中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
初三英语作文写作高分必会
评分标准
1作文框架,一般是4分
内容充实,上下文连贯,用语规范,表达准确,无语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3-4分。
2内容切题,意思连贯,表达完整8分。
词数:每少5个单词扣0.5分,以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
拼写:每处错误扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数。
语法:每处错误扣0.5分,同一语法错误不重复扣分。
标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣0.5分,但扣分总和不超过1分。
3语言规范,没有拼写错误,没有语法错误8分
写作框架:
一般是三段式,即按开头-正文-结尾/或叫总分总写。
写作字数把握:开头2句--正文4-6句-结尾2句。80-120字。
(正文句子和字数根据整篇总字数要求灵活处理)
审题思路:人称,时态,主题切题且内容要全面。
作文开头常用句式必备必背:
开头1: As we all know that ·-.·--(众所周知)/It’s important for us to do sth.干什么事很怎么样/Doing sth is very important for us or our+名词。做什么事如何如何。
健康:
As we all know that a healthy body is the foundation of a happy life。众所周知,健康的身体是幸福生活的基础。Here are some suggestions on how to keep healthy.
As we all know that balanced diet and regular exercise are essential for maintaining good health。众所周知,均衡的饮食和定期锻炼对于保持身体健康至关重要。Do you know how to keep healthy
It is important for us to know that health is the foundation of our life all.对我们来说,重要的是要知道监看是我们生活的基石。或者改写为: health is very important in our daily life.健康在我们的日常生活中非常重要。
/It’s important for us to keep healthy in our daily life./keeping healthy is very important in our daily life.在我们日常生活中保持健康是很重要的。
引起下文句:But how to keep healthy Here are my suggestions below:/My suggestions as below:
其它话题开头以此类推,仿造即可。
2 运动:
As we all know that sports are essential for maintaining physical fitness。众所周知,运动对于保持身体健康至关重要。Do you know how to keep healthy by having sports
As we all know that team sports not only improve physical fitness but also develop team-building and communication skills.众所周知,团队运动不仅有助于提高身体素质,还有助于培养团队合作和沟通技巧。
Here are some advice about sports.
3 爱好:
As we all know that hobbies can help us relieve stress and improve our mood.众所周知,爱好可以帮助我们缓解压力、改善情绪。My hobby are as below.我的爱好如下:
As we all know that having a hobby can help us explore new interests and develop new skills。众所周知,拥有爱好可以帮助我们探索新的兴趣、发展新的技能。Here are my hobbies .
5 环保:
As we all know that protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility。众所周知,保护环境是每个人的责任。What can we do to protect the environment We can do the following things as below:
6安全:
As we all know that middle school students should be careful when staying alone. 我们都知道,中学生独处时要小心。Here are some suggestions about safty of the students.
As we all know that it is important for middle school students to follow the safety rules at school,on road and at home. 我们都知道,中学生遵守学校安全规定,交通规则和在家注意事项很重要。Here are some good advice/suggestions.
正文常用必背高分句式:
层次写作常用词汇
:First,Firstly,First of all.···-·(首先)
then.....·(然后),next 接下来
Last but not least.-·---(最后但并非最不重要的一点)
All in all....../in short,to sum up.总之,(总而言之)
范文1:题目Title: The Joy of Sports运动的乐趣
It is hard to believe that sports can bring us lots of happiness and more benifits.Let's see what sports can bring us.
Firstly, sports give us a reason to stay active and healthy. Whether it's running, playing football, or swimming, they all require us to use our bodies and keep them in shape. Then, sports help us to socialize and make new friends. Next, they teach us valuable lessons about teamwork, fair play, and confidence. Lastly, but not least, sports give us a break from the stresses of daily life.
All in all, sports are a great way to stay healthy, have fun, and make new friends. I love sports!
标题:运动的乐趣
很难相信运动能给我们带来很多快乐和更多的好处。让我们来看看运动能给我们带来什么呢。
首先,运动给予我们保持活跃和健康的原因。无论是跑步、踢足球,还是游泳,它们都需要我们动用身体,保持身材。然后,运动帮助我们社交,结交新朋友。接下来,它们教会我们有关团队合作、公平竞争和自信的重要课程。最后,但同样重要的是,运动让我们摆脱日常生活的压力。
总的来说,运动是保持健康、享受乐趣和结交新朋友的好方法。我热爱运动!
