扬州市2023-2024学年高二上学期学业水平模拟考试英语
第一部分 阅读理解(共20小题;每小题2分,满分40分)
请认真阅读下列短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
A
Sammie Vance knows it feels bad to be left out. So she has been helping kids who feel lonely make friends.
Sammie is 14. When she was in the third grade, she started the Buddy Bench program. That was at her school, in Fort Wayne, Indiana. Anyone who felt lonely could sit on the “buddy bench.” It showed others that someone needed a friend.
The bench brought kids together. “There was one little boy at school, younger than me,” Sammie told TIME for Kids. “He would see me in the hallway and give me a thumbs-up. That told me that what I was doing helped him.”
It costs money to build benches. Sammie decided to make them out of recycled materials. This lowered the cost. And the benches were eco-friendly.
Sammie gathered friends in her community. They collected 1,200 pounds of bottle caps. A company called Green Tree Plastics made three benches with the bottle caps.
Sammie has helped communities all over the country set up buddy benches. And she is spreading kindness around the world. “We recently got a bench in Ghana, Africa,” she says. “That was cool.”
Sammie reminds us that kids can help their community. Even small acts of kindness can be powerful. “You don’t have to be an adult to make a difference,” she says.
Sammie wrote a book. It is called Inspire the World: A Kid’s Journey to Making a Difference. It tells the story of her buddy benches. Sammie hopes her example will inspire others. “I used to be really, really shy,” she says. Building buddy benches gave her confidence. “I’m definitely more outgoing now.”
1. When did Sammie start the Buddy Bench program
A. In the third grade. B. In the fourth grade.
C. In the fifth grade. D. In the sixth grade.
2. What does Sammie do to help lonely kids
A. She helps them find a new hobby.
B. She introduces them to her friends.
C. She starts a program to help them make friends.
D. She gives them a thumbs-up to make them happy.
3. How did Sammie lower the cost of making benches
A. She raised money herself. B. She cycled to find materials.
C. She turned to her parents. D. She used recycled materials.
4. What does Sammie hope to do by writing a book
A. To inspire children to make differences.
B. To raise more money for her journey.
C. To build more benches for children.
D. To remind children to act like adults.
B
As in other countries, road safety is always a concern in America. Studies show that in 2022, 7,485 pedestrians(行人) were killed by vehicles in the U.S. That’s an increase of more than 65% since 2012. Even during COVID-19, when fewer people were driving, more pedestrians were hit and more died .
Researchers found that drivers took advantage of empty streets and pay little attention to traffic rules. Another factor is the increasing popularity of SUVs, pickups(皮卡) and vans. These kinds of vehicles are up to three times more dangerous than smaller cars when hit pedestrians. The more fault drivers believe they could bear for the hitting, the more likely they are to leave without giving any help. Younger male drivers are more likely to run away. So are those who get drunken or lack a driving license. Other factors include the age of the victim, as children and elderly people are less likely to be left alone. Also, with more witnesses around, the drivers are less likely to hit and run.
In the U.S. drivers run away from serious crashes with pedestrians about 20% of the time, and the rate is very different among different states.
In 2020, 6,519 pedestrians were killed in the U.S. Speeding driving were a major cause. While Florida “wins” the least number of deaths caused by speeding. These following states were reported to have the most dangerous road accidents.
Ten most dangerous states for pedestrians
What does the first paragraph tell us
Road security worries Americans.
Pedestrian are on the rise over time.
COVID-19 caused more road accidents.
Vehicles have doubled since 2012.
6. Which kind of vehicles is the least dangerous in America
A. Cars. B. SUVs. C. Pickups. D. Vans.
7. What can we learn from the passage
A. Young drivers are more likely to be honest.
B. Drunken Driving is now allowed in America.
C. Children and the old are well protected in the U.S.
D. Drivers are more honest if witnessed by more people.
8. Which of the following states is the most suitable for tourists on foot
A. New Mexico. B. New York. C. Florida. D. South Carolina.
C
Astronomers have discovered an unusual solar system near Earth. It’s made up of six planets orbiting a star. What makes this system special is that the six planets’ orbits appear to be matched. Scientists compare their movement to a perfectly timed symphony.
“It’s precise and very orderly,” says Enric Pallé, an astronomer in the Canary Islands.
