投稿
1 ．（江苏省南通市海安市 2023-2024 学年高三开学试题）假如你是李华， 你向校报英文版投稿， 介绍当下出 现的外国人学汉语的热潮的相关情况，内容要点如下：
1.简单介绍该现象；
2.该现象产生的原因。
要求：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
2 ．（福建省漳州市 2023-2024 学年高三质量检测）假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在征集稿件，
请你就上周参加学校运动会的一个项目写一篇短文投稿。内容要点包括：
1.比赛过程；
2.赛后感想。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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3 ．（2024 届河北省邯郸市高三第一次调研监测试题）假定你是李华， 一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博园
（Hebei Garden Expo Park），请你为其中的邯郸园（Handan Garden）写一个简介。内容包括：
1. 在园区内的位置；
2. 主要特点及展点。
参考词汇：成语墙（idiom wall）
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
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4 ．（山西省新希望等名校 2023-2024 学年高三联考试题）你校正在组织英文作文比赛。请以“The Benefits of
Doing Exercise Regularly”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你的理解;
2. 举例说明。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Exercise Regularly
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5 ．（贵州省六校联盟 2023-2024 学年高三联考试题）你们学校正在举办主题为“ 自然物语 · 人生四季” 的征文
活动，请你选取一个季节为话题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.该季节的基本特点；
2.该季节给你的启示。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Nature in Words
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6 ．（宁夏吴忠中学2023-2024 学年高三试题）你校英文报正在征稿。请写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”
的文章投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你对失败的理解; 2. 生活中的例子; 3. 你的感悟。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Understanding of Failure
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7 ．（福建省厦门第二中学 2023-2024 学年高三试题）你校将以世界海洋日为主题， 举办英语征文比赛。请你
写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.海洋的重要性；
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意： 1.词数 100 左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
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8 ．（吉林省长春外国语学校 2023-2024 学年高三试题）某国际英文杂志的 Iconic Animals 栏目正面向全球
中学生举行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文应征，介绍一种中国特有的动物。
1. 介绍动物的外形；
2. 描述动物的生活环境、生活习性；
3. 动物的独特或者有趣之处
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
9 ．（河南省南阳市第一中学校 2023-2024 学年高三试题）正值暑假， 学校在七月份开展了“我帮父母做家务”
的活动。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇短文，介绍该活动的情况。
要点包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 词数 100 字左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Helping My Parents Do Housework
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10 ．（云南师范大学附属中学 2023 年高三试题）你校英语社团在为 6 月 6 日全国爱眼日的特刊进行征稿, 主
题是: 保护眼睛, 科学用眼。请你写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:
1. 目前高中生的用眼问题;
2. 保护眼睛的意义和方法。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 全国爱眼日 National Eye-caring Day投稿
1 ．（江苏省南通市海安市 2023-2024 学年高三开学试题）假如你是李华， 你向校报英文版投稿， 介绍当下出 现的外国人学汉语的热潮的相关情况，内容要点如下：
1.简单介绍该现象；
2.该现象产生的原因。
要求：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
Sincerely,
Li Hua
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【答案】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to share an interesting trend—an increasing number
of
foreigner
s
are keen
on
learning
the
Chinese language. The reasons behind this are
obvious.
First, as our country continues to play an increasingly
import
ant role
on the
world
stage,
more
foreigners
realize that being able to communicate in Chinese can give them
an
advantage.
Also,
the
charm
of
Chinese
culture,
art, and literature has captured the hearts of
many foreigners. Learning
Chinese
allows them
to
better
appreciate
and
understand those special thing
s.
)
(
Personally, I firmly believe that as this trend continues, it
not
only
strengthens
cultural
exchange but
also
brings new opportunities for international cooperation.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于信函类应用文，要求考生以信函的写作格式给校报英文版投
稿，介绍当下出现
的汉语热现象，并具体分析其原因。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
越来越多的：
an increasing
number of→a growing number of/more and more
热衷于：
be keen on→be eager for/be
enthusiastic
about
意识到：
realize that→be aware
th
at
允许：
allow→permit
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
I am writing to share an interesting trend—an
increasi
ng number
of
foreigners
are keen
on
learning
the
Chinese language.
