天津市部分地区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语试卷汇编：书面表达（含答案）

天津市部分地区2023-2024学年上学期高一英语期中解析版试卷汇编
书面表达
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51. 假设你是学生会主席李津，周日将组织学生参加户外活动。请你根据以下提示给英语外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请信，希望他参加你们的活动。
An Outdoor Activity
Aims get close to nature, take exercise
Time 7:30 get together at the school gate, 8:00 start, 11:00 end
Place Guang Ming Farm, 2 kilometers away
Activities plant vegetables, water flowers, …
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：学生会 Students’ Union
Dear Mr. Smith,
Are you free this Sunday
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天津市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
第二节：书面表达(满分25分)
56. 假设你是晨光中学李津，请给你的外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。
邮件内容包括：
(1)介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、活动内容等)；
(2)说明你发出邀请的原因；
(3)询问对方的意向。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100字；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Li Jin
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
61. 假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
内容要点：
1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. _____________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
天津市南开区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
61. 假设你是晨光中学的李津。 刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，妈妈为了鼓励你写了很多卡片。请你把这段美好的回忆分享给你的好友Chris， 内容包括：
(1) 开学后感到的压力(如学习或交友等)；
(2) 妈妈通过写卡片的方式帮助你减轻压力；
(3) 你的变化和感受。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、 行文连贯；
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名；
(4) 信的开头及格式已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：感到有压力 feel stressed； 减轻压力 reduce pressure
Dear Chris,
While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend, I found some cards.
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Yours sincerely
Li Jin
天津市河北区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
51. 假设你是晨光中学高一年级的学生李津。进入高中后你感到英语学习难度加大，英语学习有困难，所以你准备给外教Mr Smith写邮件，向他请教如何学好英语。
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(1)你写信的目的；
(2)你在英语学习中遇到的困难(至少写出二点)；
(3)你期望得到 Mr Smith 的回复并表示感谢。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Mr Smith,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Li Jin
参考答案
天津市河西区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中质量调查英语试题
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
Are you free this Sunday Our Students’ Union would like to host an outdoor activity this Sunday in order to get close to nature and take exercise.
The main activities will include planting vegetables, watering flowers and feeding the chickens, ducks and geese. It will start at 8 a.m. and end at 11 a.m. We will get together at the gate of our school at 7:30, and then walk to Guang Ming Farm, which is about 2 kilometers away from our school. If you are interested in these activities, please join us.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以学生会主席的身份，结合提示给英语外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请信，希望他参加周日的学生户外活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办：host→hold/organize
为了：in order to→in a bid to/in an effort to
包括：include→cover/involve
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in/be keen on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our Students’ Union would like to host an outdoor activity this Sunday in order to get close to nature and take exercise.
拓展句：Our Students’ Union would like to host an outdoor activity this Sunday so that we can get close to nature and take exercise.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We will get together at the gate of our school at 7:30, and then walk to Guang Ming Farm, which is about 2 kilometers away from our school. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If you are interested in these activities, please join us. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
天津市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hope that everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel honored if you are present.
The activity is scheduled at 8:00 am this Friday in the auditorium. Aiming to improve the students understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together. As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加年级举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：honored→privileged
提高：improve→enhance
宝贵的：valuable→precious
考虑：consider→take into consideration
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle, which will be held in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We’ll feel honored if you are present.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句，that引导的宾语从句）
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.
I hope these can benefit you
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
some advice; study effectively; in a relaxing way; remove our pressure; keep up our spirits; take part in sports; music; effective means of refreshing; exchange ideas with our classmates; encourage
第三步：连词成句
1. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.
2. First of all, learn in a relaxing way.
3. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job.
4. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports.
5. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer.
6. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
7. Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates.
8. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）【只写范文中出现的衔接词，如果没有，提供相关的衔接词，写上（供参考）】
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Here is some advice on how to study effectively.(疑问词加动词不定式在句中作介词宾语)
[高分句型2] Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer.(Not only…but also…引导部分倒装，句中并且运用了现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型3] Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.(非限制性定语从句出现在句中)
天津市南开区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear Chris,
While I was cleaning up my bookshelf this weekend, I found some cards. It could be inferred from the handwriting that they were written by my mother to me. I read it carefully and a famous quote came into my sight, which read “God helps those who help themselves”. It inspired me to solve all difficulties by myself. After the new high school started, I felt a lot of pressure. I had some trouble in learning and making friends. My mother helped me relieve stress and encouraged me by writing cards.
From then on, I studied happily, made good friends, and made great progress. Recalling my mother’s cards, my heart still feels incredibly warm.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Chris写信，分享刚进高中时，妈妈写卡片鼓励自己、帮助自己减轻压力的美好回忆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→well-known
解决：solve→tackle
开始：start→begin
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My mother helped me relieve stress and encouraged me by writing cards.
拓展句：It is my mother that helped me relieve stress and encouraged me by writing cards.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I read it carefully and a famous quote came into my sight, which read “God helps those who help themselves”. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】After the new high school started, I felt a lot of pressure.(运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
天津市河北区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear Smith,
I am Li Jin, one of your students in Class 6. Having met many difficulties in learning English, I am writing this letter to ask for help.
To begin with, I don’t understand what my teacher says in class or the listening materials. Besides, there are so many new words in the texts that it is difficult for me to memorize. I can’t remember new words clearly and quickly. In addition, I can’t express my thoughts and feelings since I am poor not only at oral English but also at grammar. I wonder if you could help me improve my English.
I’d appreciate it if you can reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr Smith写邮件，向他请教如何学好英语。
【详解】1.词汇积累
向……求助：ask sb. for help→turn to sb. for help
首先：to begin with→first of all
困难的：difficult→hard
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having met many difficulties in learning English, I am writing this letter to ask for help.
拓展句：I am writing this letter to ask for help because I have met many difficulties in learning English.
【点睛】[高分句型1]To begin with, I don’t understand what my teacher says in class or the listening materials.（运用了what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Besides, there are so many new words in the texts that it is difficult for me to memorize.（运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句）