2024届高考英语读后续写微技能指导动作链导学案（无答案）

读后续写微技能指导
—动作链的描写
一．利用句型结构使其形成动作链
句型1.动作三连结构（A, B and C结构）
1. 上车=？
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2.歌手唱歌 = ？
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Scene 1 跳水救人
Henry jumped into the river and saved Robert.
________ the screams, Henry________________the riverside, __________ his clothes and ___________ the water without hesitation. He ______ Robert just as he was sinking the last time. By great effort, and with much danger to himself, he ___________ Robert to the shore.
句型2: A-ing，B 或者A，B-ing
1.Standing straight and taking a deep breath, Peter began to read his presentation that he had practised many times in a loud and formal voice.(陈欣冉）
2. He hung his head ，_________________________(尽量避免和我有眼神的接触）（2022高考范文）
句型3.doing +谓语动词+doing
他们站在阳台上，仰望天空，感受这份珍贵的平静
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句型4.done +谓语动词+ doing
被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了小手，小声说，“我来”
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句型5.having done +谓语动词
战争结束后，战士回到家中...
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二.添加修饰成分，使其动作更生动
.可以添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词。
①with+情感名词的搭配：
with delight/excitement/ pleasure/ happiness/joy/satisfaction /anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride /caution/care/patience/certainty
如：Her eyes shone_________________ 眼睛中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
②with+身体部位
with its hungry red eyes/ its sharp teeth/her shaky hand/her pale lips
The ferocious wolf stared at Mac with its hungry red eyes.
She kissed Oliver with her pale lips.
③in+名词 in surprise/amazement/shock/sorrow伤心
in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用..的嗓音
In a tone of surprise /curiosity /impatience /regret /command命令/sarcasm讽刺
如：He gazed at me________________（惊讶地）
(4)副词 suddenly /immediately /instantly /rapidly /firmly /slowly /angrily/happily/excitedly/
如：He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.
圈出短文里介词短语，副词的修饰作用
Suddenly, A moving dot(点) on the horizon was spotted. As it drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly. "The helicopter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately to it and yelled at the helicopter with full-strength. To her great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground and Tom jumped out. The moment Tom's eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms. "Honey, Never will I leave you again. "Jane sobbed in tears. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly.(2016.10 浙江卷)
三、借助多样化语法：使其形成饱满的动作面
形容词作状语 (修饰句子主语)
As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, _____________________(又累又害怕）
此处将环境描写，动作描写以及情感描写结合在一起，形成了饱满的动作面。
2.With的复合结构
I squeezed ... in my hand, __________________________（心里忐忑不安）
3.独立主格（名词/代词 + doing/done/ to do /n./adj./adv./介词短语）
In the distance, elephants were eating grass, ears flapping lazily as they moved.
圈出短文里借助语法表达更生动的句子
Suddenly, A moving dot(点) on the horizon was spotted. Exhausted but hopeful, Jane jumped to her feet to catch a clear sight of it."The helicopter,"Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area, waving her yellow blouse desperately and yelling at the helicopter with excitement. This time she was spotted, which made her feel more delighted. Eyes brimming with tears, Jane jumped off the rock and rushed towards Tom like a flying arrow, hugging tightly in his arms, “please never leave me alone!"
句子训练：
1. He left his tent _______________________
他一头雾水地离开他的帐篷
Hearing that he had been saved, we _____________________
听说他得救了，我们松了口气。
3. He looked at me __________________________________
他以可怕的眼神看着我。
They left the cave___________________________
他们惊慌地离开了那个山洞。
5. She stared __________________________at the stranger.
她惊愕地盯着那陌生人。
6.At the sight of the snake, Jack _________________________________________ ________________________一看到那条蛇，杰克跳起来、抓起一块石头就扔过去。
7._________________________________________, the people on board got panicked, ___________________飞机急剧下降，机上的人们开始恐慌, 全都尖叫起来。
8.At last, we returned to our camp, _______________________________________
我们终于回到了营地，又渴又饿筋疲力尽。
______________________, fearoverwhelmed me, ________________________
夜幕降临，我感到极度害怕，使我浑身哆嗦。
10.________________________, we ran ____________.
恶狼在后面紧追，我们拼命地逃跑。
11.排了两个小时的队，我被告知票已经卖完了
_____________________________________, I was told that the tickets ha been sold
out.
Scene 3（场景三）骑行遇狼逃生 (2018.06 浙江卷)）
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul put down the window and said,“Come on, get in the car.”Then, Mac jumped off the bicycle and got into the car.“ What a narrow escape!” Mac added. The wolf walked around the car, but just in vain. Finally, Ma c was safe and expressed his gratitude to Paul.
用今天学过的内容改写这段话，使其更生动：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul rolled down the window and ________,“Come on, get in the car.”___________, Mac jumped off the bicycle and dashed into the back seat of the car. “ What a narrow escape!” Mac sighed______________________, The wolf walked around the car and howled at them _________, but just in vain. ____________(realize)the wolf couldn't catch up any more, Mac________________ and sank down to the back seat. Paul handed him a bottle of water and he managed a weak smile, ______________something like “Thank you very much”.
语篇输出：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·江苏如皋第二次适应性考试)One dark night during the summer holidays, I walked over to my friend Jeremy's house to stay over. We were going to have a movie marathon of our favorite sci fi adventure film series and stay up late with some snacks and drinks. I had not been to his house before because he had only recently moved, so I asked him to text me over his new address: 64 Cherry Tree Road.
Jeremy's new street was a nice part of town, lined with tall trees and most of the houses had a hedge or fence at the front. Some of the houses had their numbers on the gate, some on the house, and some didn't seem to have a number at all. It had started to cloud over as I left my house, and as I turned on to his road, it began to rain. As the rain got heavier, I rushed to find number sixty four and eventually found it ... or so I thought. I walked past number 62, so assumed it was the next one, which appeared to have no number. You see, usually the odd numbers are on one side of the street, the even numbers on the other.
I walked quickly up the driveway to the front door. It was very dark too and there were no lights on inside the house, which did seem strange. However, I was getting drenched (湿透的)and wanted to get inside! I rang the bell, but nobody came, so I rang and knocked again. Then I noticed there was house number after all. A ridiculous small one that said 63. There was a sudden thud (呯的一声) inside the apparently empty house, and a moment later the front door opened violently.
A hooded (戴兜帽的) man with a beard and blue glasses hurried past me and ran into the street. There was a shout from inside: “Wait for me, Rob！” Another man rushed out, but he dropped what he was carrying and tripped on the doorstep. The other man shouted from the road “C'mon, Kev！” he picked himself up and looked at me before racing after his friend.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
I looked at what the second man had dropped; it was jewellery.___________　
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“You were brave for trying stop them，” said the officer. ______________　
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