应用文写作
目 录
01 易错陷阱（4大陷阱）
02 举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误，汉式英语易混易错点
【易错点提醒四】卷面易混易错点
03 易错题通关
易错陷阱1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。但近年高考也越来约多的涉及开放式或半开放式作文的考查。即命题人只给出一个话题，而不限制写作内容。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁，避免格式错误，如将图表类作文写成建议信等。
根据写作内容，明确文章结构，做到条理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生没有考虑到结构这一点，只是想到哪，就写到哪，造成文章显得无层次感。或者盲目分段，达到五六段，显得结构混乱，影响得分。一般应用文大都采用“三段式”写作模式，从整体布局先胜一筹。另外，文章开头应当开门见山，直接点题，结尾与开头首尾呼应，使文章整体更加和谐统一。
易错陷阱2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。考生使用词汇过于笼统、信息指向不明确，句子平淡无奇，全是简单句的堆砌，没有高级句式或经常的词汇和短语，毫无亮点。而有的考生为了追求所谓的长句、高级句式，一篇文章充斥的都是复杂的长难句式，阅读体验较差，也会影响得分。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
易错陷阱4：卷面易混易错点。
【分析】
整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。
【易错点提醒一】 体裁格式、结构易混易错点
书信类 建议信、申请信、感谢信、邀请信、求助信、投诉信、道歉信、祝贺信
短文类 演讲稿、通知、投稿
记叙文 记人叙事类
说明文 说明事物类、图画、图表作文
议论文 议论观点、态度和解决方法类
【例1】 （2023·湖南长沙一中阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校图书馆就即将到来的读书节正在展开对 “Favourite Book Genres for This Year’s Reading Festival”的调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文，内容包括：
Genres Proportion
Biographies (人物传记) ≈ 55%
Political commentaries (评论) ≈ 58%
Classic literature ≈ 60%
1.调查结果； 2.喜爱理由； 3.相关建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Report on Favourite Book Genres for This Year’s Reading Festival
According to the survey conducted by our library, the following is an analysis of students’ favourite book genres for this year’s Reading Festival.
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易错分析：审题不清易错，要求中出现给出建议变单纯按照建议信的模式写容易错。
【答案】
Report on Favourite Book Genres for This Year’s Reading Festival
According to the survey conducted by our library, the following is an analysis of students’ favourite book genres for this year’s Reading Festival.
The survey reveals that students have diverse preferences, with approximately 55% of students favoring biographies, nearly 58% preferring political commentaries, and around 60% fond of classic literature. It is reported that biographies inspire readers with valuable personalities of remarkable people. Political commentaries provide critical analysis and multiple perspectives on political issues, encouraging students to think critically. The enduring appeal of classic literature transport readers to diverse settings and evoke emotions and reflections.
As classic literature emerges as the top favorite, we recommend an exhibition showcasing classic literary works, encouraging students to explore the rich storytelling and foster a deep love for literature. Let’s celebrate the joy of reading this year by immersing ourselves in the timeless beauty of classic literature!
【变式1】（2023·安徽安庆·七中模拟预测）
假定你是李华, 在美国迪士尼乐园 (Disneyland) 游玩时丢了钱包，该园的工作人员Henry帮你找到钱包并设法还给了你。请你写封信向他表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 说明写信原因； 2. 简述事情经过； 3. 表达谢意。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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易错分析：单纯写出感谢信的经典句型，忽略要点要求中的“简述事情经过”。
【答案】
Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua. With the deepest gratitude, I’m writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you for your help.
When I enjoyed my trip in Disneyland yesterday, I discovered my wallet was missing. I was totally at a loss where I could have left it. It contained all the money, my identity card and passport, without which I would get into great trouble. So I felt extremely worried and upset. I had no choice but to turn to you. You promised me that you would manage to find it back. Luckily, you found it, and sent it to my hotel this morning. I do appreciate your kindness.
Thanks again for your help. Wish you all the best.