The discovery was announced on November 29. It’s based on data from two orbiting satellites, NASA’s TESS and the European Space Agency’s Cheops. The newly discovered system is 100 light-years from Earth, or about 600 trillion (万亿) miles. That’s close, in space terms. Astronomers are calling the system a “golden target” for further study. It could offer an example of how systems across the Milky Way were formed.
All solar systems are thought to have started out like this one. But they rarely keep their perfect timing. Giant planets can throw off the orbits of other planets. So can meteor(流星) impact. These things have happened in our solar system.
Hugh Osborn, of the University of Bern, in Switzerland, says his team was “shocked and delighted” by the discovery. “My jaw was on the floor,” he says. “That was a really nice moment.”
9. What is special about the solar system recently discovered
A. It is made up of six orbiting planets.
B. The planets’ orbits are perfectly matched.
C. It is located 100 light-years away from Earth.
D. The discovery was made using satellite data.
10. What is the significance of the newly discovered solar system
A. It is the closest solar system to Earth in the Milky Way.
B. It is a clear target for future exploration tasks in space.
C. It challenges the common thought about solar system.
D. It offers an example of the formation of other systems.
11. Which can affect the perfect timing of a solar system’s orbits
A. The impact of meteors.
B. The researches of astronomers.
C. The formation of the Milky Way.
D. The influence of orbiting satellites.
12. How did Hugh Osborn and his team react to the discovery
A. They were very doubtful and critical.
B. They were quite surprised and excited.
C. They were confused and disappointed.
D. They were indifferent and uninterested.
D
Physical weakness, lack of energy, severe hair loss, and pain in the neck, are more common among young people recently. More people are now turning to TCM for help, which stands for traditional Chinese medicine.
Wang Louda, 30, who works in the social media industry, has gained a new respect for TCM after suffering from cervical(颈椎) pain.
Six months ago, while driving home from work, Wang suddenly felt weakness in his left arm. He thought it was due to the hard work he was doing and that a good rest over the weekend would relieve it.
However, the situation worsened after a week. He had no choice but to go to the hospital for an examination, which showed something wrong with his cervical.
A friend recommended that he try acupuncture(针灸). After over a month of treatment with TCM, his pain had gradually disappeared.
“TCM is relatively gentle and suitable for treating chronic (慢性的) diseases,” Wang says.
Modern people, due to the endless use of mobile phones and computers, spend up to 10 hours a day sitting to study or work. This sedentary lifestyle, lacking in enough physical activity, means that the muscles and bones cannot receive enough relaxation and exercise, gradually leading to damage. Problems such as neck pain, shoulder pain, back pain, and leg pain are becoming increasingly common.
Yao Jingyi, who works at a TCM clinic in Hangzhou, Zhejiang province, has been engaged in the clinic for over 30 years. He is skilled in treating sports injuries, cervical pain, and chronic diseases.
“Acupuncture is one of the treasures of traditional Chinese medicine,” Yao explains.
According to him, the ancient practice of acupuncture woks well in treating “modern illnesses”, such as headache, backache and cervical pain.
13. How did Wang Louda recover from cervical pain
A. By taking enough exercise.
B. By visiting clinics of TCM.
C. By taking his friend’s medicine.
D. By having good rests every day.
14. Which can help keep people away from common diseases
A. The lack of sleep.
B. Endless use of Mobile phones.
C. Long hours’ sitting.
D. Enough relaxation and exercise.
15. What does the underlined word “sedentary” in the 7th paragraph probably mean
A. Inactive. B. Unusual. C. Flexible. D. Common.
16. What is the passage mainly about
A. The history of traditional Chinese medical treatment.
B. An advertisement for traditional Chinese medicine.
C. The modern popularity of traditional Chinese treatment.
D. The future development of Chinese acupuncture.
E
As a child, I didn’t enjoy cartoons like other girls my age, but I did love listening to discussions about politics (政治). I was very talkative and asked too many questions, which wore out the patience of my friends and sometimes even the adults around me. My Grade 4 report summarized my social relations with “needs improvement”.
It wasn’t until I turned 46 that I learned my uniqueness has a name — autism (自闭症). My diagnosis (诊断) was like discovering a missing piece of my brain, picking it up, putting it in place and feeling whole for the first time. From then on, I started to fully enjoy life. What I’ve found out since is that there are a number of others like me — people who weren’t diagnosed as having autism until midlife.
