Unit 2 Colour 单元话题满分范文必背 2023-2024学年九年级英语上册（牛津译林版）含解析

Unit 2 Colours
单元话题满分范文必背
一、书信作文
1 ．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Tony 对“ 中国红”一词很感兴趣，想了解“ 中国红”在中国人日常生活
中的体现，请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
含义 幸福，可以带来好运
使用场所及表达方式 婚礼，春节等，剪纸，中国结，红包，灯笼等
影响 深深地影响每一个中国人
提示词：剪纸 paper-cutting，中国结 Chinese knot，红包 red packet
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about China Red.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about China Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
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【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you somethi
ng about
China
Red.
As we all know, China Red is one of
the most popular
colours
in
China,
and
it
is
de
eply
loved by people
of
all ages. The reason why Chinese people love red is t
hat it
stands
for happiness
and
wealth.
What’s
more,
it
can
bring people good luck. When the
Spring Festival is coming, C
hina Red will
come
into
your
eyes
whenever
and
wherever you are. When you attend someone’s wedding, what impresses you m
ost is
the
China
Red.
On
these
occasions, China Red is put into many things, such as paper
cuttings,
Chinese knots,
red packets
and
lanterns,
which can be used to expect a promising future
. The China
Red
has
deeply
affected
every
Chinese.
It
is
not
only
a
)
(
colour but also a kind of
Chinese spirit
an
d
culture.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand better about Chin
a Red.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封回信；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助你的英国朋友
Tony
，了解
“
中国红
”
在中国
人日常生活中的体现。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，开头已给出，表明很高兴收到对方来信，然后回信告
诉他关于
“
中国红
”
的事情；
第二步，从地位、含义、使用场所及表达方式和影响四个方面来介绍
“
中国红
”
；
第三步，结语已给出，希望回信能对他有所帮助。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
stand for
代表
②
on these occasions
在这些场合
③
put into
把
……
放进
④
be used to do
习惯于
[
高分句型
]
①
The reason why Chinese people love
red is that it stands
for happiness
and wealth.
（
that
引导表语从句）
②
On these occasions, China red is put into many things, such
as pap
er
cuttings,
Chinese knots,
red packets
and
lanterns, which can be used to expe
ct a promising future.
（
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
2 ．假设你是张华，你的英国笔友 Jack 来信说对“ 中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“ 中国红”在中国人日常生
活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“ 中国红”。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福；好运
节日 春节等
形式 剪纸，灯笼，红包等
要求：
1.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2.词数不少于 80（信的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. I’m writing to tell you something about Chinese red. Chinese red is one of the
most popular colors in China. It stands for happiness and good luck. There are a lot of festivals in China. Of all
the festivals we like the Spring Festival best. During the Spring Festival, we first put on red paper cuttings on the doors, windows or walls. Then we hang red lanterns above the doors. Children are very happy because they often
get red packets from their parents or their relatives and friends.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写回信介绍“ 中国红”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的，具体介绍“ 中国红”；
第二步，期望自己的回信对对方有帮助。
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[
亮点词汇
]
①
tell sb.
sth.
告诉某人某事
②
stand for
代表
③
put on
张贴
④
red packets
红包
[
高分句型
]
①
There are a lot of
festivals i
n
China.
（
There be
句型）
②
Children are very happy because they often get red packets from their parents or
their relatives
and
friends.
（
because
引导原因状语从句）
)
3 ．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友 Jack 来信说对“ 中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“ 中国红”在中国人日常生
活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“ 中国红”。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福，好运
节日 春节等
形式 剪纸，灯笼，红包等
注意：
（1）词数 70 左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇：
受欢迎的 popular 代表 stand for 幸福 happiness 好运 good luck
春节 the Spring Festival 剪纸 paper-cuts 灯笼 lanterns 红包 red packets
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you
something about it.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you
something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese
people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some
important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding
room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper-cuts, lanterns and Chinese
Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red
plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封书信。针对“ 中国红”进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，从地位、
代表、节日和形式方面进行叙述。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出，可以接着从地位和代表两 个方面介绍“ 中国红” ；第二段可以从节日和形式方面进行介绍；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主
谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4 ．假如你是 Amy，你看到 Rainbow 女士颜色治疗中心的一份招聘启事。你想去推荐自己做这份工作，
请根据招聘启事的内容用英语写一封信。
注意：
1.词数： 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。
Dear Miss Rainbow
I am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center.
