常考题型01 提纲类作文 2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目

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常考题型01 提纲类作文
2023-2024学年中考英语书面表达素材考点纲目
写作方法：
1.认真审题并分析给出的提纲，理清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题和大致内容。
2.确定段落，段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心，不能偏离主题，也不能任意删减细节。
3.明确主题句提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。
4.围绕主题，收集材料确定主题之后，就要围绕主题句来收集、筛选材料。
5.检查与完善完成写作之后，还要检查一下写作内容。重点检查内容要点是否齐全、内容要点的表述是否准确、全文的人称和时态运用是否恰当。
【万能模板之社会问题】
Nowadays, there are more and more____问题内容_______。It is estimated that__用具体数据描述问题现象。
Why have there been so many __问题__ Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is that __原因一_ Besides, __原因二__.The third reason is__原因三__. To sum up, the issue of_问题_ is mainly due to__主要原因__.
It is high time that something were done about it. For one thing, __解决办法建议一__. For another, __解决办法建议二__. All these measures will certainly ____展望未来___.
【模板范文】
（2022·河南郑州九年级期末）中考在即，南开中学《公能报》英文专栏组织初三学子开展“对身边人的说一句”主题征文活动， 这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢您”或许是对身边的一句“对不起”等。请将“I Want to Say ________ to ________” 补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事。 并谈谈你的感受。
参考要点：
1. 你说那句话的对象及原因；
2. 发生在那句话背后的故事（起因，经过，结果……）；
3. 谈谈你的感受（感动，怀念，影响……）。
要求：
1. 认真审题，把握要点；
2. 行文连贯，条理清晰，不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息；
3. 词数：80-120词；
4. 注意卷面整洁，不能使用涂改液和修正带。
I want to say ________ to ________
How time flies! My junior high school life is coming to an end. _______________________________
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【答案】
I want to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates
How time flies! My junior school life will come to an end. When I look back at those days, I want to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates. I’ll remember our friendship and the happy moments we had together. These three years’ experience is colorful and unforgettable in my life.
First, I want to thank all the teachers. Though we have had some arguments, you have given me much knowledge in study and being a man. In fact, I have improved a lot with your help. Thank you with sincere feelings.
Second, I’d like to give my best wishes to my classmates. The classmates that haven’t passed the exam should not give up. I know some of you are very good. Maybe you are too nervous to finish the exams. But there will be more chances and you can’t miss them with any excuse. You will succeed sooner or later.
In a word, I want to express my best wishes to my teachers and classmates. Wherever I go, I will memorize the days that I spent with you forever.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的半命题作文，写作前需要将题目“I Want to Say ________ to ________” 补充完整，然后从三方面来展开：说那句话的原因、那句话背后的故事以及你的感受。可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和一般现在时为主来行文，写作时可以适当用一些连词，短语或句型，使文章看起来层次分明。同时语言的表达也要符合语法结构，注意思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，通俗易懂。
【万能模板之对立观点】
某一现象 is more and more common among 人群。Concerning this, different people have different opinions.
Some people hold the view that 第一种观点. It not only 持有第一种观点
原因一， but also持有第一种观点 原因二. What’s more, 持有第一种观点 原因三.
While others hold the opposite opinion about this. They believe that 持有第二种观点 原因一. Meanwhile, 持有第二种观点 原因二.
From my point of view, we should 我个人的观点/建议. We should pay more attention to __措施对象_and only by doing so can we_美好结果_.
【模板范文】
（2022·湖南长沙九年级阶段练习）最近教育部规定学生原则上不得将手机带入校园，严禁带手机进课堂，学校严格执行这一规定，同学们对此有不同的议论， 上周你们班召开了班会对这一规定进行了讨论，请根据下面表格中所给材料提示，写一篇英语短文。
观点 理 由
2/3的同学赞成学校规定 玩手机浪费时间；干扰课堂正常教学秩序；长期玩影响视力.......
1/3的同学反对学校规定 方便与家人及朋友联系；可以上网查找所需信息；可以玩游戏来使自己放松......
你的观点 ……
注意：
１.短文应包括提示中的全部信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名与校名；
3. 词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Students in our school are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Last week，_______________
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【答案】
Students in our school are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Last week,we had a class meeting to discuss about this school rule.
About two thirds of the students agree to this rule. They think that it is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. If some students use mobile phones, others can’t pay attention to the teacher. What’s more, it’s bad for their eyes if they use it too long.
One third of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have mobile phones. And they can search for information on the Internet. It is also a good way to relax.
In my opinion, the school rule is quite good for us. As middle school students we should put our heart into our studies instead of playing on the mobile phone. Middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. And it’s easy for the students to lose themselves in mobile phone games. So I think every student should obey the school rules.
