人教版（2019）选择性必修第四册Unit 4 Sharing Reading for Writing一轮复习写作课件(共14张PPT)

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新教材高中英语人教版选择必修四
Unit 4 Sharing
基于单元主题的读写教学
Make a speech about China’s aid to other countries
China has been providing aids to other developing countries or the least developed countries to reduce poverty and improve livelihood.
China provided foreign aids mainly in the following forms: undertaking complete projects, providing goods and materials, conducting technical cooperation, dispatching medical teams and volunteers, offering emergency humanitarian aid, and reducing or exempting the debts of the recipient countries.
Do you know what kind of aids China has offered to other countries
When providing foreign assistance, China sticks to the principles of not imposing any political conditions, not interfering in the internal affairs of the recipient countries and fully respecting their right to independently choose their own paths and models of development.
China's aids to other countries
Pre-writing
a rhetorical question
an answer to it
conclusion
Is it worth it
Yes
it benefits both
topic
content
theme
How is the speech organized
China’s Aid to Other Countries
Pre-writing
How to lead to the topic of the speech
Hello! My name is Zhan Bingbing
Lately, all of us have seen Chinese people on TV in far-off places in the world, helping other countries to develop. We see Chinese workers building roads in the Congo, a port in Pakistan, railways in Panama, and an airport in Sri Lanka. And we see Chinese miners, oil workers, agricultural experts, mechanics, and doctors working in nearly every corner of the world. And some people may ask, "Is it worth it Why help people overseas when China has many areas that are still in need of development "
(1)_____________________
(2)_____________________
greeting
1
2
self-introduction
3
(3)_____________________
topic
Tip1. A proper rhetorical question attracts the audience
Brainstorm other ways that can help lead to the topic of a speech.
Pre-writing
to raise a question
01
Is it worth it
to cite a saying/quote
02
As the saying goes “Attitude is altitude.”
by making comparison
03
Remember how things used to be 10 years ago
to emphasize a statement/fact
04
The number of people volunteer overseas is rising each year.
...
05
...
Pre-writing
How to develop the topic
I had the same questions myself. But for me. it was much more personal. You see, my mother is a medical doctor, and for the last two years she has been working as a volunteer consultant in Tanzania, Africa, as a part of a medical team sent by the Chinese government.
...
Tip2. A personal experience
convinces the audience
How to add details to contribute to the topic
Pre-writing
How is the personal story developed
I had the same questions myself. But for me. it was much more personal. You see, ...
To be honest when my mother first left for Africa, I was upset. My mother cooked me dinner every night, and she took good care of me. But more importantly, she was my best friend. We talked ....So I was unhappy about her leaving without even asking for my input.
But then I began to hear about the work she was doing in Tanzania, a country that has many health problems, and now I am singing a different tune. ...
Today, I want to...
time order
contrast
How did Bingbing’s feelings change and what caused this change
transitional words
comparison
Which words tell us the change of Bingbing’s feelings And what are their functions
Tip3. Time order & comparison and contrast& transitional words provide coherence.
Pre-writing
What does the writer convey in the end
But by any criteria this work is worth it to us as well, because it shows that we are global citizens interested in world stability and that we feel responsible for others and are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind. Everyone deserves a fair chance in life. When I think of all the things that we as Chinese citizens can be most proud of, helping others comes at the top of this list. Now that I understand how important my mother's work is, I've decided to become a volunteer myself to help people in other lands in the future. I pray that you will do the same.
Thank you!
(1)_________
action
(2)__________
1
2
appeal
3
(3)__________
appreciation
Around the world, people have looked out for each other and pulled together as one.
守望相助
风雨同舟
Pre-writing
structure
part1 topic
part2 content
part3 theme
content
greeting+self-introduction+topic
personal experience
action+appeal+appreciation
skill+language
proper rhetorical question (saying/quote/fact/...)
time order
comparison (the same)
& contrast (different)
transitional words
(but/and/to be honest/...)
While-writing
假如你是李华，正在参加学校的演讲赛，请你以“Should we help others in need ”为题，发表演讲。内容包括：
1. 你的看法；
2. 你的助人经历；
3. 行动和呼吁
Post-writing
Checklist
Do I use a clear structure including topic, content and theme
Do I use correct tense
Do I use any transitional words to make it coherent
Do I use appropriate language
Do I convey my opinion clearly
Have I checked for spelling errors, punctuation and capitalization
...
possible version
Good evening, my dear friends!
I’m Li Hua, and it’s my honor to stand here to elaborate my views on the issue “Should we help others in need？”
Some people share the idea that we should mind our own business but I disagree with it. Just as the old saying goes, “ Roses given, fragrance remains.”Giving a hand to others benefits us both. I once helped a tramp to buy a new guitar by offering him my pocket money and chat with him, which turned out to be a transmission of love years later when I went on a journey on myself but lost money to buy a ticket. It was the same person that helped me! Besides, helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. Every Chinese should shoulder the responsibility to build a better world by helping each other.
To sum up, it’s a good virtue to help others which not only makes us feel good but also makes our world more harmonious. So, let’s take action now!
Thank you!