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专题09 书面表达（满分范文15篇）（详解版）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022上·上海闵行·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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【答案】范文：
I want to say thanks to my friend
Today, I want to say thanks to my best friend Tina. She is a lovely girl with big eyes. She’s always friendly to everyone. Also, she enjoys reading in her free time. One day, I cried sadly because I found it difficult to learn English well. When Tina saw that, she started to help me with my English after class. With her help, I am good at English now. Thank you, my dear friend.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应根据英语提示的内容，叙述你想对谁说感谢以及你想感谢他/她的理由，至少说出两条。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时，在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
2．（2022上·上海徐汇·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable school activity” （“令人难忘的校园活动”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：“Survival Holidays”令许多学生受益匪浅。在丰富的校园生活中，你也一定组织或参加过许多有意义的活动。请结合自身，分享一个令你最难忘的经历，并谈谈你的收获。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）
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【答案】例文：
An unforgettable school activity
I learned to be self-governed through a school activity. Everyone has some unforgettable experiences. I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 13 years old. I had some training with my classmates. We went to Linyi and we needed to live in an apartment for a week. We did everything ourselves. Our parents couldn’t help us, because they didn’t stay with us. We got up very early in the morning. We had to clean ourselves quickly and had breakfast soon. And then we stood in a line. We learnt a lot of things there, such as cooking, washing and even making beds. We sang and danced together and did all kinds of activities. Every day, we had to practice more than six hours.
Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us. Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves.
What an unforgettable experience it is! I learned lots of things. Especially, I learned to be self-governed through the school activity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应请结合自身，分享一个令你最难忘的经历，并谈谈你的收获，注意突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，讲述自己令人难忘的校园活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述校园活动时间、地点、校园活动内容等；
第三步，书写结语，表达在校园活动中学到了很多尤其是自我管理能力。
[亮点词汇]
①unforgettable experiences令人难忘的经历
②stand in a line排队
③all kinds of各种各样的
④be good for对……有好处
[高分句型]
①Because we are looked after by our parents, but in fact we should learn how to look after ourselves.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②What an unforgettable experience it is!（感叹句）
3．（2022上·上海金山·八年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My most unforgettable day”. （以“我最难忘的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What happened that day
2. Why do you think it was unforgettable
（注意：1. 请将作文写在答题纸上。2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
My most unforgettable day
When people ask me what day you always remember in your life, I can answer the question quickly. It was March 12th, 2022.
Our teacher Mr. Zhu led us to a park near the school. We went there to take part in voluntary labor. We got there at 9 a.m. Mr. Zhu divided us into three groups and then we began working. Group One was responsible to plant trees and water flowers. Group Two were busy collecting litter left by the tourists. I was in Group Three. We went to the children’s playground and cleaned all the equipment there. We worked very hard.
After a day’s work, I felt tired but very happy because l offered my service. I will never forget the day in my memory.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“My most unforgettable day”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图介绍自己最难忘的是哪一天；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“那天发生了什么以及你为什么认为它难忘”两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lead sb to...带某人去……
②divide...into...把……分成……
③be busy doing忙于做某事
[高分句型]
①When people ask me what day you always remember in your life, I can answer the question quickly.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②After a day’s work, I felt tired but very happy because I offered my service.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2023上·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校校考校考）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文）
我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明
注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分
2. 照抄语篇不得分
3. 请选择一条填在横线上
Be _______________
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【答案】例文： Be honest
I think being honest is the most important for a model student. As we know, honesty is one of people’s good qualities. Everyone needs honesty and I hope everyone is honest. Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework. But I thought it was not good, so I told him not to copy my homework and I would help him next time. Finally he understood me and agreed with me.
Honesty is quite an important quality to a person. So I think as a model student, he must be honest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏方框中“提示信息”的四个方面选一个模范学生的标准进行阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我认为诚实是模范学生最重要的一个品质”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示问题的三个方面——哪一条标准、原因、自身经历或见闻均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“作为一个模范学生，他必须诚实”的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①the most important最重要的
②good qualities好品质
③copy my homework抄我的作业
[高分句型]
① Last Friday, my best friend Li Ming wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework.(because引导的原因状语从句）
② I think being honest is the most important for a model student. (宾语从句)
5．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校校考校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What do you do at school every day
2. Why do you think it is a busy day
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【答案】例文
I am a middle school student. I am very busy every day. Let me tell you about my busy day at school.
