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专题12 书面表达（满分范文15篇）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022上·上海嘉定·七年级统考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made”
在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗？是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变？这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“我做出的一个小改变”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短语，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following sentence patterns are for reference only （以下句型仅供参考）：
It is/was … for me…
It/Doing sth. makes my life…
I decided to…
2．（2022上·上海金山·七年级校联考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to keep healthy” （根据所给的题目：“怎样保持健康”写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占词数。）（共6分）
Suggest questions:
Is health important
What should/shouldn’t we do if we want to stay healthy
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3．（2022上·上海浦东新·七年级上海市实验学校校考期末）Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “How to eat healthily”. (以“怎样保持饮食健康”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference.
(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Do you think eating healthily is important
2.How do you keep healthy
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4．（2023上·上海浦东新·七年级校考校考）Write at least 60 words about topic“ _____ has changed my life”
Questions for reference:
1. What has changed your life.
2. How does it change your life.
3. What do you think of it
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5．（2022上·上海·七年级上海市西延安中学校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “How to develop good habits “. （以 “如何养成好习惯” 为题写话, 词数不少于 60 个, 标点符号不占格。）
Questions for reference：
（1）What are your good habits
（2）How do you develop your good habits
（3）What do your good habits bring you
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二、材料作文
6．（2022上·上海宝山·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “My Birthday Party”. (以“我的生日聚会”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you have your birthday party？
2. Who did you invite
3. What did you do at your birthday party
4. How did you feel on that day
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7．（2022上·上海闵行·七年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic“How to help homeless animals”（请以“怎么帮助无家可归的动物”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as reference(以下问题提供参考)
1.Why are animals homeless
2.What do you think of homeless animals
3.What can you do to help them (give at least two examples)
How to help homeless animals
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8．（2022上·上海杨浦·七年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ trip”（写一篇名为“一次……的旅行” 的短文，字数不少于 60 字，标点符号不占空格。）
The following questions are for reference: When and where did you go on a trip What did you do there
What did you think of the trip
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9．（2022上·上海普陀·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to…”(以“A trip to…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. Where did you travel in the past How did you go there Who did you travel with
2. What did you do and see there What do you think of the trip
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10．（2022上·上海奉贤·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “How to Keep Healthy”. （请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
Do you think health is very important
What should you do if you want to stay healthy
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11．（2023上·上海长宁·七年级校考校考）Write at least 50 words about the topic “A trip to...”. （根据要求将题目补充完整，并以“一次……之旅”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题仅供参考）
1. Where did you go for a trip
2. What did you do there
3. What do you think of the trip
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12．（2023上·上海宝山·七年级校考校考）Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“My Favorite Festival”(以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50字)
Questions:
1. What’s your favorite festival Why
2. When is the festival
3. What do you often do during the festival
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三、电子邮件
13．（2023上·上海闵行·七年级统考校考）(根据情境写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格。)
假设你是Ben，你的加拿大笔友Gary发邮件告诉你他将要和他的父母来北京旅游，请你回复他的邮件，帮他们规划一个合理的北京三日游的旅行计划，并邀请他上海游玩。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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四、书信作文
14．（2023上·上海奉贤·七年级统考校考）Suppose you are writing to your cousin Lihua, choose a topic to tell her something new about yourself. (假设你要写信给你的表妹李华，请选择其中一个话题来告诉她你的近况。)
① 去了一次旅行 ②换了一个新家 ③养了一只宠物 ④ 定了一个小目标
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15．（2023上·上海松江·七年级统考校考）Suppose you are Kitty. Your pen friend, Lucy, is going to Shanghai soon. She wants to know more about Chinese culture but can only spare a day. Please choose a place and make a travel plan for her. And then write a letter of at least 60 words to tell her your plan. (假设你是Kitty。你的笔友Lucy不久将到上海。她想了解中国文化但只有一天的观光时间。请为她精选一个地点并制定一份旅行计划，然后写一封不少于60词的信告诉她这个旅行计划。) 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
The following questions are for reference：
(1)Which place are you going to visit with her
(2)What can you do there
(3)Why do you choose the place for her
(注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Dear Lucy,
I have made a wonderful travel plan for you.
