期末作文宝典-提高版 学案 2023-2024学年外研版英语八年级上册（无答案）

提高版----分类作文一 建议信
1. How to learn English
【写作任务】
假如你是来自英国的语言博士Diana，一个中国中学生Lingling给你写信(信的内容见课本P5)，向你寻求学习英语的方法。请你根据所给提示给Lingling写一封回信，给她提一些建议。
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文(书信)；信的主体部分为说明文 时态：一般现在时；人称：向对方提建议用第二人称
列提纲、写句子
词汇储备 try one’s best_____________ keep diaries_____________ 擅长_____________ with the help of_____________ in our daily life____________ 努力学习_____________ have difficulty in doing_________________ 改进你的英语________________ Don’t be afraid of ___________________ 犯错误___________
句型储备 连接词：First； Second; At last First of all； What’s more； Last but not least 表建议： It’s a good idea to do... Why not/why don’t you+do... What about/how about+doing... I advise you to do... 添佳句： Everything comes to him who waits. (功夫不负有心人。) Don’t be shy, just try.（别害羞，勇于尝试） Nothing is possible. (一切皆有可能)
文章结构
寒暄： I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in...( learning English, improving your... ) As we all know, ...(English) is very important in our daily life. Here is some advice.
建议 听：看电影，听歌曲 说：多说，多交流 读：多读报纸杂志 写：写日记，写信 First of all, you’d better watch more English films and listen more English music. What’s more, it’s a good idea to speak more English as much as possible. Third, it is very important to read more newspaper. At last, I advise you to keep diaries and write letters to your foreign pen friend.
祝愿 I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Keep studying, and you'll ___________.
成篇章
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Diana
2. How to keep healthy
(健康，饮食，运动)
【写作任务】
假如你是Tim, 最近你的朋友Mike给你发来邮件，说他身体不太好，请你给Mike写一封不少于100词的邮件，给出几点保持健康的建议。
词汇储备 保持健康_____________ 做运动_____________ 游泳_____________ 连接词：At first； Second/then; At last First of all； What’s more； Besides; Last but not least As we know, ...plays an important role in our daily life. Nothing is more enjoyable than swimming 添佳句： Sports is the source of all life.(运动是一切生命的源泉)
背诵范文 开头寒暄→I 'm happy to hear from you , I know that you have problems in your health .As we know , health plays an important role in our daily life , so I’d like share my advice with you. 建议→ （1）First of all , we’d better develop good eating habits . It ' s healthy to eat vegetables and fruits . Keep away from junk food. （2）What’s more , its a good idea to do sports .As for me , nothing is more enjoyable than swimming. It is good for our health,and it makes us relaxed. （3）Besides ,we need to get enough sleep . It ' s good to sleep for 8 hours a day . Don’t stay up late. （4）At last, happiness is important for everyone, If you smile often, you’ll be happy.
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结尾：期待→ In a word, as the saying goes: health must come first. We much protect our health from being trapped by diseases.
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【学生习作】
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear from you. Hope everything goes well with you.
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Yours,
Li Jianqiu
How to protect animals in danger
写作导引
【写作任务】
假如你是某国际野生动物俱乐部的成员。最近，你对鲨鱼(shark)的生存现状进行了一次调查，发现鲨鱼有濒临灭绝的危险，情况不容乐观。请你写一篇英语短文刊登在你们俱乐部的网站上，呼吁人们保护鲨鱼和其他野生动物。
词汇补充 die out___________be in danger___________raise money___________try our best to___________ Feed on__________live in________ As a student, we should know the importance of protecting ... In order to keep the balance of nature, we should...
背诵范文 【现状】 As we all know, animals are our friend. However, many of them are in danger now. take .... as an example, the number of.. is smaller and smaller. Their living space has become less and less. 【原因】 As far as I know, there are several reasons for this. First, people kill them for fur and meat, which caused the decrease of their numbers. Second, on the land, people cut down trees, and take away their home. Third, In the sea, water pollution is a main reason for their dying. 【措施】 Therefore, it's time for us to do something to protect them. First of all, we should stop killing them. What's more, it’s a good idea to set up nature parks, so that they can have enough place to live. At last, we can raise some money to buy some food for them. 【结尾】 If everyone tries his best to protect wild animal, our home will become better and better. Let’s take action now.
How to keep safe(地震，火灾)
【写作任务】
地震是一种自然现象，虽然目前我们还无法预测，但我们可以了解一些自救知识，减少地震带来的伤害。假如你是你校校报英文版的编辑，请你写一篇题为What to do during an earthquake at school的短文，刊登在校报上。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第二人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 Many ... happen every year. Knowing some ways to protect yourself will help to keep you safe in danger. It’s important to what to do during an ....
First of all, don’t be afraid, try your best to run our of the building. Try to call somebody for help as soon as possible
自救知识 在高楼里 What’s more, if you are indoors, (1)you should stay under a strong table. (2)when you're in a high building, don’t jump out of the building. (3)remember to stay away from windows and blackboards. (4)when it stops shaking, leave the building quickly and then go to the playground.
在操场上 If you're outdoors, You should get away from buildings and tall trees. Be careful of the fallen power lines.
总结全文 Remember，life is only once. If you follow these, you can be safe during an earthquake/fire....
3. 巧衔接
介绍地震中的自救知识时，可以使用多个祈使句构成平行结构来衔接上下文，使文章连贯。
How to keep safe（总体）
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 As we know, life is only once, so safety(self-protection) is important for us. But how to keep safe Here is some advice.
交通安全 First of all, we must obey the traffic rules. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Don’t play on the road.
食品安全 What’s more，we should pay attention to food safety. It’s important to eat healthy food, keep away from junk food. It is harmful to our health.
交友安全 Besides，we must be careful when we make friends, especially on the Internet. Don’t give your personal information to strangers. If you are in trouble, you’d better ask teacher for help.
急救知识 At last, it’s important to learn some knowledge about first aid, so that if accident happens, we can know what to do.
总结全文 In a word,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. Remember, safety must come first!
急救知识补充：
It’s important to learn some knowledge about first aid.
First, find out what’s wrong with him.
If he has trouble in hearing you or speaking to you,make him comfortable and call 120.
Second, don’t lift him up, you may hurt him.
Besides, make sure he is warn, cover him with a coat.
Population
【写作任务】
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件，询问你所在城市存在的问题。请你根据下面的提示信息给他回复邮件，并给出解决这些问题的方法。
提示：1. 车辆太多导致空气污染严重；
2. 许多人来到城市找工作造成城市拥挤，没有足够的学校和医院。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调 体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：以一般现在时为主 人称：第三人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
开篇点题 There are some problems in my city.
存在问题 (1) There's too much air pollution ______________(由于太多的车辆). (2) Because many people come to the city to look for jobs, ______________(它变得十分拥挤). The city doesn't have enough schools or hospitals.
解决方法 (3) I think the government ______________(应该做些事情来解决这些问题). (4) The government ______________(应该购买足够多的公共汽车) so we won't use cars so much. Then there will be more fresh air. The government should build more schools and hospitals.
美好心愿 (5) I believe as long as we try our best, ______________(一切将会越来越好).
3. 巧衔接
列举城市存在的问题时，可用first, second等词来对应衔接；提出解决问题的方法时，可用first, next等词来对应衔接。
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