范文2:中学生安全范文:
As we all know that the safety for students is very important.We should know the rules as below:
First of all, it is important to follow the school safety rules. We should always be careful when crossing the road and avoid playing with fire. Then, we should also be aware of our surroundings and report any unsafe conditions to the proper authorities. Next, it is crucial to practice good personal hygiene and stay away from bad companions. Last but not least, we should always have a backup plan in case of an emergency.
All in all, safety should be our top priority. In short, to sum up, taking care of ourselves is the best way to ensure a safe and enjoyable school experience.
众所周知,学生的安全非常重要。我们应该知道以下规则首先,遵守学校安全规则非常重要。
在过马路时要时刻小心,避免玩火。其次,我们还应该了解周围的环境,并向有关部门报告任何不安全的情况。此外,保持良好的个人卫生,远离不良伙伴也非常关键。最后但同样重要的是,我们应始终制定一份应急备用计划。总之,安全应是我们最关心的问题。
简而言之,照顾好自己才是确保安全和愉快学校生活的最佳方式。
范文3:环保话题作文
The Importance of Environmental Protection
As we all know that it’s very important to protect the environment.But how to protect our environment
Firstly, environmental protection is crucial. We need to save natural resources and reduce pollution. By recycling and reusing, we can help save the planet. Then, we need to raise awareness about the importance of environmental protection. Everyone should be aware of the impact of their actions on the planet. Next, we need to take action to protect the environment. We can plant more trees, reduce our carbon footprint, and help clean up our communities. Last but not least, we need to encourage government leaders to make environmental protection a priority. We need to push for laws that protect our planet and punish those who harm it.
All in all, environmental protection is everyone's responsibility. We must act now to ensure a sustainable future for ourselves and future generations. Let's work together to create a better world.
翻译:
环境保护的重要性
众所周知,保护环境非常重要。但是如何保护我们的环境呢?
首先,环境保护至关重要。我们需要节约自然资源并减少污染。通过回收和再利用,我们可以帮助拯救地球。其次,我们需要提高人们对环境保护重要性的认识。每个人都应该意识到自己的行为对地球的影响。接下来,我们需要采取行动来保护环境。我们可以多种树、减少碳排放、帮助清理我们的社区。最后但同样重要的一点是,我们需要鼓励政府领导人将环境保护作为优先事项。我们需要推动制定保护地球的法律,并惩罚那些伤害地球的人。
总之,环境保护是每个人的责任。我们必须立即行动起来,为自己和子孙后代确保一个可持续的未来。让我们共同努力,创造一个更好的世界。
初中英语作文常用的结尾亮点词汇或短语的例句和中文翻译:
1.环保:
In conclusion, we must work together to take effective measures to protect our environment and create a sustainable future.
总之,我们必须共同努力,采取有效措施保护我们的环境,创造可持续发展的未来。
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健康:
In brief, maintaining good health is essential for a happy and fulfilling life. We should prioritize physical well-being through 简而言之,保持身体健康是幸福和充实生活的关键。我们应该通过以下方式优先考虑身体健康:
环保:
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In conclusion, we must work together to take effective measures to protect our environment and create a sustainable future.
总之,我们必须共同努力,采取有效措施保护我们的环境,创造可持续发展的未来。
4健康:
In brief, maintaining good health is essential for a happy and fulfilling life. We should prioritize physical well-being through exercise and leading a healthy lifestyle.
简而言之,保持身体健康对于幸福和充实的生活至关重要。我们应该通过锻炼和健康的生活方式来优先考虑身体健康。
5运动:
In summary, exercise is a vital part of maintaining good health. We should actively participate in physical activities to improve our fitness and well-being.
总而言之,运动是保持身体健康的重要组成部分。我们应该积极参加体育活动,以改善我们的健康状况。
6中学生安全:
Above all, the safety of middle school students is a top priority. We must prioritize safety education and raise awareness of self-protection to ensure their well-being.
最重要的是,中学生的安全是重中之重。我们必须把安全教育放在首位,提高自我保护意识,以确保他们的健康。
7春节:
In conclusion, the Spring Festival is the most significant traditional holiday in China, celebrating family unity and the joy of reunion. Let us cherish this special time and appreciate the warmth of family gatherings.
