Unit 4 Amazing Science 写作 专练（含解析）仁爱科普版 英语九年级上册

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Unit 4 Amazing Science 写作 专练（含解析）仁爱科普版 英语九年级上册
1．（2022上·山东泰安·九年级统考期末）“大海之阔，非一流之归也”，今年是中澳建交50周年，两国人民源源不断的相互理解和友谊汇聚成了中澳友好关系之海。假如你是李伟，作为在澳大利亚的一名即将毕业的留学生，你将要在校内演讲，以下是你演讲的内容。
回顾过去 回首过去那些日子，内心激动。 懂得了礼貌待人、环保的重要性；养成了健康饮食、规律作息的良好习惯；结交了众多良师益友，帮助自己排解思乡之情，愈发坚强优秀。
展望未来 毕业后将继续参与到环保中，做一名有责任的青少年； 积极弘扬中华文化，促进文化传播。
美好祝愿 全世界人民应该携手进步，彼此理解尊重，祝愿两国关系更加友好，民族更加繁荣富强。
注意：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3. 词数80左右，开头已给出。
提示词：排解 relieve 思乡之情 homesickness
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2．（2022上·河北邢台·九年级统考期末）青山、绿水和蓝天都是美好生活的象征。请你结合下列提示，并根据你对你家乡环境变化的了解用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你对环境保护的认识。
Actions
First divide rubbish into different kinds
Second stop factories from polluting the air
Third produce more electrical cars to save energy
提示：
(1)What do you know about the changes of your hometown environment
(2)Which actions does the government take
(3)What do you think of these actions
注意：
(1)短文须包括表格中的全部信息和提示中的三个要点，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
(3)词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My hometown environment has changed a lot.
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3．（2022上·山东烟台·九年级统考期末）美中文化交流中心（ACCE）寒假将组织学生来华学习、交流，现在正在中国招募志愿者，以帮助他们学习中文。假如你是扬帆中学李华，请按要求给该项目负责人Mr. Milier写一封申请信。
内容包括：1. 申请担任志愿者，并表明自己乐于助人，中文流利并且擅长书法。
2. 谈谈学好中文的方法。
要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Miller,
I’m Li Hua from Yangfan Middle School. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
4．（2022上·云南文山·九年级统考期末）提示：回想你的英语学习历程，丰富多彩的英语学习方式一定给你留下了许多深刻的印象。请以“How can we become good English learners ”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你认为的有效的英语学习方法。
要求：1. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数不少于 60；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。
How can we become good English learners
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5．（2022上·山东泰安·九年级统考期末）党的二十大完美落幕，对我们国家的发展进行了重大的战略布局，在中国共产党的领导下，我们的国家从以前的峥嵘岁月到现在的国泰民安。作为中学生，我们有责任让更多人了解我们的国家。根据下面思维导图内容提示，请以“China in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下我们亲爱的祖国！
要求：
1. 书写认真规范，词数不少于 80词，开头已给出不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022上·山东聊城·九年级统考期末）请你根据下列信息写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 每天早上我爸爸在上班的路上买一份报纸；
2. 纸大约在2000年前被发明出来，但在那个时候书籍只能手工一次制作一本，所以很少有人有机会学习阅读。
3. 后来中国发明了印刷术。结果，更多的人学会了阅读。从那以后， 知识和思想迅速传播。
4. 现在计算机已经在教室里使用，报纸和杂志已经可以在线阅读。
注意：1. 词数：80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实的学校及学生名字。
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7．（2022上·山东德州·九年级统考期末）今年7月21日，IUCN宣布长江白鲟灭绝。生态破坏导致多种野生动植物濒临灭绝 (extinction)。为此，某英语杂志社开展 “爱护地球，守卫家园” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据导图提示，描述我们应采取哪些措施来保护生态并说明理由，请你至少再补充一条。
要求：
1.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 80~100词，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Save the planet
Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. We must make a change. Here are some suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So let’s take actions. To save the planet is to save ourselves!
8．（2022上·山东烟台·九年级统考期末）假如你是李明，你们学校即将举办一次废物回收活动，你是活动的组织者之一，你的外国朋友Peter对这个活动很感兴趣，向你询问相关内容，请你就此写一封邮件回复他。内容包括：
（1）活动的目的；
（2）主要活动安排；
（3）你的看法。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you are interested in the waste recycling activities. Let me tell you some information about it.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
9．（2022上·山东临沂·九年级校考期末）习近平总书记在全国生态环境保护大会上强调，坚持人与自然的和谐共生，像保护眼睛一样保护生态环境，像对待生命一样对待生态环境。可见，保护生态环境对人类社会发展的重要性。作为一名中学生，我们要争做保护生态环境的践行者。请根据问题提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. Why should we protect our environment
2. What can we do to protect our environment
要求：
1. 内容必须包含以上信息，并可根据需要适当添加。
2. 书写规范，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明。
3. 词数80词左右，且不能透漏具体学校和真实姓名，否则不予评分。
Protecting Our Environment
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参考答案：
1．例文
How time flies! I have studied in Australia for four years. Looking back at those days, I was excited about my school life.
