中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题09 书面表达（主题写作满分范文）15篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2022上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）目前，中学生的早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在的学校开展了问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，倡导营养早餐。
学生比例 早餐情况 健康情况
55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛
25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡
20% 没有吃早餐 减肥；感到饥饿；上课无法认真听讲， 容易生病。
要求：1. 词数 80 字左右。 (标题已给出，不计入词数) 。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Breakfast is important
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2．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）本学期你参加了学校组织的“英语文化节”活动。你的英语老师请你在班内做一次分享，请根据以下要点准备一份英文的发言稿。
1）目的：弘扬中国优秀文化，用英语讲好中国故事
2）地点：学校大厅
3）内容：
演讲：用英语介绍中国名人
制作海报：用英语介绍中国传统文化
（请补充至少1点活动）
4）意义（活动对你个人和社会的意义）
注意：
1）参考词汇：弘扬promote；
2）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear classmates,
I went to the School Hall to join in the English Cultural Festival this term.
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3．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假设你的英语老师布置了关于减轻学生压力有效建议的调查活动，收集同学们的意见。请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文，汇报你对三位同学的采访结果。报告中需包含表格中的所有要点，补充一点你的建议并解释原因。
From Bob Tom Rose You
Advice （请补充）
Why keep healthy have a close relationship feel relaxed （请补充）
注意：1.词数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure.
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4．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假如你是知心栏目负责人Aunt Linda，你收到一名学生David的来信诉说他的烦恼，请你根据以下表格内容提示，给出建议。
David’s problems Aunt Linda’s advice
stay up late to complete his homework 不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好，安排好时间做作业；
feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class 晚上要有足够的睡眠时间；
doesn’t have his personal time to relax himself 周末适当放松，例如锻炼身体或听音乐等；
Feeling: feel stressed and unhappy 希望：……。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺；
2.要点必须包括表格信息并适当发挥；
3.词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
5．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）寒假即将到来，为帮助同学们愉快度过假期，丰富假期家庭生活，学校英文报以“Family activities during the winter holiday”为题，向同学们征稿。请根据以下内容图示写一篇短文，推荐自己喜爱的家庭活动，向校报投稿。
Family activities
an educational activity a relaxing activity
1. What are the two activities 2. What can family members do in each activity 3. What can family members get from each activity
注意：1. 词数80-120个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I
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6．（2023上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）
假设你是李华。你的好友Li Ming听说你在初中有一系列家庭劳动实践课。他非常感兴趣，向你提了一连串的问题。请你结合你的家庭劳动实践，写一封e-mail解答他的疑惑。E-mail需包括以下要点：
1. 劳动时间地点：周末在家。
2. 劳动内容：美食、打扫、整理、沏茶等。
3. 你的劳动实践经历、收获、感受。
注意：
1. 参考词汇：劳动教育Labor education
2. 词数：80词左右 （首尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Li Ming:
You are right that I have a series of labor education practice during my junior high school.
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After hearing my introduction, how do you like our labor education practice Do you also want to have such chances
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）假设你是Charles，你所在的小区正在进行”模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighborhood this year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
8．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级统考期末）现如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上眼镜了。这一现象引起了你校老师的高度重视，假设下周一你们班的英语课上将针对这一现象进行讨论，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇如何保护视力的英语发言稿为下周的讨论做准备。
要点提示：
1. 一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状；
2. 介绍一些如何保护眼睛的方法；
3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。
参考词汇：
eyesight 视力
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3. 80词左右。
As we all know, eyes are important to us.
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9．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级红岭中学校考期末）假如你是某校九年级学生李想，下个月打算竞选校广播站的英语广播员。在准备竞选演讲的过程中你遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面的提示，给学校英语俱乐部的外教Mr Brown写一封邮件求助。
提示：
1.参加竞选的原因；
2.请Mr Brown帮助纠正发音并给出一些建议；
3.约定拜访时间和地点。
要求:
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词语：pronunciation 发音
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Xiang
10．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）每年的3月21日是世界睡眠日。今年世界睡眠日的中国主题是：“良好睡眠，健康同行”。假设你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。在英语课上，你们将进行关于睡眠的讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，为讨论做好准备。
提示：
1. 你的睡眠状况怎样；
2. 你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的；
3. 号召大家关注睡眠。
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you.