In my 20s, I talked with a doctor about my growing anxiety. But autism never entered the conversation. In early 2017, I began a new job in which I was being praised and recognised as never before, so I didn’t know how to deal with it. As I neared the end of my one-year work, all the symptoms (症状) of my undiagnosed condition appeared in my working environment: becoming so stressed out because of overwork. Then, two months later, I received my diagnosis. Finally everything started to make sense.
Today, I have my own company called Liberty Co., which suggests that facing the facts brings us freedom. Our goal is to increase the population of people like me in the workplace. It gives me a chance to be a supporter for women with autism.
17. What do we know about the author as a child
A. She was patient. B. She was different.
C. She got good grades in school. D. She tried to stand out from her classmates.
18. How did the author feel about her diagnosis
A. Thankful. B. Concerned. C. Doubtful. D. Dissatisfied.
19. What made the author’s symptoms worse
A. No recognition from her co-workers. B. Not seeing doctors very often.
C. The anxiety about her social relations. D. The stress of her new job.
20. Why did the author set up her own business
A. To support women’s equal rights.
B. To help people in the workplace connect more.
C. To include more autistic people at work.
D. To teach women with autism survival skills.
第二部分 完形填空(共15题;每小题2分,满分30分)
请认真阅读下面短文,从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
On May 4, Fan Jinshi donated 10 million yuan to set up the Fan Jinshi Education Fund. Fan is 21 as a famous archaeologists(考古学家) in China, and her 22 will support further research into Dunhuang.
All people present were 23 by her love for Dunhuang. Fan Jinshi, also 24 as “the Daughter of Dunhuang”, 25 from Peking University and then 26 for the Northwest Desert. Since then, she has 27 herself to protecting the caves in history.
Fan used 28 technologies to protect the caves, and now Dunhuang 29 tourists from around the world.
Today, Fan is still trying to promote talks and 30 between Peking University and the Dunhuang School.
Fan said, “Though now I work, I am a student of Peking University, and I was able to 31 to the caves in Dunhuang. I hope that the fund can help 32 the Dunhuang studies of Peking University.”
The fund 33 Fan’s prize money and her savings. She believes in taking money from the right place and spending it in a 34 way to ensure that it is used for the benefit of society.
Fan Jinshi’s speech 35 so many people, and the research on Chinese archaeology will continue developing.
21. A. organized B. considered C. frightened D. encouraged
22. A. wish B. respect C. opinion D. donation
23. A. moved B. thanked C. connected D. explained
24. A. known B. informed C. allowed D. sent
25. A. admired B. expected C. explained D. graduated
26. A. set up B. break out C. set off D. break down
27. A. applied B. replied C. supplied D. relied
28. A. delicious B. unique C. false D. dizzy
29. A. affects B. welcomes C. offers D. shares
30. A. description B. definition C. responsibility D. exchanges
31. A. lead B. owe C. contribute D. stick
32. A. improve B. rise C. dream D. devote
33. A. shows up B. consists of C. takes off D. stands out
34. A. final B. lucky C. wise D. simple
35. A. included B. reminded C. cared D. inspired
第三部分 语法填空 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
From fishing bats and golden monkeys 36._________ pandas, the biggest star of the show, China’s wildlife flourishes (茁壮成长) in this five-part nature documentary. The Hidden Kingdoms of China takes you on a journey through five different 37._________ (landscape), including high mountains, jungles, bamboo forests, great plains and temperate forests.
38._________ (feature) a variety of animals that are seldom seen on camera, the series uses high-tech drones, camera traps and 4K footage (镜头) 39._________ (record) them in their natural habitat. Once it 40._________ (launch) on a Chinese streaming service in November, 2019, it received millions of views in the first nine days alone.
Watch as Tibetan foxes ward off (避开) danger, a snow leopard teaches 41._________ (she) baby the fundamentals of survival and a panda provides water for young babies in a very unusual way.
What makes the survival of these animals even more amazing 42._________ (be) the way they’ve adapted to deal with everything 43._________ the environments throw at them — storms, 44._________ (predictable) climates and rough land — to ensure it really is survival of 45._________ fittest.
第四部分 写作(满分20分)
46. 假如你是李江,请你根据下表的主要内容,用英语写一份演讲稿,谈谈自己对健康的理解,在明天早晨的班会微讲堂中演讲。
谈谈你的理解 1. 健康指强壮的身体,有较强的活动能力和劳动能力
2. 健康也指心理健康,良好的社会适应力,以及有道德
给同学们的建议 1. 利用学校每天的“阳光体育一小时”,积极参加锻炼
2. ……(请考生结合自身想法,再写一到两点)
注意:
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译;
2. 词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my great honor to have been given the chance to share with you my opinion on health.