Yours,
Amy
【答案】Dear Miss Rainbow
I am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center. I’m Amy. I’m in Class 8, Grade 9. I am kind. I am willing to help others. I’m organized. I have learned to use the computer to get myself
more organized.
I believe colours can change our moods and improve our life. Blue is a calm colour. It can bring peace to our mind and body. Yellow is the colour of the sun. If someone doesn’t feel confident enough, use the colour yellow.
If I can be your assistant, I think I can learn more about it.
I hope you can choose me as your assistant.
Thank you!
Best wishes
Yours,
Amy 【详解】 1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，写一封信推荐自
己做这份工作。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承 接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍个人情况以及对颜色的看法；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色
彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
5 ．假如你是 Cindy,向你班主任推荐 David 任新班长，请包括下面要点，用英语写一封推荐信。
1.个性好（2 点并举例）。
2.对颜色感兴趣，经常告诉同学如何用色彩改变心情（举例）。
3.同学有青春期问题的时候主动帮助（举例）。
注意事项： 1)必须包含所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 2) 词数： 90 词左右。
Dear Mr. Wu,
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Wu,
I am writing to recommend David as our new monitor. I think he has many
strong
qualities
for the position.
To begin with, it’s very organized of
him to keep everything in order.
He
is
not
only
mo
dest but
also
very
hard-working.
Although he always gets high marks, he never shows off
in front
of
us. Besides,
David
is
quite
helpful.
Whenever we have difficulties with our study, he helps us patiently. What’s more,
he is
such
a
confident boy that
he believes that it’s he who can shape his life. David is
c
urious
about
everything.
He
learns
new
knowledge
in
many ways, such as books and the
I
nternet.
David has a great interest in colors. He often
t
ells us
how
to use
colors
to
change
our
mood.
For
example,
I
failed my last exam. David advised me to wear red clothes to
chee
r me up.
It worked
and
I was
very
thankful
to
him.
Whenever the students meet youth problems, he will offer to help him.
For example, a
few
days
ago,
Bob
quarreled with his parents. He was in a bad mood and didn’t want to talk to his pare
nts.
He
offered to
help
Bob
and suggested that Bob should write to his parents and tell them what he thought. Now Bob
has
made up
with
his
parents.
I think David is the most suitable person to be our monitor. I hope that
you
agree with
me.
Yours sincerely
Cindy
【详解】
1.
题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出
David
能胜任班长的理由，包括个性
优点等，要分别
)
(
举例说明，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰
当的词汇和短语。
2.
写作指导：写作时要与题干提示紧密结合，用第三人
称来写作，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，
要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
)
6 ．请你给班主任 Mr. Chen 写一封推荐信，推荐 Tom 当学生会主席。
要点：
1.有许多好的个人特质: 他自信、勤奋、有条理。
2.乐于助人, 常教我们如何学习英语。
3.善良, 不自私, 能关注细节。
4.聪明, 富于创造力和想像力。
5.最喜欢的颜色是黄色和白色, 因为黄色是智慧的颜色。白色是纯洁的颜色。当他感到压抑时，白色能让
他平静。
6.希望你能赞成。
要求:
1.词数 80 左右（不包括已经给出的句子）；
2.短文中不能用真实的姓名和校名等。
4th October
Dear Mr. Chen,
I am writing to
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
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【答案】
4th October
Dear Mr. Chen,
I am writing to recommend Tom as the new chairperson of
the
Students’ Union. He
has
many
goo
d personal
qualities. He is confident, hard-working and or
ganized.
Tom is helpful because he often teaches us how to learn English
. He is kind
and
not
selfish.
He
also pays
attention to the details. How careful he is! Tom i
s very
clever,
creative
and
imaginative, he
can
come
up
with
)
(
many new ideas. His favourite colours
are yellow
and white, because
yellow
is
the
colour
of
w
isdom
and white is the colour of
purity. When he feels stressed, white
can make
him
cal
m.
I hope you will agree w
ith me.
