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专题09 书面表达（主题写作满分范文）15篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假设Peter是一位交换生，现在在你们班学习。为了让更多的朋友认识他，你打算以“My special friend”为题写一篇英文短文向大家介绍他。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这篇文章。
要求：60 词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
个人情况 来自美国纽约(New York)，14 岁
兴趣爱好 游泳，收集邮票
生活习惯(habit) 早睡早起，经常运动，节约用水
其余情况 喜欢深圳：一年四季天气很好；有很多旅游景点 不太擅长汉语，所以加入汉语社团学习汉语
参考词汇：交换生 exchange student 汉语社团the Chinese Club
My special friend
Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him Let me tell you.
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【答案】例文
My Special Friend
Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him Let me tell you.
Peter is from New York, USA. He is a 14-year-old boy. He always wears glasses. He likes to travel. He visited some cities in China last year. He likes Shenzhen best because the weather is nice and there are many places of interest. His life is very healthy because he often plays sports. He plays basketball twice a week. He goes swimming every weekend. He is interested in collecting stamps. He gets up early and goes to bed early. He always eats healthy food like fruits and vegetables. He never wastes water and tries his best to protect the earth. He is very good at English, but Chinese is not very good, so he joined the Chinese Club to learn Chinese now.
We are good friends. I like him very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第三人称，介绍一位特别的朋友，表格内容描述清楚，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出介绍的人物；
第二步，具体介绍他的兴趣爱好、生活习惯和一些其他的情况；
第三步，表达自己对他的喜欢。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest名胜古迹
② tries his best尽他最大的努力
③ be interested in对……感兴趣
④ gets up起床
⑤ goes to bed睡觉
⑥ like…best最喜欢
⑦ be good at擅长
[高分句型]
①He likes Shenzhen best because the weather is nice and there are many places of interest.（原因状语从句+and并列句+there be句型）
②He is very good at English, but Chinese is not very good, so he joined the Chinese Club to learn Chinese now.（but并列句+so并列句+动词不定式）
③His life is very healthy because he often plays sports.（原因状语从句）
2．（2023上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）露营，作为一种亲近自然、培养生活技能的业余活动，已成为今年深圳最流行的周末消遣方式。假如你是某国际学校初一年级某班班长，你的班级将组织同学们去马峦山进行露营活动，请根据以下要点要求，写一篇本次露营的活动计划。
要点：
（1）集合时间地点：本周六上午八点，学校门口；
（2）出行方式：乘坐校车；
（3）活动内容：放风筝、徒步、搭帐篷、……（至少补充一点）
（4）返校时间：本周六晚上七点。
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：露营go camping 徒步go hiking 搭帐篷set up tents
To get closer to nature and develop life skills, we are going to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
To get closer to nature and develop life skills, we are going to go camping in Maluan Mountain.We will meet at the school gate at 8:00 this Saturday morning. Then we will go there by school bus. We will fly kites, go hiking and set up tents there for a picnic. What’s more, we will also sing, dance and play games. I am looking forward to going there. We will enjoy ourselves there. We will return to school at seven this Saturday evening. If you are interested in it, please contact us before school on Wednesday. I hope that everyone can join us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作方向已给出，写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容，注意表述清晰，逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出参加露营活动的目的；
第二步，告知集合时间，返回时间，出行方式以及活动内容；
第三步，表达想要大家都参加的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more并且，还
②look forwad to doing sth.期望做某事
③return to返回
[高分句型]
①I am looking forward to going there. （look forwad to doing sth.期望做某事）
② If you are interested in it, please contact us before school on Wednesday. （if引导的条件状语从句）
3．（2022上·广东广州·七年级广州市第五中学校考期末）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Joe 将要来广州游玩。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，给Joe一些游玩广州的建议，可适当发挥。词数60以上。
注意：邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
购物：逛北京路，贵的和便宜的店铺都有。
美食：喝早茶，这是最好的休闲活动之一。
观光：乘船游珠江，欣赏珠江沿岸的古旧建筑和现代建筑。
娱乐：……（请你补充）
参考词汇：休闲娱乐leisure activity；乘船游珠江go on the Pearl River Cruise
Dear Joe,
Welcome to Guangzhou!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Joe,
Welcome to Guangzhou! Guangzhou is a modern and beautiful city. There is something for everyone. If you like shopping, you can go to Beijing Road. There are expensive and cheap things for you to choose there. If you want to taste some local food, you can have morning tea in Guangzhou Restaurant and taste some dim sum. This is one of the leisure activities here. If you like going sightseeing, you can have a boat trip along the Pearl River and enjoy the old and modern buildings. You can also go to the top of the Canton Tower and get a bird’s eye view of the whole city. How wonderful it is!
