的父母或其他监护人应该重视家庭教育，关心孩子身心健康。对于此规定，作为学生的你有话想说。请你给校英语专栏写一篇短文，对父母提出建议并表明观点。内容包括：
1. 多花时间陪我们，如教做家务、一起玩耍等；
2. 帮助我们养成好的习惯；
3. 常与我们沟通谈心；
4. 信任我们并保护我们的隐私。
注意：
1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
参考词汇：physical and mental health身心健康；privacy n.隐私
According to the law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestions for parents.
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【答案】参考范文
According to the Law “Family Education Promotion”, parents or other guardians of minors should be responsible for family education. It asks parents to pay attention to children’s physical and mental health. Here are my suggestions for parents.
First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us. For example, parents can teach us to do housework and play with us in spare time. Second, parents should help us to get into good habits, such as eating healthy food, doing sports and so on. What’s more, parents had better communicate with us more often. That’s because some misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication. Finally, I hope parents can trust us and protect our privacy. We children need more personal space.
In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示的要点逐个进行阐述，对父母提出建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表明自己的观点并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get into good habits养成良好的习惯
②had better do sth最好做某事
③communicate with sb和某人交流
④lack of……的缺乏
[高分句型]
①First of all, I think parents should spend more time with us.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②That’s because some misunderstandings are caused by lack of communication.（because引导的表语从句）
③In my opinion, we can work together to understand and respect each other so that we can make progress.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
（2023·湖南岳阳·统考中考真题）
为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以“Our Labor Clubs”(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下的三个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。
1. Paper cutting 2. Cooking 3. Flower growing
Materials and tools *scissors *red paper … *a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients (调料) … *flower seeds (花种子) *earth (泥土) *flowerpots (花盆) …
Activities *cut... with… *put... on… … *cook delicious dishes for… *make a healthy menu about... … *grow flowers… *do a research about… …
Goals of joining *understand the beauty of… *decorate (装饰)… … *learn cooking skills *become confident … *get close to…. *relax from… …
★★★★★ Your favorite club ________ Reasons ________
要求：1.词数80~100；
2.介绍表格中的三个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
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【答案】例文
Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors, red paper and knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes. We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. We can cook delicious dishes for parents and friends. We can make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. In the Cooking Club, we can learn cooking skills and become confident about ourselves. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We can grow flowers and do a research about flowers and plants. We can get close to nature and relax from enjoying the beauty of flowers.
Among them, Cooking Club is my favorite because I like cooking and I want to cook for my parents to make them happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“Our Labor Clubs”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对学校劳动社团的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍三个社团需要的工具，活动和参加目标；
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的劳动社团及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of……的美丽
②a healthy diet健康饮食
③do a research about做一个关于……的研究
[高分句型]
①We can get close to nature and relax from enjoying the beauty of flowers.（and连接并列结构）
②Among them, Cooking Club is my favorite because I like cooking and I want to cook for my parents to make them happy.（because引导的原因状语从句和and连接的并列句）
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