外研版九年级上册期末Module 11-Module 12作文精讲

M11 写作主题Photos
话题概述：
本模块以“照片”为话题，通过介绍摄影比赛的作品，让学生学会如何对某一张照片进行描述。通过该模块的学习，学生能够就某一张照片进行描述。通过该模块的学习，学生能够就某一张照片用who,which或that引导的定语从句进行描述，包括照片拍摄的时间、主题以及喜欢这张照片的原因等。
题目1:
假如你是王成，你们学校英语校刊Voice招聘摄影师的启事引起了你的兴趣，请根据下列信息，用英文给招聘人Marcia写一封申请信。词数80个左右。
姓名：王成；性别：男；年龄：15岁；年级：初三；
兴趣：摄影、写作、户外运动；
性格：活泼，开朗，精力充沛；成就：曾获上海市摄影比赛青少年组二等奖。
应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活。
基础版本：（用词会比较简单，但是连接不错）
Dear Marcia,
I am Wang Cheng, a fifteen-year-old boy from/in Junior 3. I am writing to apply for(申请）
the position of photographer(摄影师的职位）for Voice.
As for my hobbies(就我的爱好而言），I am interested in photography, writing and doing outdoor sports(户外运动）。 So, I have plenty of energy to take good photos. In terms of my personality(就我的性格而言），I am active, outgoing and energetic, which makes me communicate and get along well with others(这让我和他人沟通和交流良好）。 Besides, I have
won the second prize in the youth group of Shanghai Photography Competition. I really want to
join you, because I think Voice can offer me a golden chance/opportunity to take part in social activities and enrich my life.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me this position and I am confident I am the very
person(就是那个人）that you are looking for. Looking forward to your replay.
Yours,
Wang Cheng
作文2:
假设你在学校举办的摄影比赛中获得了最佳摄影奖，并将在颁奖典礼上发言。请根据提示写
一篇发言稿。
提示：
（1)你对这次获奖感到非常幸运；
（2)你想感谢你的老师们，他们鼓励你参赛并教给你许多拍照技巧；
（3)你想感谢你的父亲，他在你13岁时送给你一部照相机。
要求：
（1)词数：不少于100.
（2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Ladies and gentlemen, Good afternoon.
It is my great honor/pleasure/privilege(荣幸） to have won the photography competition in
our school.
Among all those who helped me(在所有帮助我的人当中）I'd like to appreciate my teachers first. They found my gift in photography, and encouraged me to enter the competition. During the process, they taught me many practical skills/techniques(技巧） in photography. It is their patience and cultivation/teaching(培养） that contribute(d) to(贡献；导致）my success.
Moreover, I am also grateful to(感恩） my father, who gave me the first camera when I was13. My father's love and this camera are the reason why I started taking photos.
Last but not least, I really want to thank for all those who trust and support me. And words
fail to convey my gratitude to you(言语无法表达我对你们的感激之情）。 Thanks again for your listening.
作文3:
假如你是琳达，你需要写信告诉你远在江西的笔友Molly关于上周你在市里的摄影比赛的消息。请根据下面的提示，写一下这封信吧。
内容提示：
1.摄影比赛的主题是友谊；
2.你得了第一名，奖品是一部相机；
3.你的照片是关于两个小女孩的，她们共享了一把雨伞；雨伞虽小，但她们很开心；
4.你的感受。
注意：1.不少于100词；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Molly,
Haven't heard from you recently. I am writing to share a piece of good news(一则好消息）
with you.
I have just won the first prize in a photography competition whose theme(它的主题）is
about friendship. Besides, I have also got a camera as a reward(作为奖励） for the competition. When it comes to my picture/In terms of my picture(就我的照片而言），there are two little girls sharing an umbrella on a rainy day. Although the umbrella is small, the two girls seem to(看起来）be very happy sticking together, laughing and chatting.
Personally,(就我个人而言）I felt very lucky to catch(捕捉）this wonderful moment and
record(记录）the valuable friendship(珍贵的有益）between two girls. From the picture, I realize true friendship helps us get through(度过） the rainy days and wait for the rainbow together. That's why I write to share my happiness with you.
