中考英语作文高分策略课件

课件20张PPT。English writing一、优秀的书面表达特点
二、写作步骤
三、记叙文写作步骤
四、范文解析
中考英语作文高分策略优秀的书面表达应具备以下特点：
1．体裁恰当， 内容符合要求。
2．语言准确， 无语法错误。
3．文理顺通， 前后连贯。 过渡词的恰当使用可以使行 文衔接自然， 语句流畅。4．观点突出， 论述清楚。5．词汇、句型尽量多样化。
6．字数相当， 并正确使用标点符号。7．书写工整、规范。写作步骤 （1）认真审题。 审题是做好书面表达的前提， 看到考试题后， 不用急于动笔， 要仔细看题目要求的内容。
（2）定人称： 看清要求， 确定用何种人称。

（3）定时态： 首先应确立文章的主体时态； 有时，因写作需要， 还可能出现两种或多种。
（4）审要求： 考生要特别注意书面表达题中的“注意” 一项， 这是对考生提出的具体要求， 因此对于题目所提供的说明，无论是英语还是汉语， 考生都应认真对待， 不可忽视。记叙文写作步骤 1．仔细审题， 构思结构， 列出要点。（1）读懂题目要求， 根据题目要求划分段落。
（2）记叙文一般分三部分： 第一部分交代清楚时间、地 点和人物；
第二部分详细描述事件发生的过程和结果；
第三部分发表对此事的看法和感受
2. 确定时态和人称， 保持一致。
3. 突出中心， 详略得当。
4. 用词准确， 句式多样。
5. 反复检查， 修改错误。 basic steps(基本写作步骤) 1.审题
2. 列提纲
3. 加开头和结尾
4. 加连接词
5. 美化句子(美：谚语/例子)审题段落、时态、人称列提纲：根据关键词列出文章的要点I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the mountain with you/ when I went mountain climbing with you.
It rained/ began raining on the half way./
I complained (to you) about the rain/ the bad weather.
I wanted to give up.
You put your coat on me and told me not to give up.
I reached (got to) the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beauty of the nature there.
加连接词Dear Daddy,
It’s a gift for Father’s Day when you are reading it.
I still remember the day last summer when I climbed the mountain with you. _______ , it was sunny and warm. ________, it began raining on the half way. I complained to you about the bad weather. I felt _____ cold ______I wanted to give up. _______, you put your coat on me and told me not to give up. _______, I reached the top of the mountain and enjoyed the beauty of the nature there.
Now I want to say: I love you. Daddy. You raise me up!
Happy Father’s Day!
Yours,
Mike
At firstUnluckilysothatHoweverFinally1.表示并列或递进:
2.表示选择:
3.表示转折:
4.表示因果:
5.表示条件:
6.表示对比:
7.表示解释:
8.表示顺序:
9.表示强调:
10.表示结论:连接词1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more
not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way,
on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word,
generally speaking, in short连接词美化(beautify) I still remember the day last summer when we went mountain climbing together. We started early in the morning. But, unluckily, it began to rain on the half way. I got wet through, feeling cold and tired. So I couldn’t help complaining and wanted to give up. However, you encouraged me not to give up and put your coat on me softly. You said, “We won’t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top.” You really cheered me up. We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of the nature that I had never seen.加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise.
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” So it is good for us students to take exercise.集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” So we should concentrate on our studies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)
可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoy some proverbs
1.Practice makes perfect.
2.Think twice before you do.
4.Do as the Romans do.

三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.3.Where there is a will,
there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.Enjoy some proverbs
7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.
8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
9.All roads lead to Rome.
10.Never too old to learn.

覆水难收。一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法一:善用词汇
方法二:活用多种句型
方法三:妙用连接词
方法四:妙用引文和例子
妙用引文和例子（多用于“the body”）Writing skills（“写”的技巧）Which is better? 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach.
B They enjoyed the music on the beach. 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。A To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
B His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. 我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.
B It’s our duty to protect the environment.Thanks for your time!