Unit 4 Do it yourself 写作 专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语八年级上册

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Unit 4 Do it yourself 写作 专练（含解析）牛津译林版英语八年级上册
1．假如你是李华，某英语报刊将举办一次题为How to improve your memory 的有奖征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加动
内容提示：1、具体方法 2、观点和结论
要求：词数80-100
1．题目已给出 不计入词数 2、必须包括所给内容信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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2．很多同学因为词汇量少而感觉英语学习很吃力，你是怎样记单词的呢？你知道哪些记单词的好方法？
请你以“How to remember English words”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求：条理清楚，表达顺畅，无语法错误。
How to remember English words
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3．你学校的英语社团想搜集一些如何学好英语的建议，请你写一篇题为How to learn English well 的小短文，从listening, speaking, vocabulary三个方面介绍你学习英语的好方法。
词数：50~70词。
How to learn English well
Hi! I think it’s not difficult to learn English well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．保持健康对于成长中的我们来说是非常重要的。请你根据以下提示内容，以“How to keep healthy”为题，谈谈你的看法。
提示：(1)饮食健康； (2) 锻炼身体； (3) 良好的生活习惯；(4) 空闲时间读书、听音乐，学会放松。
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；不少于70词
How to Keep Healthy
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5．去年11月29日，辽阳市喜提“全国历史文化名城”荣誉称号，至此，辽阳市又向全国文明城市迈进了一步。创建全国文明城市是辽阳人民的精神追求和美好向往，作为一名中学生，我们应该为此做出我们力所能及的贡献。因此，我校开展了以“美丽辽阳，文明生活”为主题的英文征文活动，请你以“Beautiful Liaoyang, Civilized Life”为题，根据表格中所给的文字提示，简要描述并发表自己的观点。
主题 美丽辽阳，文明生活
做法 多种树木，保护自然环境；骑车出行，减少空气污染；垃圾入箱，保持城市清洁；做志愿者，帮助他人，服务社会。
你的观点 至少两条
要求：
1.80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
参考词汇：保护环境 protect the environment，减少reduce，服务社会 serve the society，发挥作用 make a difference
Beautiful Liaoyang, Civilized Life
As a citizen of Liaoyang, it’s our duty to
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6．作为青少年，良好的家庭关系对我们的健康成长很重要。有的同学和父母就跟朋友一样，无话不说，彼此都很轻松；有的同学和父母之间就缺乏必要的沟通和交流，甚至矛盾重重。作为初中生，我们应该如何与父母相处呢？请根据下面的提示，以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ” 为题写一篇文章。（文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
参考要点：
1）主动和父母交流在学校的学习和生活等情况；
2）主动帮助父母承担家务，为父母分忧，比如整理房间，洗碗等；
3）遇事多与父母讨论，多向长辈求助；
4）……
要求：
1）条理清楚，意思连贯，书写工整，卷面整洁。
2）要涵盖以上要点，可适当发挥，字数控制在 80~120 词左右。
3）文中不能出现本人真实姓名和班级。
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
For teenagers, it’s important to get on well with parents. How can we get on well with our parents
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7．请你根据下面图片提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍如何制作水果沙拉。
要求：70词左右，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
1. 2. 3. 4.
Do you like eating fruit salad And do you know how to make it If you don’t know, let me tell you.
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It’s quite simple to make fruit salad, isn’t it Now you can have a try.
8．根据所给要求，写一篇80词左右的短文。下图是某校对八年级100名学生寒假活动的调查结果。请简要说明图表内容，并结合自身情况，谈谈该如何过一个充实又有意义的寒假。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词； (2)不得出现真实校名和人名。
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9．现在各行各业都在为建设美丽中国，实现中国梦而奋斗。请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么办
Students（study）
Building Beautiful China
Building Beautiful China
要求：1、短文需包含提示要点，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3、语句通顺，结构合理，书写规范；
4、词数：80词左右。短文开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假定你是李华，最近发现周围的同学以及国外的朋友都忽视运动、不重视健康。请你写一封有关运动的倡议书为英语周报投稿。内容包括：
1. 倡议的原因和目的；
2. 倡议的具体内容；
3. 向同学发出倡议。
注意：
1. 词数80~100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
Recently I have noticed that most of you don’t pay attention to your health. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你在《21世纪学生英文报》看到初二学生张明提出的有关英语学习的困惑，他总是忘记新学的单词，并且很难理解篇幅较长的文章，他对此很焦虑。请你针对他的问题，提出恰当的建议，并分享有效的英语学习方法。
提示词语：forget, spell, remember, understand, main idea
提示问题: ● What advice can you give to help him solve his problems
● What other ways are useful for learning English
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’ve read your questions about English learning in the newspaper. I’m writing to give you some help. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ .
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If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案：
1． How to improve your memory
Dear teachers and students, memory is very important. It helps you remember who you are, where you live, what you have learnt and what you plan to do in the future.