Yours,
Linda
作文4:
某英语杂志《故事》栏目开始征稿了，主题是“The photo that I like best”。请你根据下面的提示问题写一篇80-100词的短文，参加征稿活动。
提示问题：
(1) When and where was it taken
(2) What does it show
(3) Why do you like it
范文1
Photos can catch memorable moments and record beautiful memories. (照片捕捉难忘瞬间
和记录美好回忆）
As for me, the photo that I like best was taken last year during the period of sports
meeting(在运动会期间）。 My classmate happened to(碰巧） catch this moment when I was running in the 1500-meter race on the playground.
（因为时间已经说明了是过去的，所以可以用过去时，或者过去进行时）In the photo, I was sparing no effort to(不遗余力地）run, and the expressions(表情）on my face showed I was exhausted but determined(精疲力尽，但是下定决心的）。 While not far away there were my classmates cheering loudly on me.
I really treasure this photo because it shows the moment that I tried my best, which seems
that I was shining with the effort and sweat(看上去我好像在用我的努力和汗水在发光）。Moreover, the cheer from my classmates always gives me strength and warmth whenever I see this picture.
范文2
Photo is like a time box where the memorable moments are stored. (照片就像是储存珍贵
记忆的时间盒子）
In my life, there are many photos which leave me deep impressions. While the photo that I
like best is the one taken recently. That is, it is the graduation photo(毕业照）。 In the photo, there are all my classmates and teachers who once accompanied me(曾经陪伴过我的）。 Everyone is smiling happily, showing that we are ready to start a brand-new(全新的）journey.
This photo will be treasured forever. Whenever I see it, I can't help recalling(忍不住回忆）
the wonderful moments spent with those adorable(可爱的）friends. Besides, the voice of my dear teachers keeps lingering in my ears(不断萦绕在耳边）， which symbolizes(象征着）their patient guidance(耐心的指导）and considerate teaching(细致的教导）
I would always be grateful to my teachers and classmates, who helped me grow up as a
better person in this three-year journey.
M12 写作话题Save our world
作文1:
随着科技的迅猛发展，世界环境不断面临新的挑战。低碳生活是我国提倡的一种生活方式，它要求人们返璞归真，并多开展走近自然的活动。
请你以“My Low-carbon(低碳）Life”为题，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文，记录你如何低碳生活，号召大家践行低碳生活。标题已给出，不计入总词数
范文1
With the development of technology(随着科技的发展），people have led a more
comfortable life(人们已经过上了更舒适的生活）。 However, our world is facing the environmental challenges(环境的挑战）。 As a result, we should do something to make our earth a better place.
As for me, I usually ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car. Although it takes more time to reach the destination(目的地）／place,I can enjoy the natural beauties and build a strong body in this way. Besides, I try to avoid using(避免使用） singly-use(一次性的）products, such as paper cups and plastic bags. Last but not least, I pay attention to details(关注细节）。For example, I always use the used water to water flowers, and I turn off the lights when I leave the place.
In a world, everyone's small effort can make a big difference(小努力有大改变） to our world. Moreover, living a low-carbon life can reduce our living cost and make our earth greener. So, let's take action.
范文2
The advancement of the technology(科技的进步） has made people's lives much more convenient at the cost/expense of the environment(以。。 . 环境为代价）。 Therefore, it is high time that(是时候。。 . 后面是一般过去时）we took measures(采取措施）to save our world.
Personally(就我个人而言），I have formed a series of(一系列的）environmentally-friendly/eco-friendly(环保的）habit in order to live a green life. Firstly, I only take vehicles(乘坐车辆） when necessary. Now, I enjoy riding a bike, breathing fresh air and building a stronger body at the same time. Besides, I try to use reusable products instead of single-use ones, which can reduces the pollution to some degree(在某种程度上）。 Lastly, “reusing" is my policy(准则）。 For example, used water is for watering flower, and old books are donated to those in need. (用过的水用来浇花，旧书捐给需要的人）
In a word, I really advocate(提倡） that everybody can take action to make the earth a
greener place. Everyone's effort matters(每个人的努力都很重要） and living a low-carbon life can in turn make our lives better.