拓展句：
I am writing to share an
interesting
trend
that
an
increasing
number
of
foreigners
are
keen
on
learning
the
Chinese language.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
First, as our country continues to play an increasingly important role
on
the
world
stage,
more foreigners realize that being
able to communicate in Chinese
can
give them
an
advantage.(
使用了
as
引导时
间状语从句、不定式短语作
continues
的宾语、
that
引导宾语从
句、
be able to do
结构
)
【高分句型
2
】
Personally, I firmly believe that as this trend continues, it n
ot
only
strengthens
cultural
exchange
but
also brings new opportunities for international cooperation.(
使用了
that
引导宾语从句、
as
引导时间状语从句、
not
only…but also…
连接并列结构
)
)
2 ．（福建省漳州市 2023-2024 学年高三质量检测）假如你校英语报“Sports and Health”栏目正在征集稿件，
请你就上周参加学校运动会的一个项目写一篇短文投稿。内容要点包括：
1.比赛过程；
2.赛后感想。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Last week, I participated in our school sports meet, competing
in
the
400-
meter race—a
thrilling
and
unforgettable experienc
e.
On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the
wind rushing
against my
face
and the
crowd’s
cheers
echoing
around me. My attempts to match the pace of
fellow runners proved challenging, but I did not
give up.
I
pushed
myself
to the limit and crossed the finish line with
all my
strengt
h.
I was glad that I took part in the sports meet, which not only push
ed
my
limit but
also
inspired
me
the
importance
of
persistence
.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语报
“Sports and Health”
栏目投稿，写一写上周参加的
学校运动会的比赛过程和赛后感想。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
冲：
dash→charge
证明：
prove→turn out
尽全力：
with all my
strength→with a
ll
my
might
启发：
inspire→enlighten
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Last week, I participated in our school sports me
et,
competing
in the
400-meter
race—a
thrilling
and
unforgettable experienc
e.
拓展句：
Last week, I participated in our schoo
l
sports
meet, where
I
competed
in
the
400-meter
race—a
thrilling
and unforgettable ex
perience.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
On hearing the sharp whistle, I dashed out, the wind rushing against my
face
and
the
)
(
crowd’s cheers echoing
around me.
（运用了独立主格结构）
【高分句型
2
】
I was glad that I took part in the sports meet, which
not only pushed
my
limit but
also
inspired
me
the importance of
persistence.
（运用了
that
引导的宾语从句，
which
引导非限制定语从句和
not only…but also
…
句型）
)
3 ．（2024 届河北省邯郸市高三第一次调研监测试题）假定你是李华， 一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博园
（Hebei Garden Expo Park），请你为其中的邯郸园（Handan Garden）写一个简介。内容包括：
1. 在园区内的位置；
2. 主要特点及展点。
参考词汇：成语墙（idiom wall）
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear friends,
(
【答案】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Handan Garden of
Hebei Garden Expo Park. Handan Garden
is
located
in the
northwest
of
the Expo Garden. It is a park characterized by culture and history
with
sculptures,
antique buildings
and pictures
to
show the historical origin of
Handan for 8,000 years. The most remarkable
in
Handan
G
arden
is
the
idiom
wall,
which displays hundreds of
idioms from ancient Handan, where visitors often
spe
nd
a
long time
admiring
and
interpreting them. Tourists can also admire the beautiful modern Handan an
d
the
good prospects
for the
future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就
“
一群外国朋友要来参观河北省园博
园
”
一事，
为其中的邯郸
园（
Handan Garden
）写一个简介。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
位于：
be located in →
be
situate
d
in
)
(
展示：
show
→ represent
引人注目的：
remarkable → eye-catching
欣赏：
admire →
appreciate
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
It is a park characterized by culture and history with
s
culptures,
antique buildings
and pictures to
show
the
historical origin of
Handan for
8,000 years.
