期末话题作文复习之“Collecting things”课件(共21张PPT) 2023-2024学年牛津深圳版七年级上学期英语

(共21张PPT)
Writing
期末话题作文复习“Collecting things”
Learning targets 学习目标
1. Be able to master correct
writing methods
能够掌握正确的写作方法
2. Know how to improve writing ability
知道如何提高写作能力
【话题作文演练】
假设你是李华,平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。要求80 词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1.When did you start to collect tickets
2.How many tickets do you have now
3. How do you get them
4.Why do you like collecting tickets
I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第一步: 审题 Examine the topic
审题
人称 person
时态 tense
要点 main points
要求 request
认真审题，在题
干中划出相应内容
【审题】
假设你是李华,平时喜欢收集各种票。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。要求80 词左右，可围绕提示内容适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1.When did you start to collect tickets
2.How many tickets do you have now
3. How do you get them
4.Why do you like collecting tickets
I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
要点
要求
人称：以第一人称为主
时态：用一般现在时和一般过去时
第二步：列出提纲（ Outline）
Beginning
Ending
Body
已给出
when to start to collect tickets
how many tickets I have now
how I get them
......
why I like collecting tickets
......
第三步：激活词汇
必备词汇
亮点词汇
形容词：beautiful,
different...
therefore（因此，可以替换so）
as well（也，放在肯定句末尾）
...not only...but also...
（不仅......而且......，连接相同的结构）
第四步：选用句型
1.主+系+表 It was beautiful.
2.主+谓+宾+状语
I began to collect tickets ten years ago.
3.主+谓+宾+宾补
I ask my friends to give theirs to me as
well.
对于基础一般的同学，要学会用常用的简单句句型来表达要点。
主语
谓语
宾语
状语
定语
补语
表语
句子成分
由名词、代词、不定式、动名词等来充当
主要的
句子
成分
简单句要点翻译
1.要得到它们并不难。
It is not hard to get them.
2.我们有很多票。
We have a lot of tickets.
3.我喜欢收集票。
I enjoy collecting tickets.
对于基础较好的同学来说：
一篇好的作文需要一些精彩的句型和词汇来提升文章档次。
（一）：运用从句
When I got a ticket for the first time,
I found that it was beautiful.
时间状语从句
宾语从句
对于基础较好的同学来说：
一篇好的作文需要一些精彩的句型和词汇来提升文章档次。
（二）：运用亮点词汇
Therefore, I began collecting tickets.
因此
不仅......而且.....
They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories.
第五步：谋篇布局
作文主体部分：
I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well.
作文结尾部分：
I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories.
I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.
I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now,I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well.
I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories.
优秀范文
I love collecting different kinds of tickets, such as train tickets and tickets to museums and other places.
I began to collect tickets ten years ago. When I got a ticket for the first time, I found that it was beautiful. Therefore, I began collecting tickets. Up to now,I have got more than 500 different tickets. It is not hard to get them. I often go traveling with my parents during the holidays, so we have a lot of tickets. I ask my friends to give theirs to me as well.
I enjoy collecting tickets. They not only help me remember different beautiful places clearly, but also make me think of my happy memories.
优秀范文学习
Can you find out the highlights（亮点） of the composition
★【亮点点拨】
1. 文章结构条理清晰，上下文意思连贯，句子之间逻辑通顺一致；表达符合语法。
2. 能够运用多种句式，灵活多变，如时间状语从句、宾语从句、并列句等。
谋篇布局之三段式写作
英语作文最流行的结构就是三段式，深受阅卷老师的喜爱。
为什么呢 因为这种结构十分清晰。
“观点—要点—总结”让人一目了然。
第一段：简单明了，衔接过渡。
第二段：分要点展开，注意要围绕主题合理拓展内容。
第三段：总结，点题，表达希望，升华思想，立意深远。
person 、tense 、 spelling
人称 时态 拼写
grammar 、 capital 、punctuation
语法 大小写 标点
……
第六步：检查改错（Check your composition）
在时间允许的情况下可以先打草稿再抄写 ！
第七步：书写规范, 卷面整洁
高分首先看卷面！然后
看要点、准确性和流畅性！
好的书写范例
1.书写时，每个字母都应自左向右倾斜5度。
大写字母都一样高。
2. 词与词之间一般空出小写字母a的宽度为宜。
see you !!