Unit 4 Our World 写作（含解析）仁爱科普版 英语八年级上册

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Unit 4 Our World 写作（含解析）仁爱科普版 英语八年级上册
1．安全是把伞，护你平安成长。请根据思维导图以“How to Protect Ourselves”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求:
1. 必须包含提示内容，适当拓展，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
How to Protect Ourselves
Safety is like an umbrella.
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2．安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能遇到哪些安全问题？该怎样处理呢？请根据以下要点提示，以How to Keep Safe 为题，写一篇英文短文。
中学生安全问题及对策 1. 交通安全：遵守交通规则 (follow the traffic rules)；
2. 食品安全：注意饮食安全；
3. 活动安全：上下楼梯 (go upstairs/downstairs) 靠右行；体育锻炼要小心；不允许私自下河游泳；
4. 交友安全：注意网络交友安全。
遇险建议 遇到危险要保持冷静，保证自身安全，然后及时报警或者向家长、老师求助。
要求： 1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当拓展；
2. 表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 80词左右。
How to Keep Safe
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3．野生动物是生态系统里重要的成员，跟大自然关系非常密切。保护野生动物就是保护人类自己。请从所给图片中选择一种野生动物 (或另选一种)，并根据所给提示，以“Protecting ________ (动物名称)”为题写一篇英文演讲稿，在你校英语俱乐部正在举办的以“保护野生动物”为主题的活动中作专题演讲。
提示：
（1）Could you please say something about their looks, food, qualities and abilities.
（2）What problems do they face
（3）What can we do to help protect them
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发展；
（3）词数100字左右；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Protecting _______________
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report on protecting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you very much!
4．请以” Internet” 为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈你对互联网的看法。
参考词汇: more and more, fast and convenient, information, talk to different people, in trouble, use it correctly
要求:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数80左右。
Internet
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5．网络让人们的生活更精彩，交流越来越便捷。然而，网络的危害也显而易见，特别是手机、互联网让低头族越来越多。青少年沉迷网络游戏的情况也越来越严重。请结合自己的日常生活体验，谈谈你对网络的看法。 请以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题，简要说明网络的优缺点。80个词左右。
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
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6．为了增强全民防灾减灾意识，推广避灾自救技能，无锡防灾减灾中心将举行“防灾减灾，守护安全”短视频创作比赛。假如你是阳光中学的李华，你打算参加本次活动。请根据以下流程图为你的短视频写一篇英文旁白。
注意事项：
1. 旁白内容需自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯，符合题意；
2. 文本框中的提示为限定性内容；
3. 词数在90词左右，旁白的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 旁白中不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
5. 旁白必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
Hi, everyone! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my video. Thanks for your watching.
7．请根据下面表格中的信息，结合所学的相关内容，谈谈如何在地震中进行自我保护。短文包括表格内所有提示内容，可适当发挥。词数100左右。
How to protect ourselves in an earthquake
Indoors should stay under strong furniture; stay away …
shouldn’t run out of the room …
Outdoors should move to clear areas; get away from tall buildings…
shouldn’t stand under a tree...
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8．自我保护既是一种意识，也是一种能力。为进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护的能力，学校将举行以安全为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提示，以“How can we make ourselves safe ”为题，写一篇短文，谈谈中学生应该怎样注意自身安全。
写作要求：1. 要点齐全，语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
2. 短文不少于80词。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
How can we make ourselves safe
As middle school students, to learn how to make ourselves safe is very important. Here are some of my suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．在生活中，我们可能会遇到一些危险或灾难，如果我们有良好的安全意识和自救常识，就可以保护自己，远离危险。为进一步提高广大师生的安全意识，阳光中学英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“保护自己，远离危险”的英文演讲比赛。假如你是八年级学生李威，请你以“Away from Danger”为题，根据以下思维导图写一份80词左右的英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在80个左右，演讲稿的首尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Wei. It’s a great honor for me to speak here. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech.Thank you.
10．2021 年云南大象北迁事件引起了人们的广泛关注。大象无故迁徙，是人类破坏生态环境造成的后果。请你以李华的名义，根据提示用英语写一封80词左右的保护大象的倡议书。
提示：
1、大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。
2、大象目前数量减少的原因。
3、应该如何保护它们？
参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal，象牙 ivory
Dear schoolmates,
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参考答案：
1．例文
How to Protect Ourselves
Safety is like an umbrella. It’s important to know how to protect ourselves.