拓展句：
It is a park which is characterized by
culture
an
d history
with
sculptures,
antique
buildings
and pictures
to
show the historical origin of
Handan for
8,000 y
ears.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
It is a park
characterized by culture and history with sculptures,
antique buildings
and
pictures to show the historical origin of
Handan for
8,000 years. (
运用了过去分短语作后置定语
)
【高分句型
2
】
The most remarkable in Handan Garden is the idiom wall, which displays hu
ndreds
of
idioms
from
ancient Handan, where visitors often spend a l
ongtime admiring
and
interpreting them.
(
运用了
which
引导的非限
制性定语从句和
where
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
)
4 ．（山西省新希望等名校 2023-2024 学年高三联考试题） 你校正在组织英文作文比赛。请以“The Benefits of
Doing Exercise Regularly”为题写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你的理解;
2. 举例说明。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Benefits of Doing Exercise Regularly
(
【答案】
The
Benefits
of
Doing
Exercise
Regularly
Exercise is an essential part of
a healthy lifestyle, and
doing it
regularly
brings
numerous
benefi
ts
to
our
)
(
physical and mental well-being.
Last year, I
joined the school Tai Chi Club. We mem
bers
are
scheduled to
meet
every
day
after
school
and
practice for half
an hour. The past year had a positive effect on me. Not only
could
I
sleep b
etter
at night, but
I
was
also more energetic during the day. By practising TaiChi regularly, I
learnt to r
elax my
mind,
which
enabled
me
to
stay cool in
stressful
situations.
In conclusion, the importance of
doing exercise regularly cannot be emphasized
enough.By
incorpo
rating
regular exercise into our daily routines, we can enjoy
a hea
lthier
and happier
life.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生请以
“T
he Benefits of
Doing Exercise Regularly”
为题写一篇短文
参加学校组织的英文作文比赛。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
必要的：
essential→vital
保持冷静：
stay cool → keep
calm
总之：
in conclusion→all in
all
强调：
emphasize→
stress
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Last year, I
joined the school Tai
Chi
Club.
拓展句：
Last year, I
joined the school Tai
Chi
Club, which
is
very popular
in
our
school.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Not only could I sleep better a
t night, but I was
also more
energetic
during
the
day.
（运用
了部分倒装的结构。）
【高分句型
2
】
By practising Tai Chi regularly,
I learnt to relax my mind, which
enabled me
to
stay
cool
in
stressful
situations.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
5 ．（贵州省六校联盟 2023-2024 学年高三联考试题）你们学校正在举办主题为“ 自然物语 · 人生四季” 的征文
活动，请你选取一个季节为话题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.该季节的基本特点；
2.该季节给你的启示。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Nature in Words
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【答案】
Nature in Words
Among all the seasons, I like spring the most.
Spring
i
s
a
season
of
rejuvenation
and rebirth.
It
is
marked by
the
blossoming
of
beautiful
flowers
,
the
return
of
chirping
birds
,
and
the
gentle
warmth
of
the
sun
.
The
landscape
transforms into vibrant shades of
green as new leaves emerge
on
t
rees
and
grasses
sprout.
Spring teaches us the importance of
resilience and optimism. Despite the harsh winter months, nature bounces
back with renewed energy and enthusiasm. It reminds us that no matter how difficult
or
cha
llenging
life may be,
there is always hope for a fresh
st
art. Just
as the buds break
through
the
cold
earth,
we
too
can
find
the
strength
within ourselves to overcome obstacles and embrace new opportuniti
es.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你们学校正在举办主题为
“
自然物语
·
人生四季
”
的征文活动，请
你选取
一个季节为话题，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
美丽：
beautiful→gorgeous
变成：
transform into→turn into
困难的：
difficult→tough
重要性：
importance→signific
ance
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：
Spring is a season of
rejuvenation and rebirth. It
is marked by the blossoming
of
beautiful
flowers,
t
he
return
of
chirping
birds
,
and
the
gentle
warmth
of
the
sun
.