I often go to school at 6:30, and get to school at 6:45. We often begin our classes at 7:00. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. After class we often have sports on the playground. Sometimes, I do some cleaning at 5:00 in the classroom in the afternoon. I often go home at 5:55 after school.
After supper, I must go to school. At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening. I am very tired, but I must go over my lessons. It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你认为这是忙碌的一天的原因，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。表明自己每天都很忙碌；
第二步，具体介绍自己白天做的事情；
第三步，介绍自己晚饭后要做的事情，并阐明这是忙碌的一天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①have sports进行体育锻炼
②do cleaning做清洁，打扫卫生
③so...that...太……以致于……
④go over复习
[高分句型]
①At school, I have to finish so much homework that I get home at 8:30 in the evening.（that引导的结果状语从句）
②It is really a busy day for me because I put my heart and soul into study.（because引导的原因状语从句）
6．（2023上·上海奉贤·八年级统考校考）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格）
帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
A helping hand I gave
Helping others brings me happiness and makes my life meaningful. I grow up a lot by helping others.
I am good at English and can always get good grades in English exams. Then one day, my best friend Tina asked me to help her with her English. So I shared some useful ways to learn English. Each time she has trouble with her homework, I’ll try my best to explain as clearly as possible. I’m glad that Tina has made great progress in English.
I feel a strong feeling of satisfaction when helping others. It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助；
第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。
[亮点词汇]
①get good grades in English exams 英语考试取得好成绩
②try one’s best to do 尽最大努力去……
[高分句型]
It makes me realize that the more you give, the happier you will be.(宾语从句)
7．（2022上·上海虹口·八年级上外附中校考期末）Human beings have created so much, but often at the cost of nature. We only have one earth and the way to live in harmony with it is to protect it. As teenagers, what can we do to help protect our planet earth Please write a passage between 80—120 words.
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【答案】例文
As teenagers, what can we do to help protect our planet earth Well, we can spread the message about protecting the environment. We can go to school on foot or by bike instead of by car. Try to recycle boxes and plastic bottles. Don’t waste water or electricity. We ought to turn off the lights when we leave our classrooms. We should reduce the waste we produce. Also, we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees. I believe if everyone protects the environment, it will become better and better.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照题目要求以“what can we do to help protect our planet earth ”为主题进行英文写作，要有理有据，适当添加细节，并突出写作重要。
[写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“作为一名青少年，我们能做什么来保护我们的地球”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“传播信息、交通方式、回收、不浪费等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁人们保护环境。
[亮点词汇］
①instead of而不是
②turn off 关闭
③care for关心
④better and better越来越好
[高分句型］
①We ought to turn off the lights when we leave our classrooms.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I believe if everyone protects the environment, it will become better and better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
二、材料作文
8．（2022上·上海黄浦·八年级统考阶段练习）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My best friend’s daily life”
Suggested line:
1.Who is your best friend
2.What does he/she do at school and after school every day
3.What do you think of his/her daily life and what can you learn from him/her
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I’d like to introduce my best friend Tom to you. Tom is from America and he lives in Beijing with his parents now. He and I are in the same school. He studies hard and he is helpful. He always helps my classmates with their English. He likes sports. He often plays basketball after school. Sometimes he has piano lessons. I think Tom is hardworking and talented. I want to be an active student like him.
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们介绍自己最好的朋友的日常生活，题目中给出了三个问题：你最好的朋友是谁？他/她在学校里以及放学后做什么？你觉得他/她的日常生活怎么样、你能向他/她学习什么。学生们可以围绕这三个问题组织语言，充实写作的内容，然后用正确的英语表达出来。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应使用一般现在时态、第三人称单数形式进行表达，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意将题目中给出的提示都包括在内，不要遗漏要点。注意英语句式结构的特点，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他句式的使用，提升文章档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文章表达通顺、流畅。
9．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级上海民办华二浦东实验学校校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“与众不同的 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请你选择一样，向你的伙伴们介绍一下。要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下问题仅供参考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2.注意适当使用形容词。
3.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
A different teacher
There are many different people or things in my mind. But my English teacher Mr. Li is very different. He is very friendly to us and always answers our questions patiently.