When we are on the street, we should obey traffic rules and never run at the red lights. We must pay attention to the traffic around us. When there is a fire, we must call 119 for help as soon as possible. We should cover our faces and run out of the room quickly. When an earthquake happens, we should keep away from the windows, furniture, tall buildings and so on. We’d better move to clear areas and stay calm.
In a word, we should always be careful and protect ourselves well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍如何保护我们自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点从三个方面介绍如何保护我们自己，注意补充要点；
第三步，书写结语，点明主题，要保护好自己。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to关注
②as soon as possible尽快
③cover盖住
④keep away from远离
[高分句型]
①When there is a fire, we must call 119 for help as soon as possible.（时间状语从句）
②We’d better move to clear areas and stay calm.（建议句型；had better do sth. 最好做某事）
2．例文：
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What’s more, we’d better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around. If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明保持安全的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍如何保护好自己的安全；
第三步，书写结语，发出呼吁或表明态度。
[亮点词汇]
①suggestion建议
②pay attention to关注
③alone独自
④get into trouble陷入麻烦
⑤what’s more并且，还
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. (时间状语从句)
②If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help. (条件状语从句)
3．例文：
Protecting Tigers
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report on protecting tigers. Tigers are the kings of the animal world. They are big and strong. They have very bright eyes. They have orange fur with dark strips. They can run very fast, but only for a short while. They are able to swim and climb. Tigers like to live alone. They live on animals like deer, sheep.
Sadly, there are not many tigers left in the wild now. They are in danger because hunters catch tigers for their fur, bones or other parts of the body. Also, some people want to make the forests smaller and smaller in order to have more space for farms and buildings. This will lead to less and less space for tigers.
Moreover, So we should take action to protect tigers. If we do nothing, soon there will be none left. We should encourage the government to make laws to provide cover and food for them. What’s more, We should also prevent the hungers from hunting them. Last but not least, we should build more reserves to protect the forests so that tigers can have enough living space. Wild animals are our friends. It’s our duty to help them live a happy life in the wild.
That’s all. Thank you very much!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生需要补全题目并且根据“要点提示”中的问题给出相应的回答，可以适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先选择熟悉的动物，补全标题，根据要点的提示描述老虎的特征，如相貌，食物，品质，能力等；
第二步，阐述具体面临的问题。主要从“猎人狩猎老虎”以及“老虎生存环境”两个方面来阐述面临的问题；
第三步，书写具体保护措施。主要从政府层面出台保护文件、防止猎人过度捕杀以及保护森林三个方面提出措施。
[亮点词汇]
①prevent sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
②encouraged sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
③moreover而且
④what’s more更重要的
[高分句型]
①They are in danger because hunters catch tigers for their fur, bones or other parts of the body.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If we do nothing, soon there will be none left. （if引导条件状语从句，there be句型）
③Last but not least, we should build more reserves to protect the forests so that tigers can have enough living space.（so that引导状语从句）
4．例文
Internet
The Internet has become more and more important in our daily life. Through the Internet, I can learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well. I can also send messages by email, make video calls, attend online courses, read different kinds of books and even learn foreign languages on my own. Besides, I can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play chess or other games. I can do some shopping online, too.What’s more, I can make more friends and discuss some questions with them. If I want to go on a trip, I will find a lot of useful information of the place with the help of Internet. My father works on the Internet. My mother uses the Internet to shop.
In a word, the Internet has made my life more colorful and convenient. But I should not spend too much time on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章虽然没有给太多要点提示，但是给了参考词汇，注意使用另外需注意行文连贯，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍网络在日常生活中的重要性；
第二步，介绍网络给我及身边的家人带来了哪些便利；
第三步，劝告大家网络虽然很方便，但也要注意适度使用。
[亮点词汇]
①at home and abroad国内外
②in a word简而言之
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①If I want to go on a trip, I will find a lot of useful information of the place with the help of Internet.（条件状语从句）
②But I should not spend too much time on it.（but表转折）
5．例文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet
Nowadays the Internet plays an important role in our life. Today I want to talk about whether the Internet is good or not.
For one thing, the Internet has a lot of advantages. With the help of Inernet, we can make friends with people from all over the world. We can learn about our favorite stars and listen to their songs on the Inernet. It’s wonderful. We can also shop online. It’s very easy and convenient. On the other hand, there are disadvantages. If we lose ourselves in the Internet, we will fail the exam. Besides, playing computer games on the Internet is bad for our health.