I am sure you can have a good time in Guangzhou.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中游玩广州的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达欢迎，接着直接总的介绍广州这座城市；
第二步，具体分别从“购物、美食、观光、娱乐”四方面来给出游玩的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①local food当地美食
②leisure activities休闲活动
③go sightseeing观光
[高分句型]
①How wonderful it is! (感叹句)
②I am sure you can have a good time in Guangzhou.(宾语从句)
4．（2023·广东广州·七年级统考期末）水资源是非常珍贵的。请根据图中所给的信息，写一篇英语短文，描述浪费水的问题及说明如何节约用水。短文需包含以下要点。
Problems of wasting water
take a bath drip from the tap 请你补充一个浪费水的现象
Ways to save water
take a shower fix 请你补充一到两条节水妙招
要求：
1. 不得出现真实的个人信息；
2. 字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可根据内容适当拓展。
Act now to save water
Water is very valuable, but many people often waste water in their daily lives.
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【答案】例文
Act now to save water
Water is very valuable, but many people often waste water in their daily lives. For example, some people take a shower for a long time. Some people often don’t turn off the tap well, so the water drips from the tap. Sometimes people take too much water to wash clothes. Then what shall we do to save water First, we should take a shower quickly. Second, we should turn off the tap well after we use it. If the tap is broken, it should be fixed in time. Third, when we do some washing, we use as little water as possible.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍生活中浪费水的现象；
第二步，节约用水的办法；
第三步，呼吁人们节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①turn off关掉
②in time及时
③be important to对……重要
④from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
①If the tap is broken, it should be fixed in time.（条件状语从句）
②Third, when we do some washing, we use as little water as possible.（时间状语从句）
5．（2023上·广东广州·七年级校考期末）你将代表学校向外宾 Tom 介绍广州。请根据下面的思维导图提示，写一份介绍稿。
字数要求：
80 词左右，开头已给出，不算入总字数。
注意：
文章中不许出现个人信息。
Hi, Tom. I am John. I would like to tell you something about Guangzhou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hi, Tom. I am John. I would like to tell you something about Guangzhou. Guangzhou is in the south of China. The weather is hot and wet in summer. Guangzhou is famous for its delicious food. You can enjoy the food from all over China. Guangzhou is also called the Flower City. During the Spring Festival, it’s interesting to visit the Flower Market. Guangzhou is a very beautiful city. I hope you will like it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中广州的简介、食物和景点的介绍，还要补充一点信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、别称、食物、景点等”几个方面重点介绍广州；
第三步，书写结语。表达一下对广州的看法以及你的期望。
[亮点词汇]
be famous for因……而闻名
[高分句型]
I hope you will like it.（宾语从句）
6．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）学校延时服务提供了丰富多彩的社团活动。上周你校举办了“社团展览会”，假设你是学校英文校报小记者李华，请你根据以下要点提示，完成一篇展览会的活动报道。
社团展览 社团名称 社团活动
火箭俱乐部 学习制作火箭并发射上天；
太阳能俱乐部 制作使用太阳能的机器； 现场遥控使用太阳能的玩具车；
……（补充一社团及其活动）
展览会意义 1. 了解不同的社团，丰富知识； 2.发现自己的兴趣。
学生感受 ……（补充一点学生感受）
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4．条理清晰、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁。
参考词汇：activity（n.）活动；enrich （v.）使丰富；knowledge （n.）知识
Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it.