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Yours,
Kitty
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专题12 书面表达（满分范文15篇）（详解版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022上·上海嘉定·七年级统考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “A Small Change I made”
在你的生活中，你有做出过什么样的小改变吗？是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变？这个小改变又给你带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“我做出的一个小改变”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短语，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following sentence patterns are for reference only （以下句型仅供参考）：
It is/was … for me…
It/Doing sth. makes my life…
I decided to…
【答案】例文：
A Small Change I made
I didn’t like sports, so running was very difficult for me. I decided to change this bad habit. I start running every morning. Slowly, I’m very good at running. Now I like playing basketball very much. If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. Doing sports makes us very healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示以“A Small Change I made”为题，写一篇作文介绍你的小改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的小改变；
第二步，具体阐述是什么原因促使你做出了这样的改变；
第三步，介绍这个小改变给你带来了怎样的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth决定做某事
②be good at擅长
③like doing sth喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①If I have time, I often go to the park with my friends to play basketball. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②Doing sports makes us very healthy.（动名词作主语）
2．（2022上·上海金山·七年级校联考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to keep healthy” （根据所给的题目：“怎样保持健康”写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占词数。）（共6分）
Suggest questions:
Is health important
What should/shouldn’t we do if we want to stay healthy
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【答案】例文：
How to keep healthy
Health is important to us all. How to keep healthy Here are some ways to keep healthy.
First, we should have a healthy eating habit. Eat more fruit and vegetables, eat less meat. Don’t eat junk food. Drink more water every day. Second, we should do lots of exercise. Walking is good for us. Running also keeps us strong and helps us have a good memory. Doing sports an hour a day is good for us. Third, we should have enough sleep, at least 8 hours’ sleep at night. Remember not to drink coffee or tea before you go to bed. Don’t eat too much sugar or work too late, it will make you too tired.
In a word, we should have a healthy lifestyle.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“Suggest questions:”中关于“Is health important ”要点介绍，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山，直接点题。以“Health is important to us all.”来引出主题内容“Here are some ways to keep healthy.”，引起下文；
第二步，具体描述写作内容。从“好的饮食习惯、锻炼、足够睡眠等”几个方面重点介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，书写结语。总结全文，表达“我们应该有一个健康的生活习惯”。
[亮点词汇]
① keep healthy 保持健康
② do exercise 锻炼
③ be good for ... 对……有好处
④ at least 至少
⑤ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①How to keep healthy （疑问词 + 不定式句型）
②Eat more fruit and vegetables, eat less meat.（祈使句）
③Walking is good for us. （动名词作主语）
④Remember not to drink coffee or tea before you go to bed.（before引导时间状语从句）
3．（2022上·上海浦东新·七年级上海市实验学校校考期末）Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “How to eat healthily”. (以“怎样保持饮食健康”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference.
(以下内容仅供参考)
1.Do you think eating healthily is important
2.How do you keep healthy
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【答案】例文
How to keep healthy
A healthy diet is very important to us because it can keep us fit and healthy. I have a healthy diet. I have some bread and milk for breakfast. For lunch, I eat plenty of fresh vegetables and some meat. I also have a lot of rice or noodles. For dinner, I usually have some fish and soup. We should all have a healthy diet because it is very important.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to keep healthy”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍保持健康的原因；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己是如何保持健康的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a healthy diet有健康的饮食
②plenty of许多
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
①A healthy diet is very important to us because it can keep us fit and healthy.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②We should all have a healthy diet because it is very important.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2023上·上海浦东新·七年级校考校考）Write at least 60 words about topic“ _____ has changed my life”
Questions for reference:
1. What has changed your life.
2. How does it change your life.
3. What do you think of it
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【答案】例文：
Sports have changed my life
Nowadays, doing sports has become more and more important in people’s life. It’s good for people’s health, and it’s also a good way to relax.
I fell in love with sports when I was very young, and my favorite sport is swimming. I like the feeling of swimming in a big swimming pool or the blue sea. I think swimming is relaxing and fun. By doing sports, I become very strong and healthy, and I also made lots of good friends. This makes me so happy.
