2024届高三英语复习- 作文（人与动物、人与植物）（含答案）

2024届高三英语复习- 作文（人与动物、人与植物）
1 ．（2023·全国 ·模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短 文。
The cottage was located near the forest and during the vacation, the Michaelis family always enjoyed breathing in the fresh smell of trees and listening to the beautiful singing of birds overhead. It was a pleasant Wednesday evening when Crystal Michaelis was busy barbecuing with his family in their cottage backyard in Cedar Hills, Utah. The sausages, steak and burgers sizzled (咝咝作响) on the cooker while his wife, Anna, was
making hot dogs and salad. The family was satisfied with the barbecue dinner and chatted in the yard till seven.
Three kids started to play hide-and-seek after the dinner while the couple cleaned the table and backyard. Suddenly, their pet dog Ella, a Labrador Retriever, acted protectively, barking loudly and standing near the yard’s rock wall. At first, the Michaelis family didn’t think much about Ella’s behavior, but when the dog started looking back quickly at the kids and pushed one of them to get away, Crystal realized something went wrong and asked all
the kids to go inside the room quickly with their mom.
Ella appeared very cautious and continued to bark while circling around in the backyard. Crystal thought it was very concerning and picked up the stick beside the door. In the quiet night, he looked around and heard the sound of something stepping on leaves. “Who is that Hello ” All of a sudden, Crystal almost froze upon seeing a
huge shadow jumping down into the yard where the family was relaxing just moments ago.
It was a mountain lion. Ella barked even louder and charged towards it. The mountain lion moved forwards suddenly and attacked Ella. “Come inside, Crystal!” shouted Anna desperately. The kids also saw the mountain lion
and were frightened by the scene. Crystal felt his heart seemed to stop. After throwing the stick at the mountain
lion, he shouted and ran as quickly as possible to the room.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
While Ella and the mountain lion fought, Crystal called the police for help.
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Crystal quickly checked Ella and found over 20 bites on her body.
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2 ．（2023·山东泰安 · 统考一模）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
Dora is a seven-year-old girl. One day, when she visited her friend Alice, she saw a beautiful bird in a cage on the balcony of the house. Alice told her it was her new pet. “How beautiful it is!” said Dora. “I also want to have
such a bird as my pet.”
That day when Dora returned home, she told her mother about Alice’s bird. Then she asked, “Mom, can I also get a bird ” “Of course, you can,” said her mother. “But you need to wait because I’ve no time to visit a pet store these days.” Dora agreed. One day, when Dora was back home from school, she saw a cage in the living room. In the cage was a beautiful blue bird. Her mother was standing next to the cage, smiling. “Oh, a bird!” Dora shouted happily. She ran to it and looked at it happily. “It’s a birthday gift for you,” said her mother “Thank you, Mom. I
love it so much!” said Dora excitedly.
The following day, Dora invited her friends to come over to see her bird. All of her friends said it was a really beautiful bird and Dora was very glad to hear that. She and her friends played with the bird for a long time that day.
Her friends all wished they could have such a bird as their pet.
Sadly, a few weeks later, Dora became sick. The doctor told her parents that she got the flu and had to say at home. In order not to make her friends sick, her parents asked her friends not to come to play with her. Dora felt very sad. How she wished her friends would come and visit her! But she knew her parents were right. She’d better stay alone. Since Dora had no one to play with, she could only play with her bird. However, she felt that her bird
didn’t seem to be happy either.
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Dora watched her bird in silence.
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When her mother came inside, Dora told her mother about her decision.
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3 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
ALEX pedaled his bike along the country lane that led to his house. As he rounded a bend, the tips of the cattails that grew around Johnson’s Pond came into view. His dad took him canoeing there sometimes, and Alex loved it. The pond was always so alive with activity. Frogs croaked along the shore, dragonflies hunted among the
cattails, and sometimes Alex discovered turtles(乌龟) basking(晒太阳) on sunny rocks.
Alex was curious about the turtles he saw. One week, when it was too rainy to go canoeing, he and his dad went to the library to check out books on turtles. Alex learned that turtles don’t have warm blood like people do. That’s why they have to sit in the sun to warm themselves. Now it looked like tomorrow might be another sunny
day. He decided he would ask Dad if they could go canoeing and look for turtles again.
Just then Alex saw something in the road up ahead. It looked like a big gray rock. But it was a funny place for
a rock to be.
And then, as Alex watched, the rock started to move.
When he rode his bike up to get a closer look, he saw that it wasn’t a rock at all. It was a large turtle crawled
its way across the road. It had a bony, beak-shaped mouth and a long, jagged tail. Alex knew right away it was a
snapping turtle.
He also knew not to get too close. He had read that a snapping turtle has a powerful bite even though it doesn’t have teeth. It could even bite off someone’s finger. He stood at a distance and watched the turtle move slowly over
the road.
Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a car approaching. The turtle was still only halfway across the road. Alex
knew he couldn’t pick it up to move it safely to the grass. What could he do
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly.
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To make the warning sign, Alex hurried back home and started his work with some leftover wood and paint.
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4 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下而材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists ” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always
content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness
around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds ( 猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me
before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline ( 肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are
coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声) ，they ran straight
for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
注意：
1 ．续写词数应为 150 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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5 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college.
As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the
Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw
a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked.
At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did
not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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6 ．（2023·安徽 · 安庆一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
We spent the whole weekend watching the ospreys as they flew around gracefully and fished in the pools, and
we were very glad a week later when the Easter holidays started.