I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8. He asked me to take part in running race. I told him that I didn’t run fast, so I couldn’t participate in it. The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first. After listening to his words, I tried my best to exercise after school. With his encouragement and my persistence, I gained the third prize. What’s more, he is like a friend to me. When I have some trouble, he will give me some useful advice.
I feel very happy to have such a good teacher.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据题干中的提示介绍一个与众不同的人或物，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表示对自己来说英语老师是与众不同的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述他是什么样子的以及为什么他是与众不同的；
第三步，书写结语。表达“很高兴有这样一位老师”。
[亮点词汇]
①be friendly to对……友好；
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first.（that引导的宾语从句以及if引导的条件状语从句）
10．（2022上·上海普陀·八年级校联考期末）Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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【答案】例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首句点题，说明最钦佩的人是妈妈；
第二步，具体阐述钦佩妈妈的原因；
第三步，最后讲述从妈妈身上学到的以及表达对妈妈喜爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①honesty is the best policy诚实为上策
②try to do sth尽量去做某事
③give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引导让步状语从句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with复合结构）
11．（2022上·上海奉贤·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中喜欢的美好事物以及喜欢的理由的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最喜欢的人是王老师。
第二步，具体阐述喜欢王老师的理由。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“爱王老师”的想法，首尾呼应。
[亮点词汇]
① be strict with对……严格
② in a word总之
③ be always ready to help others乐于助人
④ in trouble处于困难中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的宾语从句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴随）
12．（2023上·上海浦东新·八年级统考校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考）
1. When and where did it happen
2. What happened
3. How did you feel about it
4. Why did you think so
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【答案】例文：
A successful experience in my life
In my memory, there are full of successful experiences. The most unforgettable one happened at school last term.
I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn’t get good marks in exams. I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder. I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. What’s more, I often asked my teachers for help. Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. Now I have done better in my study.
I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it. If I meet with difficulties in my life, I should try my best to overcome them. In a word, only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述经历用“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要描述什么样的经历及发生的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了这次经历的过程；
第三步，描述自己的感受和启发。
[亮点词汇]
①are full of充满
②the most unforgettable one最难以忘怀的
③difficulty困难
④overcome克服
[高分句型]
①I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class. （比较级）
②Although I met a lot of difficulties, I didn’t give up. （让步状语从句）
13．（2022上·上海徐汇·八年级统考阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Suggested questions:
What do you do in your daily life
What do you think of your daily life
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【答案】例文
I am a student. I get up at six o’clock. I read English for half an hour. At seven ten I have breakfast. After that, I walk to school because it is not far from my home to school. I have five lessons in the morning. I do morning exercises with my classmates after the second lesson. At 11:30, I go home for lunch. In the afternoon, I have three lessons. After class, we often do sports on the playground. After supper, I read newspapers or go out for a walk, then I do my homework for one and a half hours. At half past ten, I go to bed.
What a busy day I have every day!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文以时间为顺序，注意衔接自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，详细的以时间顺序介绍日常生活；
第二步，结束语，对自己的日常生活的评价；
[亮点词汇]
at half past ten在10点半
[高分句型]
What a busy day I have every day!（感叹句）
14．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Our fourteenth birthday”(以“我们的十四岁生日”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
1. What kind of activities will you arrange for your classmates
2. What will you say to your parents, teachers and friends
3. What’s your expectation for the birthday
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【答案】例文
Our fourteenth birthday
My fourteenth birthday is quite unusual for me. I used to have a birthday party with my parents. But this time I will spend my fourteenth birthday with my parents, all my classmates and teachers. I will decorate my house with some flowers and balloons. At the party, I will share my birthday cake with them.I will sing and play games with my classmates. I will say thank you to my parents, teachers and friends. I hope we will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简介生日的到来；
第二步，介绍生日的相关内容，如和谁一起庆祝、安排的活动以及表示感谢；
第三步，希望大家能玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
say thank you to sb. 对某人表示感谢
have a good time 玩得开心
[高分句型]
I hope we will have a good time. （省略that的宾语从句）
三、看图作文
15．（2022上·上海杨浦·八年级统考期末）In 60-100 words, write a story to go along with the given pictures. (根据所给图片和标题，合理发挥想象，用 60 至 100 个词写一个故事。故事开头已给。标点符号不占格)
My noisy neighbour
Last Sunday, my neighbour had a home party with her friends.
