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百日打卡--读后续写1
【读后续写题型介绍】
1.任务要求：提供一段 350 词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150 词左右）。
2.考查目标：读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的综合性语言测试。教育部考试中心刘庆思、陈康老师于 2016 年指出，读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力：
①把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。
②语言运用的准确性和丰富性。学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。
③对语篇结构的把控能力。学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性，所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。
④创造性思维能力。学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。
练习
（2021 年 新高考I）
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
参考范文一
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of the mess, he knew exactly what they were up to. He rubbed their heads and smiled, “Well, I'm willing to lend a hand." Hearing this, the twins’ faces lit up, with their eyes alive with expectation. Under the help of Dad, they cleaned the kitchen and did the second try. After half an hour, the twins finally made it, the tempting smell of French toast and chicken porridge floating in the air. Everything ready, Dad tiptoed back to upstairs. The pair decorated the plate with some fruits, shaping them into a “heart”, and stepped out of the kitchen.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Jenna hugged Mom tightly, yelling “Happy Mother's Day, Mummy!” In the meanwhile, Jeff was eager to present the plate to their mom. The moment Mom spotted the breakfast, surprise registered on her face. “You did these Amazing! Honey,see ” “Indeed,” Dad took over the plate and sniffed. Mom pulled the twins against her breast and kissed them on their heads, “Thank you so much, I like this gift.” Dad hugged Mom by the shoulder, “Our sweeties have become real grown-ups.” “Yes, they're the very gift for amother.” added Mom.
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百日打卡--读后续写2
练习
（2020·浙江高三一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once in Arabia, there lived a Sheik. He and his wife lived in a village. As she had no child, the Sheik married another woman for a second time. By his second wife, he had a son. He loved his son very much and he grew up happily as a handsome young man.
However, the man’s first wife hated the second wife and her son, so she began to plot against them. For years, she kept waiting for a chance to murder them with her magical power.
One day the Sheik had to go out on a journey. He said to his son that he would return home before Bakrid and celebrated the festival. Now came the perfect chance long waited by the first wife. When the man was away, she used her magical power and changed the second wife and son as goats.
When Bakrid was approaching, the man returned home, only to find his first wife in the house. He asked her where his son and his second wife were. The first wife lied that his second wife died in some unknown disease and that her son ran away from home and didn’t come again. On hearing this, the man became sad but comforted himself that it was God’s will.
On the day of Bakrid, the Sheik asked his first wife to bring a goat for sacrifice. His first wife brought the second wife who had been changed into a goat. When it came near the man, it started to brush his hand with its tongue. He took pity on the goat and asked his first wife to bring another. So she brought the son goat. It also came near the Sheik and started to rub his leg with head. Again, the man took pity on the goat. He said, “The two goats do like men. So I can’t kill these two.” Then the first wife got angry and said, “If you refuse to kill all goats like this, we will not be able to sacrifice anything.”
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Just then the butcher’s wife, another woman with magical power, passed by.
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Paragraph 2:
So astonished was the man that he couldn’t believe his eyes.
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百日打卡--读后续写1
【读后续写题型介绍】
1.任务要求：提供一段 350 词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150 词左右）。
2.考查目标：读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的综合性语言测试。教育部考试中心刘庆思、陈康老师于 2016 年指出，读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力：
①把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容，清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况，并通过续写短文表现出来。
②语言运用的准确性和丰富性。学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构，还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。
③对语篇结构的把控能力。学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系，所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性，所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。
④创造性思维能力。学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容，包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。
练习
（2021 年 新高考I）
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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百日打卡--读后续写2
练习
（2020·浙江高三一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Once in Arabia, there lived a Sheik. He and his wife lived in a village. As she had no child, the Sheik married another woman for a second time. By his second wife, he had a son. He loved his son very much and he grew up happily as a handsome young man.
However, the man’s first wife hated the second wife and her son, so she began to plot against them. For years, she kept waiting for a chance to murder them with her magical power.