【变式2】（2023·福建龙岩·高三阶段练习）
假如你是李华，上周你校举办了英语音乐节活动，请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的； 2. 展示内容； 3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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易错分析：思维固化，总是以书信格式开头或结尾易错，内容要点易忽略。
【答案】
Last week, our school held an English Music Festival, aiming to improve our English-speaking ability and promote cross-cultural understanding.
The festival included various activities such as singing contests, speech competitions, and band performances. There was also a display of traditional British food and a chance to try traditional Chinese dishes. The response to the festival has been overwhelmingly positive. Students were excited to have the opportunity to use their English-speaking skills in a fun and relaxed environment.
Overall, the festival was a great success, with everyone involved enjoying themselves and taking something valuable away from the experience.
【变式3】（2023·广西·统考三模）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣，计划明年暑假来中国参观，希望你帮他推荐一个适合去的城市。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐的城市及原因； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
易错分析：审题不严谨，把推荐信写成单纯的邀请信，忽略“推荐”的要点。
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Knowing your keen interest in ancient Chinese architecture, I shall recommend to you Beijing, a city with precious architectural heritage.
First of all, the Great Wall is particularly prominent. When standing on it, you cannot help thinking how the ancient Chinese could finish the construction without any advanced technology. Additionally, at the heart of Beijing stands the Forbidden City, which is the largest wooden palace in the world and has a history of over 600 years. In Beijing, you can also experience other various styles of Chinese buildings.
Hope my recommendation can be helpful. And eager to meet you this summer in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua
【易错点提醒二】 语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
普通 好词
good excellent, amazing, magnificent, splendid, wonderful
so therefore, hence, as a consequence, as a result
very extremely, exceedingly, intensely
know recognize, realize, tell, pick out
happen occur, take place
people individuals, characters, folks
【变式1】因此，我们最好使用某种便宜的东西。
【低分】So, we had better use something inexpensive.
易错分析：单纯字面翻译，语言平淡无奇，没有任何两点。
【升级】Therefore, we had better make full use of something inexpensive.
【变式2】要不是Jack的耐心和鼓励，我就不会取得这么大的进步。
【低分】Jack was very patient and he often encouraged me. Otherwise, I wouldn’t have progressed so much.
易错分析：句子平铺直叙，语言平淡无亮点。
【升级】Had it not been for Jack’s patience and encouragement, I wouldn’t have made such great progress.
【变式3】当你站在上面，你会情不自禁地想到古代中国人民是如何在没有先进的技术情况下完成它们的。
【低分】When you stand on it, you will think how the ancient Chinese could finish the construction when they didn’t have advanced technology.
【升级】When standing on it, you cannot help thinking how the ancient Chinese could finish the construction without any advanced technology.
【易错点提醒三】 句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】He want to come to China for a visit.他想要来中国参观。
易错分析：基础知识和词汇掌握不牢。主谓一致不熟悉。
【详解】低级语法错误和单词拼写错误是文章扣分的一大因素。这些基础词汇和语法的熟练运用需要积累大量知识。
【变式1】 I am writting to...我给你写信......;
易错分析：单词的变化形式掌握不牢，多由于发音不准造成。
【详解】write过去式wrote; 过去分词written; 现在分词writing。
【变式2】 I am looking forward to see you again
易错分析：固定短语掌握存在知识漏洞。
【详解】下列短语中，to是介词，后面需要跟动词的ing形式。get down to开始认真做；stick to坚持；be addicted to沉溺于；be devoted to致力于等。
【变式3】He sat there, with his eyes focusing on the ceiling.他坐在那儿，眼睛盯着天花板。
易错分析：短语的基本用法掌握不牢出现汉语式英语。
【详解】focus one’s eyes/attention “集中注意力于”。focus与眼睛之间为动宾关系，应改为：He sat there, with his eyes focused on the ceiling.