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That’s all. Thank you!
英语学业水平测试模拟试题答案
第一部分 阅读理解(共20小题;每小题2分,满分40分)
1-4 ACDA 5-8 AADC 9-12 BDAB 13-16 BDAC 17-20 BADC
第二部分 完形填空(共20小题;每小题1.5分,满分30分)
21-25 BDAAD 26-30 CABBD 31-35 CABCD
第三部分 语法填空(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
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41. her 42. is 43. that 44. unpredictable 45. the
第四部分 书面表达(满分20分)
46. Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s my great honor to have been given the chance to share with you my opinion on health.
Health refers to the sound condition of a person’s body and mind, which lays the foundation for our life, work and relationships. A healthy body shelters us from diseases and enables us to participate in all forms of activities. Mental health, on the other hand, gets us through hardships in the peace and balance of mind.
Therefore, I suggest that all of us make the most of One Hour of Sunshine Sport and dive into varieties of physical exercises on campus. We should safeguard our mental well-being and seek help if needed. It proves effective to improve our mental health with laughter, meditation, and positive thinking.
That’s all. Thank you!
英语学业水平测试模拟试题详解
第一部分 阅读理解(共20小题;每小题2分,满分40分)
A篇
ACDA
【分析】本文属于记叙文,讲述了Sammie为了帮助感到孤独的孩子们,她在三年级时启动了“伙伴长椅计划”。通过这个计划,Sammie给那些孤单和害羞的孩子提供了支持和机会,让他们结交新朋友并感到被接纳。为了降低制造长椅的成本,Sammie决定召集社区的小伙伴一起收集瓶盖,利用回收材料来制作它们。Sammie的这份善举还传播到了世界各地。Sammie的故事告诉我们小小的善意行动可以带来巨大的改变。
1. 细节理解题。根据第二段When she was in the third grade, she started the Buddy Bench program可知Sammie在三年级时启动了“伙伴长椅计划”,故选A。
2. 细节理解题。根据第二段Anyone who felt lonely could sit on the “buddy bench.” It showed others that someone needed a friend可知,Sammie通过“伙伴长椅计划”,让感到孤独的孩子坐在长椅上,提供他们一个表达自己需要朋友的机会,故选C。
3. 细节理解题。根据第四段Sammie decided to make them out of recycled materials. This lowered the cost可知,Sammie决定利用回收材料制作长椅,来降低成本,故选D。
4. 细节理解题。根据第七段Sammie reminds us that kids can help their community. Even small acts of kindness can be powerful以及最后一段Sammie hopes her example will inspire others可知,Sammie希望激励孩子们通过一些善意的行动带来一些影响,故选A。
B篇
AADC
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了近十年来,美国行人被撞死的案例逐步增加,专家们也给出了众多原因,最大的原因是缺乏交通安全规则意识。
细节理解题。根据文章第一段第一句,“road safety is always a concern in America”可知道路安全牵挂着美国人。故选A。
6. 细节判断题。根据文章第二段第二句,“Another factor is the increasing popularity of SUVs, pickups(皮卡) and vans. These kinds of vehicles are up to three times more dangerous than smaller cars when hit pedestrians”,即“另一个因素是SUV、皮卡和货车越来越受欢迎。这类车辆撞到行人时的危险性是小型汽车的三倍”。由此可见,行人被小汽车撞的危险系数比起SUV、皮卡和货车低得多。故选A。
7. 细节推理题。根据文章第二段最后一句,“Other factors include... the number of people who saw it happen.”交通事故肇事司机逃跑的另一个因素是案发现场有多少目击者。换言之,目击证人多,肇事司机越老实。故选D。