拓展句：
Spring is a season of
rejuvenation and rebirth, which is
ma
rked by
the blossoming
of
beautiful
flowers,
the
return
of
chirping
birds
,
and
the
gentle
warmth
of
the
sun
.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Just as the buds break thr
ough the cold earth, we too
can
find the
strength
within
ourselves
to
overcome obstacles and em
brace new opportunities. (
运用了
as
引导方式状语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] It reminds us that no matter how difficu
lt or challenging life may be, there
is
always hope
for
a
fresh
)
(
start. (
运用了
that
引导宾语从句
)
)
6 ．（宁夏吴忠中学2023-2024 学年高三试题）你校英文报正在征稿。请写一篇题为“My Understanding of Failure”
的文章投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你对失败的理解; 2. 生活中的例子; 3. 你的感悟。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Understanding of Failure
(
【答案】
My
Understanding
of
Failure
J.Burroughs once said “A man can fail many times, but he
i
sn't
a
failure
until
he begins
to
blame
somebody
else.” This famous remark conveys that when facing failure, we
should reflect
on
ours
elves
instead
of
putting the
blame
on
others
,
which
is
more
important
than
failure
itself
.
When entering high school, many classmates found i
t really
difficult to
learn
maths
and
did poorly
in
exams.
They blamed it on the teacher rather than themselves, which caused even poorer performance. I
was no
exception.
However, when I realized complaining made no sense, I adjusted my
learning metho
ds
and turned
to
the
teacher
whenever I encountered difficult problems. Gradually, I began to make progress, which in turn boosted
my
confidence in maths.The lesson I have drawn from this experience
is
that
only b
y bravely
taking
full responsibility
for failure rather than blaming others can we
succeed.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，
要求考生写
一篇题为
“My Understanding of
Failure”
的征文。其内容包括
你对失败的理解、生活中的例子以及你的感悟。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
①
面对：
face→be faced
with
②
重要的：
important→vital
)
(
③
导致：
cause→result in
④
提升、促进：
boost →promote
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
The lesson I have drawn from this experie
nce
is that
only
by
bravely
taking
full
responsibility
for
failure
rather than blaming others can we succee
d.
拓展句：
What I have drawn from this experience
is
that
only
by
bravely
taking
full
responsibility
for
failure
rather
than blaming others c
an we
succeed.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] This famous remark conveys that when facing failure, we
shoul
d
reflect
on
ourselves
instead
of
putting the blame on others, which is more important than failure itself
.
(
运用了
that
引导的宾语从句及
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] The lesson I have drawn from this experi
ence
is that
only by
bravely
taking
full
responsibility
for
failure rather than blaming others ca
n we succeed. (
运用了
that
引导的表语从句及部分倒装
)
)
7 ．（福建省厦门第二中学 2023-2024 学年高三试题）你校将以世界海洋日为主题， 举办英语征文比赛。请你
写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.海洋的重要性；
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意： 1.词数 100 左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
(
【答案】
June
8th was officially named by the UN in 200
9 as World Oceans Day.
It
is
a
day
to
raise people’s
awareness
of
protecting
oceans
which
are
vital
to
human
beings
.
)
(
Covering about 71% of
the Earth’s surface, the oceans play
a
crucial role
in
regulating
the
climate.
In
addition,
the oceans produce over half
of
the world’s oxygen and are home to a
large
variety
of
sea
life.
Therefore,
it
is
our
responsibility to protect them for our future generations. As stude
nts, we
can
take part
in
it by
doing
small
things,
such as collecting garbage on the shore
or a
voiding pouring
waste
water
into
the
oceans.