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11．（2023上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Angela的问题，提出你的建议及理由。
Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons
problems with parents 1. listen and communicate — know each other better
2. (请补充)
study stress 1. live a healthy life — take care of your body
2. (请补充)
注意：
1. 内容包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
12．（2022上·广东广州·九年级执信中学校考期末）以下是《简·爱》这部作品的中文介绍。请根据提示，写一篇英文读书报告。内容包括：1. 作者介绍；2. 作品的主要角色；3. 作品的主要情节；4. 你对这部作品或人物角色的评价。
作者 夏洛特·勃朗蒂（Charlotte Bronte）；英国最伟大的小说家之一。
主要角色 简·爱（Jane Eyre）、罗切斯特（Mr. Rochester）
主要情节 1. 简·爱出生于一个贫困的家庭； 2. 幼年，父母染重疾去世，之后，被送进了孤儿院（orphanage）； 3. 长大以后，到一个富裕的家庭当教师，与男主人罗切斯特相爱； 4. 两人准备结婚时，她偶然发现罗切斯特15年前已经结婚； 5. 简离他而去，到一所小学任教； 6. 简得知罗切斯特经历种种不幸，毅然决定回到他的身边。
你的评价 （请自行补充）
注意：
1. 词数80-100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 内容完整，语法正确，语篇连贯。
This is a report on the story “Jane Eyre”.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2022上·广东广州·九年级广州四十七中校考期末）假如你的学校正在举办“好书伴我成长”的活动。请根据以下内容提示，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一封倡议书， 向全校同学发出读书的倡议。
读书的益处 获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐
存在的现象 听音乐、看电视、上网，占用了大部分业务时间
发出倡议 多读书，读经典好书；弘扬中国传统文化让读书成为生活得一部分
注意：
1、词数不少于80词，开头不计入总词数。
2、可适当发挥，但需注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
请登录E 听说平台，点击“读写专项”作业，拍照上传答案。
开头已给出，不需要抄写到答题卡上，续写即可。（以此处说明为准，忽略答卷说明）
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14．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级深圳中学校考期末）本学期，我们通过课文浅尝了英语文学作品之美，假如你所在的校英语社团准备举办一次线上英语沙龙，沙龙主题为Mark Twain，作为团长李华，请你以主持人的身份写一段开场白，内容包含以下要点：
关于Mark Twain 1.最有天赋美国小说家和幽默家之一。 2.一生写了20多部小说和很多短篇故事：他的历险故事世界闻名。
关于沙龙 活动一：就Mark Twain及其作品进行小组讨论； 活动二：欣赏《汤姆索亚历险记》电影片段； 此次沙龙的目的（至少两点）。
参考词汇：humorist.幽默家
English Salon 英语沙龙
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 汤姆索亚历险记
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整；要点齐全：意思连贯；条理清楚：标点正确。
Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today’s salon is Mark Twain.
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That’s all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today’s salon!
15．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）David最近很烦恼，临近一模考试，他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求他做家务。他认为做家务就是浪费时间。假如你是李华，David写信向你求助，请你给David写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。
要点：1. 家务劳动的意义：1. 教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己（再补充至少1条）；
2. 合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：1. 合理安排时间；2. 用劳动去放松自己的学习压力（再补充至少1条）。
要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions may help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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专题09 书面表达（主题写作满分范文）15篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2022上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）目前，中学生的早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在的学校开展了问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇英语短文，倡导营养早餐。
学生比例 早餐情况 健康情况
55% 有规律地吃早餐 身体健康，精力充沛
25% 吃垃圾食品 营养不均衡
20% 没有吃早餐 减肥；感到饥饿；上课无法认真听讲， 容易生病。
要求：1. 词数 80 字左右。 (标题已给出，不计入词数) 。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Breakfast is important
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【答案】例文
Breakfast is important
Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its importance. Here’s the result of our survey.
55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of the students just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet. It is bad for their health. 20 percent of the students go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can’t listen to the teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily.