（2023·广东·高三广州市第一中学校联考）
假定你是李华，你校交换生John给你发邮件说练习中国书法(calligraphy)太难，他深受挫败，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 鼓励坚持下去并说明原因；
2. 给出如何学好书法的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
Dear John,
You said you had trouble in practicing Chinese calligraphy, which made you upset. I hope you don’t give up halfway. If you stick it out, I am sure it will bring you a peaceful mind and a unique cultural experience.
As to how to improve, firstly, you should strictly follow your teacher’s instructions and make adjustments whenever necessary. Secondly, always observe the structure of Chinese characters when practicing. Only when you’ve understood it can you write it well. Hope my advice will be of some help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给交换生John写一封电子邮件，鼓励他坚持练习中国书法，说明原因，并给出如何学好书法的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确定：be sure→be bound to
首先：firstly→to begin with
应该：should→be supposed to
帮助：help→assistance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：As to how to improve, firstly, you should strictly follow your teacher’s instructions and make adjustments whenever necessary.
拓展句：As to how you can improve your calligraphy, firstly, you should strictly follow your teacher’s instructions and make adjustments whenever necessary.
[高分句型1] You said you had trouble in practicing Chinese calligraphy, which made you upset.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Only when you’ve understood it can you write it well.（运用了when时间状语从句和部分倒装）
（2023·内蒙古赤峰·高三期中）
假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
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【答案】
Dear Mary,
It’s great to hear from you. Knowing that you are seeking advice on how to effectively read a book, I’m more than delighted to share some insights with you.
Undoubtedly, pre-reading comes the first place. Before diving into a book, it is suggested that you take a few moments to skim through introductions or summaries available. This will give you a general idea of the book’s main idea. In addition, you are supposed to highlight key points and jot down any question that arises while reading, thus staying engaged. Finally, after finishing a book, it is necessary to reflect on what you’ve learned to reinforce your understanding.
I hope these tips are of help to you. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to reach out. Happy reading!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mary回一封邮件，就如何有效地阅读一本书给她提建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →glad
此外：in addition→ what’s more
建议：advice →suggestion
有帮助的：of help →helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Undoubtedly, pre-reading comes the first place.
拓展句：There is no doubt that pre-reading comes the first place.
【高分句型1】Before diving into a book, it is suggested that you take a few moments to skim through introductions or summaries available.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
【高分句型2】In addition, you are supposed to highlight key points and jot down any question that arises while reading, thus staying engaged.（运用了that引导的定语从句和状语从句中的省略以及现在分词短语作状语）
（2023·黑龙江大庆·高三铁人中学校考期中）
第三届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2023年10月在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按以下要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
要求：
（1）热情、有礼
（2）熟悉中国传统文化；
（3）英语口语流利。
生词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam
Thank you for reading my letter. As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.
All our citizens are looking forward to this special event. First of all, I promise I will, with great passion, try my best to serve our distinguished guests from home and abroad politely. Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Chinese history, especially traditional culture, which enables me to spread our splendid culture. What's more, I'm good at English and Chinese, which will play an important role in communication during the forum.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will try my best if I'm accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于第三届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2023年10月在中国举办，组委会向社会征集志愿者这一情况，按以下要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热情：passion→ enthusiasm
丰富的：rich →abundant
总之：To sum up→ In a word
重要的：important→ vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All our citizens are looking forward to this special event.
拓展句：All our citizens are looking forward to this special event, which can make us more confident on the world stage.
【高分句型1】Besides, I have a rich knowledge of Chinese history, especially traditional culture, which enables me to spread our splendid culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】As the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation is coming, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.（运用了As引导的时间状语从句。）
（2023·福建厦门·高三校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，第4届亚残运会(Asian Para Games)正在火热进行中，你从网上看到组委会正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信，包括下列要点：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 说明你的优势；
3. 表示你希望被录用。
注意：
1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have learned that volunteers for 4th Asian Para Games are wanted. I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m a Senior 3 student, and I believe I am qualified for the position. These years, I have been on several exchange programs in America, so I am confident with my communication skills in English. What’s more, as a super fan of sports, with my love and knowledge of sports as well as Chinese culture and history, I can fulfill my role not only as a successful coordinator but also a cultural ambassador to spread the splendid Chinese culture. In addition, the voluntary service will offer a precious chance to contribute to our society, which appeals to me very much.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
Faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，第4届亚残运会(Asian Para Games)正在火热进行中，你从网上看到组委会正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
招募：want→recruit
感谢地：grateful→thankful
此外：in addition→besides
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：These years, I have been on several exchange programs in America, so I am confident with my communication skills in English.