First of all, I understood that it’s necessary to be polite to others. And I learned the importance of the environmental protection. Also, I kept some good habits. For example, I could eat healthily and sleep regularly. What’s more, I made many good friends and I had teachers who helped me a lot. They all helped me relieve my homesickness. I became stronger and better.
I will continue taking part in protecting the environment after graduation. I also want to be a responsible teenager who will develop our traditional culture and spread it.
In a word, I hope that people all over the world should work hard together to make progress and understand each other. I wish the two countries will have a friendlier relationship and the nation will be richer and stronger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感叹时间过得快，并引出文章的主题；
第二步，具体介绍过去四年的情况以及对未来的展望；
第三步，最后表达自己的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②be polite to对……有礼貌
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①I also want to be a responsible teenager who will develop our traditional culture and spread it. (who引导的定语从句)
②I wish the two countries will have a friendlier relationship and the nation will be richer and stronger. (宾语从句)
2．例文
My hometown environment has changed a lot. The air is fresher than before. The river becomes cleaner. People’s life becomes more comfortable. Here are the actions our government take.
First, rubbish is divided into different kinds with the help of the government. Second, the government does something important to stop factories from polluting the air. So people can’t see black smoke from factories any more. Third, car-made factories are encouraged to produce more electrical cars to save energy. These actions are very helpful to the environment. I will support the rules and follow them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作提示和内容要点已给出，考生不得遗漏所有提示和要点，可适当发挥，语意要通顺，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡发生的变化；
第二步，详细介绍政府为保护环境所采取的措施；
第三步，介绍自己对这些措施的评价。
[亮点词汇]
① is divided into 被分成……
② with the help of 在……的帮助下
[高分句型]
① Third, car-made factories are encouraged to produce more electrical cars to save energy. (被动语态)
② Second, the government does something important to stop factories from polluting the air. (不定式作目的状语)
3．例文
Dear Mr. Miller,
I’m Li Hua from Yangfan Middle School. I’m very interested in your project and want to be the volunteer to help the students learn Chinese.
I’m warm-hearted and always ready to help others. I’m good at both speaking and writing Chinese. I have many good ways to learn Chinese well. For example, we can listen to the radio and speak it aloud every morning. Also learning some Chinese classical songs helps improve the language quickly. Besides, talking with Chinese is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture.
If I can get the job, I believe I can be a great helper.
Thank you for consideration.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封申请信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容申请担任志愿者，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己想申请担任志愿者；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，介绍学好中文的方法；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②be good at擅长
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①I’m very interested in your project and want to be the volunteer to help the students learn Chinese. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②talking with Chinese is a fun and effective way to learn Chinese and its culture. (动名词作主语以及动词不定式作定语)
③If I can get the job, I believe I can be a great helper. (if引导的条件状语从句)
4．例文：
How can we become good English learners
It is important and necessary for us to be good English learners. Here are some suggestions about how to become good English learners.
In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. After class, try to read English stories and watch English movies. We need to study with a group so that we can help each other. We should ask the teacher for help when we are in trouble. It is also very important to be confident. Speak English loudly in front of the class and never be afraid of making mistakes because we can learn a lot from mistakes.
All in all, if we learn English by using these ways, we’ll make much progress and become good English learners.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍你认为的有效的英语学习方法， 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图，引出学好英语的建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课上、课后”几个方面重点介绍有效的英语学习方法；
第三步，书写结语。表达“运用这些方法就能成为一个好的学习者”的愿望。
［亮点词汇］
①take notes 做笔记
②ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
③be in trouble处在困境中
④be afraid of 害怕
⑤make mistakes犯错误
⑥learn from向……学习
⑦make progress取得进步
［高分句型］
①It is important and necessary for us to be good English learners.（“it is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.”句型）
②We need to study with a group so that we can help each other. （so that引导的结果状语从句）
5．例文
China in My Eyes
Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. Now I’d like to introduce my country to you!
First, what I want to talk about today is tea culture. Chinese tea has a history of four or five thousand years. Shennong was the first to discover tea as a drink. Next, Chinese classical music is wonderful, like Erquan Yingyue. What’s more, Chinese table manners are different. We are supposed to pick up our bowl to eat. And we should let the old start eating first, and so on.