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【答案】例文
Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it. They learnt a lot about different clubs.
The Rocket Club taught students how to build rockets. Then they launched the rockets into the sky. The Solar Power Club made wonderful machines. They only used solar power. A girl from the club used a remote control to drive a toy car all round the playground. The Photography Club showed a lot of photos of the students in the club.
Thought this fair, students can learn about different clubs and enrich their knowledge. They also find their interest. They all felt excited and had a great time at the fair.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出社团活动的时间及重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍社团名称及社团活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达展览会的意义及学生的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①launched the rockets into the sky向天空发射火箭
②a lot of许多
③learn about了解到
④had a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
The Rocket Club taught students how to build rockets.（“特殊疑问词+to do”结构）
7．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级南山实验教育麒麟中学校考期末）春节是中国传统节日，人们纷纷回家与家人团聚，或是和家人一起外出旅游。你是如何度过春节的呢？请根据以下提示写一篇短文分享你在春节中的一次旅游经历。
要点提示：
1. 简单介绍你的春节旅游目的地、交通方式和同行者；
2. 分享你的春节旅游活动（不少于三种活动）；
3. 谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺
2. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3. 不少于60词。
【参考词汇】
pay a visit to 拜访； Spring Festival 春节； light the fireworks 放烟花； lunar calendar 农历
A trip to________
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【答案】例文
A trip to Hongkong
Last year, I had an exciting Spring Festival. Because I went to Hongkong by plane with my family.
First, we paid a visit to the Ocean Park. It was very relaxed for us to ate the sea food and play with the dolphins! Then, we went to Disneyland. It was very romantic because it lighted the very beautiful fireworks. We enjoyed ourselves there.
If we have another chance to go to Hongkong, we will go there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：本文要求以“A trip to ...”为题，介绍一次春节旅游，写作要点已给出，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出春节旅游的话题；
第二步，详细介绍旅游活动；
第三步，总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy oneself玩得开心
②have another chance to do sth.再有一次机会做某事
[高分句型]
①It was very relaxed for us to ate the sea food and play with the dolphins!（不定式作主语）
②If we have another chance to go to Hong Kong, we will go again.（if引导的条件状语从句）
8．（2022·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假如你是李华，是深圳某中学七年级的一名学生，周六你和几个同学参加了一次敬老院的公益活动，请你写一篇英文日记记录此次难忘的经历。
内容如下：
1. 星期六早上8:30在校门口集合，乘公交车前往；
2. 首先给老人们收拾房间；
3. 陪老人聊天，听他们的故事；
4. 谈谈你对本次活动的看法（至少两点）。
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【答案】例文
Saturday sunny
I participated in a public service activity with my classmates today. We met at the school gate at 8:30 this morning. Then we went there by bus. We first cleaned up the rooms, washed clothes and cooked for the old people. Then we chatted with the old people and listened to their stories. By helping them, we can not only experience life, but also improve our life skills. I enjoyed the event very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动流程；
第二步，介绍活动感受。
[亮点词汇]
①cleaned up打扫
②chatted with与……聊天
③very much非常
[高分句型]
①By helping them, we can not only experience life, but also improve our life skills.（not only...but also...结构）
9．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级深圳中学校考期末）假如你是鹏城中学校报记者李华。上周一至上周五，你校英语社为了欢迎初一社团新成员在学校组织了一系列的活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇报道。
内容提示：
1.活动目的
2.介绍至少三个具体活动（①关于英美文化的讲座；② ... ③ ... ）
3.社团新成员们的感受。
提示词：culture文化
要求：
1. 至少60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯：
4. 标点正确，书面整洁，
From Monday to Friday last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
From Monday to Friday last week, the English club of our school organized a series of activities in order to welcome the new members of the junior high school. We held many activities, such as lectures on British and American culture, English singing competitions and textbook plays. All the new members were very happy under the warm reception of the old members. They were happy to choose their English club.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明活动目的；