What do you think of it
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，就“不得将手机带入校园，严禁带手机进课堂”这一规定展开讨论，根据材料提示，写一篇英语短文，表明不同人的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，结合第三人称和第一人称为主。第一段承接文章的开头，引出讨论的话题；第二段介绍“2/3的同学赞成学校规定”以及赞成的理由；第三段介绍“1/3的同学反对学校规定”以及反对的理由；第四段表明自己的观点；最后一段反问一下读者的观点。
【万能模板之高分素材】
【高分素材之单词和短语】
1.表示递进
furthermore, moreover, in addition, not only…… but also, in the first place…… ; in the second place……, besides, equally important
2.表示转折
even though, even if, however, in spite of that, despite that, on the contrary
3.表示因果
therefore, for this reason, as a result, consequently, due to, now that, thus, accordingly,
4.表示总结
in briefly, above all, on the whole, in short, in a word, in general, in conclusion
5.表示个人观点
for one's part, in one's opinion, from my point of view
【高分素材之句式】
★首段模板句式
1. As far as. . .is concerned. . .
2. It goes without saying that...
3. It can be said with certainty that...
4. As the proverb says. . .
5. Nowadays, there's a widespread concern about/that. . .
6. . .play(s) an important role in... especially...
7. What calls for special attention is that. . .
8. There's no denying that. . .
9. Nothing is more important than the fact that. . . .
★篇中模板句式
1. On this point, views differ among different people.
2. Moreover, we can read some inspiring stories.
3. Taking exercise not only is of great benefit to our health but relaxes us a lot.
4. As we all know, anybody can't... without...
5. First of all, we have to admit that it has brought us much convenience to our life.
6. Personally, I prefer...which offers me a chance to learn..
7. People may also choose to work in a team, where. . .
8. In this way, people can decide for themselves...
9. First, we should know it really does us good to some extent.
10. Besides, we should not neglect that. . .
11. Wonderful as... is, it has its own disadvantages too.
★结尾段模板句式
1. Taking all these factors into account, we can safely reach the conclusion that. .
2. So it is important for us students to find ways to get relaxed.
3. As for me, the best way to relax is just to maintain my sense of humor.
4. As we all know, so long as a person is optimistic, there is nothing to be afraid
【试题再现】
A
（2023·福建三明·统考二模）
“德、智、体、美、劳”五育并举，是我国新时代对青少年的要求，作为中学生，我们不仅要重视课本知识学习，而且要提高个人生活技能。请根据以下图文提示，写一篇题为Life Skills的英语短文，在校报“英语专栏”上发表，词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Life Skills
Life skills are important to us. What life skills should we teenagers develop And how Here is my opinion. ________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Life skills
Life skills are important to us. What life skills should we teenagers develop And how Here is my opinion.
First, we should do our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise. And be happy every day. Second, working with others is important. We need to work as a team. We should learn to get along well with others. Third, solve problems in different ways. Try to find out the ways alone or with others. Besides, learn to manage time efficiently. We can make a list of things we should do every day. Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking and keeping safe. We can ask our family for help or search the Internet.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will live a happier and healthier life.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“生活技能”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。总述生活技能对我们很重要，设问青少年该培养什么生活技能以及如何培养；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“健康饮食、坚持锻炼、学会写作、解决问题”等几个方面重点介绍青少年需要具备的生活技能；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁青少年应该尽最大努力改善生活技能。
【亮点词汇】①do one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
②get along well with sb.与某人和睦相处
③find out查明，弄清
④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
【高分句型】①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and take daily exercise.（It作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
②All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will live a happier and healthier life.（if引导条件状语从句）
B
（2023·甘肃定西·校考三模）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求：
1. 写你三个方面的变化，（如：长相，习惯，爱好）。用上used to do和be used to doing结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My changes
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 now. I’m about to graduate from Junior High School. During these three years, I have changed a lot. _______________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My changes
How time flies! I’m in Grade 9 now. I’m about to graduate from Junior High School. During these three years, I have changed a lot.
First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English. I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams, and I am interested in English. Third, I used to play basketball, but now I am used to playing football with my friends. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people, but now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏相关要点。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接描述初中阶段自己变化很多；
第二步，具体阐述自己在长相，习惯，爱好等方面发生了哪些变化；
第三步，总结全文，并询问对方有哪些变化。
[亮点词汇]
① am busy with忙于
② made much progress in English英语进步很大
③ be weak in不擅长于
④ give a speech in public在公共场合发表演讲
[高分句型]
①I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Third, I used to play basketball, but now I am used to playing football with my friends （used to do和be used to doing结构）
C
（2023·广西梧州·统考一模）
现如今，很多人喜欢在网上点餐。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文，谈谈网上点餐的利与弊，并阐述你的观点。
Ordering food online （网上点餐）
Advantages 方便快捷；美味可口；减少外出，……
Disadvantages 塑料包装污染环境；饮食习惯不够健康；……
Your opinion ……
参考词汇：减少外出reduce going out；塑料包装plastic packages
注意：
1. 内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数 80 左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Ordering food online
Nowadays, many people prefer ordering food online.
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【答案】
Ordering food online
Nowadays, many people prefer ordering food online. On the one hand, ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, ordering food online is convenient and easy. There are all kinds of delicious food offered online. We can also go out less. On the other hand, it has many disadvantages. The plastic packages can pollute the environment. And the safety of the take-away food often makes us feel worried.
In my opinion, home-cooked food is safer and more delicious than take-away food. If we have time, we’d better cook food by ourselves at home. What’s more. I think ordering food online should only be used when it needed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文谈谈网上点餐的利弊，并阐述自己的观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的主题并介绍网上点餐的利弊；
第二步，谈谈自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand ... on the other hand ... 一方面……另一方面……
②first of all 首先
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
[高分句型]
①There are all kinds of delicious food offered online.（There be句型）
②If we have time, we’d better cook food by ourselves at home.（if引导的条件状语从句）
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