So, how can you improve your memory Exercising your brain is important. You can do new things and change your daily habits. You will keep your brain active if you walk a different way to school. You can try to memorize something new. You can try a maths puzzle. You can also try to learn new skills or study a foreign language. Your brain gets lots of regular exercise if you do any of these things.
If you live a healthy life, your memory will work better. You must have a balanced diet. Give your brain enough time to rest. Unless you get enough sleep every night, you will not remember things well. If you want your brain to work well, you also need to relax. If you get too worried, your brain will slow down, and your memory will become less sharp.
So, to improve your memory, you should exercise your brain, live a healthy life and stay relaxed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇命题作文，体裁是说明文；
②时态：本文时态是一般现在时；
③提示：本文没有给出具体的要点提示，需要自己阐述具体的方法，并且要有自己的观点和结论，注意前后文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明记忆的重要性，从而引出下文；
第二步，阐述第一种方法，通过锻炼大脑的方法来提升记忆；
第三步，阐述第二种方法，通过健康生活的方式来提升记忆；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①daily habits日常习惯
②new skills新技能
③regular exercise常规训练
④slow down慢下来
[高分句型]
①It helps you remember who you are, where you live, what you have learnt and what you plan to do in the future.（本句包含了多个宾语从句）
② If you live a healthy life, your memory will work better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．参考范文
How to remember English words
Many students have trouble remembering English words. How can we remember them better and faster
I think a good way to remember words is to read them correctly. If you remember a word’s pronunciation, you’ll remember its spelling easily.
Another good method for remembering words is to use cards. You can write a word and give an example sentence on each card. Try to read the cards every day.
Practice makes perfect. You can’t remember words well unless you keep reading and using them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，注意围绕主题说明方法及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明问题，点明主题；
第二步，具体阐述记单词的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① have trouble doing做某事有困难
② better and faster又好又快
③ try to do尽力做
[高分句型]
① If you remember a word’s pronunciation, you’ll remember its spelling easily.（条件状语从句）
② Practice makes perfect.（谚语）
③ You can’t remember words well unless you keep reading and using them.（条件状语从句）
3．例文
How to learn English well
Hi! I think it’s not difficult to learn English well. How do you study
Everyone learns English in different ways. I think the best way to improve our English is to improve our English skills—listening, speaking and vocabulary. We can listen to English songs as much as possible. It is good for our listening. We can join the English corner to practice our speaking skills. When we meet the new words, we can write them down and guest their meanings. Then we can look them up in the dictionary.
I hope everyone can make great progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，从听，说，词汇三个方面介绍学好英语的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①in different ways用不同的方式
②the best way to do sth做某事的最佳方式
③as much as possible尽可能多的
④look up查询
[高分句型]
①I think it’s not difficult to learn English well.（宾语从句）
②I hope everyone can make great progress.（宾语从句）
4．例文：
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy Here are some advice.
Firstly, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals.
Secondly, it’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong.
Thirdly, I think staying up is bad for our health. If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache. We should go to bed early and get up early.
Lastly, when we have free time, we should listen to music or read books. Because they can make us feel relaxed. Too much pressure does harm to our health.
In a word, if we arrange our time properly and form good habits, we’ll be happier and healthier.
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“How to Keep Healthy”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中所给的信息提示描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍如何保持健康的方法，包括饮食、锻炼、生活习惯等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
5．例文
Beautiful Liaoyang, Civilized Life
As a citizen of Liaoyang city, it is our duty to help build a beautiful city and we can live a healthy and civilized life. We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles. It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin. In this way, we can keep our city clean. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment.
In my opinion, I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful. Firstly, I can become a volunteer to help people out and serve the society. Secondly, I will call on people around me to get together to make our city more beautiful.
In a word, everyone can do something to make a difference.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，以“Beautiful Liaoyang, Civilized Life”为题进行写作。介绍注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态主要用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍我们可以怎么做；第二段介绍自己的观点；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文：
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
For teenagers, it’s important to get on well with parents. How can we get on well with our parents
Firstly, we can tell them about our school life and study. They will be glad to listen to your happiness and your problems. Secondly, we can offer to help our parents with some housework, such as tidying up the bedroom and doing the dishes. Then they won’t be so tired after work. Thirdly, when we are in trouble, we can have a discussion with them. And we should ask our parents for help or advice. Finally, we can do some sports together. I think it is very helpful to maintain relationship by doing sports together.