第二步，具体介绍至少三个具体活动；
第三步，最后介绍社团新成员们的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a series of一系列
②in order to为了
③such as比如
[高分句型]
From Monday to Friday last week, the English club of our school organized a series of activities in order to welcome the new members of the junior high school.（动词不定式作目的状语）
10．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假如你是Mike，上周六你和你的朋友跟读书社(the Reading Club) 一起去了深圳书城(Book Mall)的图书展销会，还参加了读书社的其他活动。请你把此次活动的过程和内容发邮件告诉你的笔友Sam，并说说你的感想和收获。
要求：
1、邮件应包含以下内容：
交通方式，逛书展，听报告，分享(share)阅读的快乐，以及收获，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等真实信息；
3、文章内容不少于80字，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
4、参考词汇： listen to a talk, share… with, the joy(快乐) of reading
Dear Sam,
Last Saturday, my friends and I attended the Books Fair in Shenzhen Book Mall with the Reading Club.
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Which school club do you attend I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Mike
【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
Last Saturday, my friends and I attended the Books Fair at Shenzhen Book Mall with the Reading Club.
We took the subway to the Book Mall at 9:00 a.m. First, we went to the Books Fair. There were so many wonderful books that I almost wanted to buy all of them! We spent one hour reading and buying books there. After that, we listened to a talk given by Mr Wang. He came from Shenzhen Library. In his speech, he taught us how to look up information and find books in the library quickly. And then we shared the joy of reading with each other. Many students introduced their reading experiences. Finally, we played games and took some photos. We returned home at 12:00 p.m.
We learnt a lot about reading and made new friends. We really enjoyed ourselves. I cannot wait for the next activity with the Reading Club! Which school club do you attend Please write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一整天的活动，包括交通方式，逛书展，听报告，分享阅读的快乐；
第二步，分享收获。
[亮点词汇]
①look up information查阅信息
②introduce介绍
③experience经历
④cannot wait for迫不及待
[高分句型]
①There were so many wonderful books that I almost wanted to buy all of them! （结果状语从句）
②After that, we listened to a talk given by Mr Wang.（过去分词作后置定语）
11．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级校考期末）深圳，作为全国文明城市之一，每年吸引了大批的游客来游玩。请你以“Visiting Shenzhen” 为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
City Shenzhen
Geographical location in the south of China
Places of interest Lianhua Mountain, Window of the World, Happy Valley...
Food seafood, dim sum (点心)
Others weather, activities...
要求：
1.80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，卷面整洁；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇： a national civilized city 全国文明城市 theme park 主题公园
Visiting Shenzhen
Shenzhen is a national civilized city.
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【答案】例文
Visiting Shenzhen
Shenzhen is a national civilized city. It lies in the south of China. The weather in Shenzhen is hot in summer. It often rains heavily in summer. The best time to visit Shenzhen is in winter because the weather is very warm. There are many places of interest in Shenzhen, such as Lianhua Mountain, Window of the World, Happy Valley and so on. The tourists can enjoy delicious food, such as seafood and dim sum. People from all over the world like going on holiday there. They can swim in the sea and enjoy the sunshine.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍深圳的地理位置，天气，名胜古迹，特产；
第二步，介绍人们喜欢来这的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of 在……南部
②place of interest 名胜古迹
③such as 例如
[高分句型]
The best time to visit Shenzhen is in winter because the weather is very warm（动词不定式作定语，because引导原因状语从句）
12．（2023上·广东广州·七年级统考期末）英语课堂上，各小组以“Our free time activities”为主题进行分享交流，请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文介绍你及小组成员的活动。短文包括以下内容：
Jack Ivy I
What do you usually do in your free time 制作太空飞船模型； 收集明信片 ？
Why do you do it 了解飞船；梦想去太空； 欣赏自然美景；懂得保护自然； ？
注意：1.词数60-100个左右（文章每段开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Our free time activities
In our group, each student has his own free time activity.