拓展句：Having been on several exchange programs in America there years, I am confident with my communication skills in English.
[高分句型1] I have learned that English volunteers for 4th Asian Para Games are wanted. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
（2023·湖南岳阳·高三校联考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你班将为美国交换生Barry举行欢迎派对。请你给他写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 举行派对原因；
2. 具体事宜安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Barry,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Barry,
How is everything going
On behalf of our class, I would like to extend a warm welcome to you as our new classmate! To help you get to know the classmates better and to make you feel at home in our school, we are planning a welcome party for you. The party will be held in the school auditorium at 6:00 p. m. on Friday. We have arranged a variety of activities, including playing games, singing songs, and sharing food.
If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国交换生Barry写封邮件，告知他即将为他举行的欢迎派对。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→ in name of
安排：arrange→ schedule
各种各样的：a variety of → various
联系：contact→ get in touch with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We have arranged a variety of activities, including playing games, singing songs, and sharing food.
拓展句：We have arranged a variety of activities, which include playing games, singing songs, and sharing food.
【高分句型1】To help you get to know the classmates better and to make you feel at home in our school, we are planning a welcome party for you.（运用了不定式作目的状语）
【高分句型2】 If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·全国·高三阶段练习）
近期因疫情，同学们不得不居家上网课，据校学生会发布的相关调查显示，一部分青少年在上网课期间缺乏计划与自律，感到焦虑，甚至会沉迷互联网游戏，熬夜刷短视频，闲聊等，疏忽了学业，并受到父母责骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文，投稿校报英语专栏。
内容主要包括: 1. 简述调查反馈；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议忠告。
注意: 1. 词数 100-120 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：epidemic 流行病, 疫情
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【答案】
Recently, due to the epidemic, students have to take online classes at home.
According to a survey released by the school student union, some teenagers lack planning and self-discipline during online classes, feel anxious, and even become addicted to online games, stay up late to watch short videos, chat, and so on. They are neglecting their studies, scolded by their parents.
As teenagers, it is truly regrettable to disappoint the great youth. Addiction to the internet is harmful to physical and mental health.
I think we should limit our internet time. The internet is only used to solve learning problems. Conditions permitting, engage in more physical municate more with parents at home to enhance family relationships.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。近期因疫情，同学们不得不居家上网课，据校学生会发布的相关调查显示，一部分青少年在上网课期间缺乏计划与自律，感到焦虑，甚至会沉迷互联网游戏，熬夜刷短视频，闲聊等，疏忽了学业，并受到父母责骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文，投稿校报英语专栏。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真正地：truly→authentically
解决：solve→settle
参加：engage in→take part in
改善：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
同意句替换
原句：Conditions permitting, engage in more physical exercise.
拓展句：If conditions permit, engage in more physical exercise.
【高分句型1】As teenagers, it is truly regrettable to disappoint the great youth. (运用了it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语)
【高分句型2】Conditions permitting, engage in more physical exercise. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
（2023·全国·高三校联考期中）
假定你校英语俱乐部将举行一场题为“The Internet, Good or Bad for English Learning ”的英语辩论赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括：1. 你的观点；
2. 你的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 The Internet, Good or Bad for English Learning
There are different opinions among people as to learning English on the internet. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of it. The reasons are as follows.