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【答案】例文：
My noisy neighbour
Last Sunday, my neighbour had a home party with her friends. The party began from 5:00 p.m. They sang, danced and laughed loudly. At 11:30 p.m. the party still continued. I couldn’t stand it, so I knocked at her door. I told her it was midnight and let her keep quiet. But she just ignored me. Finally, I called the police for help. With the help of the policemen, the party ended. And next morning, my neighbour apologized to me for what happened last night. I told her that it’s everyone’s job to protect the community.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。根据所给图片编写一个故事。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。按照图片显示内容，合理编写一个故事，逻辑要紧密，注意时态的用法，保证无词汇和语法错误。
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专题09 书面表达（满分范文15篇）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．（2022上·上海闵行·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say thanks to my …（以 “我想对……说声 “谢谢”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Use the following points as a reference.
* Who do you want to say thanks to
* Why do you want to say thanks to him or her (Give at least two reasons: 至少 2 条理由)
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2．（2022上·上海徐汇·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable school activity” （“令人难忘的校园活动”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：“Survival Holidays”令许多学生受益匪浅。在丰富的校园生活中，你也一定组织或参加过许多有意义的活动。请结合自身，分享一个令你最难忘的经历，并谈谈你的收获。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）
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3．（2022上·上海金山·八年级校联考期末）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My most unforgettable day”. （以“我最难忘的一天”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。）
Suggested questions:
1. What happened that day
2. Why do you think it was unforgettable
（注意：1. 请将作文写在答题纸上。2. 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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4．（2023上·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校校考校考）Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文）
我校正在征集模范学生，下图是其中的四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请结合自身经历或见闻说明
注意：1. 文中不得出现个人信息，否则不予评分
2. 照抄语篇不得分
3. 请选择一条填在横线上
Be _______________
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5．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级上海市实验学校校考校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “A busy Day at School”.（以”学校里忙碌的一天”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点）
1. What do you do at school every day
2. Why do you think it is a busy day
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6．（2023上·上海奉贤·八年级统考校考）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A helping hand I gave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格）
帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。
（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
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7．（2022上·上海虹口·八年级上外附中校考期末）Human beings have created so much, but often at the cost of nature. We only have one earth and the way to live in harmony with it is to protect it. As teenagers, what can we do to help protect our planet earth Please write a passage between 80—120 words.
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二、材料作文
8．（2022上·上海黄浦·八年级统考阶段练习）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My best friend’s daily life”
Suggested line:
1.Who is your best friend
2.What does he/she do at school and after school every day
3.What do you think of his/her daily life and what can you learn from him/her
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9．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级上海民办华二浦东实验学校校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“与众不同的 ________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请你选择一样，向你的伙伴们介绍一下。要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下问题仅供参考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答题纸上将题目补充完整。
2.注意适当使用形容词。
3.短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
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10．（2022上·上海普陀·八年级校联考期末）Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所钦佩的人是___________”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
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11．（2022上·上海奉贤·八年级统考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜欢________”为题，可以是人，电影、书籍或是食物等，把你喜欢的美好事物分享给身边的人并说说你喜欢的理由，写不少于60个字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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12．（2023上·上海浦东新·八年级统考校考）Write at least 60 words about the topic “An/A __________ (unusual, interesting, special...) experience in my life” (以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference.（以下问题仅供参考）
1. When and where did it happen
2. What happened
3. How did you feel about it
4. Why did you think so
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13．（2022上·上海徐汇·八年级统考阶段练习）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My daily life” (以“我的日常生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Suggested questions:
What do you do in your daily life
What do you think of your daily life
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14．（2022上·上海浦东新·八年级校考期末）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Our fourteenth birthday”(以“我们的十四岁生日”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
1. What kind of activities will you arrange for your classmates
2. What will you say to your parents, teachers and friends
3. What’s your expectation for the birthday
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三、看图作文
15．（2022上·上海杨浦·八年级统考期末）In 60-100 words, write a story to go along with the given pictures. (根据所给图片和标题，合理发挥想象，用 60 至 100 个词写一个故事。故事开头已给。标点符号不占格)
My noisy neighbour
Last Sunday, my neighbour had a home party with her friends.
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