China has succeeded in controlling the COVID-19, showing other countries that China is the strongest. It is a great feat to control such a terrible epidemic in such a short period of time. Moreover, AI is widely uesd in different areas.
We should work hard and gain knowledge to make our country better. We should never give up and try to realize our dreams. I am proud, I am Chinese. I hope our country can be more and more prosperous and people will live a better life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文的要点已给出，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述要介绍自己眼中的中国；
第二步，介绍中国的文化；
第三步，介绍中国的技术；
第四步，介绍自己的责任和感受。
[亮点词汇]
What’s more此外
are supposed to应该
[高分句型]
We should work hard and gain knowledge to make our country better.（不定式表目的）
6．例文：
Every morning my father buys a newspaper on his way to work. Every evening my mother looks through magazines at home.
Paper was first created about 2,000 years ago. People learned to write words on paper to make a book. But in those days, books could only be produced one at a time by hand. Because there weren’t many books, few people had the opportunity to learn reading.
Then printing was invented in China. When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply. As a result, more people learned to read. After that, knowledge and ideas spread quickly.
Computers and Internet are used in classrooms now, and newspapers and magazines can already be read online. So will books be replaced by computers one day Let’s wait and see.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，文中注意时态和语态的切换。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍父母的阅读习惯；
第二步，讲述造纸术和印刷术的发明，以及其带来的影响；
第三步，描述现状，对未来发问。
[亮点词汇]
①look through浏览；翻阅
②by hand手工
③as a result因此
[高分句型]
①People learned to write words on paper to make a book. （动词不定式作目的状语）
②When printing was developed greatly at the beginning of the 11th century, books could be produced more quickly and cheaply.（时间状语从句）
7．例文
Save the planet
Many wild animals are facing the danger of extinction, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly. We must make a change. Here are some suggestions.
First of all, the government should set up more nature parks to protect wild animals and precious plants so that they can live in safety. Some people hunt and kill wild animals for money. So it’s also necessary for the government to develop laws to punish them.
On the other hand, companies must take actions as well. It’s their duty to reduce pollution. For example, polluted water or gas must be cleaned before it is discharged into the river or the air. Besides, using technology to make products greener is also good for the environment.
As students, we should try our best to protect the environment in daily life. For example, it’s important to divide rubbish into things to recycle and things to throw away. What’s more, we’d better ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.
So let’s take actions. To save the planet is to save ourselves!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“说明理由”和“至少再补充一条”两项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出保护生态环境的必要性并为此提出建议；
第二步，具体陈述保护环境的建议及理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②so that以至于
③on the other hand另一方面
④take actions采取行动
[高分句型]
①So it’s also necessary for the government to develop laws to punish them. (运用it is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.结构)
②polluted water or gas must be cleaned before it is discharged into the river or the air. (before引导时间状语从句)
8．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad that you are interested in the waste recycling activity. Let me tell you some information about it.
The purpose of the activity is to recycle used things such as waste paper, old books, cans and other plastic products in the city. We will gather at the school gate at 9:00 this Sunday morning. We’ll be divided into three groups. Each group can go to a different place to collect old recyclable things. Then, we need to bring them to a nearby recycling shop and trade them for money. The money will be sent to the children in poor villages.
I think the activity is meaningful because it can not only protect the environment but also help poor children.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校的废物回收活动，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对学校的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍活动的目的、安排；
第三步，介绍自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②be divided into被划分为
③be sent to被送到
④protect the environment保护环境
[高分句型]
①The purpose of the activity is to recycle used things such as waste paper, old books, cans and other plastic products in the city.（不定式作表语）
②I think the activity is meaningful because it can not only protect the environment but also help poor children.（省略that的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
9．例文
Protecting Our Environment
The earth is the only home for humans, but now it is badly polluted. The environment is becoming worse and worse. We can’t breathe the fresh air or drink clean water because of different kinds of pollution. So protecting the environment is protecting ourselves.
As a middle school student, we can do many things to protect our environment. First, we can take the bus or subway to school. If our school isn’t far, we can also ride a bike instead of driving cars. Second, when we go shopping, we can bring our own bags instead of plastic bags. Third, remember to turn off the lights before leaving a room.
Everyone should play a part in protecting the environment. Then our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据两个问题提示写作，注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍保护环境的原因；
第二步：针对保护环境给出建议；
第三步：总结，表达愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①worse and worse越来越糟糕
②instead of代替
③make a difference起作用
[高分句型]
① If our school isn’t far, we can also ride a bike instead of driving cars.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Second, when we go shopping, we can bring our own bags instead of plastic bags.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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