We spent every day there, cycling out while it was still dark, making notes, doing drawings. taking
photographs, recording the birds' activities, and soon we realized that they were starting to make a nest.
We decided that it would be better to keep the whole thing a secret because we knew there were lots of egg collectors who would like to have an osprey's egg in their collection, even though it was illegal. So we said nothing
to the few people we met there-the occasional fisherman or walker.
But one evening when we got back from a day watching our ospreys, my parents asked lots of questions about
what we were doing.
“Shall we tell them, Mike ” I asked.
“Well, we'll need them to promise not to tell anyone,” he answered, only half joking.
So we told them all about it and they were very impressed.
The holidays ended. By then the ospreys had finished building their nest at the top of one pine tree on the island in the middle of Big Pool. Of course we still went to watch them every weekend, and a couple of nights after
school.
One Saturday we were surprised to find a white van parked on the roadside near the track, and a middle-aged
man looking at us. As we approached he said, “Aha, and here come our two bird experts!”
Mike and I exchanged glances that were both puzzled and worried. “Don and Mike, I guess. I'm Mr Roberts. Well, whichever of you is Don...,” here I nodded, “I have to thank your father for telling me about your splendid
find. I'll just wander around and see what I can see. Pleased to meet you.” Then he turned and started to walk
around the lake.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右。
2.请按如下格式作答。
The rest of the day was very tense.
By the time I got home that evening, I was really angry.
7 ．（2023·浙江宁波 ·镇海中学阶段练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成
一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her a baby duckling
in a yellow basket.
“Mom said later that she bought the little duck because she felt sorry for it,” recalled Sara. The people at the
pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.
Sara’s mother really didn’t think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise, Pinky grew and
got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a healthy, hungry duck with white feathers.
“We fed Pinky oatmeal, cooked and uncooked, and small pieces of vegetables,” said Sara. Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara. Everyone treated Pinky as a
family member.
But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk” came. Sara’s Mom and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with other ducks. It was not natural for ducks to live indoors with a family, her father told her. He added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all the
same things that ducks in the wild do.
Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara’s parents decided to take Pinky to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would have the chance to live a natural life
and Sara could still visit her.
The big day came, Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said that Pinky did not
look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.
注意:
所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
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Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father.
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The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!
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8 ．（2022·全国 ·模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and
Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I began to
lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done
at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay
eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare( 日托所). One of their customers was leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they
asked, might our family be interested in adopting her
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs.
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When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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9 ．（2022·湖南 · 高三校联考）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的
短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous,
back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of
us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge
piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were
able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I
noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness
had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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10 ．（2022·江苏盐城 · 校考期中）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的
短文。
One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently
powerless.
So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands. It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Don’t worry. We’ll get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeon had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water
and some grains.
For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by little, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could
also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked ( 啄) at me. Finally it
completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I
tied an orange string (线)around its leg.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
One day, however, when I returned home, Grandpa met me at the door, looking embarrassed.
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Sure enough, I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon!
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_____________________________________________________________________________________2024届高三英语复习- 作文（人与动物、人与植物）
1 ．（2023·全国 ·模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短 文。
The cottage was located near the forest and during the vacation, the Michaelis family always enjoyed breathing in the fresh smell of trees and listening to the beautiful singing of birds overhead. It was a pleasant Wednesday evening when Crystal Michaelis was busy barbecuing with his family in their cottage backyard in Cedar Hills, Utah. The sausages, steak and burgers sizzled (咝咝作响) on the cooker while his wife, Anna, was
making hot dogs and salad. The family was satisfied with the barbecue dinner and chatted in the yard till seven.
Three kids started to play hide-and-seek after the dinner while the couple cleaned the table and backyard. Suddenly, their pet dog Ella, a Labrador Retriever, acted protectively, barking loudly and standing near the yard’s rock wall. At first, the Michaelis family didn’t think much about Ella’s behavior, but when the dog started looking back quickly at the kids and pushed one of them to get away, Crystal realized something went wrong and asked all
the kids to go inside the room quickly with their mom.
Ella appeared very cautious and continued to bark while circling around in the backyard. Crystal thought it was very concerning and picked up the stick beside the door. In the quiet night, he looked around and heard the sound of something stepping on leaves. “Who is that Hello ” All of a sudden, Crystal almost froze upon seeing a
huge shadow jumping down into the yard where the family was relaxing just moments ago.
It was a mountain lion. Ella barked even louder and charged towards it. The mountain lion moved forwards suddenly and attacked Ella. “Come inside, Crystal!” shouted Anna desperately. The kids also saw the mountain lion
and were frightened by the scene. Crystal felt his heart seemed to stop. After throwing the stick at the mountain
lion, he shouted and ran as quickly as possible to the room.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
While Ella and the mountain lion fought, Crystal called the police for help.
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Crystal quickly checked Ella and found over 20 bites on her body.
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【答案】
While Ella and the mountain lion fought. Crystal called the polic
e
far help.
“We
were
attacked by
a
mountain
lion in Cedar Hills. Please come a
nd help!” The Michaelis
family
saw
the
fight
from
inside
the
room
in
tears
and
hoped that the police could come as soon as poss
ible to rescue
their beloved pet.
Ella barked
loudly
and held
stern
eye contact, trying to appear stronger and bigger. However, face to
face
with
the
horri
ble beast,
she
came
off
worse.
Minutes later, the police arrived and managed to capture the mountain
lion.
Crystal quickly checked Ella and found over 20 bites
on her b
ody.