Because of doing sports, my life is full of sunshine!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“运动改变了我的生活”的话题；
第二步，介绍它是如何改变你的生活的；
第三步，表达自己的观点的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有好处
②swimming pool游泳池
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I fell in love with sports when I was very young, and my favorite sport is swimming.（when引导的时间状语从句）
5．（2022上·上海·七年级上海市西延安中学校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “How to develop good habits “. （以 “如何养成好习惯” 为题写话, 词数不少于 60 个, 标点符号不占格。）
Questions for reference：
（1）What are your good habits
（2）How do you develop your good habits
（3）What do your good habits bring you
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【答案】例文
How to develop good habits
It’s very important for us to have good habits. Good habits lead to a better future. As teenagers, what should we do We should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. We had better read some books to get more knowledge when we are free. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s good for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, we should get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and don’t stay up late. We should remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作意图，直接引出“好习惯的重要性”以及“养成好习惯的建议”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，分点描述如何养成好习惯；
第三步，书写书面结语，表明好的习惯会带来什么。
[亮点词汇]
①lead to 导致；
②take notes 做笔记；
③stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
①It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day.（It is +n. to do sth.句型的使用）；
②We had better read some books to get more knowledge when we are free.（had better do sth.建议句型的应用）
二、材料作文
6．（2022上·上海宝山·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “My Birthday Party”. (以“我的生日聚会”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下内容仅供参考)
1. When did you have your birthday party？
2. Who did you invite
3. What did you do at your birthday party
4. How did you feel on that day
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【答案】例文：
My Birthday Party
Last Sunday was my 13th birthday. I invited a lot of my friends to my birthday party. They bought a very big cake for me. I made a wish and blew the candles. We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake. After that, some of us danced happily, some of us played interesting games. We all enjoyed ourselves.
What a nice birthday party!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括生日派对的具体时间以及举行的一些活动等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍生日派对举行的具体时间以及多少岁生日；
第二步，具体介绍在生日派对上都做什么了；
第三步，最后总结生日派对很好。
[亮点词汇]
① a lot of很多
② buy sth for sb为某人买某物
③ make a wish许愿
[高分句型]
① We sang “Happy Birthday” song together and shared the cake.（and连接的并列句）
7．（2022上·上海闵行·七年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic“How to help homeless animals”（请以“怎么帮助无家可归的动物”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as reference(以下问题提供参考)
1.Why are animals homeless
2.What do you think of homeless animals
3.What can you do to help them (give at least two examples)
How to help homeless animals
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【答案】例文
How to help homeless animals
Nowadays more and more animals are losing their home. Why are animals homeless Because people cut down trees so that animals have no places to live. Another reason is the pollution. The pollution of the environment makes it impossible for animals to live normally.
I think these homeless animals are very poor. Animals and people are friends. So we should do something to protect them. First, we can set up some organizations to adopt homeless animals. Second, we should call on people to stop cutting down trees. Last but not least, we should stop polluting.
Let’s take action now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍动物无家可归的原因；
第二步，介绍自己的看法以及如何帮助无家可归的动物的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down 砍倒
②set up 设立
③call on 呼吁
④take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①Because people cut down trees so that animals have no places to live（so that引导目的状语从句）
②The pollution of the environment makes it impossible for animals to live normally.（动词不定式作宾语）
8．（2022上·上海杨浦·七年级统考期末）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A/An ________ trip”（写一篇名为“一次……的旅行” 的短文，字数不少于 60 字，标点符号不占空格。）
The following questions are for reference: When and where did you go on a trip What did you do there
What did you think of the trip
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【答案】例文
An interesting trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates.
On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening we had some special food. It was delicious. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the bell tower and the drum tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：首先把题目补充完整，讲述自己这次旅行的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去旅行的时间地点；
第二步，具体讲述旅行中的所见所闻等；
第三步，收尾，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②Chinese traditional paintings中国传统绘画
[高分句型]
①On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings.（and连接并列句）
②I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
9．（2022上·上海普陀·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A trip to…”(以“A trip to…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，注意：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. Where did you travel in the past How did you go there Who did you travel with
2. What did you do and see there What do you think of the trip
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【答案】例文
A trip to the Farm
Last Sunday my parents and I went to the farm. We went there by bus. It took us fifty minutes to get there. When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.
