2015中考英语复习教案 书面表达

2015中考英语复习教案
书面表达
今天是父亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
●表述你与父亲间的情感；
●为父亲制作一张卡片；
●帮助父亲做点事；
●陪父亲散步等。
注意：1.词数80～100；
2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear John，
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I think we should do ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are god friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties，he is always there，ready to help me.
Today I will make a b ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eautiful card for him，with my thanks and best wishes on it.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.Besides，I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him，for he likes it very much.I'm sure he'll be very happy.
What's your plan for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Father's Day？I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
书面表达题主要考查学生在特定的语境中综合运用语言进行表达的能力；同时，还考查学生英文书写的规范性、美观性等。
一、常见的书面表达题型
1．根据文体归类：日记、书 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )信、通知、便条、启事、贺卡、发言稿、调查报告、记叙文、说明文及议论文等。然而许多试题都将记叙、议论、说明等表达方式融为一体，形成复合型的写作。
2．根据所提供的材料形式归类：图画作文 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )、图表作文、提纲作文及命题作文等。这样的测试形式既有一定的控制性，又有一定的开放性，为考生展示其写作能力提供了发挥的空间。
二、如何写出优美的文章
1．选准词语。
①语言是交流的工具。要使用通用的、合乎习惯的词语，切忌使用生僻的词汇。
②选词要达意，英语有许多同义但用法不同的词汇或短语，切忌混淆用法。
③用词要简明扼要，在不确定的情况下，宁可用常用词简单明了地表达信息。
2．写好句子。
①运用所学词汇、短语，结合一定的语法知识，按照句子的结构特点，直接用英语写出相应句子。
②运用固定句式表达信息，把比较复杂的句子分成两个或两个以上的简单句子，减少写错句的几率。
③把两个简单句用一个复合句或较复杂的简单句表达出来，这样可提高文章的可读性，但在没有把握的情况下慎用。
④遇见生词或不熟悉的表达时，可以在保持原意的基础上，用不同的表达方式写出来。
3．设计段落。
一个完整的段落要有主题句、拓展句及结尾句。正确运用连接词使语言衔接自然、行文流畅。
4．书写规范、卷面整洁。
三、如何提升写作
1．熟悉五种基本句式及一些使用频率较高的句式。
2．收集优秀范文并大声朗读来扩展思路及培养语感。
3．坚持常规练习。即：词——词组— ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )—句子——段落——篇章。切记：简单句是主菜，要做到运用自如；复杂句是佐料，有之增色，缺之乏味，但不可舍本逐末，以免弄巧成拙。
4．仔细审题，要点齐全，人称及时态运用正确。
【例1】 假设你和朋友将在今年暑假参加以“拥抱大自然”为主题的户外拓展夏令营，其中包括小组自由活动。请你为你们小组设计一个活动方案。
提示词语：climb mountains；go fishing；pick fruits；have a campfire (篝火晚会)
要求：1.写明你们组计划要做的具体活动，并给出理由；
2．提示词语仅供参考，可增减内容；
3．词数80～100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名与地名。
We are going for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a camp this summer.I'm glad to make a plan for our group._________ _
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解析：第一步：认真仔细地阅读提示，思 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )考所提供的信息，计划文章大致内容。第二步：根据信息要求遣词造句，连句成文。第三步：通读全文，纠正错误，书写整洁。
写作要点：1.具体的活动要丰富多彩。2.写出安排这些活动的理由。
注意：此文是计划打算，应用将来时态。切忌写成流水账。
【参考范文】
We_are_going_for_a_ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )camp_this_summer.I'm_glad_to_make_a_plan_for_our_group.
First of all，we ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) plan to climb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise.After that，we'll have a fruit picking competition between boys and girls，which will help us know each other better.What's more，there will be a campfire.We can enjoy ourselves by singing，dancing and telling stories.Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends
We are looking forw ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ard to the summer camp because we can forget the busy work at school，and I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.