8. 细节判断题。根据文章第四段第二句,“While Florida ‘wins’ the least number of deaths caused by speeding”可知,佛罗里达州是因超速死亡人数最少的州。由此可见,在美国徒步旅行,行走在佛罗里达州相对安全。故选C。
C篇
BDAB
【分析】本文属于说明文,介绍了天文学家们发现了一个位于地球附近的不寻常的太阳系。
9. 细节判断题。根据文章第一段中What makes this system special is that the six planets’ orbits appear to be matched. Scientists compare their movement to a perfectly timed symphony,可知这个太阳系的六颗行星的轨道完美地同步,科学家将它们的运动比作一个精确而有秩序的交响乐,故选B。
10. 细节判断题。根据文章第三段中It could offer an example of how systems across the Milky Way were formed可知,这个太阳系为了解银河系中其他系统的形成提供了例子,故选D。
11. 细节理解题。根据文章第四段中Giant planets can throw off the orbits of other planets. So can meteor impact可知,巨大行星和陨石的撞击都有可能扰乱行星的轨道,故选A。
12. 细节理解题。根据文章最后一段可知Hugh Osborn和他的团队对这个发现感到“震惊和欣喜”,形容这一发现是一个“非常美好的时刻”,故选B。
D篇
BDAC
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了一位30岁的年轻人在饱受颈椎病折磨后,在朋友的推荐下,尝试中医传统疗法,最终疼痛消失。文章分析了年轻人常见病的成因,并表明中医疗法在现代疾病中的良好效果。
13. 细节理解题。根据第五段第二句“After over a month of treatment with TCM, his pain had gradually disappeared”可知,经过一个多月的中医治疗,他的疼痛逐渐消失了。故选B。
14. 细节判断题。根据第七段“due to the endless use of mobile phones and computers, spend up to 10 hours a day sitting to study or work”以及“lacking in enough physical activity, means that the muscles and bones cannot receive enough relaxation and exercise”可知,青年人得常见病的原因主要包含久坐不动,缺乏足够的体力活动,和得不到足够的放松和锻炼。所以足够的放松和锻炼可以帮助年轻人远离常见病,故选D。
15. 推测词义题。根据第七段“lacking in enough physical activity, means that the muscles and bones cannot receive enough relaxation and exercise, gradually leading to damage”可知,缺乏充足锻炼的生活方式导致损伤,故选A。
16. 主旨大意概括题。文章讲述了一位30岁的年轻人在饱受颈椎病折磨后,在朋友的推荐下,尝试中医传统疗法,最终疼痛消失。文章分析了年轻人常见病的成因,并表明传统中医疗法在现代疾病治疗中,越来越流行,故选C。
E篇
BADC
【分析】作者从小就表现得跟别人不一样。直到中年,她才被诊断出患有自闭症。她积极面对,并帮助像她一样患
有自闭症的女性。
17. B。根据第一段中的I didn’t enjoy cartoons like other girls my age, but I did love listening to discussions
about politics. I was very talkative and asked too many questions可知,作者小时候与众不同。
18. A。根据第二段中的My diagnosis was like discovering a missing piece of my brain, picking it up, putting it in place and feeling whole for the first time. From then on, I started to fully enjoy life可知,作者对这次诊断充满感激。
19. D。根据第三段中的In early 2017, I began a new job in which I was being praised and recognised as never
before, so I didn’t know how to deal with it及becoming so stressed out because of overwork可知,来自新工作的压力使作者的情况恶化了。
20. C。根据最后一段的内容可知,作者的目标是增加工作场所中像她那样的人,这也让她有机会成为自闭症女性的支持者,由此可知,作者成立公司的目的是让更多的患有自闭症的人群进入职场。
第二部分 完形填空(共15小题;每小题2分,满分30分)
21-25 BDAAD 26-30 CABBD 31-35 CABCD
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲诉了“敦煌女儿”樊锦诗校友回到北大,同时带回一千万人民币的捐款,设立樊锦诗教育基金,用以支持北大的敦煌学研究,她希望樊锦诗教育基金的设立,会对北京大学敦煌学术研究的发展起到积极作用。
21. B考查动词。句意:樊锦诗被认为是一位著名的中国考古学家。organized组织;considered认为;frightened使某人害怕;encouraged鼓励;结合下文“as a famous archaeologists”可知,樊锦诗被视为一位著名的考古学家,故选B。