Jack likes________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ivy_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As for me, I like__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our free time activities
In our group, each student has his own free time activity.
Jack likes making spaceship models when he is free because he knows a lot about spaceships. He dreams about flying to space when he grows up.
Ivy prefers collecting postcards to other activities. She enjoys natural beauty. She always encourages her friends to protect the environment.
As for me, I like reading books and watching movies with my family. I think it’s a good way to spend time with my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Our free time activities”为主题，结合表格提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对下文小组成员业余活动的介绍；
第二步，分别介绍杰克、艾维和自己的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①dreams about梦想
②grows up长大
③protect the environment保护环境
④As for至于
[高分句型]
①Jack likes making spaceship models when he is free because he knows a lot about spaceships.（when引导的时间状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think it’s a good way to spend time with my family.（省略that的宾语从句）
13．（2023·广东深圳·七年级深圳实验学校校考期末）假如你是Tina，你很喜欢诗歌，并阅读了很多被誉为 “诗译英法唯一人” 的翻译泰斗许渊冲先生翻译的诗歌。请你根据表格里的中英文提示，简单向同学们介绍一下翻译家许渊冲先生。要求：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（1）许渊冲先生是中国著名的翻译家。 （2）简要生平： born: April 18th, 1921; Nanchang, Jiangxi died: June 17th, 2021; Beijing （3）年轻时，毕业于清华大学后去巴黎留学深造(...from Tsinghua University...) （4）成就：一生共翻译了约120部作品 translated about 120 works 参考词汇：translator 翻译家 achievement成就 graduate毕业
I like reading poems and I read a lot of poems translated by Xu Yuanchong.
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【答案】例文：
I like reading poems and I read a lot of poems translated by Xu Yuanchong. As a renowned translator, with a legendary life as well, Xu Yuanchong was born into a literary family in Nanchang on April 18th, 1921 and passed away on June 17th in 2021 in Beijing.
When he was little, he was influenced by his mother who was interested in literature. When he graduated from Tsinghua University, Xu Yuanchong went to Pairs to obtain a further education. After that, he began to translate Chinese poetry into both English and French. With his creative mind, he had translated about 120 works during the past few decades and most of his translations continue to grow in popularity. Although Xu was widely considered to be the best, he never stopped trying to become better.
From him, I have learned that the more you learn and the harder you study, the better you will become. There is always room for improvement.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山由自己的喜好引出许渊冲；
第二步，具体介绍许渊冲的生平和成就；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①as well也
②graduated from毕业于
③obtain a further education获得深造
④was interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①he was influenced by his mother who was interested in literature. (who引导的定语从句)
②Although Xu was widely considered to be the best, he never stopped trying to become better. (although引导让步状语从句)
14．（2023·广东深圳·七年级统考期末） 5月29日，随着神舟十六号航天员名单的公布，桂海潮出现在了公众的视野里。他成为中国执行载人飞行任务的首个载荷专家，实现了自己的飞天梦想。假如你是李华，最近你校英文报推出“Anyone can achieve their dreams”的主题征文活动, 请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文向校英文报投稿，介绍追逐梦想的英雄——桂海潮。
要点提示:
桂海潮
人生经历 1. 2003年, 杨利伟成为中国飞天第一人的消息鼓舞了他，17岁立志飞上太空； 2. 刻苦学习训练，已是大学教授的他成为了宇航员； 3. 2023年5月30号, 乘神舟16号进入太空，实现了自己的太空梦。
你的感悟 ……(不少于两点)
要求:
1.要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺；
2.可适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
3.不少于80词 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：宇航员 astronaut 教授 professor
The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao.