精彩再现：
①文章内容完整，叙述清楚，要点一目了然。
②使用了first of all，after that，what's more表顺序的副词来使文章条理更清晰，更流畅。
③经典句型： we plan to cli ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )mb mountains in the morning so that we can enjoy fresh air and watch beautiful sunrise. Won't it be fantastic to share the relaxing moment with friends？ I believe we'll have a wonderful time together.
【例2】 近年来，“光盘行动 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )(Clean Plate Campaign)”悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会(economized society)”已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。
What to do What not to do
◆turn off the light
◆save as much paper as possible
◆… ◆not use one off chopsticks (一次性筷子)
◆not spend money buying unnecessary things
◆…
注意：(1)短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Let's Start with the Things Around Us!
Recently，the “Clean ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) Plate Campaign” has been very popular with many people.Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )student，I think ________________________________________________________________________
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解析：第一步：认真阅读题目要求，仔 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )细观察表格中的内容。第二步：根据提示内容，把握好文章的中心，适度发挥。选用合适的副词使文章条理清晰。第三步：通读全文，检查要点是否遗漏，纠正错误，书写要整洁。
注意：不仅要写出生活中“勤俭节约，反对浪费”的实例，更重要的是“作简要评价”，这才是文章的点睛之笔。
【参考范文】
Let's Start with the Things Around Us!
Recently，the_“Clea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n_Plate_Campaign”_has_been_very_popular_with_many_people.Our_government_is_doing_its_best_to_build_an_economized_society.
As_a_middle_school_ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )student，I_think we should join in the campaign.We can start with the things around us.Firstly，make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room.Secondly，we can save as much paper as possible.Thirdly，it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used.What's more，we must not spend money buying unnecessary things.When we eat，we'd better not use one off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food.
In a word，savi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ng energy is very important.Let's work together from now on!
精彩再现：
①整篇文章结构完整，内容详尽，要点清晰。
②层次清晰。先表明自己观点 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，后用firstly，secondly，thirdly，what's more表顺序的副词把作者观点一一陈列，清楚明了，条理分明。后又用in a word作出总结。
③经典句型： We can save as ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) much paper as possible. It's important for us to… saving energy is very important.
(一)(2014，河南)
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )“My special ______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。
要求：1.在题目空格处填入你要描述的对象， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )如grandma，teacher 或friend等；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.80词左右。
My Special __Grandma__
My grandma is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )special to me because we're like friends.She always helps me out whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us.
When I am with m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y grandma，we spend a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.One thing she's best at is cooking.She often cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.
(二)(2014，江西)
阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实，某英文报为了了 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )解中学生的课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及阅读计划。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know，read ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing has a lot of benefit.It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge，and it makes us wiser and richer in life.I like reading newspapers and magazines，from which I get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world.I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy.I seldom read e books because they're bad for eyes.On weekends，I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s coming.I plan to do more reading.I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills.I'm sure reading can make a difference to my life.
(三)(2014，陕西)
在日常生活中，你看到身边有哪些不良现象？请列举一些并就某些方面说说你的做法和想法。
提示：speak loudly， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cut in line (插队)，waste food，unfriendly (冷漠的)，offer no help...
要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2. ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；4.词数：不少于80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)
In our daily life ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，I usually see some bad behavior around us.For example，I_often_hear_people_speak_and_laugh_loudly_in_public.It_is_too_noisy.Some_people_cut_in_line_while_others_are_waiting.It_makes_me_unhappy.And_in_our_school_dining_hall，I_often_see_students_waste_food.At_times，people_seem_unfriendly_and_offer_no_help_when_others_are_in_trouble.For_me，my_parents_are_strict_with_me.They_often_tell_me_to_behave_well.So_I_never_drop_litter_about.And_I_never_draw_on_the_desk_or_on_the_wall.I_am_polite_to_old_people.
I think if everyon ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e can think more of others，we'll have a better living environment.