Besides,
we
can
call
on
people around us to take action. By working together, we can protect and restore
our
precious
oceans.
Every little effort counts. As long as we try
our bes
t, we will make
a
difference
to
the
oceans.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生以世界海洋日为主题，写一篇英语征文参加比赛。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累：
重要的：
vital→crucial/critical/significant
参加：
take part in→participa
te in/be involved in
此外，而且：
besides→what’s more/
additionally
2.
句式拓展：
原句：
In addition, the oceans produce over half
of
the world’s oxygen and
are home
to
a
large
variet
y
of
sea
life.
拓展句：
In addition, the oceans which are home to
a
large
variety
of
sea
life produce
over half
of
the
world’s
oxygen
.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Covering about 71% of
the Earth’s surface, the oceans play
a
crucial role
in regulati
ng
the
climate.(
运用了现在分
词作状语
)
【高分句型
2
】
It is a day to raise people’s awareness of
protecting oceans which
are
vital
to human beings
.(
运用了
which
引导定
语从句
)
)
8 ．（吉林省长春外国语学校 2023-2024 学年高三试题）某国际英文杂志的 Iconic Animals 栏目正面向全球
中学生举行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文应征，介绍一种中国特有的动物。
1. 介绍动物的外形；
2. 描述动物的生活环境、生活习性；
3. 动物的独特或者有趣之处
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Panda
When talking about iconic animals in China, the first
t
hing
that
comes
to
my
mind
is
definitely
the
giant
panda.
The panda is one of
the rarest animals in the world. It
i
s
a
large
animal with black
and
white
fur
and
lives
in
the mountains of
China. People’s “black eyes” are compared to panda’s
eyes.
Looking
quiet
and
lovely,
it
can
actually be fierce. When it roars, the noise is like a train passi
ng through
a
tunnel.
Do
you
know
how
much
it
loves
bamboo An adult panda eat
s
10-18 kilograms of
bamboo each day. And
it
spends
12-16 hours
a
day
finding
and
eating bamboo.
)
(
Serving as a peace ambassador, pandas have been sent to other
coun
tries
as
gifts, where they
have
received
a
warm welcome.
Milu
deer
Have you ever heard of
the milu deer It is commonly
called
“Sibuxi
ang”
in
China
as
it partly
shares physical
characteristics with four animals: horse, deer, ca
ttle and
donkey.
It is a kind of
giant grass-eating animal. The
adult male milu
deer
can weigh
as
much
as
250
kilograms, be
as
tall as
1.3 meters and as
long as two meters.
They
live together
and
also
feed
on
the
soft parts
of
trees.
The
milu
deer is an endangered animal. In Ch
ina,
it represents
good
fortune.
The history of
the milu deer is a dramatic species-survival
story.
B
efore
they
disappeared
in
China,
some
were
taken to Britain and survived. Luckily, in
1983 the fi
rst milu
deer was
returned
to
the Nanhaizi
Milu
Park,
20
kilometers south of
Beijing, where they are being well protected and cared
for. Now the number
of
the milu
deer
is
increasing steadily.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语写一篇短文来介绍一种中国特有的动物。其内容包括
介绍动物的外形、描述动物的生活环境、生活习性和动物的独特或者有
趣之处。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
绝对地：
definitely
→absolutely
可爱的：
lovely→cute
事实上：
actually →in
fact
喜爱：
love→be fond
of
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
The panda is one of
the rarest animal
s in the world.
It
is
a
large
animal
with black
and
white
fur
and
lives
in
the
mountains
of
China
.
拓展句：
The panda is one of
the rares
t
animals in
the
world,
which
is
a
large
animal
with
black
and
white
fur
and
lives
in
the
mountains
of
China
.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
When talking about iconic animals in China, the first thing
that
comes
to
my
mind
is
definitely the giant panda.