There was blood
all
over the
backyard
and
on Ella’s head, legs, along with her neck. The Michaelis family hurried to take
her to
t
he
vet
to
have
the
wounds
treated. The doctor examined Ella carefully, who was astonished to
see the
severe
injuries.
F
ortunately, none
of
the
bites would cause death. When asked what happened, Crystal was close to
tears
and
sa
id,
“I believe wholeheartedly
she
was
protecting
us
from
a
lion
at
the
risk
of
losing
her
life
.
She
is
our
hero
!”
【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，
讲述了
Michaelis
一家在森林旁的小屋度假。
一天晚上，
Michaelis
夫妇和
三个孩子在院子里烧烤，其后孩子们开始玩捉
迷藏。突然，宠物狗
Ella
表现得异常警惕，还推搡一个孩子
离开，男主人意识到可能有危险来临，就让他的家人进屋。随后，
一只美洲狮翻墙进来。宠物狗
Ella
勇敢
地与之搏斗。
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
①
由第一段首句
“
在
Ella
和美洲狮打斗时，
Crystal
给警察打电话求助
”
可知， 第一段可描写
Ella
和美洲狮的
打斗过程以及警察的救援。
②
由第二段首句
“Crystal
赶紧查看
Ella
的状况，发现
Ella
身上有
20
多处咬伤
”
可知，第二段可描写警察抓
)
(
走美洲狮后的场景，可重点描述
Michaelis
一
家带
Ella
就医及他们对
Ella
的感激之情。
2.
续写线索：打电话求助
——
希望警察尽快营救宠物
——
警察到来，成功捕获美洲狮
——
匆忙带
El
la
就医
——
医生对伤情感到惊讶
——
幸运的是，伤情不会致死
——
表示感激
3.
词汇激活：
行为类
帮助：
help/assist
希望做某事：
hope to do/expect to
do
到达：
arrive/get to
成功做某事：
manage to do sth./be succeeded
in
doing
sth.
情绪类
惊讶的：
astonished/amazed
幸运的是：
fortunately/luckily
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
The Michaelis family saw the fig
ht from inside
the
room
in
tears
and
hoped
that
the police
could
come
as
soon
as
possible to rescue their
beloved pet.(
运用了
that
引导宾语从句
)
[
高分句型
2]
The doctor examined Ella carefully, who was as
tonished to see
the
severe
injuries.(
运用了
who
引导非限制性定语
从句
)
)
2 ．（2023·山东泰安 · 统考一模）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
Dora is a seven-year-old girl. One day, when she visited her friend Alice, she saw a beautiful bird in a cage on the balcony of the house. Alice told her it was her new pet. “How beautiful it is!” said Dora. “I also want to have
such a bird as my pet.”
That day when Dora returned home, she told her mother about Alice’s bird. Then she asked, “Mom, can I also get a bird ” “Of course, you can,” said her mother. “But you need to wait because I’ve no time to visit a pet store these days.” Dora agreed. One day, when Dora was back home from school, she saw a cage in the living room. In the cage was a beautiful blue bird. Her mother was standing next to the cage, smiling. “Oh, a bird!” Dora shouted happily. She ran to it and looked at it happily. “It’s a birthday gift for you,” said her mother “Thank you, Mom. I
love it so much!” said Dora excitedly.
The following day, Dora invited her friends to come over to see her bird. All of her friends said it was a really beautiful bird and Dora was very glad to hear that. She and her friends played with the bird for a long time that day.
Her friends all wished they could have such a bird as their pet.
Sadly, a few weeks later, Dora became sick. The doctor told her parents that she got the flu and had to say at home. In order not to make her friends sick, her parents asked her friends not to come to play with her. Dora felt very sad. How she wished her friends would come and visit her! But she knew her parents were right. She’d better stay alone. Since Dora had no one to play with, she could only play with her bird. However, she felt that her bird
didn’t seem to be happy either.
Paragraph 1:
Dora watched her bird in silence.
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Paragraph 2:
When her mother came inside, Dora told her mother about her decision.
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(
【答案】
Paragraph
1
：
Dora watched her bird in silence.
She found her bird kept looking out of
the window.
In
t
he
trees
outside,
many birds were playing gladly.
She thought that perhaps he
r bird didn’t like kept in the cage
at
all.
Just
as
she
missed staying with her friends, it also
wanted to go
out to play
like
other birds.
But before
she
got
sick,
she
didn’t
think a lot about her bird. Now Dora realized she
shouldn’t
selfishly take
away
its
freedom
for her
own
enjoyment.
)
Paragraph 2：
(
When her mother came inside, Dora told her mother about
her decision.
She said,
“Mom,
can
you
set
my bird
)
(
free ” Her mother was surprised and asked wh
y. “I’m
sure it
also wants
friends,”
said
Dora.
Her mother
agreed.
She opened the cage and the bird cheerfully
flew
out
of
the window
and
disappeared
soon. A
few
days
later,
Dora
could play with her friends again. How excite
d she was! And when
she
looked
out
at the birds
in
the
trees,
she
knew her bird must be very happy at that mome
nt.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，
讲述了七岁女孩
Dora
收到了一只鸟作为生日礼物，
她邀
请朋友来看这只
鸟，
所有的朋友都说很漂亮，
Dora
非常开心， 不幸的是，
几周后
Dora
生病了， 为了不传染给朋友，
父母要
求她在家待着，
Dora
感到很难过，只能和小鸟玩，但她发现小鸟似
乎也不快乐。
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
①
由第一段首句内容
“Dora
默默地看着她的小鸟。
”
可知，
第一段可描写
Dora
看到鸟玩耍的场景意识到小鸟
也需要自由。
②
由第二段首句内容
“
妈妈进来后，
Dora
把自己的决定告
诉了妈妈。
”
可知，
第二段可描写
Dora
将小鸟放生
及再次看到树上的小鸟时的感悟。
2.