One day the Sheik had to go out on a journey. He said to his son that he would return home before Bakrid and celebrated the festival. Now came the perfect chance long waited by the first wife. When the man was away, she used her magical power and changed the second wife and son as goats.
When Bakrid was approaching, the man returned home, only to find his first wife in the house. He asked her where his son and his second wife were. The first wife lied that his second wife died in some unknown disease and that her son ran away from home and didn’t come again. On hearing this, the man became sad but comforted himself that it was God’s will.
On the day of Bakrid, the Sheik asked his first wife to bring a goat for sacrifice. His first wife brought the second wife who had been changed into a goat. When it came near the man, it started to brush his hand with its tongue. He took pity on the goat and asked his first wife to bring another. So she brought the son goat. It also came near the Sheik and started to rub his leg with head. Again, the man took pity on the goat. He said, “The two goats do like men. So I can’t kill these two.” Then the first wife got angry and said, “If you refuse to kill all goats like this, we will not be able to sacrifice anything.”
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Just then the butcher’s wife, another woman with magical power, passed by.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
So astonished was the man that he couldn’t believe his eyes.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Possible version 1
Paragraph 1:
Just then the butcher’s wife, another woman with magical power, passed by. Glancing at these two goats, she instantly realized the woman’s evil trick. She came up to the Sheik, explaining, “Actually, these two goats are your second wife and your son.” Hearing the words, the man was startled and asked her if she could bring them back to him. The butcher’s wife nodded, taking some water from her bottle and spraying it on the two goats. The next moment, they turned into his second wife and his son.
Paragraph 2:
So astonished was the man that he couldn’t believe his eyes. “Dad! Dad!” the boy cried in a thrilled voice, throwing himself at his father’s hug. Three of them embraced each other tightly, tears streaming down. In the corner stood the first wife in a mixture of fright and annoyance. When she was about to run away, she was caught by the butcher’s wife. Never had she predicted one day she would be changed into a silent fish. From then on, the man, his second wife and his lovable son lived a happy life in the village.
Possible version 2
Paragraph 1:
Just then the butcher’s wife, another woman with magical power, passed by. The sight of the goats pacing around Sheik with care and love confused the butcher’s wife, wondering why two goats acted like humans. With doubt in mind, she approached the two goats, hands gently on their heads to know what had happened. It dawned on her that the two goats were actually changed from humans through magical power. Having learnt the truth, the woman changed the two back to humans, making everyone present shocked, including Sheik.
Paragraph 2:
So astonished was the man that he couldn’t believe his eyes. Never in his wildest dream had he thought they would reunite in this way. Tears of relief welling up in eyes, he hugged them tightly, asking what they had experienced. Eyes glued to the three, the first wife, with her hands clenched into tight fists, dashed to them in a flash, scolding and cursing. Sheik glared at her, realizing the truth and revealed her evil deeds on the spot. Furious but frightened by the roaring people around, the first wife fled away, leaving the family in the joyful celebration.
【分析】
本篇考察的作文类型是读后续写。
【详解】
第一步：理顺文章主线：
已知线索：阿拉伯酋长家庭生活幸福→第一任妻子施法陷害→节日来临时要杀羊→首长慈悲下不了手→第一任妻子生气威胁→同样会魔法的屠夫妻子……
第二步：构思可续写线索：
屠夫妻子看到了什么？屠夫妻子如何行动？酋长采取什么行动？第二任妻子和儿子变回来了吗？第一任妻子的结局是什么？
续写词汇：
已给提示词汇：Sheik，happily，hated，magical，changed，goats，ran，sad，first wife，kill
续写可能用到的词汇：glance, evil trick, startle, spray, cry, hug...
【高分句型1】When she glanced at these two goats, she instantly realized the woman’s evil trick.使用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型2】Sheik glared at her, who had realized the truth and revealed her evil deeds on the spot.使用了who引导的非限定性定语从句。
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