Its advantages are apparent. First and foremost, it’s convenient to learn on the internet because we can learn at any time anywhere. Moreover, the internet allows us to learn whatever we like outside the classroom. Finally, we can also absorb all kinds of resources, which is of great benefit to our study.
All in all, there is no denying that learning English on the internet has many advantages. Let’s make full use of the internet to learn English.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部将举行一场题为“The Internet, Good or Bad for English Learning ”的英语辩论赛，要求考生写一篇发言稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
观点：opinion → view
在我看来：as far as I am concerned→in my opinion
明显的：apparent→ obvious
此外：moreover→ besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are different opinions among people as to learning English on the internet.
拓展句：There are different opinions among people when it comes to learning English on the internet.
【高分句型1】Moreover, the internet allows us to learn whatever we like outside the classroom.（运用了whatever引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Finally, we can also absorb all kinds of resources, which is of great benefit to our study.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
（2023·浙江温州·统考一模）
假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：
1.尝试方法：
2.请求指导。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Marcus,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Marcus,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to seek your guidance on a problem I have been facing while reading foreign magazines. Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
I have tried using online translation tools and looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, but these methods have not yielded the desired results. I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines.
Would it be possible for us to schedule a meeting or a call to discuss this further I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you may have.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：1.尝试方法：2.请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法：method→means
提高：improve→enhance
感谢：appreciate→thank
建议：tip→suggestion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
拓展句：Although I have tried various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
[高分句型1] I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you may have.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
（2023·河南信阳·统考一模）
《中国日报》正在开展以“Should We Read Chinese Classics ”为题的讨论，你受托对你校中学生读书类型进行了一次调查。请根据以下调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.名著阅读现状；
2.你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Should We Read Chinese Classics
Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read. The details are as follows.
35 percent of the students prefer to read cartoons while 30 percent of the students like to read newspapers and magazines. Some students spend much time in reading online novels. Surprisingly, only ten percent of them are enthusiastic about Chinese classics.
In fact, reading classics is rewarding. It is beneficial to character development and personal growth. Additionally, as the combination of great writing and wisdom, classics shouldn’t be left to gather dust on shelves. From my perspective, we should read more classics and spread our traditional culture to the world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。《中国日报》正在开展以“Should We Read Chinese Classics ”为题的讨论，要求考生根据受委托对考生所在中学的中学生的读书类型进行调查的结果，写一篇短文给《中国日报》投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进行：conduct →carry out
喜欢：be enthusiastic about →be fond of
实际上：in fact →actually
此外：additionally →besides
2.句式拓展
用定语从句合并句子
原句：Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read. The details are as follows.
拓展句：Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read, whose details are as follows.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】35 percent of the students prefer to read cartoons while 30 percent of the students like to read newspapers and magazines.（运用了while连接两个并列句）
（2023·辽宁大连·大连八中校考三模）
学校英文报正在开展以“How to Spend Our National Holiday”为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
如何度过国庆节调查结果
方式 学习 娱乐 社会实践，志愿活动
人数百分比 60% 15% 25%
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 How to Spend Our National Holiday
The National Holiday is a special time for us students to have our own life. As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.
Surprisingly, students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%. 15% of students think the holiday is an occasion for them to relax themselves, enjoying movies or playing computer games. To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%. The figures in the form show students attach great importance to study. Meanwhile more and more students have interest in exercising their ability and serving others.
From my perspective, our National Holiday should be a meaningful time for us students to enjoy ourselves or learn something beyond the classrooms. Taking part in some social activities is a good choice for us students to improve ourselves.