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【答案】例文
The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao.
In 2003, he was inspired by the news that Yang Liwei had become the first person in China to fly, and at the age of 17, he decided to fly into space. When he was a university professor, he studied and trained so hard that he finally became an astronaut. On May 30, 2023, he flew into space by Shenzhou 16 and realized his space dream. He became China’s first payload expert to carry out manned missions and made his flying dream come true.
Through his story, I understand that as long as we have dreams in our hearts and work hard for them, our dreams will come true. So no matter what problems we meet, we can not give up. If we are brave enough to challenge difficulties, we will certainly win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，我心中的英雄是桂海潮；
第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦训练，实现太空梦想），注意增加细节，使行文连贯；
第三步：说说你的感悟是什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at the age of 在……岁时
②fly into 飞入
③carry out 执行
[高分句型]
①He became China’s first payload expert to carry out manned missions and made his flying dream come true. (动词不定式作后置定语）
②Through his story, I understand that as long as we have dreams in our hearts and work hard for them, our dreams will come true. (as long as引导条件状语从句)
15．（2023·广东广州·七年级广州四十七中校考期末）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
From Bob Kate Lily You
To parents good friend foreign teacher （请补充）
What soup photo album paper cutting （请补充）
Why thanks and love friendship culture （请补充）
注意：
1.词数：100词左右；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】范文
In today’s English class, we had a discussion on “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in our group.
A valuable gift given by Bob was a bowl of soup to his parents. In his opinion, he considered it as a good gift to express his thanks and love to them. Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her, hoping that their friendship could last forever. In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
For me, what I gave to my grandpa was a smart phone. We don’t live together and my grandpa was so busy that we can’t meet each other often. However, we can have video chats by smart phone.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，依据表格内容介绍Bob，Kate和Lily送过的一份珍贵礼物；
第二步，介绍你自己送过的珍贵礼物。
[亮点词汇]
①In his opinion在他看来
②In addition此外
③a piece of 一张
[高分句型]
①Kate gave a photo album to one of her good friends because she wanted to cherish every moment with her, hoping that their friendship could last forever.（because引导原因状语从句）
②In addition, Lily sent her foreign teacher a piece of paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.（which引导定语从句）
③For me, what I gave to my grandpa was a smart phone.（what引导主语从句）
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专题09 书面表达（主题写作满分范文）15篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假设Peter是一位交换生，现在在你们班学习。为了让更多的朋友认识他，你打算以“My special friend”为题写一篇英文短文向大家介绍他。请根据下面表格中的信息，完成这篇文章。
要求：60 词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
个人情况 来自美国纽约(New York)，14 岁
兴趣爱好 游泳，收集邮票
生活习惯(habit) 早睡早起，经常运动，节约用水
其余情况 喜欢深圳：一年四季天气很好；有很多旅游景点 不太擅长汉语，所以加入汉语社团学习汉语
参考词汇：交换生 exchange student 汉语社团the Chinese Club
My special friend
Peter is an exchange student. Now he studies in our class. Do you want to know more about him Let me tell you.