It’s necessary to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍早餐的重要性；
第二步，介绍问卷调查的结果；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①balanced diet均衡的饮食
②be bad for对……有害
③as a result结果
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.（动词不定式作主语）
2．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）本学期你参加了学校组织的“英语文化节”活动。你的英语老师请你在班内做一次分享，请根据以下要点准备一份英文的发言稿。
1）目的：弘扬中国优秀文化，用英语讲好中国故事
2）地点：学校大厅
3）内容：
演讲：用英语介绍中国名人
制作海报：用英语介绍中国传统文化
（请补充至少1点活动）
4）意义（活动对你个人和社会的意义）
注意：
1）参考词汇：弘扬promote；
2）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear classmates,
I went to the School Hall to join in the English Cultural Festival this term.
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【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I went to the School Hall to join in the English Cultural Festival this term. This activity aimed to promote great Chinese culture and tell Chinese stories well in English. We gathered in the School Hall. There was a lecture on introducing Chinese celebrities in English. Then, we made English posters to introduce Chinese traditional culture. What’s more, we appreciated some red songs and tried to sing songs by ourselves.
In my opinion, it is a really good experience for us to take part in this activity. We can not only develop our ability to communicate with others in English, but also pass on our great Chinese culture to people from all over the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的目的；
第二步，介绍活动的内容；
第三步，谈谈你对这次活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②by oneself亲自
③In my opinion在我看来
④take part in参加
⑤communicate with sb与某人沟通
⑥all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①There was a lecture on introducing Chinese celebrities in English.（There be句型）
②We can not only develop our ability to communicate with others in English, but also pass on our great Chinese culture to people from all over the world.（not only…but also…不仅……而且……）
3．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假设你的英语老师布置了关于减轻学生压力有效建议的调查活动，收集同学们的意见。请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文，汇报你对三位同学的采访结果。报告中需包含表格中的所有要点，补充一点你的建议并解释原因。
From Bob Tom Rose You
Advice （请补充）
Why keep healthy have a close relationship feel relaxed （请补充）
注意：1.词数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure.
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【答案】例文
Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure. Some students share their useful advice. First of all, Bob thought it was helpful for us to do some exercise every day, which could help us keep healthy. Besides, Tom suggested that we should keep in touch with our friends so that we can have a close relationship with each other. What’s more, Rose mentioned that doing some reading regularly also made us feel relaxed. As for me, I thought talking to our parents and teachers was a nice way to reduce our pressure.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示内容分享对三位学生的采访结果，并且补充自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②be helpful for对……有帮助
③keep in touch with与……保持联系
④each other彼此
[高分句型]
①Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure.（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
②First of all, Bob thought it was helpful for us to do some exercise every day, which could help us keep healthy.（定语从句）
4．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假如你是知心栏目负责人Aunt Linda，你收到一名学生David的来信诉说他的烦恼，请你根据以下表格内容提示，给出建议。
David’s problems Aunt Linda’s advice
stay up late to complete his homework 不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好，安排好时间做作业；
feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class 晚上要有足够的睡眠时间；
doesn’t have his personal time to relax himself 周末适当放松，例如锻炼身体或听音乐等；
Feeling: feel stressed and unhappy 希望：……。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺；
2.要点必须包括表格信息并适当发挥；
3.词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【答案】例文
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.
I think you should change the ways of study. Don’t stay up late. Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss. You should arrange your time reasonably and finish your homework at school as much as possible. To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. Too much pressure is not good for your health and schoolwork. You should do something to lower your pressure. For example, you can take more exercise. You can listen to music. You should have enough sleep at night.
Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示有条理的给出对方建议；
第二步，希望对方能尽快解决自己的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss.（动名词作主语）
②To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. （动词不定式作目的状语）
5．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）寒假即将到来，为帮助同学们愉快度过假期，丰富假期家庭生活，学校英文报以“Family activities during the winter holiday”为题，向同学们征稿。请根据以下内容图示写一篇短文，推荐自己喜爱的家庭活动，向校报投稿。
Family activities
an educational activity a relaxing activity
1. What are the two activities 2. What can family members do in each activity 3. What can family members get from each activity
注意：1. 词数80-120个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I
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【答案】例文
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I plan two great activities for my family. It is quite educational and meaningful for the whole family to do some voluntary work during winter holiday. We are going to volunteer at Guangzhou Museum as museum guides. In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. What’s more, I also plan to have some fun with my parents and mountain climbing is our top choice. We will take a trip to Baiyun Mountain and have a picnic. The whole family can do some exercise together and enjoy the fresh air. Wonderful, isn’t it
I can’t wait for this coming holiday and I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我计划为我家做两项活动”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的几个要点——两项活动名称、家庭成员做的事、收获等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望我的父母将和我一起度过这个有意义又放松的假期”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①In order to 为了
②have a picnic去野餐
③ do some exercise做一些锻炼
[高分句型]
① In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. (not only...but also的用法）
② I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me! (宾语从句)
6．（2023上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）
假设你是李华。你的好友Li Ming听说你在初中有一系列家庭劳动实践课。他非常感兴趣，向你提了一连串的问题。请你结合你的家庭劳动实践，写一封e-mail解答他的疑惑。E-mail需包括以下要点：
1. 劳动时间地点：周末在家。
2. 劳动内容：美食、打扫、整理、沏茶等。
3. 你的劳动实践经历、收获、感受。
注意：
1. 参考词汇：劳动教育Labor education
2. 词数：80词左右 （首尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Li Ming:
You are right that I have a series of labor education practice during my junior high school.
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After hearing my introduction, how do you like our labor education practice Do you also want to have such chances
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Li Ming,
You are right that I have a series of labor education practice during my junior high school. Let me introduce something about it.
I help my parents cook food, clean, tidy and make tea at home on weekends. Once when my parents were on a business trip, I cooked independently at home. And the food I cooked is very delicious.
I think it is very meaningful. We can’t depend on our parents all the time. We must master some basic skills in order to reduce parents’ burden and develop a sense of responsibility. After hearing my introduction, how do you like our labor education practice Do you also want to have such chances
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点明主题；
第二步，详细描述家务的类型，可挑一个举例说明；
第三步，总结从中获得的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①on a business trip出差
②independently独立地
③depend on依赖
④reduce parents’ burden减轻父母的负担
⑤develop a sense of responsibility培养责任感
[高分句型]
①Once when my parents were on a business trip, I cooked independently at home.（句型：状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）
②And the food I cooked is very delicious.（句型：定语从句；先行词the food，从句I cooked，关系词省略）
③I think it is very meaningful.（句型：宾语从句；从句it is very meaningful，that省略）
7．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）假设你是Charles，你所在的小区正在进行”模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighborhood this year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. We are hardworking and glad to take on new challenges. We care for and respect each other. We get on well with our neighbors and often help each other. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. We think it’s important to live a green life. We always protect the environment. We never throw litter everywhere. We often help to clean the garden in our neighborhood. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. We often take an active part in volunteer activities to help people in need. My mother and I used to work in the old people’s home as volunteers. We have sent food and clothes to the students in the poor villages.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封推荐信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员之间的关系。
第二步，介绍与邻居之间的关系。
第三步，介绍如何为环境保护做出的努力。
第四步，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take on new challenges迎接新的挑战
②care for照顾
③get on well with和……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①When we have problems, we are always ready to help. (when引导时间状语从句)
②We think it’s important to live a green life. (省略that的宾语从句)
8．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级统考期末）现如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上眼镜了。这一现象引起了你校老师的高度重视，假设下周一你们班的英语课上将针对这一现象进行讨论，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇如何保护视力的英语发言稿为下周的讨论做准备。
要点提示：
1. 一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状；
2. 介绍一些如何保护眼睛的方法；
3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。
参考词汇：
eyesight 视力
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3. 80词左右。
As we all know, eyes are important to us.
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【答案】例文
As we all know, eyes are important to us. But many students are experiencing declining eyesight and wearing glasses from a young age. To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.
Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight.
Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为发言稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状；
第二步，介绍一些保护眼睛的方法；
第三步，呼吁大家一起保护眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
① take action采取行动
② digital devices数码设备
③ rich in vitamins富含维生素
[高分句型]
① To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（while引导的时间状语从句）
9．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级红岭中学校考期末）假如你是某校九年级学生李想，下个月打算竞选校广播站的英语广播员。在准备竞选演讲的过程中你遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面的提示，给学校英语俱乐部的外教Mr Brown写一封邮件求助。
提示：
1.参加竞选的原因；
2.请Mr Brown帮助纠正发音并给出一些建议；
3.约定拜访时间和地点。
要求:
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词语：pronunciation 发音
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Xiang
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. I think it can help me improve my spoken English. I can also share something useful about English with others. My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation. I have time this weekend afternoon. Is it convenient to go to your house
I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Xiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为“第一人称”，介绍自己想竞选英语广播员，但口语发音不好，希望得到布朗先生的帮助，提示内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，引出写电子邮件的原因；
第二步，具体介绍在竞选准备中遇到的问题，约定拜访的时间和地点；
第三步，表达感谢如果对方能够提供帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① share with分享
② something useful一些有用的
③ want to do sth.想要做某事
④ convenient方便的
⑤ give sb. a hand帮助某人
[高分句型]
①I think it can help me improve my spoken English.（宾语从句）
②I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation.（宾语从句+how+动词不定式）
③I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.（条件状语从句）
④My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. （so并列句+by+动词ing的方式状语）
10．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）每年的3月21日是世界睡眠日。今年世界睡眠日的中国主题是：“良好睡眠，健康同行”。假设你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。在英语课上，你们将进行关于睡眠的讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，为讨论做好准备。
提示：
1. 你的睡眠状况怎样；
2. 你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的；
3. 号召大家关注睡眠。
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you.
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【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. I sleep very well. I go to bed at 10 o’clock every day, and then I get up at 7 o’clock. We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment. The quality of the sleep environment will also directly affect our sleep quality. We should pay more attention to sleep.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，介绍你的睡眠情况如何；
第二步，介绍你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的，可分点介绍，也可列举具体的事例；
第三步，号召大家关注睡眠并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pay more attention to更关注……
[高分句型]
①We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment.（that引导的宾语从句）
11．（2023上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Angela的问题，提出你的建议及理由。
Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons
problems with parents 1. listen and communicate — know each other better
2. (请补充)
study stress 1. live a healthy life — take care of your body
2. (请补充)
注意：
1. 内容包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that you have problems with parents and much study stress. Here are some helpful advice for you.
As for the problems with your parents, you should try to listen to and communicate with them. In this way you can know each other better. You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.
What’s more, as for your study, don’t put too much stress on yourself. You should live a healthy life. Take care of your body, which is the most important thing to you. Have a healthy diet and exercise every day. In your free time, you can listen to some relaxing music.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文，为应用文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点表格中已经给出，包括两个方面，每个方面至少两点，需要补充；表格中已给出的英文是短语，注意要表达成句子。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述对方的问题；
第二步，给出对于“与父母之间问题”的建议；
第三步，给出对于“学习压力大”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②listen to some relaxing music听一些令人放松的音乐
③have a healthy diet有健康的饮食
④understand each other互相理解
[高分句型]
You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.（定语从句）
12．（2022上·广东广州·九年级执信中学校考期末）以下是《简·爱》这部作品的中文介绍。请根据提示，写一篇英文读书报告。内容包括：1. 作者介绍；2. 作品的主要角色；3. 作品的主要情节；4. 你对这部作品或人物角色的评价。
作者 夏洛特·勃朗蒂（Charlotte Bronte）；英国最伟大的小说家之一。
主要角色 简·爱（Jane Eyre）、罗切斯特（Mr. Rochester）
主要情节 1. 简·爱出生于一个贫困的家庭； 2. 幼年，父母染重疾去世，之后，被送进了孤儿院（orphanage）； 3. 长大以后，到一个富裕的家庭当教师，与男主人罗切斯特相爱； 4. 两人准备结婚时，她偶然发现罗切斯特15年前已经结婚； 5. 简离他而去，到一所小学任教； 6. 简得知罗切斯特经历种种不幸，毅然决定回到他的身边。
你的评价 （请自行补充）
注意：
1. 词数80-100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 内容完整，语法正确，语篇连贯。
This is a report on the story “Jane Eyre”.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
This is a report on the story “Jane Eyre”. The author is Charlotte Bronte, one of England’s greatest novelists. The main characters in the story are Jane Eyre and Mr. Rochester.
In the story, Jane Eyre was born in a poor family. When she was young, her parents died of a serious illness. Then she was sent to an orphanage. When she grew up, she became a family teacher and fell in love with her master Rochester. When they were getting married, she found out by chance that Rochester was married 15 years ago. So Jane left him to teach in a primary school. Later, Jane decided to return to him as soon as she learned all the misfortunes Rochester had experienced.