(四)(2014，鄂州)
不久前，全国有部分省市出台一项新政策： ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )高考英语将由150分降为100分，此事在国内引起极大争议。有的人认为此举很好，有的人则认为不妥。作为一名中学生，你的看法是什么？请分析其原因。
注意：1.词数80词左右 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )；开头已给出，但不计入总词数。2.文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。3.参考词汇：reform改革；master掌握；advanced先进的
Not long before，a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.
As a student ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，in my opinion，it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well.We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well.At the same time，English is an international language and tool.We should master it to better know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland.What's more，as China is developing quickly，we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.
In a word，whether ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) the mark of English will be reduced or not，we students should learn it well.
(五)(2014，玉林)
我们的生活中处处充满着爱，有父母 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的爱，有老师的爱，有同学的爱，有朋友的爱……请以“Love Around Me (我身边的爱)”为题，写一篇短文，内容要点如下：
爱你的人 爱的体现
父母 为你做早餐；送你上学……
老师 传授知识；照顾你……
同学 一起学习；和睦相处……
朋友 在网上交流；分享快乐与烦恼……
参考词汇：1.receive lo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ve；2.cook；3.teach knowledge；4.get on...with；5.chat online，share (分享)；6.thank
要求：1.题目开头已给出， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )不计入总词数内；2.包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。(参考词汇仅供参考)；3.语句通顺，语法正确，80个词左右；4.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称。
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.
Every day I can ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) receive love from my parents，my teachers，my classmates and my friends.In the morning，my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me.Then my father drives me to school.At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge.My dear classmates and I study together happily，getting on well with each other.I chat online with friends in my spare time.They often share my pleasure and trouble.I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.I make a decision to study hard and make great progress.
Here，I should say to them，“Thank you for all your love.”
(六)(2014，绥化)
放学回家的公交车上，你看见一位老爷爷和他十岁 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )左右的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包，你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，还大声喊着向老人要水喝，并在窗户上乱写乱画，对此请写一篇短文，谈谈你对这件事的看法。
参考词汇：grandson，shout to，respect (尊重)
On my way home on ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the bus，I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten.He was carrying the boy's schoolbag.I gave my seat to the old man at once.However，the boy sat down first.The old man had to stand nearby.After a while，the boy shouted to his grandpa for water，then drew something on the window of the bus.
When I saw t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )his，I got very angry.I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
(七)(2014，滨州)
假如你校将举行以“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
提示：1.不带管制刀具( ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )restricted knives)到校；2.上下楼梯不要拥挤；3.注意饮食安全；4.注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况(emergency)要报警。
要求：1.短文应包括所提示的内容，可 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )以适当发挥；2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露个人身份的信息；3.词数：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How To Protect Ourselves
How to protect ours ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )elves is especially important to us students.Firstly，don't take restricted knives to school.They might hurt our classmates or ourselves.Secondly，there are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow.So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs.Or there may be an accident.Thirdly，we should eat more healthy food and we'd better keep away from junk food，At last，we must pay attention to the traffic.Remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency.
It's our duty to protect ourselves.Let's start from today.
(八)(2014，台州)
根据下面图片的内容，以“Mother Stops Him”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向某英语报社投稿。要求如下：
(1)描述图中发生的事件；
(2)简单分析妈妈的行为对孩子可能产生的不良影响；
(3)指出老人若不被扶起可能出现的后果；
(4)倡议人们彼此信任、互相帮助；
(5)词数：80～100。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：lift...up扶起　knock...down撞倒
trust信任
Mother Stops Him
Here is a picture fr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )om a news report.In the picture，we can see three people.An old woman is lying on the ground.A boy is trying to lift her up，but his mother stops him at once.“Don't do that！Others may think it's you who have knocked her down，” she says.
In my opinion，the m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )other's behavior is not right.A mother should encourage her child to give others a hand.How can a child become warm hearted if he is educated in such a way？And the old woman might feel worse or even be hit by the traffic unless we move her away in time.
I hope it won't happen ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) again.Let's trust each other and help anyone in trouble.