总的来说,春节是中国最重要的传统节日,庆祝家庭团聚和团聚的欢乐。让我们珍惜这个特殊的时刻,欣赏家庭聚会的温暖。
重点高分句子1范例强化练习
正反两种观点或两方面阐述事例的:
On one hand......(一方面)
On the other hand·.....(另一方面)
阅读方面话题
On one hand, reading can expand our knowledge, allowing us to understand the culture and history of different parts of the world. 一方面,阅读能够扩展我们的知识面,让我们了解世界各地的文化和历史。On the other hand, reading can also bring us entertainment and relaxation, helping us escape from the stress of daily life.另一方面,阅读也可以带给我们娱乐和放松,帮助我们远离日常生活的压力。
旅游话题句子:
On one hand, traveling can relax us and allow us to experience different cultures and landscapes. 一方面,旅游可以让我们放松身心,体验不同的文化和风景。On the other hand, tourism can also cause environmental problems, such as garbage pollution and increased carbon emissions.另一方面,旅游也可能带来环境问题,如垃圾污染和碳排放增加。
科技:
On the one hand, technology has made our lives more convenient. 一方面,科技使我们的生活更加便捷。
On the other hand, excessive use of technology can lead to addiction and social isolation. 另一方面,过度使用科技可能导致上瘾和社会孤立。
健康饮食方面话题:
On one hand, good eating habits are crucial for physical health.一方面,良好的饮食习惯对于身体健康至关重要。
On the other hand, some people think that healthy eating habits may be too hard to maintain.另一方面,有些人认为,健康的饮食习惯可能很难维持。
成功:
On the one hand, success brings a sense of accomplishment and validation. 一方面,成功会带来一种成就感和肯定感。On the other hand, defining success solely in terms of material wealth can lead to unhappiness. 另一方面,仅以物质财富来定义成功可能会导致不幸福。
教育:
On the one hand, education is essential for personal and societal development. 一方面,教育对于个人和社会的发展至关重要。On the other hand, the education system can sometimes fail to provide students with meaningful learning experiences. 另一方面,教育系统有时可能无法为学生提供有意义的学习体验。
重点高分句子2范例强化练习
“lt is+形容词+for sb to do sth”结构的句子,涉及健康、运动、环保和中学生的安全问题:
It is good for us to eat/keep a balanced diet for better health.(为了更好的健康,吃/保持均衡的饮食对我们有好处。)
It is essential for students to practice safe habits on the road.(学生们在路上养成安全习惯是必要的。)
It is important for us to reduce waste and protect natural resources.(对我们来说,减少浪费和保护自然资源很重要。)
It is beneficial for students to take part in sports activities for physical fitness.(学生们参加体育活动对身体健康有益。)
It is crucial/important for us to stay healthy by drinking plenty of water every day.(对我们来说,每天多喝水保持健康至关重要。)
英语作文基本功1.英语从简单句过渡到复合句:
简单句:I enjoy reading books. (我喜欢读书。)
复合句:I enjoy reading books, especially those written by my favorite authors. (我喜欢读书,尤其是那些我最喜欢的作家写的书。)
简单句:He is a talented artist. (他是一位有天赋的艺术家。)
复合句:He is a talented artist who has won numerous/lots of awards for his paintings. (他是一位有天赋的艺术家,他的画作曾多次获奖。)
简单句:She sings beautifully. (她唱得很美。)
复合句:She sings beautifully, and her voice is often compared to that of a professional singer. (她唱得很美,她的声音经常被比作专业歌手的声音。)
简单句:They are traveling to Europe this summer. (他们今年夏天要去欧洲旅行。)
复合句:They are traveling to Europe this summer, where they plan to visit several countries and cities. (他们今年夏天要去欧洲旅行,计划参观几个国家和城市。)
简单句:She is a successful businesswoman. (她是一位成功的女商人。)
复合句:She is a successful businesswoman who has built her own empire in the industry. (她是一位成功的女商人,在这个行业中建立了自己的商业帝国。)
英语作文基本功2,连词衔接的应用(丰富自己词汇,写作时灵活应用)
However:上下句意思转折
上句:The movie was highly praised by the critics.
下句:However, the general audience was not as enthusiastic翻译:这部电影受到了评论家的高度赞扬。然而,普通观众没有那么热情。
Therefore:上下句意思因果
上句:He studied hard for the exam.
下句:Therefore, he passed the exam brilliantly..翻译:他为考试努力学习。因此,他出色地通过了考试。
Moreover:上下句意思递进
上句:She is a talented pianist.
下句:Moreover, she also writes her own music.
翻译:她是一个有天赋的钢琴家。此外,她还创作自己的音乐。
In addition:上下句意思并列
上句:He has a great sense of humor.
下句:In addition, he is very kind and friendly.