【导语】本文是图表作文。要求考生结合表格中的内容写一篇英文短文，包括“如何度过国庆节”的调查结果，并给予相关评论以及建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来：from my perspective →in my opinion
参加：take part in→participate in
有意义的：meaningful →fulfilling
提升：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To our delight, the percent of the students taking part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
拓展句：To our delight, the percent of the students who take part in social practice or voluntary activities is 25%.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the form shows, students choose different ways to spend our National Holiday.（由as引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The figures in the form show students who spend their holiday in learning account for 60%.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句和who引导的限定性定语从句）应用文写作
目 录
01 易错陷阱（4大陷阱）
02 举一反三
【易错点提醒一】审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点
【易错点提醒二】语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【易错点提醒三】句子错误，汉式英语易混易错点
【易错点提醒四】卷面易混易错点
03 易错题通关
易错陷阱1：审题不清、格式、结构易混易错点。
【分析】
应用文中主要以以考查各类书信或电子邮件为主，如建议信、申请信、感谢信等。但近年高考也越来约多的涉及开放式或半开放式作文的考查。即命题人只给出一个话题，而不限制写作内容。有的考生盲目套用所谓写作模板，文不对题，造成扣分降档。因此，考生要想获得高分，需要认真审题，明确写作体裁，避免格式错误，如将图表类作文写成建议信等。
根据写作内容，明确文章结构，做到条理清晰，布局合理。而很多考生没有考虑到结构这一点，只是想到哪，就写到哪，造成文章显得无层次感。或者盲目分段，达到五六段，显得结构混乱，影响得分。一般应用文大都采用“三段式”写作模式，从整体布局先胜一筹。另外，文章开头应当开门见山，直接点题，结尾与开头首尾呼应，使文章整体更加和谐统一。
易错陷阱2：语言平淡或复杂易混易错点。
【分析】
良好的开端就成功了一半。好的开头和结尾是留给阅卷老师的第一印象。考生使用词汇过于笼统、信息指向不明确，句子平淡无奇，全是简单句的堆砌，没有高级句式或经常的词汇和短语，毫无亮点。而有的考生为了追求所谓的长句、高级句式，一篇文章充斥的都是复杂的长难句式，阅读体验较差，也会影响得分。因此，应当运用精彩的开头和结尾，多变的句式和词汇，有了风头、猪肚和豹尾，自然会提升文章的整体档次。
易错陷阱3：句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点。
【分析】
考生因基础词汇和句型掌握不牢，导致无法正确运用正确的语言，把所找出的要点表达清楚。为突出主题，减少错误，除了在平时学习中大量积累词汇、短语和句型外，在造句时还应当使用与话题相关的词语和句型。最后检查单词拼写、语法以及衔接等方面是否存在错误。
易错陷阱4：卷面易混易错点。
【分析】
整洁优美的卷面会成为加分的一个因素。有点考生不注意规范书写，字母大小随意，字迹潦草不清，乱涂乱画，书写马虎等都会给阅卷者留下“脏、乱、差”等印象。
【易错点提醒一】 体裁格式、结构易混易错点
书信类 建议信、申请信、感谢信、邀请信、求助信、投诉信、道歉信、祝贺信
短文类 演讲稿、通知、投稿
记叙文 记人叙事类
说明文 说明事物类、图画、图表作文
议论文 议论观点、态度和解决方法类
【例1】 （2023·湖南长沙一中阶段练习）假定你是李华，你所在的国际学校图书馆就即将到来的读书节正在展开对 “Favourite Book Genres for This Year’s Reading Festival”的调查。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文，内容包括：
Genres Proportion
Biographies (人物传记) ≈ 55%
Political commentaries (评论) ≈ 58%
Classic literature ≈ 60%
1.调查结果； 2.喜爱理由； 3.相关建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Report on Favourite Book Genres for This Year’s Reading Festival
According to the survey conducted by our library, the following is an analysis of students’ favourite book genres for this year’s Reading Festival.
