2023-2024学年八年级英语上册U10If you go to the party, you'll have a great time! 写作课件（共20张PPT）

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Section B (3a-Self Check)
Unit 10
If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time.
2023-2024学年八年级英语（上册）★ ★
Learning objectives
Learn how to give advice on your friends’ problems by writing.
Know the basic structure of a letter on the topic of giving advice.
What kinds of problems
do you have
And how to solve them
study
health
relationship
Free Talk
I can’t get good grades.
I can’t follow my teachers well in class.
I am too shy to ask my teachers questions.
I don’t want to go to school.
I don’t like English.
I have too much homework to do.
study
Problems
study
listen to the teachers carefully in classes
finish homework on time
read more books
ask the teachers for help
take notes in class
do more exercises
Solutions
I am fat / heavy.
I fall ill easily.
I have a stomachache and don’t want to eat anything.
I hurt my legs.
I have a sore throat.
I have a flu.
health
Problems
health
do more exercise
eat more vegetables and fruit
eat less junk food and meat
have meals regularly
go to bed early and get up early
Solutions
I don’t have friends, and I feel lonely.
I had a quarrel with my best friend.
I have a bad temper with my friends.
My parents don’t understand me.
My parents don’t listen to my ideas.
I have different ideas with my parents.
relationship
Problems
have a bad temper with sb. 对某人发脾气
have a quarrel with sb. 和某人争吵
relationship
share feelings with them
offer to help each other
understand them first, then make them understand you
communicate with them more
Solutions
Talk to someone you know. Find out his / her three biggest worries. Try to think of some solutions to the problems and write them down.
Problems Possible solutions
3a
take notes in class, do more exercise, ask the teachers for help
too fat/ heavy
eat less junk food and more vegetables, do more exercise
math is too difficult
parents don’t understand me
communicate with them more,
understand them first
(health)
(study)
(relationship)
Write about your friend’s first problem and the possible solutions. Use the structures below to help you plan your writing.
My friend _________________ has a problem.
He / She ________________________________
_______________________________________.
I think he / she should _____________________
_______________________________________.
If he / she _______________________________,
he / she will _____________________________.
3b
who
worry/ problem
your ideas/suggestions
results
“一摆二提三谈法”写问题建议类作文
一摆：摆问题。
二提：提建议。
三谈：谈想法。
My friend ______ has a problem.
He/She ______________________________________.
I think he/she should __________________________
____________________________________________.
If he/she _____________________________________，
he/she will ___________________________________.
John
is too fat/ heavy.
eat less junk food and more
vegetables, and he should do more exercise.
does more exercise,
be healthier.
Problem
Solution
Result
(If 从句）
青少年在成长过程中难免会遇到一些困惑。假设你是Andy，你的英国朋友Jack有一些烦恼，他写信向你倾诉，请你用英语给Jack写一封回信。内容包括：Jack的烦恼(1.因肥胖经常被同学嘲笑；2.觉得数学太难，总是学不好)；相应的解决建议和可能的结果。可适当增加内容，不少于80词。
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. ______________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Andy
Practice
Beginning
Body
Ending
1. I really hope my advice can be helpful to you!
2. I really hope you can solve your problems and
feel better soon! Best wishes!
Problem1-Solution1
Your second problem is that you...
I think you should…If you do that, I believe you’ll…
Your first problem is that you ... I can understand you, … I think if you...,
you will...
Outline
1. I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in
your life. Problems and worries are normal in life,
so don’t worry about them so much.
2. I've learned about your problems, and I really
want to help you. I'd like to give you some advice.
Problem2-Solution2
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some problems in your life. Problems and worries are normal in life, so you don’t need to worry about them so much.
Your first problem is that you are fat and your classmates often laugh at you. I can understand you, and don’t care about others’ opinions. I think if you develop a healthy diet and do more exercise, you will be healthier. Your second problem is that you think math is too difficult, so you can’t study it well. I think you should take math classes seriously and do more exercises, even ask your teacher for some help. If you do that, I believe you’ll make progress in math.
I really hope my advice can be helpful to you! Best wishes!
Yours,
Andy
Frame
结构
Content
内容
Language
Hand writing
Well-organized structure
About the topic / clear ideas/ well developed
Correct expressions/ fewer mistakes
Beautiful hand writing
Total:
Writing Evaluation
Your school is taking part in the project “We can help!” Add more items to the poster. Then talk about what you will do if you take part in the project.
We Can Help!
· old people’s home visit
· school clean-up
· children’s hospital visit
· _________________
· _________________
4
探访敬老院
学校大扫除
访问儿童医院
名词短语
动词短语
visit an old people’s home
clean up our school
visit a children’s hospital
Your school is taking part in the project “We can help!” Add more items to the poster. Then talk about what you will do if you take part in the project.
We Can Help!
· old people’s home visit
· school clean-up
· children’s hospital visit
· _________________
· _________________
4
A: What will you do if you visit an old people’s home
B: If I do that, I’ll bring the old people some flowers.
sing for the old people
play games with the old people
Helping others is helping ourselves！
Self Check
Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
1. If my family travels to a new country this
summer, I’ll send you a letter about my ___________.
2. Will you watch the ________ with me if
you’re free this weekend
3. If the __________ stay out too late, their
parents will worry about them.
4. I’ll go to the _______ if it ends by 5:00 p.m.
experience
video
teenagers
meeting
meeting
teenagers
video
experience
1
2
Complete the conversation with the words in the box. Some words are used more than once.
A: Hi, Sally. ___ you _______ to the party tomorrow
B: I _______ to, but I can’t.
if
are
will
fight
want
sorry
going
Are
want
A: Oh! But _____ you don’t go to the party,
you _______ miss all the fun!
B: I know, but I got into a _______ with my parents.
A: Hmm … then you should just say _______
to your parents.
B: I guess you’re right. I _______ talk to them tonight.
if
will
fight
sorry
will
going