The farmer showed us around the farm. He taught me how to milk the cow. With his help, I learnt to milk the cow. After that, I rode the horse. In the afternoon, I went fishing and picked some strawberries. How happy we were!
All in all, we had a good time there. I wanted to go there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中以前你去旅游的地方，怎样去的，和谁去的以及你在旅行中看到和你对旅行的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“上周六我父母和我去了农场。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“去农场乘坐的交通工具；在农场所看到的事物和所做的事情；我对旅行的感触”几方面重点介绍我的农场旅行的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我想要再去那里。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① by bus乘公共汽车
② show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
① When we got there, we saw many animals and strawberries.（when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。）
② How happy we were!（感叹句：How +形容词+主语+谓语动词！）
10．（2022上·上海奉贤·七年级校联考期末）Write at least 50 words on the topic “How to Keep Healthy”. （请以“怎样保持健康”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
Do you think health is very important
What should you do if you want to stay healthy
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【答案】 As we all know, health is very important to everybody. Without health, we can’t study or work well. But do you know how to stay healthy Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should keep a good mood. Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy. Secondly, we should have enough sleep every day. Don’t stay up late at night and get up early in the morning. Thirdly, we should develop a good eating habit. We should eat more fresh fruits and green vegetables, less meat and no junk food. Last but not least, doing sports every day is necessary to stay healthy.
I hope everybody can stay healthy and be happy everyday.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，要求对如何保持健康提出自己的观点和建议；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题目中已经给出写作提示，需要围绕提示进行写作，具体内容可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题指出健康的重要性，并提出如何保持健康，引出下文；
第二步：对如何保持健康，有条理地提出自己的建议；
第三步：最后进行简单的总结。
[亮点词汇]
① as we know 众所周知
② keep a good mood 保持好的心情
③ stay up late 熬夜
④ develop a good eating habit 培养一个好的饮食习惯
[高分句型]
① Firstly…Secondly…Thirdly…Last but not least…（这些顺序词的使用使文章层次鲜明，条理清晰）
② Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy.（用动名词形式作主语）
11．（2023上·上海长宁·七年级校考校考）Write at least 50 words about the topic “A trip to...”. （根据要求将题目补充完整，并以“一次……之旅”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
Use the following points as a reference. （以下问题仅供参考）
1. Where did you go for a trip
2. What did you do there
3. What do you think of the trip
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【答案】例文
A trip to Beijing
Last year, I went to Beijing with my parents, and it was a very wonderful trip. First, I went to Tian’anmen Square. It is so big, and there were many children playing there. The second day, we went to the Palace Museum. It is so great, and I learnt much about Chinese history. And shopping in Beijing was very interesting, too. If you want to have a good holiday, Beijing will be a good choice.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意在叙述过去的经历时，应用一般过去时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍。简单介绍旅行的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。叙述在北京的旅游过程；
第三步，书写结语。说明旅行的收获并推荐来北京旅游。
[亮点词汇]
①wonderful trip 美妙的旅行
②Palace Museum 故宫博物院
③Chinese history 中国历史
④a good choice 一个不错的选择
[高分句型]
If you want to have a good holiday, Beijing will be a good choice.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．（2023上·上海宝山·七年级校考校考）Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic“My Favorite Festival”(以“我最喜欢的节日”为题写一篇短文，不少于50字)
Questions:
1. What’s your favorite festival Why
2. When is the festival
3. What do you often do during the festival
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Festival
Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival. More importantly, it is the symbol of “family reunion” as well. Mid-autumn Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunar month.
On that day, all my family members get together to celebrate it. My parents and I go to visit my grandparents. My cousins and I are excited because we can play happily. We watch TV and play games together. We have delicious get-together dinner. We also have fruit and moon cakes. After dinner, we enjoy the beautiful moon and talk about our life happily. What a wonderful time it is! I like Mid-autumn Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的节日以及原因；
第二步，介绍节日的时间；
第三步，最后介绍节日里你做的事。
[亮点词汇]
①the symbol of……的象征
②get together一起
③play games玩游戏
[高分句型]
Of all the Chinese festivals, I like Mid-autumn Festival best because it is a traditional Chinese festival.（because引导的原因状语从句）
三、电子邮件
13．（2023上·上海闵行·七年级统考校考）(根据情境写一封不少于60词的电子邮件，标点符号不占格。)
假设你是Ben，你的加拿大笔友Gary发邮件告诉你他将要和他的父母来北京旅游，请你回复他的邮件，帮他们规划一个合理的北京三日游的旅行计划，并邀请他上海游玩。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
Dear Gary,
I heard that you are going to travel to Beijing with your parents. I’d like to give you some advice.