续写线索：发现小鸟往窗外看
——
意识到小鸟需要自由
——
告诉妈妈自己的决定
——
放生
——
感悟
3.
词汇激活
行为类
①
生病：
get
sick/fall
ill
②
询问：
ask/inquire
③
同意：
agree/approve
情绪类
①
高兴：
gladly/delighted
ly
②
惊讶：
surprised/astonished
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
She thought that perhaps her bird didn’t like kept in th
e cage
at
all.
（由连接词
that
引导的
宾语从句）
[
高分句型
2] And when she looked out at the birds
in the trees,
she
knew
her bird
must be
very
happy
at
that
moment.
（由从属连词
when
引导的时间
状语从句）
)
3 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
ALEX pedaled his bike along the country lane that led to his house. As he rounded a bend, the tips of the
cattails that grew around Johnson’s Pond came into view. His dad took him canoeing there sometimes, and Alex
loved it. The pond was always so alive with activity. Frogs croaked along the shore, dragonflies hunted among the
cattails, and sometimes Alex discovered turtles(乌龟) basking(晒太阳) on sunny rocks.
Alex was curious about the turtles he saw. One week, when it was too rainy to go canoeing, he and his dad went to the library to check out books on turtles. Alex learned that turtles don’t have warm blood like people do. That’s why they have to sit in the sun to warm themselves. Now it looked like tomorrow might be another sunny
day. He decided he would ask Dad if they could go canoeing and look for turtles again.
Just then Alex saw something in the road up ahead. It looked like a big gray rock. But it was a funny place for
a rock to be.
And then, as Alex watched, the rock started to move.
When he rode his bike up to get a closer look, he saw that it wasn’t a rock at all. It was a large turtle crawled its way across the road. It had a bony, beak-shaped mouth and a long, jagged tail. Alex knew right away it was a
snapping turtle.
He also knew not to get too close. He had read that a snapping turtle has a powerful bite even though it doesn’t have teeth. It could even bite off someone’s finger. He stood at a distance and watched the turtle move slowly over
the road.
Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a car approaching. The turtle was still only halfway across the road. Alex
knew he couldn’t pick it up to move it safely to the grass. What could he do
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
To make the warning sign, Alex hurried back home and started his work with some leftover wood and paint.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Thinking fast, he started jumping up and down and waving both hands wildly. “Stop! Stop!” he cried. The car
slowed to a stop, and the driver stuck his head out of the window with a puzzled look. Alex darted forward and
pointed at the moving turtle. “I’m just trying to save it.” he explained. With an understanding smile, the driver
applauded his efforts. Seeing the car pulling away, Alex was lost in deep thoughts. “Maybe I could put up a sign to
warn people there were turtles crossing the road,” he said to himself.
To make the sign, Alex hurried back home and found some leftover wood and paint. He hammered nails into
the wood to make a flat board, after which he painted a vivid picture of a turtle in the middle and added “Slow!
Turtles Crossing” at the bottom. He had completed all his work when Dad arrived home, who offered to carry the sign to the spot. Together they fixed the sign into the ground by the side of the road. With their work done, they
both breathed a sigh of relief and headed home with great satisfaction.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开， 讲述了 Alex 沿着乡间小路骑自行车回家时， 看到有一只啮龟在路上慢慢
移动，他在书上读到过，啮龟的咬合力很强，甚至能咬掉人的手指，所以他不能把它捡起来安全地转移，
这时一辆汽车驶来，啮龟还在半路上，他能怎么办呢？
【详解】 1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他快速地思考着， 开始上蹿下跳， 疯狂地挥舞着双手。 ”可知， 第一段可描写 Alex 示
意司机停车，并想出立牌子提醒人们的办法。
②由第二段首句内容“为了制作标牌， Alex 匆忙赶回家，找到了一些剩余的木头和油漆。 ”可知，第二段可
描写 Alex 回家制作牌子并和爸爸一起钉在路边的地上。
2.续写线索：
司机停车——解释原因——想出办法—— 回家制作牌子——把牌子钉在路边——满足
3.词汇激活
行为类
①呼喊： cry/shout
②称赞： applaud/praise
③陷入沉思： be lost in deep thoughts/fall deep into thought
情绪类
①困惑： puzzled/confused
(
。
心满意足：
with great satisfact
ion /feel very satisfied
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]. He hammered nails into the wood to make a flat board
, after which he painted
a vivid
picture of
a turtle in the middle and added “Slow!
Turtles
Crossing”
at the bottom.
（
由
“
介词
after+
关系代词
which”
引导的非限制性定语从句）
[
高分句型
2]. He had completed all his work wh
en Dad arrived home, who offered to
carry
the
sign
to
the
spot.
（由从属连词
when
引导的时间状语从句和关系代词
who
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
4 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下而材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists ” We had explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and always
content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds ( 猎狗) hit the ground, sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shot an alarmed glance at me
before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline ( 肾上腺素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad, they are
coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close enough
for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声) ，they ran straight
for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
注意：
1 ．续写词数应为 150 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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(
【答案】
Shadow’s back fur rose. Down came the group of
dogs towards us, roaring angrily.
