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Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Learning objectives
能熟练描述自己幸运/不幸的事情。
用一般过去时和过去完成时书写自己或他人难忘的经历。
学生能正确看待自己遇到的幸运和不幸运的事情。
Warming-up
Life was like a box of chocolates,
you never know what you're going to get.
Can you remember a lucky day What happened
ate for free
got full marks
won the lottery
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Can you remember an unlucky day What happened
got bad grades
lost my mobile phone
lost the game
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3a
Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day What happened Make some notes about what you remember.
What was the date
What happened first
Was this lucky or unlucky Why
What happened next
How did the day end
How did you feel about this day
Examples
catch the bus
win a(n) ... competition
find the lost things
rush out of the door
run quickly / fast to catch the bus
be out of breath after my run
get enough sleep
be good at/ have a talent for
keep calm / my cool
look for it everywhere,
ask ... about my
... give it back to me
Examples
miss the
last bus
lose a(n) ...
competition
lose things
the alarm (clock) doesn’t go off
rain / snow heavily
forget to set my alarm
too nervous / worried / afraid to ...
not practice hard
worried, sad
my eyes fill with tears
3b
Write a story about your lucky or unlucky day
and tell your story to a partner or the class.
My lucky / unlucky day
I will always remember the date …
This was the luckiest / unluckiest day of my life …
When I woke up that morning …
Later that day, …
I couldn’t believe …
Then/After that, …
Finally, …
I think …
What a lucky/an unlucky day!
开篇点题
描述经历
总结感慨
本单元以“unexpected events”为话题展开学习，重点学习了语法——过去完成时态。该话题涉及内容较多，可以讲述自己的亲身经历，也可以讲述自己的亲眼所见或亲耳所闻。话题命题形式常采用语言描述形式，涉及日记、记叙文等文体。具体到本单元书面表达中，要求同学们能运用一般过去时和过去完成时描述自己或他人的经历。
单元话题解析
写作指导
【审清题目】
内容：记叙幸运或不幸的一天
文体：记叙文
时态：以一般过去时和过去完成时为主
人称：以第一人称为主
逻辑顺序：事情的发展顺序或时间顺序
头脑风暴
lucky/unlucky
day
lucky/unluck events
win the game/lose the game
feelings
catch the bus/miss the bus
lose things/ find things
happy, excited, sad, unhappy, upset
巧构思
开篇点题
阐述经历
My lucky/unlucky
day
I will always remember the date...
This was the luckiest/ unluckiest day of my life...
When I woke up that morning...
Later that day... I couldn’t believe... Then/After that,... Finally,...
What a lucky/ an unlucky day!
总结感慨
巧衔接
连词
first, first of all，
to begin with…
third, in the end, above all,
in a word,
generally speaking…
second, then, in addition…
顺序/步骤
because
as
so
therefore
as a result…
因果关系
1. It was the (un)luckiest day of my life!
2. You can’t imagine how ... I was.
3. I was so ... that ...
4. I couldn’t believe that ...
5. What’s more, I even ...
6. After the competition / game / show, I learned / realized that ...
7. What good / bad luck!
8. How lucky / unlucky I was!
添佳句
Writing
话题
夯基础
lucky/unlucky events
unexpected events
因果关系词
开篇点题
妙构思
巧连接
feelings
阐述经历
总结感慨
顺序/步骤词
Summary
Sample Writing 1
My lucky day
I will always remember the date September 14th, 2018.
This was the luckiest day of my life.
When I woke up that morning, it was raining. I was about to go to the bus station to take the bus to school when my uncle called me up. My uncle said (that) he could give me a lift in his car.
开头点题: 谈论幸运的一天
以第一人称为主, 时态用一般过去时和过去完成时
Later that day, I realized that I had forgotten my wallet and couldn’t buy lunch. I couldn’t believe it. Then my friend Lisa said that she could share her lunch with me.
After that, I was praised by my math teacher. Because I got the highest score in the math exam.That night my parents were so happy that .they promised me that they would buy a bike for me as a prize.
I think that was the best day I’d had in a long time.
What a lucky day!
以第一人称为主, 时态用一般过去时和过去完成时
总结感慨，抒发感情
Sample Writing 1
Sample Writing 2
My Unlucky Day
I will always remember the date –April Fool’s Day last year.
This was the unluckiest day of my life.
When I woke up that morning, I brushed my teeth, washed my face, and then I read English for half an hour. It was time to eat my breakfast. My little brother gave me a piece of Oreo. I was very glad to eat it first. Then I felt strange. It tasted special. Later that day, I knew my brother put toothpaste into the Oreo. I couldn’t believe I was fooled by him. I brushed my teeth again. After that, I went to school. My classmate Lily told me I got bad grades. I thought she was joking. Finally, I was unhappy to know that’s true!.
I think I had a sad and unlucky day. What bad luck!
Frame and content
(结构和内容)
clear frame
（结构清晰）
complete content
（内容完整）
Rich language
（语言）
good adjectives
(好的形容词)
good phrases
（好的词组）
use clauses
（使用从句）
use linking
words
（使用连接词）
Correct grammar
（语法）
correct tense
(时态)
spelling words
（单词拼写）
punctuations
（标点符号）
Good handwriting
（书写）
clean and neat
(干净整洁)
Check List
Peer-editing
Last Saturday after my French course, I decided to drive to the ________ to buy a meat pie for dinner. As I was heading ______, I saw a huge truck in the middle of the road.There had been a(n) ________ and there were many police _______ around. I turned around and decided to go to a nearby mall.
market
west
accident
officers
cancel miss west accident
lady officer market unexpected
1. Complete the passage with the correct form of the words in the box.
Self Check
However, I _______ the road that led to the mall. Then I saw a restaurant that sold chicken noodles. I went inside and the _____, who was the owner, served me the most delicious bowl of chicken noodles ever. I had made a(n) ___________ discovery! I’m so glad that I _________ my plan to go to the market.
cancel miss west accident
lady officer market unexpected
missed
lady
unexpected
cancelled
1. A: Why didn’t you hand in your science homework
B: Before I could start working on it,
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________.
2. Think of ways to finish the answers.
my baby brother started crying and I had to look after him because my mother was sick .
2. A: Why didn’t you take a shower this morning
B: By the time I got up, ____________
______________________________
______________________________
____________.
my sister had already gone into the bathroom and the bus was honking (鸣喇叭) for me to hurry up
3. A: Why did you have to walk home from school
B: By the time I left my school,
____________________________.
the school bus had already left
Any possible answer is OK!
假如你是林凯，请你根据下表中的内容提示写一篇短文，描述一下发生在你身边的这些意外事件。词数100左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
Homework
Something unexpected Results
父母很早出门上班 睡过头了
到公交站时车已开走了 上学迟到
忘带作业 回家的路上被电动车撞伤
提示词汇：fetch 去取来 electric bicycle 电动车 have a pain in arm(s) 胳膊疼
Today was a really unlucky day for me. I stayed up late last night because of an exciting soccer match. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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