（运用了状语从句的省略和
that
引导
的定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Serving as a peace ambassador, pandas have been sent t
o other
countries
as
gifts, where they
have
received a warm welcome.
（运用了现在分词作状语和
where
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
9 ．（河南省南阳市第一中学校 2023-2024 学年高三试题）正值暑假， 学校在七月份开展了“我帮父母做家务”
的活动。请你为校报英文专栏写一篇短文，介绍该活动的情况。
要点包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 词数 100 字左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Helping My Parents Do Housework
(
【答案】
Helping My Parents Do
Housework
During the summer vacation, our school launched an
activity
of
“Helping Parents
Do
H
ousework”,
aiming to
)
cultivate a sense of responsibility and gratitude among students.
The activity involved students’ taking on various chores such as cleaning, cooking, and laundry, thus giving
parents some well-deserved rest. Not only did the activity help us acquire some skills, but also it brought us
happiness created by our labor work. Furthermore, it strengthened our relationship with our parents. At the end of
the activity, students were encouraged to share their experiences and insights online, promoting discussion and
reflection. It was agreed that such kind of activity benefited us physically and mentally.
Personally, I find this activity both educational and rewarding. It has taught me the importance of contributing
to the family and has deepened my appreciation for my parents’ daily efforts. More activities like this are highly
expected.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生介绍学校在七月份开展的“我帮父母做家务” 的活动情况。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
培养： cultivate→develop
感谢： gratitude→thanks
各种各样的： various→varieties of
获得： acquire→gain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the summer vacation, our school launched an activity of “Helping Parents Do Housework”, aiming to
cultivate a sense of responsibility and gratitude among students.
拓展句： During the summer vacation, our school launched an activity of “Helping Parents Do Housework”, which
aimed to cultivate a sense of responsibility and gratitude among students.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Not only did the activity help us acquire some skills, but also it brought us happiness
created by our labor work. （由 Not only…but also…引导的部分倒装结构）
【高分句型 2】It was agreed that such kind of activity benefited us physically and mentally. （由 that 引导的主语
从句）
10 ．（云南师范大学附属中学 2023 年高三试题）你校英语社团在为 6 月 6 日全国爱眼日的特刊进行征稿, 主
题是: 保护眼睛, 科学用眼。请你写一篇短文投稿, 内容包括:
1. 目前高中生的用眼问题;
2. 保护眼睛的意义和方法。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 全国爱眼日 National Eye-caring Day
(
【答案】
As the National Eye-caring Day is approaching, let’s shift our
atten
tion to
our
most
used
organ —
eyes.
In today’s digital age, high school students, in particular,
are
spen
ding
long hours reading,
writing,
and using
electronic devices. The over-use of
eyes can lead to various
eye problems, w
hich may
arouse
a
major
impact
on
their learning and even affect the
quality
of
lif
e.
For the sake of
eye caring, it would be wise for
us
students to
engage
in
daily
eye
exercises
and
arrange the
study schedule better to guarantee
enough rest and
sleep.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为你校英语社团在为
6
月
6
日全国爱眼日的主题为
“
保护眼睛
,
科学用眼
”
的特刊进行投稿，内容包括目前高中生的用眼问题和保护眼睛的意义和方法。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
尤其：
in particular→ particularly
导致：
lead to
→
cause
各种各样的：
various→a variety of
由于：
for the sake of
→ because
of
2.
句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：
In today’s digital age, hig
h school students, in particular,
are
spending
long hours
reading,
writing,
and
using
electronic devices.
拓展句：
In today’s digital age, it is high school
students w
ho,
in particular,
are
spending
long
hours
reading,
writing,
and using electronic
devices.
)
(
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
The over-use of
eyes
can lead to various eye problems, which may arouse
a
major
impact
on their learning and even affect the quality
of
life.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
As the National Eye-caring Day is approaching, let’s sh
ift our
attention to
our
most
used
organ —
eyes.
（运用了
as
引导的时间状语从
句）
)
