七上Unit 6-Unit 9 作文复习课件(共27张PPT)

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Unit 6-Unit 9作文复习课件
Build your house--writing
Let me tell you what I have for three meals(三餐)!
辣条一包
For breakfast, I like _________________ very much.
milk and eggs
_____I don't like___________
ice-cream
because I don't want to be fat.
sb. don’t/ doesn’t want to be fat. 某人不想变胖。
But
Breakfast
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Lunch
______lunch, I like___________________.
rice and chicken
_____ I don't like ____________________.
carrots or bread
For
But
or 或者 ( 用于否定句和疑问句中)
辣条一包
Dinner
____________, I like___________________ for dinner.
bread and salad
Because salad is good for us.
But I don't like____________
hamburgers
because they're not healthy.
be good for us 对我们有益
be bad for ... 对.....有害
For dinner
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Hello! My name is Peppa pig.I have good eating habits. I eat well every day.
For breakfast, I like milk and eggs very much. But I don't like ice-cream because I don't want to be fat. For lunch, I like rice and chicken. But I don't like carrots. I like bread and salad for dinner. I think salad is good for our health. But I don't like hamburgers because they're not healthy.
All in all, I think my eating habits are healthy.
自我介绍+开篇点题
介
绍
一
日
三
餐
总结--首尾呼应
辣条一包
21世纪教育网
请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语小短文，介绍一下你Frank和你的好朋友Tony一日三餐喜欢 和不喜欢 的食物。
Meal You Tony
Breakfast apples, eggs eggs, milk
hamburgers salad
Lunch chicken,salad rice, carrots
bananas French fries
Dinner rice, tomatoes chicken, bananas
hamburgers
ice-cream , hamburgers 要求：1.你和Tony的三餐喜欢与不喜欢的食物都要表达出来；
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。
Writing
Hello, my name is Frank. Tony is my good friend. And we have healthy eating habits.
For breakfast, I like apples and eggs, but I don’t like hamburger. Tony likes eggs and milk, but he doesn’t like salad. For lunch, I like chicken and salad, but I don’t like bananas. Tony likes rice and carrots. He doesn’t like French fries. As for dinner, I like rice and tomatoes, but I don’t like ice-cream or hamburgers. Tony likes chicken and bananas, but he doesn’t like hamburgers.
All in all, our eating habits are healthy.
　　本单元的话题是为商店写“促销广告”,主要介绍店里的部分物品及价格或者打折信息等。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能正确使用描述物品颜色、价格的句型;
2.能结合语境准确使用at our great sale, at very good prices等介词短语;
3.能准确使用祈使句或词组。
Presentation
While-writing
谋篇布局
The begging
(开头语)
introducing the things
the ending
These clothes look really nice.
Please come to our clothes store now.
We sell them at very good prices.
The things in our store are at very good prices.
For girls,we have T-shirts in red for..
Come and buy...at our great sale.
Come and have a look at...
Come to Mr. Cool’s Clothes Store! Here is a great sale. We sell pants for only ￥30. Do you like socks We have socks in many colors for only ￥3. We also have beautiful skirts for only ￥55. Shoes and many other things are also at very good prices. Do you like them Come and see for yourself!
【优秀范文】
【优秀范文】
Hello, everyone! I’m Jane. I have an online store named Ai Shang Clothes Store. There are different kinds of clothes in my store. I sell them at very good prices. Do you like T-shirts I have T-shirts in all colors for only 15 yuan. For girls, I have green and yellow skirts for 6 yuan. How much are the socks They are on sale now. Socks in brown and blue are only 4 yuan for 3 pairs.
Come to my clothes store now.
　　本单元的话题是“学校活动”,主要谈论自己学校各项活动的安排。
在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能用英语表达学校活动时间、地点;
We have ....... on/in ... ..... is/ are on/in .......
2，适当增加细节描写;
3,会用总分总结构。
Revision of writing(写作复习）
假如你是班主任，下表是你们班的活动安排表，请你根据表格内容，向同学们介绍一下各个活动。要求：语句通顺，80词左右。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 ）
Hi, class! The new term is coming. Now I'll tell you some things of this month. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you!
3b
Write your own note to a friend. Invite him/her to an activity in your school. Use the questions to help you.