In a word, we should try our best to get on well with our parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇材料作文，要求以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ”为题写一篇文章，谈论如何与父母相处。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”，人称为第一人称。
③ 提示：文章在写作时注意保持语句的通顺和上下文的连贯，不要遗漏要点，也可以适当补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表示需要讨论“如何才能和父母友好相处”；
第二步，具体阐述各个要点，注意阐述时候逻辑清晰，以及观点前后的连贯性；
第三步，结尾总结，再次强调我们都需要与父母友好相处。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to do sth很高兴做某事
② offer to do sth主动提出做某事
③ tidy up打扫
④ be in trouble处于麻烦中
[高分句型]
Secondly, we can offer to help our parents with some housework, such as tidying up the bedroom and doing the dishes. （help sb with sth以及such as后接短语）
7．One possible version:
Do you like eating fruit salad And do you know how to make it If you don’t know, let me tell you.
First, buy some yogurt and some fruit you like. For example, you can buy an apple, an orange, a banana and some strawberries. Next, wash the apple and the strawberries, and peel the banana and the orange. Then, cut the fruit into pieces and put them into a bowl. Finally, pour the yogurt into the bowl and mix it up with the fruit pieces.
Make sure to mix them well.
It’s quite simple to make fruit salad, isn’t it Now you can have a try.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据所给的图片提示写一篇短文，介绍如何制作水果沙拉，包括买水果、洗水果、切水果、制作沙拉等，可适当发挥。
2、本文应该用祈使句来介绍如何制作水果沙拉；介绍如何制作水果沙拉时，应详细具体，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
8．例文
A school did a survey among 100 students about their activities for winter holidays. Here are the results.
16 percent of the students learned a new skill, such as cooking, tidying the room and so on. They think these basic skills can help them develop their independence. 22 percent of the students helped their family like doing housework. Their parents felt happy to see their children’s changes. 62 percent of the students played for fun such as watching TV, travelling and so on. As for me, I did community volunteer work during the winter holiday. How can we spend a meaningful holiday
First, we should learn some basic skills. Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy. Last but not least, we can take up some hobbies. So you can live a meaningful and enjoyable holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料介绍学生们的寒假活动以及如何度过一个有意义的寒假，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍学生们的寒假活动以及自己的寒假活动；
第三步，介绍如何度过一个有意义的寒假；
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②as for至于
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
① Here are the results.（倒装句）
② Second, we should keep exercising to stay healthy （动词不定式作目的状语）
9．例文：
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream.
In the fields, a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels. In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit, they are busy growing plants. Meanwhile, in hospitals, doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night. Besides, they also take good care of the old. In our daily life, we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people. As for scientists, they concentrate more on scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards. As students, what should we do to build our country I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。按照图片给的几种职业，谈论他们应该如何做贡献的。
2.写作指导：本文主要第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。从农民，医护人员，警察，科学家这几种职业，谈论他们应该如何为建设美丽中国做出贡献，最后介绍自己的做法。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文
Dear friends,
Recently I have noticed that most of you don’t pay attention to your health. Many students prefer to stay indoors to play computer games rather than go outdoors to do sports. So I must remind you about the importance of doing sports.
Doing sports isn’t a waste of time. Instead, it can not only build up your body, but also help to develop your willpower. What’s more, doing sports can make us more confident in ourselves. Believe it or not, doing sports can make your work or study better in a short time.
In a word, it is time for you to raise the awareness of doing sports and live a more healthy life from now on.
Best wishes.
Your,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：题目要求写一封有关运动的倡议书，要求包含所给的内容信息，可适当发挥，词数在80~100词左右。
写作指导：此文时态以一般现在时态为主。按照3段式格式，第一段：主要写周围的朋友和同学忽视健康，不做运动；第二段：主要写做运动带来的好处；第三段：总结全文，向同学们发出倡议：通过运动来变得更健康。
11．参考例文
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’ve read your questions about English learning in the newspaper. I’m writing to give you some help.
You said you always forget new words. Maybe you should write them down in your notebook and try to use them in your daily life. You also said it is difficult for you to understand long articles. You can try to find out the key words of each paragraph, which helps you to understand the main idea quickly. What’s more, listening to English songs and watching English movies are also a good way to learn English. Last but not least, if you want to improve your writing ability, you can make a pen friend whom you can send e-mails to.
Keep on doing them, and I believe you will make great progress in your English learning. If there is anything more that I can help with, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封建议信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，表明写信目的；
第二步，先说明大明遇到的英语学习问题，再针对该问题给出适当的建议，接着再补充一到两个英语学习的有效方法，可要列举具体的事例；
第三步，鼓励大明继续努力学习并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in your daily life在你的日常生活中
②what’s more还有
③last but not least最后并且也是同样重要的
④keep on doing sth坚持做某事
[高分句型]
①You also said it is difficult for you to understand long articles.（含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句；it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②You can try to find out the key words of each paragraph, which helps you to understand the main idea quickly.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
③Listening to English songs and watching English movies are also a good way to learn English.（动名词作主语）
④Last but not least, if you want to improve your writing ability, you can make a pen friend whom you can send e-mails to.（if引导的条件状语从句；whom引导的定语从句）
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