【新课标】Unit 12 SectionB(3a-Self check)写作教学课件（人教九全英语Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.）

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Unit 12
Life is full of the unexpected
Section B 3a-Self check
Teaching Objectives
语言知识:
能熟练描述自己幸运/不幸的事情。
01
学习能力:
用一般过去时和过去完成时书写自己或他人难忘的经历。
02
文化意识:
了解不及时做某事而造成的危害。
03
思维品质:
培养学生良好的行为习惯。
04
Revision
发生
当地的超市
卖光
减肥
弄清；查明
以做某事告终
结婚
取消他的节目
成百上千的；数以百计的
成千上万的；数以千计的
警官
take place
local supermarkets
sell out
lose weight
find out
end up doing sth.
get married
cancel his show
hundreds of
thousands of
police officers
Do you remember which day is a lucky day
pick up money
get full marks
receive many gifts
Warming-up
Look and talk
Do you remenber which day is an unlucky day
the broken bicycle
get wet
miss the bus
Can you remember a lucky or an unlucky day What happened
3a
What was the date
What happened first
Was this lucky or unlucky Why
What happened next
How did the day end
How did you feel about this day
3b
pre writing
Write a story about your lucky or unlucky day and tell your story to a partner or the class.
My lucky / unlucky day
I will always remember the date …
This was the luckiest / unluckiest day of my life …
When I woke up that morning …
Later that day, …
I couldn’t believe …
Then/After that, …
Finally, …
I think …
What a lucky/an unlucky day!
本单元以“unexpected events”为话题展开学习，主要叙述过去的经历。写作时一般直接交代时间、地点、人物、事件等，然后详细叙述事情发生的原因、经过和结果。要求能够正确使用一般过去时和过去完成时，合理运用顺叙、倒叙和插叙等记叙方法，条理清楚。
单元话题导语
内容：记叙幸运或不幸的一天
文体：记叙文
时态：以一般过去时和过去完成时为主
人称：以第一人称为主
逻辑顺序：事情的发展顺序或时间顺序
While-writing
【写作任务】
请以“My lucky day”为题，写一篇英语短文，记叙你经历过的幸运的一天，讲讲那天都发生了些什么事情，然后给某中学生英文杂志的“Your Voices”专栏投稿。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：记叙文；时态：过去时态；人称：第一、三人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
写作指导
1. 人称: 主要用第一人称
2. 时态: 一般过去时态为主；
3. 文体：记叙文
4. 常用句型：
① I will always remember the date.
② This was the luckiest /unluckiest day of my life.
③ When I woke up that morning, ...
④ Later that day, …Then/After that, … Finally, …
⑤ I think … What a lucky/an unlucky day!
5. 写作思路:
首先，根据3a提示，使用3b句型按照时间顺序介绍事件的发生过程；
其次：表达自己的所思所想。
注意：完成后认真检查数、时态以及句子结构等是否正确。
Pre-writing
catch the bus
rush out of the door
run quickly / fast
to catch the bus
be out of breath after my run
get enough sleep
be good at
have a talent for
keep calm / my cool
look for it everywhere,
ask ... about my
... give it back to me
win a... competition
find the lost things
Examples
lucky or unlucky
Let’s think.
What can we say when we talk about an unlucky day
Beginning
Body
Ending
outline
What
How did you feel
Background of the story
写作步骤:
Beginning
outline
who
when
where
weather
What happened to me
(unlucky)
(时间顺序）
How did I feel after the party
Body
Ending
While-writing
写作模板
总结感慨
详述经历
开篇点题
I will always remember the date – September 1st, 2021.This was the luckiest day of my life.
When I woke up that morning, it was nearly7:30. I hurried to the bus stop. By the time I got to the bus stop, the school bus had already left. ...
Life is full of the unexpected. I think I had a very lucky day.What a lucky day!
My lucky day
I will always remember the date February 28, 2014. This was the luckiest day of my life.
When I woke up that morning, the sky was very dark. I took the early bus to school as usual. As soon as I arrived at school, it started to rain very heavily. Many students were late and were all wet when they got to school. But I wasn’t because I caught the early bus!
Sample writing:
时态用一般过去时和过去完成时，以第一人称为主
主题是谈论过去幸运的一天，开头点题
Later that day, I realized that I had forgotten my wallet and couldn’t buy lunch. I couldn’t believe it. Then my friend Lisa said that she could share her lunch with me.
Finally, my older brother told me that night that he could take me to the concert that I’d been dying to attend that weekend. I was so happy!
I think that was the best day I’d had in a long time.
What a lucky day!
本文按照时间顺序来描述事件
时态用一般过去时和过去完成时，以第一人称为主
总结感慨，抒发感情
cancel
miss
west
accident
lady
officer
market
unexpected
Last Saturday after my French course, I decided to drive to the _______
to buy a meat pie for dinner. As I was heading _________, I saw a huge truck in the middle of the road. There had been a(n) _________ and there were many police _________ around. I turned around and decided to go to a nearby mall. However, I ________ the road that led to the mall. Then I saw a restaurant that sold chicken noodles. I went inside
and the _______, who was the owner, served me the most delicious bowl of chicken noodles ever. I had made a(n) _____________ discovery! I’m so glad that I _________ my plan to go to the market.
1. Complete the passage with the correct form of the words in the box.
market
west
accident
officers
missed
lady
unexpected
canceled
2. Think of ways to finish the answers.
1. A: Why didn’t you hand in your science homework
B: Before I could start working on it, _________________________
——————————————————————————.
2. A: Why didn’t you take a shower this morning
B: By the time I got up, ___________________________________
——————————————————————————.
3. A: Why did you have to walk home from school
B: By the time I left my school, _____________________________.
my baby brother started crying and I had to look after him because my mother was sick
my sister had already gone into the bathroom and the bus was honking (鸣喇叭) for me to hurry up
the school bus had already left
根据汉语意思完成下面的句子。
1.人们相互开各种各样的玩笑。
People _____ all kinds of _____ _____ each other.
2.Linda父亲抚养她直到她结婚。
Linda’s father supported her until she ____ ________.
3. 一架飞机将降落在机场。
A plane will _____ ____ the airport.
play
jokes on
got married
land on
Exercise
Thank you!