In my opinion, we should make good use of the Internet so that it can help us a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述要点内容。重点写网络的优缺点；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对网络的看法和期望。
[亮点词汇]
① plays an important role in在……中 扮演着重要角色
②want to do sth想要做某事
③talk about 讨论
④whether… or not是否
⑤For one thing一方面
⑥all over the world全世界
⑦On the other hand另一方面
⑧be bad for…对……有害
⑨In my opinion就我个人而言
⑩make good use of利用好
[高分句型]
①If we lose ourselves in the Internet, we will fail the exam. Besides, playing computer games on the Internet is bad for our health.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②In my opinion, we should make good use of the Internet so that it can help us a lot. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
6．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, a Grade 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Today I want to share how to keep yourself safe during an earthquake.
When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. Buildings will fall down because of the shaking of the earth and people may be trapped.
Now I’d like to give you some tips in case there’s an earthquake. Hide under a table if you’re at home. If possible, you can also go to an open space. Remember to stay away from buildings, or you’ll get hurt.
That’s all for my video. Thanks for your watching.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一片应用文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的信息”；“描述某灾难”；以及“自己的建议”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的相关信息；
第二步，紧扣文章给出的要点，描述地震；
第三步，给出自己的建议并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①earthquake地震
②fall down掉落
③trapped受困的
④in case以防万一
⑤stay away from远离
[高分句型]
①Today I want to share how to keep yourself safe during an earthquake.（宾语从句）
②When an earthquake happens, there will be loud noise. （when引导的时间状语从句；there be句型）
7．例文
Earthquakes are very terrible. It is very important for us to know some ways to protect ourselves from earthquakes.
If you are indoors, you should stay under strong furniture, such as a table. Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you. You shouldn’t try to run out of the room or take a lift downstairs.
If you are outdoors, you should move to clear areas quickly. Get away from tall buildings. They may hurt you if they fall. You shouldn’t stand under a tree.
Don’t be afraid when an earthquake comes. Remember, the most important thing is to stay calm.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to protect ourselves in an earthquake ”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对主题的介绍；
第二步，具体给出在地震中自我保护的建议；
第三步，建议不要害怕，保持冷静。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②stay away from远离
③take a lift搭电梯
④stay calm保持冷静
[高分句型]
①If you are indoors, you should stay under strong furniture, such as a table.（条件状语从句）
②Stay away from windows or anything that may fall on you.（定语从句）
8．例文
How can we make ourselves safe
As middle school students, to learn how to make ourselves safe is very important. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, when we cross the road, we should look left and right. Second, we are supposed to eat healthily and safely. Third, when we travel abroad, we should take care of our things and know the route well. Fourth, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Besides, if we are in danger, we must call 110 for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.
In short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How can we make ourselves safe ”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自我保护的方法；
第二步，具体从交通、饮食、旅行、网上交友等方面给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cross the road过马路
②be supposed to应该
③take care of照顾
④be in danger处于危险中
[高分句型]
①Third, when we travel abroad, we should take care of our things and know the route well.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Besides, if we are in danger, we must call 110 for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.（if引导的条件状语从句和so that引导的目的状语从句）
9．例文
Away from Danger
Good afternoon, everyone. I’m Li Wei. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
Lots of danger is around us, such as fire. When a building catches a fire, there will be heavy smoke. It makes people hard to see things clearly. People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.
If we are in a fire, we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel. To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作思维导图已给出，注意不要遗漏思维导图中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求另起一段写演讲稿内容。
第二步，根据思维导图举例叙述会面临的危险，会导致的后果及我们如何保护自己。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②be afraid to do 害怕去做某事
③protect sb from sth 保护某人免受某物的伤害
④as soon as possible 尽可能快地
[高分句型]
①When a building catches a fire, there will be heavy smoke.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②People may run in all directions because they are afraid to get hurt.（because引导的原因状语从句）
③To protect ourselves from thick smoke, we must stay low to the ground and try to get out as soon as possible. （动词不定式作目的状语）
10．例文：
Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone’s contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇倡议书，属于书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍大象是陆地上最大的哺乳动物以及大象目前数量减少的原因；
第二步，给出保护大象的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①the number of……的数量
②because of因为
③as a result因此
④put up张贴
[高分句型]
①First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe everyone’s contribution (贡献) can make a big difference.（believe后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
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