据报道，每年流入大海的微塑料达1300万吨，导致大量鱼类死亡。科学家预测，如果不采取措施限塑，2050年海洋里的塑料重量将比鱼类还重。面对如此严峻的形势，作为中学生的我们，应该如何减少塑料制品的使用？
请以“Say No to Plastic Products”为题，用英语写一篇不少于100词的短文，号召大家一起减少塑料污染。
范文1
It is widely known that plastic has made our lives much more convenient, however, it has
also polluted our earth seriously. Therefore, we are supposed to(应该） cut down(减少）the sue of the plastic products.
To begin with, it is necessary to use recyclable(可回收利用的） products instead of plastic
ones. For example, we can go shopping with cloth bags or baskets. Moreover, those plastic products can be used more than once. In fact, products like plastic bags and bottles are strong enough to be used many times. Last but not least, schools and government can organize(组织）environmental activities(环保活动） to show people tips to reduce the use of plastic products, which can also raise people's awareness of environmental protection(这还能提升人们环保的意识：太难了，就省略，可以不写）。
Hopefully, every person/individual can start from ourselves and make our world a greener
place by avoiding using plastic products(通过避免使用塑料产品）。 Every little effort/try can make a big difference!
范文2
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in our environment protection activities. To be an
ecological citizen(生态公民），we did a good job.
Last Saturday, our teacher organized us to clean up the Centre Park. All the students in my
class took part in the activity. We were divided into three groups. The first group swept the ground. The second group picked up the fallen leaves and empty bottles. The third group took out the rubbish. To our surprise(让我们感到惊讶的是）， there were other people in the park joining us too. We spent the whole morning finishing it. Many of us were very tired but happy when we saw the beautiful park.
Now the environment around us becomes better and better. Welcome to my home town
one day.
Yours.
Li Hua
范文3
Dear Mike,
Hearing that you take an interest in our environmental protection activity/campaign(环境保护活动／运动）（named/themed(以。。 . 为主题）“ To be a ecological citizen, build our homeland”这个看能力，如果觉得难就省略掉）， I am writing to share the details(细节）with you.
Last Saturday saw/witnessed(见证） our sweat and effort(汗水和努力）in Zhongshan Park.
Led and organized by(由。。 . 带领和组织） our teacher, we did our utmost(竭尽全力） to clean up the park in three groups. The first group swept the ground, the second one picked up the fallen leaves and empty bottles, while the last group took out the rubbish. With our hard work and cooperation(在我们的努力和合作下），it amazed(惊艳）everyone that a park could shine in the sun(公园在阳光下闪闪发光）。 In the end, we all felt proud of the difference made to our environment and knew our effort could make the world a better place.（that) we
Hopefully, I can take part in more activities like this. And wish you can join us and make our
earth better and greener.
作文4:
受利益驱使，每年都会有鲸鱼和其他一些海洋动物被人类猎杀。请你以一名小记者的身份，给《英语报》写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家保护海洋动物，保护我们的地球。内容要点如下：1.保护海洋动物的原因；2.保护海洋动物的措施；3.如果人们不采取积极的行动的后果。
注意：1.词数80~100;2.可适当发挥，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：liver oil 肝油；whale 鲸鱼；cruel残忍的
范文1
People kill whales and other sea animals every year. As everyone knows,(众所周知）sea
animals are our friends. But people kill them to make money. For example, people kill whales for liver oil. It is reported that(根据报道）the number of whales is getting smaller and smaller. They are in danger now.
We should take steps to(采取措施） protect whales and other sea animals now. For one
thing(一方面），we should take care of the sea environment. We should not pollute the sea anymore. For another(另一方面），we should stop killing sea animals from now on.
When we see whales and other sea animals live happily in the sea, we are proud of them
because they make the sea beautiful and peaceful. If we kill them cruelly, we will be punished by nature. I hope everyone should love our big family and share happiness with each other.
When the buying stops, the killing can too.