Just
as
one
of
them
approached us, I raised the pepper spray and spray the liquid to
it.
Luckily
it
jum
ped
aside.
However, more
dogs
charged at me, which made the pepper spray useless. Just then, Jesse went up bravely and threw the
thi
ck branches
around us, making it difficult for the
dogs to move near. Meanwhile,
Shadow
shouted
at the
dogs
aggressively
in
an
attempt to scare them
away.
Surprisingly, the entire mass of
dogs turne
d tail and fled. I was
glad
to
see
them
disappear.
I
thanked
Jesse
for
her bravery and I patted Shadow on his back. While he was bigger than those dogs,
he
was
not
a
fraid
in
face
of
the
mass of
dogs. We continued to set off
to search
for
our trail.This
time, with
Shadow
leading
the
way
,
we
would
not
get lost and soon we found the right trail. After the
adventure, w
e returned home
safe
and
sound
thanks
to
my brave
son and the biggest
dog.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者，他的儿子和狗一起探险的故事。他们一起徒步旅行，在华
莱士山寻找一条小径。因为迷路，
遇到一群狗攻击，
在危机时刻，
他们的狗
Shadow
勇敢吓退一群狗， 而保
护他们的故事。
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
。
由第一段首句内容
“Shadow
的背部毛发立了起来。
”
可知，第一段可描写他们和
Shadow
在遇到这一群狗
)
(
之后的表现。
。
由第二段首句内容
“
令人惊讶的是，整群狗都掉头逃跑了。
”
可
知，第二段可描写那群狗退去，他们脱险
后的回家以及他们的心理活动。
2.
续写线索：徒步旅行
——
探索
——
发现一群狗
——
遭攻击
——Shadow
吓退狗
——
回家
3.
词汇激活
行为类
寻找：
look for /search/seek
回家：
go back home/return home
爬：
climb /ascend/mount
情绪类
感谢：
thank/show our appreciation/show our gratitude/be grateful
害怕的：
afraid /dreadful/horrible
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Just as one of
them approached u
s, I
raised
the
pepper
spray
and
spray
the
liquid
to
it.
（由连
接词
as
引导的时间状语从句）
[
高分句型
2] However
，
more dogs charged at me, which made the pepper
spray useless.
（由关系代词
w
hich
引导
非限制性定语从句）
[
高分句型
3] I thanked Jesse for her bravery and I patted
Shadow on
his back.
（由
省略
that
引导的宾语从句）
)
5 ．（2023·全国 · 高三专题练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整
的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to college.
As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the
Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say, is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone.
But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get excited when she saw
a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors unlocked.
At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did
not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
Paragraph 1:
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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Paragraph 2:
My purse was right next to the door.
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(
【答案】
The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually,
it
was
a
thief
w
ho
entered
our
kitchen
and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief
stole nothing. I called the police to
report
the break-in.
I
also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to talk
with us
anyway.
In
fact, recently
many local homes had been broken in on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stol
en.
My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief
away before he
or
she
could
steal
it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhu
barb with
a big
steak
dinner.
Rhubarb
lived
to be
almost
12 years old, but that night wa
s the only time she barked in her
entire
life.
Fortunately,
she never
saw
the
need to warn us of
any other danger. We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her
like
a member
of
the
family.
【导语】本文以作者家里的一条狗为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一条名叫大黄的拉布拉多杂交犬。这条
狗和家人相处愉快，在她大约
4
岁的时候，她成功吓跑了小偷，保
护了作者一家的财物的故事。
)
(
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
①
由第一段首句内容
“
第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。
”
可知，第一段可
描写作者一家发现晚上有人闯
入，随后报警的过程。
②
由第二段首句内容
“
我的钱包就在门边。
”
可知，第二段可描写作者一家发
现并没有丢失财物，更加感激
狗狗大黄。
2.
续写线索：发现有人闯入
——
报警
——
警员查看
——
财物没有丢失
——
对大
黄充满感激
3.
词汇激活
行为类
①
进入：
enter/break into
②
打电话：
call/ring
up/pho
ne
③
把
……
吓跑：
scare away/scare off
情绪类
①
感激的：
thankful /
gratef
ul
②
幸运地：
fortunately/luckily
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Actually, it was a thief
who entered our kitchen and gar
age.
(
运用了强调句型
)
[
高分句型
2] When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with
a big
steak
dinner.
(
运用了
when
引导的时间状语从句和省略连接词的宾语从句
)
)
6 ．（2023·安徽 · 安庆一中校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成
一篇完整的短文。
We spent the whole weekend watching the ospreys as they flew around gracefully and fished in the pools, and
we were very glad a week later when the Easter holidays started.
We spent every day there, cycling out while it was still dark, making notes, doing drawings. taking
photographs, recording the birds' activities, and soon we realized that they were starting to make a nest.
We decided that it would be better to keep the whole thing a secret because we knew there were lots of egg collectors who would like to have an osprey's egg in their collection, even though it was illegal. So we said nothing
to the few people we met there-the occasional fisherman or walker.
But one evening when we got back from a day watching our ospreys, my parents asked lots of questions about
what we were doing.
“Shall we tell them, Mike ” I asked.
“Well, we'll need them to promise not to tell anyone,” he answered, only half joking.
So we told them all about it and they were very impressed.
The holidays ended. By then the ospreys had finished building their nest at the top of one pine tree on the island in the middle of Big Pool. Of course we still went to watch them every weekend, and a couple of nights after
school.
One Saturday we were surprised to find a white van parked on the roadside near the track, and a middle-aged
man looking at us. As we approached he said, “Aha, and here come our two bird experts!”