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2．（2023上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）露营，作为一种亲近自然、培养生活技能的业余活动，已成为今年深圳最流行的周末消遣方式。假如你是某国际学校初一年级某班班长，你的班级将组织同学们去马峦山进行露营活动，请根据以下要点要求，写一篇本次露营的活动计划。
要点：
（1）集合时间地点：本周六上午八点，学校门口；
（2）出行方式：乘坐校车；
（3）活动内容：放风筝、徒步、搭帐篷、……（至少补充一点）
（4）返校时间：本周六晚上七点。
要求：
（1）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
（4）标点正确，书面整洁。
参考词汇：露营go camping 徒步go hiking 搭帐篷set up tents
To get closer to nature and develop life skills, we are going to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022上·广东广州·七年级广州市第五中学校考期末）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Joe 将要来广州游玩。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一封电子邮件，给Joe一些游玩广州的建议，可适当发挥。词数60以上。
注意：邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
购物：逛北京路，贵的和便宜的店铺都有。
美食：喝早茶，这是最好的休闲活动之一。
观光：乘船游珠江，欣赏珠江沿岸的古旧建筑和现代建筑。
娱乐：……（请你补充）
参考词汇：休闲娱乐leisure activity；乘船游珠江go on the Pearl River Cruise
Dear Joe,
Welcome to Guangzhou!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4．（2023·广东广州·七年级统考期末）水资源是非常珍贵的。请根据图中所给的信息，写一篇英语短文，描述浪费水的问题及说明如何节约用水。短文需包含以下要点。
Problems of wasting water
take a bath drip from the tap 请你补充一个浪费水的现象
Ways to save water
take a shower fix 请你补充一到两条节水妙招
要求：
1. 不得出现真实的个人信息；
2. 字数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可根据内容适当拓展。
Act now to save water
Water is very valuable, but many people often waste water in their daily lives.
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5．（2023上·广东广州·七年级校考期末）你将代表学校向外宾 Tom 介绍广州。请根据下面的思维导图提示，写一份介绍稿。
字数要求：
80 词左右，开头已给出，不算入总字数。
注意：
文章中不许出现个人信息。
Hi, Tom. I am John. I would like to tell you something about Guangzhou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）学校延时服务提供了丰富多彩的社团活动。上周你校举办了“社团展览会”，假设你是学校英文校报小记者李华，请你根据以下要点提示，完成一篇展览会的活动报道。
社团展览 社团名称 社团活动
火箭俱乐部 学习制作火箭并发射上天；
太阳能俱乐部 制作使用太阳能的机器； 现场遥控使用太阳能的玩具车；
……（补充一社团及其活动）
展览会意义 1. 了解不同的社团，丰富知识； 2.发现自己的兴趣。
学生感受 ……（补充一点学生感受）
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．必须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4．条理清晰、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁。
参考词汇：activity（n.）活动；enrich （v.）使丰富；knowledge （n.）知识
Last week, our school held the Clubs’ Fair. Many students attended it.
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7．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级南山实验教育麒麟中学校考期末）春节是中国传统节日，人们纷纷回家与家人团聚，或是和家人一起外出旅游。你是如何度过春节的呢？请根据以下提示写一篇短文分享你在春节中的一次旅游经历。
要点提示：
1. 简单介绍你的春节旅游目的地、交通方式和同行者；
2. 分享你的春节旅游活动（不少于三种活动）；
3. 谈谈你对这次旅游的感受。
要求：
1. 要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺
2. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3. 不少于60词。
【参考词汇】
pay a visit to 拜访； Spring Festival 春节； light the fireworks 放烟花； lunar calendar 农历
A trip to________
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8．（2022·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假如你是李华，是深圳某中学七年级的一名学生，周六你和几个同学参加了一次敬老院的公益活动，请你写一篇英文日记记录此次难忘的经历。
内容如下：
1. 星期六早上8:30在校门口集合，乘公交车前往；
2. 首先给老人们收拾房间；
3. 陪老人聊天，听他们的故事；
4. 谈谈你对本次活动的看法（至少两点）。
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9．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级深圳中学校考期末）假如你是鹏城中学校报记者李华。上周一至上周五，你校英语社为了欢迎初一社团新成员在学校组织了一系列的活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇报道。
内容提示：
1.活动目的
2.介绍至少三个具体活动（①关于英美文化的讲座；② ... ③ ... ）
3.社团新成员们的感受。
提示词：culture文化
要求：
1. 至少60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯：
4. 标点正确，书面整洁，
From Monday to Friday last week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级统考期末）假如你是Mike，上周六你和你的朋友跟读书社(the Reading Club) 一起去了深圳书城(Book Mall)的图书展销会，还参加了读书社的其他活动。请你把此次活动的过程和内容发邮件告诉你的笔友Sam，并说说你的感想和收获。
要求：
1、邮件应包含以下内容：
交通方式，逛书展，听报告，分享(share)阅读的快乐，以及收获，并适当发挥；
2、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等真实信息；
3、文章内容不少于80字，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
4、参考词汇： listen to a talk, share… with, the joy(快乐) of reading
Dear Sam,
Last Saturday, my friends and I attended the Books Fair in Shenzhen Book Mall with the Reading Club.