22. D考查名词。句意:她的捐款将支持对敦煌的进一步研究。wish祝愿;respect尊重;opinion观点;donation捐赠。结合前文“Fan Jinshi donated 10 million yuan”可知。donate 的名词形式为 donation,故选D。
23. A考查动词。句意:所有在场的人都被她对敦煌的爱所感动。moved感动;thanked感谢;connected 连接;explained 解释,故选A。
24. A 考查动词。句意:樊锦诗,也被称为“敦煌的女儿”。known 被熟知; informed 被通知;allowed 被允许;sent 被派送。“被称为……”应为“be known as...”,故选A。
25. D 考查动词。句意:她毕业于北京大学。admired 钦佩;expected期望,explained解释,graduated毕业。从北京大学毕业,graduated from Peking University, 故选D。
26. C考查动词短语。句意:毕业于北京大学,然后出发去西北沙漠。set up设立;break out爆发;set off出发;break down出故障。动身出发,故选C。
27. A考查动词。句意:从那时起,她一直致力于保护历史上的洞窟。applied 应用;replied回复;supplied提供;relied 依赖。apply oneself to doing something表示“某人致力于做某事” ,故选A。
28. B考查形容词。句意:樊锦诗用独特的技术保护了这些洞窟。delicious美味可口的;unique 独特的;false错误的;dizzy头晕的。此处为采用独特的技术,used unique technologies to protect the caves,故选B。
29. B考查动词。句意:现在敦煌欢迎来自世界各地的游客。affects影响;welcomes欢迎;offers提供;shares分享,故选B。
30. D考查名词。句意:今天,樊锦诗仍在努力推动北京大学与敦煌学派的对话与交流。 description描述;definition定义;responsibility责任;exchanges交流。结合and 前面的“talks”,故选D。
31. C考查动词短语。句意见上题解析。根据下文可知,我能够为研究敦煌的石窟做出贡献。lead to 导致;owe to 归因、由于;contribute to对……作贡献;stick to 坚持。故选C。
32. A 考查动词。句意:我希望这笔资金可以帮助改善北京大学的敦煌研究。improve改善;rise 上升;dream 梦想;devote 致力于。故选A。
33. B考查动词短语。句意:该基金由樊锦诗的奖金和她的积蓄组成。shows up 出钱;consists of 组成;takes off起飞;stands out突出。此处意思为“由……组成”,故选B。
34. C 考查形容词。句意:她相信钱应该用在正确的地方,并以明智的方式使用,以确保它被用于造福社会。final 最终的;lucky 幸运的;wise 明智的;simple简单的。故选C。
35. D 考查动词。句意:樊锦诗的演讲激励了很多人,也激励了中国考古学研究继续发展。included 包括;reminded 提醒;cared 关心;启发inspired。故选D。
第三部分 语法填空(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
36. to。from... to 搭配。
37. landscapes。考查复数形式。
38. Featuring。feature为及物动词,表示“以……为特色”,此处为现在分词做状语。
39. to record。动词不定式表目的。
40. was launched。一般过去时的被动语态。
41. her。考查形容词性物主代词。
42. is。考查主语从句主谓一致。
43. that。定语从句先行词是everything,关系代词用that.
44. unpredictable。考查构词法。
45. the。形容词最高级。
第四部分 书面表达(满分20分)
46. 假如你是李江,请你根据下表的主要内容,用英语写一份演讲稿,谈谈自己对健康的理解,在明天早晨的班会微讲堂中演讲。
谈谈你的理解 1. 健康是强壮的身体,有较强的活动能力和劳动能力
2. 健康也指心理健康,良好的社会适应力,有道德
给同学们的建议 1. 利用学校每天的“阳光体育一小时”,积极参加锻炼
2. ……(请考生结合自身想法,再写一到两点)
一、试题分析:
应用文考查的是简单演讲稿。
二、写作要求及评分依据:
第一步:谈谈你的理解(7分)
第二步:给同学们的建议(7分)
另:结构、人称、时态、句式、过渡衔接和书写等。(6分)
三、评分标准
1. 总体要求:
①本题总分为20分,按五个档次进行评分。评分时,主要从内容要点、语言表达两个方面考查。
②评分时,应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
③评分时还应注意:词数少于90的,从总分中扣2分;单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受;书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分。
2. 各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(17—20分):能写明全部要点;语言基本无误;行文连贯,表达清楚;
第四档(13—16分):能写明全部或绝大部分要点;语言有少量错误;行文不够连贯,表达基本清楚;
第三档(9—12分):能写明基本要点;语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意;
第二档(5—8分):能写出部分要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达;
第一档(0—4分):空白试卷,有倾向错误,乱抄试卷文章,用不正确的笔书写,或者只能写出一两个要点;语言错误很多,只有个别句子正确。