翻译:他很有幽默感。此外,他非常友好和亲切。
Finally:上下句意思总结或结论
上句:We visited several places of interest in the city.
下句:Finally, we ended our trip at the famous museum.翻译:我们在城市里参观了几个名胜古迹。最后,我们在著名的博物馆结束了旅行。
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英语写作基本功3,三种复合句的应用。
宾语从句:
She suggested that we should go for a walk. 她建议我们去散步。
I am certain that he will win the game. 我确信他会赢得比赛。
We don't know whether she will come or not. 我们不知道她是否会来。
翻译:她建议我们应该去散步。我确信他会赢得比赛。我们不知道她是否会来。
状语从句:
Although it was raining, we still decided to go out. 虽然下雨了,我们还是决定出门。
Once you start, you must continue. 一旦开始,就必须继续。
Even though he is rich, he is always humble. 尽管他很有钱,但他总是很谦虚。
翻译:虽然下雨了,我们还是决定出门。一旦开始,就必须继续。尽管他很有钱,但他总是很谦虚。
定语从句:
The book that I read yesterday was very interesting. 我昨天读的那本书非常有趣。
I like the person who is always smiling. 我喜欢总是面带微笑的人。
This is the place where my grandparents used to live. 这是我祖父母以前住的地方。
翻译:我昨天读的那本书非常有趣。我喜欢总是面带微笑的人。这是我祖父母以前住的地方。
追根溯源理解句子的逻辑关系
主系表”是从句子的功能和结构来分析句子的。具体来说:
主谓宾结构:这是句子最基本的结构,其中“主语”是动作的执行者,“谓语”是动作,“宾语”是动作的承受者。
主语:通常是句子中的名词或代词,代表句子中的主要元素。
谓语:动词,表示主语执行的动作或状态。
宾语:名词或代词,作为主语动作的承受者。
主系表结构:这种结构中,谓语是系动词(如be, become, seem等),用于连接主语和表语,表示主语的状态或特征。
主语:句子中的名词或代词。
系动词:表示主语状态的动词。
表语:描述主语状态或特征的词语。
以下是五种常用句子结构举例分析:
主谓结构:
He laughed. (主语:he,谓语:laughed)他笑了。
They are running. (主语:they,谓语:are running)
他们正在跑步。
I feel happy. (主语:I,谓语:feel happy-系词+形容词作谓语)
我感到开心。
2 主谓宾结构:
She teaches English. (主语:she,谓语:teaches,宾语:English)
We like playing basketball. (主语:we,谓语:like,宾语:playing basketball-动名词短语作宾语。)
She teaches English. (主语:she,谓语:teaches,宾语:English)她教英语。
We like playing basketball. (主语:we,谓语:like,宾语:playing basketball动名词短语作宾语)
我们喜欢打篮球。
3.主谓双宾结构:
He showed them his photos. (主语:he,谓语:showed,间接宾语:them,直接宾语:his photos)
他向他们展示了自己的照片。
She sent us a letter. (主语:she,谓语:sent,间接宾语:us,直接宾语:a letter)
她给我们寄了一封信。
He teaches the children math. (主语:he,谓语:teaches,间接宾语:the children,直接宾语:math)
他教孩子们数学。
4主谓复合宾结构(宾语+宾补):
They found her crying in the corner. (主语:they,谓语:found,宾语:her crying in the corner介词短语可以在单独划分为修饰语一类)
他们发现她在角落里哭泣。
We saw him playing in the park. (主语:we,谓语:saw,宾语:him playing in the park介词短语可以在单独划分为修饰语一类)
我们看见他在公园里玩耍。
She heard her name being called. (主语:she,谓语:heard,宾语补足语:her name being called)
她听到有人叫她的名字。
5主系表结构(并分析其中短语成分):
The apple is red. (主语:the apple,系动词:is,表语:red形容词作表语)这个苹果是红色的。
She is a doctor. (主语:she,系动词:is,表语:a doctor)doctor名词作表语。她是一名医生。
The food tastes delicious. (主语:the food,系动词:tastes,表语:delicious)(“delicious”是形容词作表语)
这食物味道很美味。
接下来,句子分为三类:Be 动词类,there be 类,和实义动词类,这是从动词的类型和功能来理解句子结构的。
Be 动词类:这种句子以be动词(如am, is, are等)作为谓语,表示存在、状态或身份。具体可以理解为,什么是什么,什么人或物在哪里。留意常用一般,过去和将来三种时态的自然转换。
比如表示存在:We were in New York last week,and we are in Beijing these days for business.Next year,we’ll be in Tokyo because we’ll have to deal with something important.我们上周在纽约,这几天在北京出差。明年,我们将去东京,因为我们要处理一些重要的事情。
Be表示身份和状态。
We are teenagers,we are very happy because we are in China.我们是青少年,我们很高兴因为我们在中国。