Mike and I exchanged glances that were both puzzled and worried. “Don and Mike, I guess. I'm Mr Roberts. Well, whichever of you is Don...,” here I nodded, “I have to thank your father for telling me about your splendid
find. I'll just wander around and see what I can see. Pleased to meet you.” Then he turned and started to walk
around the lake.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右。
2.请按如下格式作答。
The rest of the day was very tense.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
By the time I got home that evening, I was really angry.
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__________________
(
【答案】
The rest of
the day was very tense. Mr. Roberts appeared from time to
time
on
different
sides
of
the poo
l,
watching the ospreys and taking photographs. Hours later, he came over to w
here
Mike
and
I
were
sitting
watching
)
the birds. “I’m off now,” he said. “Thank you and give my best wishes to your father.” Soon his van disappeared in
the distance. Thankfully the ospreys were safe and sound! But why did my father betray our trust
By the time I got home that evening,I was really angry. I stormed into the house. “Dad,” I shouted. “What
have you done Who is Mr. Roberts ” My father looked a bit embarrassed and explained, “I’m sorry. I know I
shouldn’t have told him about the ospreys, but I was so proud of what you and Mike are doing. Don’t worry, love.
Mr. Robert is just a birdwatcher like you.” I walked up to my room, relieved.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和朋友发现了鱼鹰的巢穴，担心鱼鹰的蛋被蛋收藏者拿走， 于是决定保密。假期结束时，鱼鹰们已经在大池塘中央岛上的一棵松树顶上筑好了巢，却来了一个名叫
Roberts 的中年人，声称是作者的父亲告诉了他关于鱼鹰的发现。
【详解】 1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这一天剩下的时间里气氛都很紧张。”可知，第一段可描写 Roberts 观察鱼鹰的经过，
以及作者内心的疑惑。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上当我回到家时，我真的很生气。 ”可知，第二段可描写作者回家告诉了父亲
这件事，得到父亲的回答，得知 Roberts 先生也是个观鸟者，作者送了口气。
2.续写线索：Roberts 观鸟的经过——作者困惑父亲的背叛——作者生气地回家——得到父亲关于 Roberts 的
解释——作者松了口气
3.词汇激活
行为类
观察： watch/ observe
给某人某物： give sth. to sb./ offer sth. to sb.
消失： disappear/ vanish
情绪类
自豪： be proud of / take pride in
尴尬： embarrassed / awkward
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Mr. Roberts appeared from time to time on different sides of the pool, watching the ospreys
and taking photographs. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Hours later, he came over to where Mike and I were sitting watching the birds. (运用了where 引导宾
语从句和现在分词作状语)
7 ．（2023·浙江宁波 ·镇海中学阶段练习）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成
一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
Sara Savick remembers one special Easter when she was nine years old. Her parents gave her a baby duckling
in a yellow basket.
“Mom said later that she bought the little duck because she felt sorry for it,” recalled Sara. The people at the
pet store colored the feathers pink for Easter. Sara named the duck Pinky.
Sara’s mother really didn’t think the baby duck would survive very long. But to her surprise, Pinky grew and
got stronger and stronger. Soon, the little duckling was a healthy, hungry duck with white feathers.
“We fed Pinky oatmeal, cooked and uncooked, and small pieces of vegetables,” said Sara. Pinky lived inside the house with Sara and her family. She specially fancied taking baths with Sara. Everyone treated Pinky as a
family member.
But just when everything appeared to be perfect, the night of the “talk” came. Sara’s Mom and Dad sat her down, explaining that the best thing for Pinky was to live a normal duck life, with other ducks. It was not natural for ducks to live indoors with a family, her father told her. He added Pinky needed to swim in ponds and do all the
same things that ducks in the wild do.
Sara started to cry, knowing what was going to happen. Sara’s parents decided to take Pinky to a park, which was two miles away. There was a pond with a lot of other ducks. Pinky would have the chance to live a natural life
and Sara could still visit her.
The big day came, Sara and her parents put Pinky in a box and drove to the park. Sara said that Pinky did not
look happy; maybe Pinky was convinced that she was a human, not a duck.
注意:
所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右;
续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph 1
Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at the pond, even Sara’s father.
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Paragraph 2
The next morning, when looking out of the kitchen window, Sara couldn’t believe her eyes!
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(
【答案】
Everyone was sad when they left Pinky at th
e pond, even
Sara’s
father. But
he
tried
to
convince
Sara
that
Pinky was fine. Walking towards the car,
Sara looked over her
shoulder and
saw
Pinky
standing
alone.
The
other
ducks were swimming around in circl
es, looking at
Pinky.
To
Sara,
it
seemed
that
they
were
trying
to
identify
the
strange animal. They didn’t recognize Pinky as a duck.
Worried
about
Pinky,
Sa
ra
dreamed
of
Pinky being bullied
by other ducks the whole night.
The next morning, when looking out of
the kitchen window,
Sara couldn’t believe her eyes! There
was
Pinky,
happily walking around on the grass. Thrilled at what she
saw,
she
kept
asking
herself,”
Ho
w
did
she
make
it ”
After all, it was two miles away and he managed to walk back through the
city
street.
Incredible!
But
her parents
drove Pinky back to the pond again regardless of
her request. The following morning, there was Pinky
again
on t
he
grass!
Seeing Pinky again, her father, waving his arms about
wildly, moved his
lips without
saying
anything.