Yours sincerely
Liu Jun
【详解】试题分析：本书面表达是一封推荐信，首先应该注意书信的格式，然后注意推荐的是别人，所以 人称应该用第三人称；本文的时态也应该尽可能用一般现在时；书写时，应该注意表达的逻辑性，尽量
将 提示内容表达的直观清晰，符合英语的表达习惯。本文中会用到这些单词或短语：
confide
nt
、
hardworking
、
careful
、
kind
、
clever
、
creative
、
imaginative
、
feel stressed
、
agree with
、
help s
b. to do
等。
高分句型：
1. Tom is helpful because he often
teaches us how to
learn
English.
because
引导原因状语从句，
how to learn English
是
“
疑问词
+
动词不定式
”
结构，用作宾语。
2. When he feels stressed, white can
make him
calm.
feel stressed
感到有压力，为系表结构；
make sb. do
sth.
使、让某人做
某事。
)
二、话题作文
7 ．在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、 红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎， 请以“Chinese Red”为题， 写一篇约 110 词的英语短文， 让外国朋友了
解中国红。
注意：文本不可出现人名，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Chinese Red
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【答案】例文
Chinese Red
)
In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese.
(
It is a symbol of
good luck and happiness.
We
can
see red
on
some big
days,
such
as
the
Spring
Festival
or
)
(
wedding days. To express our great
joy and wishes, we
often put up red
lanterns,
give hong
bao
or prepare
other
red items.
Chinese red also stands for hard work and success.
It
is
chosen
as the
colour
of
Chinese
national
flag,
reminding us of
how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today
more
of
us
take
red
tours
and
sing
red
songs, which fill us with pride and strength to w
ork harder.
In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in
ou
r traditional
culture.
【详解】
1.
题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓
意以及象征等，可
以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2.
写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现
在时；在介绍内容时，
力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
)
三、材料作文
8 ．作文请根据下面的提示和标题写一篇短文，要求 100 词左右。
1. 我们生活在一个充满色彩的世界里。如果没有颜色，世界将会怎样？你会有什么样的感觉？
2. 当然不同的人对颜色有不同的偏爱和看法，因为各种各样的理由，有人喜欢红色，有人喜欢绿色；有人
喜欢深色，有人喜欢浅色等等。
3. 你最喜欢的颜色是什么呢？简单说出你的理由。
My favourite colour
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【答案】
My favourite colour
We are now living in a world full with kinds of
colors.We
can
say,
if
there
is
no
color,
the
world
w
ill be boring
and the cities will only make us tired. Different people loves different colors
,some
like red,
some
like blue,some
like light colors,some likedark colors.For me ,I love yellow,which
is
a kind
of
warm
colors,represents
the
sun.
Yellow is also a colorthat is a
symbol
of
wisedom,so many
students use yell
ow
stationeries that
the
yellow
can
bring them good luck.Such a nice color,isn’t it And which col
or
do you
like

【详解】试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍自己最喜爱的
颜色，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审
题，
确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，
使文
章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及
标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如
We can say, if
there is no
color,
the world wil be boring and the cities will only make us tired. Yellow
is
also
a
colorthat is
a
symbol
of
wisedom,so many students use yellow stationeries that the yellow can brings them good
luck
.
等使文章的表达更
丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
)
(
考点：考查提纲类作文。
)
9 ．书面表达
根据下面提示写一篇短文。词数 80 个左右，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。
1. 今天 Amy 穿了一件蓝色的毛衣和一条白色的长裤。
2. 因为下周一有一场重要的考试。她感到很紧张，压力很大。
3. 蓝色和白色都是令人镇静的颜色。他们代表了平静和安宁。穿蓝色对我们的身心有好处。
4. 蓝色和白色也很相配，他们穿在 Amy 身上很好看。
5. 这两种颜色能改变 Amy 的心情，我相信她会在考试中考出好的成绩。
Today Amy is wearing
I believe she can get good marks in the exam.
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【答案】
Today Amy is wearing a blue sweater and a pair of
white trousers.Because
next
Monday
there
is
an
important exam.
She felt very nervous and stre
ssed.Blue and white
are
the
colors
that make
somebody
calm.And
they are quiet and peaceful. Wearing blue is good for
our mind
and body.Blue
and white
are
also
very
suitable.Amy looks pretty in Blue and white.The two colors can change
the
mood
of
Amy.I beli
eve
she
will be
a
good test result.
【详解】试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作
时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句
子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整， 表达准确流利， 要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如
Amy looks pretty
in Blue and white.The two colors can change the mood of
Amy.I
believe
she
will be
a
good
test
result.
等等。
考点：考查提纲类作文。
)