We are students at this university.We are always energetic and passionate, and we are always ready to work hard for the motherland.我们是这所大学的学生。我们总是充满活力和激情,我们总是/时刻准备为祖国努力工作。
There be 类:这种句型以“there be”开头,表示某处存在某物或某人。其中“there”是引导词,“be”是谓语,“名词”是主语。there be 基本结构为:there be+人或物+地点。
一般现在时态:
There is a book on the table. 桌子上有一本书。
There are three apples in the bowl. 碗里有三个苹果。
There is no milk in the glass. 杯子里没有牛奶。
一般过去时态:
There was a cat in the room yesterday. 昨天房间里有一只猫。
There were five children in the playground last week. 上周操场上还有五个孩子。
There was no sugar in the jar this morning. 今天早上罐子里没有糖。
一般将来时态:
There will be a party next Friday. 下周五将有一个派对。
There are going to be 20 guests at the wedding. 婚礼上将有20位客人。
There won't be any rain this weekend. 这个周末不会有雨。
(there be 的变式句型,请参考梦想词场K12公众号内容句子分层次讲解系列)
实义动词类:这种句子以实义动词(即不是be动词或有特殊意义的动词)作为谓语,表示实际的动作或行为。
现在进行时态:I am studying for the upcoming exam.
(我正在为即将到来的考试而学习。)
一般现在时态:I study English every day.(我每天学习英语。)
一般过去时态:He studied hard for the test last night.
(他昨晚为考试努力学习了。)
一般将来时态:I will study abroad after graduation.
(毕业后我将出国留学。)
过去进行时态:They were studying for the exam when I came in.(我进来的时候,他们正在为考试学习。)
现在完成时态:I have studied English for three years.
(我已经学了三年的英语了。)
通过这样的分类,人们可以从不同的角度深入理解句子的结构和功能,进一步掌握英语的语法和用法。
五种常用简单句转换为符合句等
主谓结构:
He smiled. (他笑了。)
She laughed. (她笑了。)
They cried. (他们哭了。)
转换为复合句:
He smiled because he was happy. (他开心地笑了。)
She laughed when she heard the joke.
(她听到那个笑话时笑了。)
They cried because they were sad.
(他们伤心地哭了。)
主谓宾结构:
He played the guitar. (他弹吉他。)
She wrote a letter. (她写了一封信。)
They read books. (他们读书。)
转换为复合句:
He played the guitar for his friend’s birthday.
(他为朋友的生日弹了吉他。)
She wrote a letter to her parents every week.
(她每周给父母写一封信。)
They read books in the library every Saturday.
(他们每周六在图书馆读书。)
主谓双宾结构:
He gave me a book. (他给我一本书。)
She taught us English. (她教我们英语。)
They sold them the car. (他们把车卖给了他们。)
转换为复杂点句子:留意介词短语后置的情况
He gave me a book as a present for my birthday. (他给我一本书作为生日礼物。)
She taught us English during the summer vacation. (暑假期间她教我们英语。)
They sold them the car at a discounted price.
(他们以折扣价把车卖给了他们。)
主谓复合宾结构(宾语+宾补):留意非谓语
He found her crying in the corner. (他发现她在角落里哭泣。)
They saw him playing in the park. (他们看见他在公园里玩耍。)
We heard her sing a song. (我们听见她唱了一首歌。)
转换为复合句:介短和状语从句
He found her crying in the corner because she was sad. (他发现她在角落里哭泣,因为她很难过。)
They saw him playing in the park when they walked by. (他们走过时看见他在公园里玩耍。)
We heard her sing a song that she had written herself. (我们听见她唱了一首自己写的歌。)
主系表结构(并分析其中短语成分):
The apple is red. (苹果是红色的。)
She is a doctor. (她是一名医生。)
The cat is on the mat. (猫在垫子上。)
转换为复合句:
The apple that is on the table is red. (桌子上那个苹果是红色的。)(定语从句)
She is a doctor who works at the local hospital. (她在当地医院工作,是一名医生。)(定语从句)
The cat that is playing with the ball is on the mat. (正在玩球的猫在垫子上。)(定语从句)
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