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【变式1】（2023·安徽安庆·七中模拟预测）
假定你是李华, 在美国迪士尼乐园 (Disneyland) 游玩时丢了钱包，该园的工作人员Henry帮你找到钱包并设法还给了你。请你写封信向他表示感谢。要点如下：
1. 说明写信原因； 2. 简述事情经过； 3. 表达谢意。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【变式2】（2023·福建龙岩·高三阶段练习）
假如你是李华，上周你校举办了英语音乐节活动，请你为校英语报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的； 2. 展示内容； 3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【变式3】（2023·广西·统考三模）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Chris在来信中提到他对中国古代建筑很感兴趣，计划明年暑假来中国参观，希望你帮他推荐一个适合去的城市。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.推荐的城市及原因； 2.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【易错点提醒二】 语言平淡或复杂易混易错点
【例2】
普通 好词
good excellent, amazing, magnificent, splendid, wonderful
so therefore, hence, as a consequence, as a result
very extremely, exceedingly, intensely
know recognize, realize, tell, pick out
happen occur, take place
people individuals, characters, folks
【变式1】因此，我们最好使用某种便宜的东西。
【变式2】要不是Jack的耐心和鼓励，我就不会取得这么大的进步。
【变式3】当你站在上面，你会情不自禁地想到古代中国人民是如何在没有先进的技术情况下完成它们的。
【易错点提醒三】 句子错误、汉式英语易混易错点
【例3】He want to come to China for a visit.他想要来中国参观。
【变式1】 I am writting to...我给你写信......;
【变式2】 I am looking forward to see you again
【变式3】He sat there, with his eyes focusing on the ceiling.他坐在那儿，眼睛盯着天花板。
（2023·广东·高三广州市第一中学校联考）
假定你是李华，你校交换生John给你发邮件说练习中国书法(calligraphy)太难，他深受挫败，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 鼓励坚持下去并说明原因；
2. 给出如何学好书法的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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（2023·内蒙古赤峰·高三期中）
假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary来信就如何有效地阅读一本书向你征求意见。请你给她回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
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（2023·黑龙江大庆·高三铁人中学校考期中）
第三届“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛将于2023年10月在中国举办。组委会向社会征集志愿者。假设你是新华中学学生李华，请按以下要求给组委会写一封应聘信。
要求：
（1）热情、有礼
（2）熟悉中国传统文化；
（3）英语口语流利。
生词：“一带一路”国际合作高峰论坛 the Belt and Road Forum for International Cooperation
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2023·福建厦门·高三校考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，第4届亚残运会(Asian Para Games)正在火热进行中，你从网上看到组委会正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信，包括下列要点：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 说明你的优势；
3. 表示你希望被录用。
注意：
1.词数不少于80；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Faithfully,
Li Hua
（2023·湖南岳阳·高三校联考阶段练习）
假定你是李华，你班将为美国交换生Barry举行欢迎派对。请你给他写封邮件，内容如下：
1. 举行派对原因；
2. 具体事宜安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Barry,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
（2023·全国·高三阶段练习）
近期因疫情，同学们不得不居家上网课，据校学生会发布的相关调查显示，一部分青少年在上网课期间缺乏计划与自律，感到焦虑，甚至会沉迷互联网游戏，熬夜刷短视频，闲聊等，疏忽了学业，并受到父母责骂。请就此现象写一篇英语短文，投稿校报英语专栏。
内容主要包括: 1. 简述调查反馈；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议忠告。
注意: 1. 词数 100-120 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：epidemic 流行病, 疫情
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（2023·全国·高三校联考期中）
假定你校英语俱乐部将举行一场题为“The Internet, Good or Bad for English Learning ”的英语辩论赛，请你写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括：1. 你的观点；
2. 你的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（2023·浙江温州·统考一模）
假定你是李华，在外刊阅读中遇到了困难，尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：
1.尝试方法：
2.请求指导。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Marcus,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（2023·河南信阳·统考一模）
《中国日报》正在开展以“Should We Read Chinese Classics ”为题的讨论，你受托对你校中学生读书类型进行了一次调查。请根据以下调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.名著阅读现状；
2.你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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（2023·辽宁大连·大连八中校考三模）
学校英文报正在开展以“How to Spend Our National Holiday”为题的讨论。请根据表格中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
如何度过国庆节调查结果
方式 学习 娱乐 社会实践，志愿活动
人数百分比 60% 15% 25%
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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