From the story, we can know Jane dares to fight for freedom and equality. I love this story very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇读书报告，要求就所给提示就《简·爱》写一篇英文读书报告。
② 时态：本文以“一般过去时”为主。
③提示：题目要求根据提示就《简·爱》写一篇英文读书报告，要包含作者、主要角色、主要情节以及对这个故事的评价。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题。（开头已给出）
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍《简·爱》的作者、主要角色、主要情节，注意根据描述内容选择正确的时态，语言要前后连贯，书写清楚。
第三步，最后谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①one of……之一
②die of死于
③fall in love with爱上……
[高分句型]
①When she was young, her parents died of a serious illness.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Later, Jane decided to return to him as soon as she learned all the misfortunes Rochester had experienced.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
13．（2022上·广东广州·九年级广州四十七中校考期末）假如你的学校正在举办“好书伴我成长”的活动。请根据以下内容提示，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一封倡议书， 向全校同学发出读书的倡议。
读书的益处 获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐
存在的现象 听音乐、看电视、上网，占用了大部分业务时间
发出倡议 多读书，读经典好书；弘扬中国传统文化让读书成为生活得一部分
注意：
1、词数不少于80词，开头不计入总词数。
2、可适当发挥，但需注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
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【答案】例文
Growing up with good books
My dear friends,
Reading is very important, we can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的益处；
第二步，介绍存在的现象；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不但……而且……
②spend much time in doing sth.花很多时间做某事。
③would like to do sth.想做某事。
④start doing sth.开始做某事
[高分句型]
①The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.（the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……）
②I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.（that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句）
14．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级深圳中学校考期末）本学期，我们通过课文浅尝了英语文学作品之美，假如你所在的校英语社团准备举办一次线上英语沙龙，沙龙主题为Mark Twain，作为团长李华，请你以主持人的身份写一段开场白，内容包含以下要点：
关于Mark Twain 1.最有天赋美国小说家和幽默家之一。 2.一生写了20多部小说和很多短篇故事：他的历险故事世界闻名。
关于沙龙 活动一：就Mark Twain及其作品进行小组讨论； 活动二：欣赏《汤姆索亚历险记》电影片段； 此次沙龙的目的（至少两点）。
参考词汇：humorist.幽默家
English Salon 英语沙龙
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 汤姆索亚历险记
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整；要点齐全：意思连贯；条理清楚：标点正确。
Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today’s salon is Mark Twain.
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That’s all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today’s salon!
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today’s salon is Mark Twain.
As far as we know, Mark Twain is one of the most gifted American novelists and humorists. He wrote more than 20 novels and many short stories in his life. In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we’ll have two online salon activities. The first event is a panel discussion on Mark Twain and his works. The other activity is watching clips from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon.
That’s all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today’s salon!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍关于Mark Twain的信息；
第三步，介绍有关沙龙的信息。
[亮点词汇]
①thank you for doing sth因某事感谢你
②as far as we know据我们所知
③more than超过
[高分句型]
①In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we’ll have two online salon activities.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon.（宾语从句）
15．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）David最近很烦恼，临近一模考试，他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求他做家务。他认为做家务就是浪费时间。假如你是李华，David写信向你求助，请你给David写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。
要点：1. 家务劳动的意义：1. 教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己（再补充至少1条）；
2. 合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：1. 合理安排时间；2. 用劳动去放松自己的学习压力（再补充至少1条）。
要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions may help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. You feel a lot of pressure in your studies, but your parents still expect you to do chores at home. You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.
In fact, doing chores is meaningful. Firstly, it teaches us independence and the ability to take care of ourselves. By doing chores, we learn some important life skills, such as cooking, cleaning, and organizing. These skills are good for our daily lives. Additionally, doing chores helps us develop a sense of responsibility.
Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores. Properly managing time for both studying and household chores is important. You can relax and relieve study pressure by doing chores. Create a good plan for studying and household chores.
I hope these suggestions may help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求做家务”来引出问题；
第二步，写出家务劳动的意义：教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己；
第三步，写出合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：合理安排时间；用劳动去放松自己的学习压力，制定计划。
[亮点词汇]
①pressure压力
②independence独立
③chores家务
④a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores.（倒装句）
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