Meanwhile,
Sarah, overjoyed, hugged Pinky tightly, tears streamin
g down her cheeks.
【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
Sara
Savi
ck
九岁时的复活节，
父母送给她一只小鸭子
Pinky
，在他们的
精心照顾下
Pinky
渐渐长大，
有一天父母告诉
Sa
ra
，
Pinky
必须回到野外和其他鸭子过一样的生活，
他们决
定把
Pinky
带到附近公园的一个池塘，那一
天到来了。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当他们把
Pinky
放到池塘离开时，每个人都很难过
……
所以应
该写
Pinky
第一天到池塘发生的事情，即他们依
依不舍里离开池塘，其他鸭子看到
Pinky
后的反应及
Sara
对
Pinky
的担心等内容。第二段开头是：第二天早上，当向厨房窗户外面看时，
Sara
不敢相信自己的眼
睛
……
本段应该写
Sara
看到的情况， 即
Pinky
回到了家里，
Sara
不知道
它是怎么做到的，
父母看到后把
Pinky
放回池塘，但是
Pinky
再次回到家里，
Sara
激动得紧紧抱着
Pinky
。
续写时注意所续写短文的词数应为
150
左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：
looked over
，
recognize
… as
，
reg
ardless of
等高级词汇；
Everyone was sad when they lef
t Pinky at the pond
中
when
引导的时间状语从句；
Thrilled at
what
she saw, she kept asking herself,
中
what
引
导的宾语从句等高级句式。
)
8 ．（2022·全国 ·模拟预测）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Her underbelly
showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I had come
home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had happened, and
Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I began to
lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now understood, were done
at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least lay
eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare( 日托所). One of their customers was
leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they
asked, might our family be interested in adopting her
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
I told them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2：
When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Itold them that we were sorry but we wouldn’t be adopting any more dogs. With Indigo, our baby dog passing
away, our house seemed quiet as a tomb, messy and lifeless. The loss of Indigo seemed to deprive me of my love
for any cute and lovely dog. What if I suffer the loss again Out of nowhere, the dog kept flashing through my mind
and I was enchanted by that tiny sweet thing. Once again, I set off to the Bed ’n’ Biscuit and adopted that tiny
sweet thing named Chloe, fearful but delighted.
When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain. Every time we hugged her, she stepped back a little, her eyes filled with anxiety as well as curiosity. With days going by, our passion drove her forward and she
was willing to embrace us enthusiastically. Every time we returned home from work, happy kisses from Chloe
would rain upon our faces and the house would immediately be turned into a sea of happiness. Fortunately, with
Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if our Indigo were still here with us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的狗 Indigo 一直陪伴着作者一家，和作者一起变老，但这只 狗最终老死了， 作者决定不再养狗。随后作者看到一只可爱的小狗， 后来作者得知， 这只狗叫 Chloe，它的
主人要离开了，现在它需要一个家。
【详解】 1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我和他们说很抱歉，告诉他们我们不会再领养狗了。 ”可知，第一段可描写作者失去 了心爱的狗 Indigo，她害怕失去， 所以不想养狗， 但是回想起可爱的 Chloe，作者最终决定要去收养这只狗。 ②由第二段首句内容“ 当 Chloe 进入我们家时，她很谨慎， 一切对于她来说都是未知的。 ”可知，第二段可 描写 Chloe 来到作者家很谨慎， 但是随着作者一家对 Chloe 的关爱， 它开始和作者一家很亲， 作者的生活又
开始充满生机。
2.续写线索：告诉日托所不领养狗——解释不再养狗的原因——害怕失去——不断想起可爱的 Chloe——决
定收养——Chloe 很谨慎——关怀 Chloe——Chloe 和作者一家很亲——生活又开始充满生机
3.词汇激活
行为类
①出发： set off /start off/start out
②后退： step back /retreat/draw back
③回家： return home /go back home
情绪类
①害怕的： fearful /afraid
(
。
高兴的：
delighted /happy/pleased
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] With Indigo, our baby d
og passing away, our house seemed
quiet
as
a
tomb,
messy
and
lifeless.(
运用了
with
复合结构
)
[
高分句型
2] Every time we hugged her,
she stepped back a little, her
eyes
filled
with
anxiety
as
well
as
curiosity.(
运用了独立主格结构
)
[
高分句型
3] Fortunately, with Chloe’s company, our life was refreshed as if
our
Indigo
were
still
here
with
us.(
运
用了
as if
引导的虚拟语气
)
)
9 ．（2022·湖南 · 高三校联考）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的
短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous,
back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those of
us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge
piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were
able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I
noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of kindness
had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
(
【答案】
I went out of
the house and looked into the woods again.
The
little
deer
was
like
a
child playing
happily,
skipping and skipping to the depths of
the woods. Perhaps there were his parents
and brothers
an
d
sisters, waiting
for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wis
h all the
life
can
live happily.
When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
I knew that they
were
also
happy and proud of
the behavior
just now. When they saw me walk in, they all
suggested
to
me,
“How
about
doing
some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of
the month ”
I
immediately repli
ed,
“I
agree!” Yeah!
Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful
and harmonious.
Every
ac
t
of
kindness we
do
is a step toward happiness and every act
of
kindness we
do helps us become
the person w
e
are
meant
to be.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人 都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一
起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回
到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个
月的这一天为森林野生动物做
一些志愿者工作。
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
①
由第一段首句内容
“
我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。
”
可知，第一段可描
写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍
时的感受和想法。
②
由第二段首句内容
“
当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。
”
可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提
议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。
2.