What is your friend’s name
What does your friend like to do
What activity do you have in your school
When is the activity
写作补充
Dear _________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
While-writing
【指点迷津】
这是一则邀请某人参加某项活动的便条，其内容须包含方框内提出的四个问题，即：参加人的名字及爱好、活动名称及该活动举行地点与时间。邀请便条属于应用文，其写作要点如下：
（1）时态：一般现在时；
（2）人称：以第二人称为主，以第一人称和第三人称为辅；
（3）内容：写邀请便条时应包括以下方面——表明邀请
对方参加什么活动；说明活动的内容、时间、地点等；询问对方是否感兴趣、是否有时间参加。
（6）你对这次艺术节感兴趣吗？
Are you interested in___ ___ ___________
（7）你有时间跟我一起去吗？Do you have time to ___ ______ _
（8）拨打电话565-8856找我吧！____ ___ __ 565-8856!
邀
请
便
条
【谋篇布局】
询
问
爱
好
（1）你喜欢画画吗？______ _____ _______drawing
（2）你喜欢观看表演吗？ ____ _____ _____watching shows
（3）下周我们在学校礼堂举办艺术节。
We have _______ _____ ______in the school hall_______ _______.
介
绍
信
息
（4）艺术节是在十二月二日。
The______ _______ ____ ____ ___________ ____.
（5）艺术节上我们有很多有趣又好玩的事情去做。
We have many ____________ _____ ____ ________to do at_____ _____ ______.
邀
请
对
方
Do you like
Do you like
an art festival
next week
art festival is on December 2nd
interesting and fun things
the art festival
the art festival
go with me
Call me at
While-writing
Dear________,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Salutation（称呼）
(your friend’s name)
Beginning
Body
Ending
Do you like... Please come to ... We have a/an... It’s on... It’s... See you there!
Signature
(who writes this note)
While-writing
【写作模板】
Jane\ …
I have some interesting things for you...
See you there!
Eric
Write your own note to a friend. Invite him / her to an activity in your school. Use the questions to help you.
What is your friend’s name
What does your friend like to do
What activity do you have in your school
When is the activity
Dear _________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Do you like drawing Do you like watching shows We have an art festival in the school hall next week. It is on December 2nd. We have many interesting and fun things to do at the art festival. Are you interested in it Do you have time to go with me Call me at 565-8856!
Zhao Shan
Jane
3b
Post-writing
【范文展示】
　　本单元的话题是“学校科目”,主要谈论自己每天的课程安排和向他人介绍自己喜爱的科目及原因等。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能用英语表达具体时间点、具体时间段以及星期几等;
2.能结合语境准确使用because、but、and、then、after that等连接词;
3.能准确使用特殊疑问词或词组。
假如你是林园,你的英国笔友Linda听说你非常喜欢星期五上午的课程,所以想了解一下。请你根据下表信息给她写一封80词左右的英文电子邮件,告诉她你星期五上午的课程安排以及你喜欢这些课程的理由。
星期五 时间 科目
上午8:00 语文
上午9:00 科学
上午10:00 体育
上午11:00 美术
【审题思路】
1.审人称:本文主要是向对方介绍自己的课程安排,应以第一人称为主。
2.审时态:介绍事实信息和表达喜好,应用一般现在时。
3.注意事项:
(1)介绍课程安排时,可按照时间顺序逐一介绍,使文章条理清晰;
(2)灵活运用连接词,使行文更加连贯。
【写作提纲】
介绍课程安排
【优秀范文】
Dear Linda,
I have four classes on Friday morning. They are all my favorite subjects. At 8:00,I have Chinese. It is difficult but I think it’s very useful. Then at 9:00,I have science. It is great fun. At 10:00,I have P.E. It is relaxing to play sports with my classmates. After that, I have art at 11:00.It is interesting.
How about you What’s your favorite day of a week What subjects do you have on that day
Yours,
Lin Yuan
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 来信询问你在学校的学习情况。请根据下面内容用英文给他写一封回信。
课程 上午四节课;下午三节课 活动 打篮球、踢足球、跑步、跳舞、游泳…… 最喜欢 的课程 历史和语文 因为容易、有趣
不喜欢 的课程 数学和地理 因为无聊、太难
要求:1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,信的格式已给出, 不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数80左右。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter.Now let me tell you something about my school life.
I have seven classes every weekday.In the morning,I have four classes.In the afternoon,I have three classes.At school we have many activities.We can play soccer,play basketball,run,dance and swim.I usually play basketball with my classmates after class. My favorite subjects are history and Chinese.I think they are easy and interesting.I don’t like math and geography because they are boring and too difficult.
　　What about your school life Please write to me and tell me something about it.
Yours,
Li Hua