Way of life---介绍习俗
【写作任务】
假如Mike是你校一位来自英国的交换生,春节将至,他的语文老师邀请他一起过春节。Mike对这里的生活方式不了解,于是在你校网上英语论坛里发帖求助。请你给他回帖。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调体裁:说明文 时态:一般现在时人称:以第一人称为主
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
引出话题 I‘m glad to know that you are interested in Chinese customs. I’d like to tell you some Chinese way of life about ....
介绍生活方式 初次见面, 按时到达 握手 带礼物 At first, when people meet for the first time, it’s polite to arrive on time. (2)we usually shake hands and smile at each other. (3)don’t forget to take some gifts, such as fruits or flower.
餐桌礼仪, 让长辈先吃 Besides, when you eat at the table, we should let elder people to sit first to show our respect.
节日, 红包 习俗 At last, during the festivals, we usually have a big dinner. You can take some Hongbao as small gifts for the kids. This is our custom.
提出建议:入乡随俗 As the saying goes: When in Rome, do as the Romans do.(入乡随俗。) I’m sure you will like it. Have a good trip
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分类作文二:介绍一本书,一部电影
【写作任务】
某英文杂志“Film Online”栏目最近在举办征文活动,主题是My favourite film。假如你最喜爱的电影是Zootopia(《疯狂动物城》),请你写一篇英语短文,参加征文活动。
1. 定基调
体裁:说明文 时态:一般现在时 人称:介绍电影情节时可用第三人称,表达观点时可用第一人称。
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
词汇积累 书籍:哈利波特(Harry Porter) 西游记 (Journey to the west) 电影:狮子王( The King Lion), 功夫熊猫(Kongfu Panda) 老人与海--The old man and the sea by Hemingway in 1951 Novel_________ cartoon__________ give up___________ set a goal to 设定目标做... learn a lot from it...______________ Hard work pays off. (天道酬勤。)
引出名称 When it comes to films/books/songs, different people have different choices. Among all the kinds of..., my favourite film/book is Zootopia. It is one of the most famous cartoon films/books in the world. It is not only interesting but also educational. It is written by ..., one of the most famous writers in China.
介绍情节 The story happened in a city called Zootopia. It describes/shows... It mainly tells a story about a rabbit called Judy, who want to be a police officer. Judy and his friend Nick find the sheep mayor (市长) is the worst, in the end,they beat the mayor and make all animals safe.
表达观点 I love this film. From this film I learned a lot. we should try to study hard like Judy, and we will get what we want one day. This film has made a great difference to my life.As for the reasons,on the one hand,it can make me relax myself when I feel stressed. On the other hand,it can open up a new world to me and help me learn more knowledge.
分类作文:故事,事故
A famous story or An accident
写作导引
最近,某动物园一名女饲养员在给熊喂食时被咬伤,开始她并未在意,直到疼痛加重才去医院。请你就此写一篇英语短文,为明天英语课上的duty report做准备。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调: 体裁:记叙文 时态:一般过去时和过去进行时 人称:第三人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
事件经过 One day, when a woman was getting dinner ready for the animals at a zoo, her hand began to hurt. (1) _____________________________(几天前), a bear from Russia arrived at the zoo. (2) __________________________________(当她正在给熊喂肉时), it bit her hand. The woman didn't pay much attention to it. However, the pain got worse. (3) The woman ____________________________(匆忙去了医院). (4) ___________________________________(医生了解了所发生的事). The doctor gave the woman the right medicine.
提醒注意 Many people keep pets at home, but some pets are dangerous. (5) _____________________________(当它们饥饿的时候), they may bite you. (6) When you stay with the pets, ________________________________(请小心).
3. 巧衔接
(1) 倒叙时,前后往往要用提示性的语句使文章衔接过渡自然,如a few days earlier等表示时间的词语。
(2)当两个动作同时发生时,可用when, while, as soon as等衔接。
4. 成篇章
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Module 10 The weather
写作导引
【写作任务】
假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike想来你的家乡旅游,但是他不知道什么时候来最合适。请你给他写一封电子邮件,提一些建议并说明理由。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:应用文(邮件);邮件的主体部分为说明文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第三人称为主
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
提出建议 (1)___________________(游览我家乡的最佳时间是在九月).
说明理由 The weather is very fine in September. (2)___________________(天气总是凉爽而晴朗). Walking is the best way to visit my home town. It doesn't often rain. (3)___________________(你不必一直带着雨伞). (4)___________________(你可以品尝各种各样的水果), if you come in September. The fruits are very delicious. The fruits are not expensive.
发出邀请 Welcome to my home town!
3. 巧衔接
如果前后句之间有因果关系,可以用because或so来衔接;如果前后句之间有转折关系,可以用but来衔接。
4. 添佳句
One eyewitness is better than ten hearsays. 百闻不如一见。
5. 成篇章
Dear Mike,
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城市问题
Dear Tom, There are some problems in my city. First, there's too much air pollution because of too much traffic. Second, because many people come to the city to look for jobs, it becomes very crowded. And the city doesn't have enough schools or hospitals. I think the government should do something to solve the problems. First, it should buy enough buses so we won't use cars so much. Then there will be more fresh air. Next, it should build more schools and hospitals. I believe as long as we try our best, everything will be better and better. Yours, Li Hua
交通方式
You can go from London to Paris by coach, plane or train. Travelling by plane is the fastest but also the most expensive way. It's not as interesting as going by coach or by train. Travelling by coach is cheaper than by train or by plane. But it's the slowest way and not as comfortable as going by train. Travelling by train is the second most expensive and the second fastest way. And it's the most comfortable and the most interesting way. No dish suits all tastes. You can choose your favourite way.
天气 Dear Mike, The best time to visit my home town is in September because the weather is very fine in this month. It's always cool and sunny, so walking is the best way to visit my home town. It doesn't often rain, so you don't need to take an umbrella all the time. You can taste all kinds of fruits, if you come in September. The fruits are very delicious, but they're not expensive. One eyewitness is better than ten hearsays. Welcome to my home town! Yours, Li Hua
故事续写 After Alice found a small key on a table, she opened a small door with it and saw a beautiful garden. Next, she found a bottle with the words “DRINK ME” on it. Then she drank from the bottle and became very small. Nobody could see her. After that she entered a big room. She saw her mum and her grandma there. They were reading newspapers at that time. Alice was excited and shouted, “Mum!” Her mum and grandma were afraid and ran away. Only Alice stood in the room alone.
野生动物 Sharks live in seas. They eat small animals. Now they're in danger. First, people pollute seas, so it's very hard for sharks to find clean food. Second, people kill sharks for their fins. Every year people kill lots of sharks in the world. The situation is getting very difficult. We must do something to protect them. To protect animals is to protect ourselves. We can make seas clean and stop killing sharks.