续写线索：作者向树林里望去
——
发现小鹿快乐玩耍
——
作者陷入沉思
——
作者回到屋子
——
工人提议做
志愿者工作
——
作者感悟
3.
词汇激活
行为类
跳跃：
skip/jump
返回：
return/go back
回答：
reply/respond
)
(
情绪类
焦急地：
anxiously/worriedly
快乐的：
happy/glad
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] The little deer was like a child playing
happily,
skipping
and
skipping to the
depths
of
the
woods. (
运用了现在分词作状语
)
[
高分句型
2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of
the behavior
just now. (
运用
了
that
引导宾语从句
)
)
10 ．（2022·江苏盐城 · 校考期中）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的
短文。
One Saturday afternoon, I was watching TV in the living room with my grandpa when a blinding flash of lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a deafening sound, and the pictures on TV disappeared with that sound. Before I realized what had happened, a gray-white shadow rushed in through the open window and flew over my head. Bang! It hit the wall and slid off to the floor. Shaking with fear, I approached it cautiously and saw that it was a pigeon. It looked at me in fear, trying to open its wings and struggling its feet, but apparently
powerless.
So I called my grandpa and immediately set out to give it a helping hand. Taking it in my hands, I felt a few drops of warmth on my hands. It was blood! I gently spread its wings and there were a few red feathers inside. “Don’t worry. We’ll get it out alive,” Grandpa said to me. Then he got the first-aid kit. With some cotton, we dried the blood, cleaned the wound and then put it under a hairdryer to dry. All went smoothly, for the pigeon had no strength left to resist. There happened to be an empty birdcage at home, so I put it in gently and added a little water
and some grains.
For the next few days, the moment I got home from school, I would run to feed the pigeon. And Grandpa helped a lot, tidying up the cage daily. Little by little, its strength returned. One evening, I fed it with the biscuit I was eating. It enjoyed it! One week later, its wound almost healed (痊愈); its feathers grew and it became brave. Whenever I sat at the table eating biscuits, it looked up at me, cooing (咕咕地叫) constantly. To my joy, I could also reach into the cage to touch it. When I gently fingered its head, it playfully pecked ( 啄) at me. Finally it
completely recovered. But every time I was with it, it seemed restless in the cage. To make it happy and pretty, I
tied an orange string (线)around its leg.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
One day, however, when I returned home, Grandpa met me at the door, looking embarrassed.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
Sure enough, I saw a pigeon flying into the house the next afternoon!
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
(
【答案】
One day
,
however
,
when I
returned home
,
Grandpa met me at the door
,
looking embarras
sed.
I asked him
what had happened. He turned around and pointed to the birdcage, apologizing to me that the pige
on
slid out
when
he was tidying up the cage and flew away through the
open win
dow.
Gone!
I
couldn’t believe my
ears.
I rushed
over to the birdcage. Just empty! I stared at the remain
ing water
and
grains, tears
streaming
down
my
cheeks.
“Where has it gone Will it be hurt again Will it come back
...”
I
asked
G
randpa,
sobbing.
“It
will
fly back!”
he
convinced me, wiping away my
tears gently.
Sure
enough
,
I
saw
a
pigeon
flying
into
the
house
the
next
afternoon
!
It
perched
near
the
birdcage
,
cooing
.
Despite great excitement, I approached it quietly. It was
gray-white
and
had
an
orange
string
tied
to
one
leg.
My
pigeon came back! “It must be hungry,” Grandpa grinned. Immediately, I
fed
it
with
grains
and
then
tiptoed
to
the
window and closed it, urging Grandpa to cage it. But
he
didn’
t.
“Pigeons
need
freedom,”
he
explained
to
me
patiently. I was hesitant but looking at the pigeon wandering and pecking at the grains peacefully,
I re
alized
Grandpa was right! I turned back to the window and o
pened it.
【分析】本文以鸽子为线索展开，讲述了作者在爷爷的帮助下救治了一只受伤的鸽子，
在作者的精心照料
下，鸽子渐渐恢复。有一天鸽子飞走了，引起作者的伤心。第二天，鸽子好像不
忘救命之恩，又飞回家中。
在爷爷的教育下，作者意识到鸟儿的快乐是要自由飞翔，果断地放飞鸽子的故
事。
【详解】
1.
段落续写：
①
由第一段首句内容
“
然而，有一天，当我回到家，爷爷在门口迎接我，看起
来很尴尬。
”
可知，第一段可
描写鸽子飞走了，作者的无限伤心，爷爷的极力安慰。
②
由第二段首句内容
“
果然，第二天下午我看见一只鸽子飞进了房子！
”
可知，第二
段可描写作者重新见到
鸽子的喜悦，以及作者新的认识，放飞鸽子。
)
(
2.
续写线索：难过哭泣
——
伤心
——
（爷爷
)
道歉安慰
——
喜悦照顾鸽子
——
明理
——
放飞
3.
词汇激活
行为类
①
哭泣：
cry/weep/ tears streaming down my
cheeks
②
道歉：
say sorry
to/apo
logize
to
③
照顾：
look after/take good
care
of
情绪类
①
.
伤心：
feel
sad/get upset
②
.
喜悦：
feel excited/get delighted
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]. He turned around and pointed to the birdcage, apologiz
ing to me that the pigeon
slid out
when he was tidying up the cage and flew away through
the
open
window.
（非谓语动词
apologize
现在分词作状
语）
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2]. I stared at the remaining water and grains,
tears
streaming
down
my
cheeks.
（独立主格结构）
)