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Which school club do you attend I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Mike
11．（2022上·广东深圳·七年级校考期末）深圳，作为全国文明城市之一，每年吸引了大批的游客来游玩。请你以“Visiting Shenzhen” 为题，根据下面的提示，用英文写一篇介绍深圳的文章，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
City Shenzhen
Geographical location in the south of China
Places of interest Lianhua Mountain, Window of the World, Happy Valley...
Food seafood, dim sum (点心)
Others weather, activities...
要求：
1.80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，卷面整洁；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇： a national civilized city 全国文明城市 theme park 主题公园
Visiting Shenzhen
Shenzhen is a national civilized city.
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12．（2023上·广东广州·七年级统考期末）英语课堂上，各小组以“Our free time activities”为主题进行分享交流，请根据以下提示信息，写一篇英语短文介绍你及小组成员的活动。短文包括以下内容：
Jack Ivy I
What do you usually do in your free time 制作太空飞船模型； 收集明信片 ？
Why do you do it 了解飞船；梦想去太空； 欣赏自然美景；懂得保护自然； ？
注意：1.词数60-100个左右（文章每段开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Our free time activities
In our group, each student has his own free time activity.
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As for me, I like__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（2023·广东深圳·七年级深圳实验学校校考期末）假如你是Tina，你很喜欢诗歌，并阅读了很多被誉为 “诗译英法唯一人” 的翻译泰斗许渊冲先生翻译的诗歌。请你根据表格里的中英文提示，简单向同学们介绍一下翻译家许渊冲先生。要求：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（1）许渊冲先生是中国著名的翻译家。 （2）简要生平： born: April 18th, 1921; Nanchang, Jiangxi died: June 17th, 2021; Beijing （3）年轻时，毕业于清华大学后去巴黎留学深造(...from Tsinghua University...) （4）成就：一生共翻译了约120部作品 translated about 120 works 参考词汇：translator 翻译家 achievement成就 graduate毕业
I like reading poems and I read a lot of poems translated by Xu Yuanchong.
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14．（2023·广东深圳·七年级统考期末） 5月29日，随着神舟十六号航天员名单的公布，桂海潮出现在了公众的视野里。他成为中国执行载人飞行任务的首个载荷专家，实现了自己的飞天梦想。假如你是李华，最近你校英文报推出“Anyone can achieve their dreams”的主题征文活动, 请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文向校英文报投稿，介绍追逐梦想的英雄——桂海潮。
要点提示:
桂海潮
人生经历 1. 2003年, 杨利伟成为中国飞天第一人的消息鼓舞了他，17岁立志飞上太空； 2. 刻苦学习训练，已是大学教授的他成为了宇航员； 3. 2023年5月30号, 乘神舟16号进入太空，实现了自己的太空梦。
你的感悟 ……(不少于两点)
要求:
1.要点齐全、语言流畅、语句通顺；
2.可适当发挥, 使行文连贯；
3.不少于80词 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：宇航员 astronaut 教授 professor
The hero in my heart is the astronaut in Shenzhou 16, Gui Haichao.
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15．（2023·广东广州·七年级广州四十七中校考期末）今天的英语课上，班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物，”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们四人小组的分享内容，需包括以下要点。
From Bob Kate Lily You
To parents good friend foreign teacher （请补充）
What soup photo album paper cutting （请补充）
Why thanks and love friendship culture （请补充）
注意：
1.词数：100词左右；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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