There are many places of interest in Beijing. On the first day, I suggest you go to Tian’anmen Square to watch the flag-raising ceremony. Then you can go to visit the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and other famous attractions. On the second day, I suggest you climb the Great Wall. On the third day, I suggest you go to the Wangfujing Street. You can buy some souvenirs there. You can also experience the Hutong culture in Beijing.
I hope you will have a good time in Beijing and I am looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai.
Yours,
Ben
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出后文的建议；
第二步，介绍北京三日游的旅行计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest下班回家
②watch the flag-raising ceremony观看升旗仪式
③have a good time玩得愉快
[高分句型]
I hope you will have a good time in Beijing and I am looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai.（省略that的宾语从句和并列句）
四、书信作文
14．（2023上·上海奉贤·七年级统考校考）Suppose you are writing to your cousin Lihua, choose a topic to tell her something new about yourself. (假设你要写信给你的表妹李华，请选择其中一个话题来告诉她你的近况。)
① 去了一次旅行 ②换了一个新家 ③养了一只宠物 ④ 定了一个小目标
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【答案】例文
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going I had a wonderful trip to Sanya with my parents last summer holiday. Let me tell you something about it.
Sanya is in the south of Hainan and it is about 1,921 square kilometres. It’s hot in the day and cool at night. It’s famous for its blue sea and beautiful beaches. There are lots of coconut trees around the seaside. We did lots of activities in Sanya. We enjoyed the seafood and coconut juice. We tasted all kinds of fruit as well. They were very delicious. We also enjoyed water games. It was very interesting. Later in the afternoon, we took a walk along the beach. There were many beautiful shells. I also collected some.
From this trip, I learned a lot about the history of Sanya and its culture. I think it was relaxing to spend my last holiday in Sanya. I am looking forward to going there again.
Best wishes,
Lucy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。
②时态：主时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：写作注意时态清晰，客观描述为现在时，描述经历为过去时，做到无语法和单词拼写错误；同时确保逻辑连贯，内容充实简洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。
第二步，详细描述旅行的过程。
第三步，总结旅行给带来的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以某事而出名
②look forward to期待
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①Sanya is in the south of Hainan and it is about 1,921 square kilometres.(and连接的并列句)
②I think it was relaxing to spend my last holiday in Sanya.（省略that的宾语从句）
15．（2023上·上海松江·七年级统考校考）Suppose you are Kitty. Your pen friend, Lucy, is going to Shanghai soon. She wants to know more about Chinese culture but can only spare a day. Please choose a place and make a travel plan for her. And then write a letter of at least 60 words to tell her your plan. (假设你是Kitty。你的笔友Lucy不久将到上海。她想了解中国文化但只有一天的观光时间。请为她精选一个地点并制定一份旅行计划，然后写一封不少于60词的信告诉她这个旅行计划。) 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
The following questions are for reference：
(1)Which place are you going to visit with her
(2)What can you do there
(3)Why do you choose the place for her
(注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Dear Lucy,
I have made a wonderful travel plan for you.
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Yours,
Kitty
【答案】例文
Dear Lucy,
I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. You should visit Shanghai World Expo Park first. In the afternoon you can go to Nanjing Road. This is the busiest street in Shanghai. Then you will visit the tallest building, the Oriental Pearl Tower. The Oriental Pearl Tower is also the tallest building in Asia. In this tower, you will learn a lot about Shanghai. In the evening, you will enjoy the magnificent night view of the Huangpu River. Then I think you can go and enjoy the food in Shanghai. Shanghai is known as the “paradise of food”.
I think you’re going to have a great time.
Yours,
Kitty
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题干中的信息，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出自己制定了一份计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细地描述一天的旅行计划；
第三步，书写结语。表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot许多
②be known as 作为……而有名
[高分句型]
Then I think you can go and enjoy the food in Shanghai.（宾语从句）
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